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Thank you NetGalley and St. Martin's Press for providing me with an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review. Ill-Fated Fortune is the first book in a new series, A Magical Fortune Cookie. Felicity Jin works with her mother in their bakery. She finally discovers her special talent, but she is also a murder suspect. She decides to investigate in order to clear her name. Felicity and Kelvin are interesting characters, and the storyline kept me interested. I also enjoyed the fact that the main setting was an Asian bakery, which is different and refreshing.

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Felicity Jin lives in the small town of Pixie, California and works alongside her mom in their bakery. Felicity runs the register while her mom pours her joy into baking puffy pineapple buns and creamy egg tarts. It’s assumed that the skill of baking and the magical ability to transfer joy through baking has passed Felicity by. One night, though, Felicity feels inspired to make her own handmade fortune cookies and her magical ability is awakened! The more Felicity bakes, the more her magic develops and it guides her to make personalized predictions for customers.

Things are going well until one of Felicity’s fortunes predicts the murder of a customer and later the man is found dead outside the store’s dumpster. You can guess who the police zero in on as the number one suspect–Felicity herself. As a result, Felicity dives into her own investigation, determined to save not just herself, but also her family’s livelihood.

This was so much fun and I tore through it in a day and a half! The little bits of magic sprinkled throughout are lovely and the story has just as much heart as it does mystery. The mother-daughter relationship is heartwarming and the mystery twisty. I had my guesses of the true culprit, but I enjoyed uncovering the clues along with Jin. And like her mother, I was worried for her safety a few times–she is a determined sleuth! Fans of culinary cozy mysteries will be delighted to have a new series to add to their stack!

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This new series was a lot of fun to read, and the mystery left me hanging until the end because I had no idea who the killer could be, and there were not a lot of suspects to choose from! I did not suspect the killer since no motive was ever really established until it was revealed.

Felicity is coming into her own in the bakery her mother owns. They are a magical family and everything her mom bakes is infused with joy. It took Felicity a while to find her grove, but she finally does with fortune cookies. I thought it was neat that she could write fortunes specifically for a person. It takes her some time to uncover how to do it and control it.

I really liked her best friend, Kelvin, and her godmother, Alma. These are two characters that add character to the story. Kelvin is her partner in crime, and they find themselves in some sticky situations. There is even a bunny that appears, Whiskers, that might have magical abilities too. Only time will tell.

Not everything is smooth sailing for Felicity and her mom. Certain situations put them in a bit of a pickle. It causes a few hiccups for the bakery. Luckily, all works out in time.

I think this could be a good series, I look forward to reading more and depth added for the characters with more background.

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I enjoyed the idea of a magical bakery, and the premise that the Jin family’s baked goods can make you happy or even tell your fortune is a clever one. Felicity’s status as the odd family member out who has never had the gift–until suddenly there it is–is intriguing. The characters are likable and the story will make you smile. The mystery was entertaining, even though it was fairly easy to figure out. It is the magic and magical baking that draws the reader in and keeps them there. The author takes “comfort food” to another level in a clever way. Fans of food-related cozy mysteries should check this one out.

I received a free copy of this book from the publisher via Netgalley. My review is voluntary and the opinions expressed are my own.

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This book was tough for me, because on the one hand, I like the characters, love the premise of magical fortune cookies, and really enjoyed the writing. On the other, I had so many problems with the way the mystery played out. At times, the main character's actions came across as too stupid to live. Worse, her "best friend" seemed to have no problem with her placing herself in immediate danger. The Fresno police wouldn't be investigating a death in a small town nearby unless that town had no police force. There are similar things like this throughout, and it really reduced my enjoyment of the book.

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Ill-Fated Fortune Cookie is the first book in the Magical Fortune Cookie series by Jennifer J. Chow.

Felicity Jin works in the family “magic” bakery, where most customers experience a happy feeling when eating the pastries from the bakery. Felicity has had some big disasters in the past and fears that the magic touch in baking has escaped her. Felicity finally has produced some tasty fortune cookies, to which she has added personalized fortunes. But her first customer is found dead after eating his fortune cookie.

The book was well-written and plotted, but it was not for me. The characters just did not appeal to me.

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Book Review: Ill-Fated Fortune
Stars: 4 X 5
Author: Jennifer J. Chow @jenjchow
Publisher: Minotaur Books @minotaur_books @macmillanusa
Thank you @netgalley for this ARC

Felicity and her mom own an Asian Bakery. Felicity’s mom is an amazing baker who has the ability to transfer joy in to her bake goods. Felicity has he knack to write the fortunes for the cookies. All is going well until an ill-fated fortune is found in a dead man’s pocket. She is now at the top of the suspect list. This does not sit well with Felicity. Felicity will do whatever she needs to do to clear her name and fine the real killer. Joining her on this journey is her best friend Kevin who owns the flower shop next door to the bakery. It was a delight taking the journey myself with Felicity and Kevin to find the real murderer.

This is the first book in this new series. I am also looking forward to reading future books and seeing what happens with the relationship between Felicity and Kevin.
The author did a great job with the mystery and the big reveal at the end.

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Cozy mysteries plus magic plus baking? I was completely hooked!

Felicity Jin is just starting to come into her family legacy of putting real joy into her baking when a dead body is found in the dumpster behind her family's bakery. And she's the prime suspect.

This was an absolutely adorable read. I loved the relationship between Felicity and her mother. It's evident that they love and trust each other so much. The way they supported each other was just a joy to read. And it might not stay this way, I think there were hints of a possible eventual romance between Felicity and her best friend Kelvin, but there was no huge romance happening at the same time as the mystery. Felicity's relationship with her mother and the friendship she has with Kelvin are her most important connections, and she's happy with that.

And I loved the magic influence in this story. Felicity's family has a long legacy of being able to put their emotions into their baking in a way that temporarily influences their customers. When Felicity and her mother are happy, their baked goods bring joy and contentment to their customers. When things start getting bad for the bakery as someone actively sabotages them, the anxiety and sadness comes through in the flavors. I think this would be an excellent starting point for talking about the drawbacks of toxic positivity. If your emotions go into your food, do faked emotions taste false? I would adore seeing this explored more in future installments.

This was an absolute blast to read, and I will be eagerly anticipating Chow's next book in this series!

Thank you to NetGalley and St Martin's Press for this arc!

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“Ill-Fated Fortune” by Jennifer J. Chow
⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ .75/5 Stars

***Thanks to NetGalley and St. Martin’s Press and Minotaur Books for the eARC copy of this book. My opinions are my own.  This book comes out today on February 20th!***

“Ill-Fated Fortune” is the first in the “Magical Fortune Cookie” series, a new, magical, cozy mystery series. Felicity, third generation Chinese-American, runs a secretly magic bakery with her mother in the small, insular town of Pixie, CA outside of Fresno. Every woman on her mother’s side has the magical ability to bake one specific recipe perfectly & that item is infused with joy and the person that eats it is filled with bliss.

Felicity believed that the magic skipped her. Everything she baked was disastrous. Up until the beginning of this book. After eating some thoroughly awful fortune cookies, she gets inspired to make her own fortune cookies from scratch that end up being just as magical as her mother’s magical egg tarts.  She also writes all of the fortunes for the cookies & soon finds out that her magic comes with something extra that the rest of the woman in her family didn’t possess. She can make accurate fortunes about a person’s very near future.  

One of her first customers is murdered & is found with his personalized fortune in his hand & the fortune could be read as predicting his death.  And the victim owns a fortune cookie factory so of course Felicity is the prime suspect. So Felicity and her maybe platonic best friend Kelvin investigate to clear her name.

It’s pretty standard cozy mystery fare. I liked the magical aspect & I’m excited to see how that develops in future books. Is her godmother also magical? The how and the why the victim was murdered was so good. The diversity is a plus. Besides Felicity, Kelvin is biracial (Black and Asian).

I thought the middle was a bit slow & some of it probably could be cut. Some of the detective work felt repetitive. I also wish that the author would have committed to the possibility of a romance between the two leads. It was so lightly handled that it almost didn’t need to be there.  

But this was fun & I look forward to the next one.

Side note.…

One of the characters used a word that has a problematic history that seemed out of place to the character and to the whole book at large. I wondered if the author wasn’t aware of the word’s history.  Because this was an ARC, I messaged both the author and the publisher about the word. They were not aware of its history and are going about removing the word. All digital copies will be corrected by publication date. I was told that they were editing the print version, but I don’t know if some copies will make it to the shelf pre-edit. If you stumble upon the word, please just know that they are correcting the issue and I truly believe it was an innocent mistake.

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"Ill-Fated Fortune" by Jennifer J. Chow is a charming debut in the Magical Fortune Cookie series, serving up a delightful blend of cozy mystery and magical realism. Set in the enchanting town of Pixie, California, this novel introduces readers to Felicity Jin, a reluctant baker with a knack for creating personalized fortune cookies.

Chow's writing is warm and inviting, drawing readers into Felicity's world of enchanted baked goods and quirky small-town charm. The descriptions of the bakery and its delectable treats, from puffy pineapple buns to creamy egg tarts, are enough to make anyone's mouth water. The magical elements add an extra layer of whimsy to the story, making it feel like stepping into a fairy tale.

The plot unfolds at a leisurely pace, allowing readers to savor the atmosphere and get to know the characters. Felicity is a likable protagonist, with her insecurities and determination making her relatable to readers. The supporting cast, including Felicity's quirky friends and family members, adds depth and humor to the story.

However, while the premise is intriguing and the setting is enchanting, the mystery itself feels somewhat predictable. The resolution lacks the same level of excitement and intrigue as the setup, leaving some readers wanting more. Additionally, certain plot points may feel a bit contrived or convenient.

Overall, "Ill-Fated Fortune" is a cozy and enjoyable read, perfect for fans of magical realism and light-hearted mysteries. While it may not break new ground in the genre, it offers a delightful escape into a world where fortune cookies hold the key to solving mysteries and finding unexpected happiness. With its endearing characters and magical setting, this book is sure to leave readers craving more adventures in Pixie, California.

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Dear Fellow Reader,

Years ago, I joined an online writers’ group. It was fun and interesting getting to know a few of the writers in the group. Several of them are now published authors. I am not one of them but I have gotten to watch and see how well they have done. It has been a pleasure to support them.

One of the most successful of the group has been Jennifer Chow. She has authored eleven books and is part of an anthology. She has the four cozy mystery series, the Winston Wong Cozies series, the Sassy Cat Mysteries, the L.S. Night Market Mysteries, and her latest, the Magical Fortune Cookie Mysteries. She also has Dragonfly Dreams, which is a YA novel, and The 228 Legacy. Phew! Isn’t that terrific!


Her latest book is out today. Ill-Fated Fortune is the first in the new Magical Fortune Cookie series. In this series, we meet Felicity Jin. Felicity (called Lissa by her best friend, Kelvin) and her mom are bakers. Her mom owns Gold Bakery in Pixie, CA, which is right next to Fresno, CA. Her good friend Kelvin who owns the florist store next to Gold Bakery and Alma Paz owns Paz Illuminations which is on the other side of Gold Bakery.

The women in the Jin family have a gift for baking. Well, they have for generations but it seems to have stopped with Lissa. She cannot bake at all. Their store specializes in two kinds of baked goods, pineapple buns, and egg tarts. Their customers can’t get enough of them. At 28, Lissa thinks the gift has passed her by. Until one day she and Kelvin go to lunch at a new Chinese restaurant. They feel that the food is terrible and then they try the fortune cookies. Lissa feels inspired and goes home and makes fortune cookies and they are terrific! She comes in to try at work again the next day and they are still terrific. She starts making them and selling them in the bakery. And then it came to putting fortunes in the cookies. She added some handwritten generic messages and sent the cookies out to the front of the store. Late the first afternoon, an Asian man came in and wanted to try her new fortune cookie. She needed to bake one for him as there weren’t any left in the store. The man talked to her mom while she made the cookie but he didn’t seem very pleasant. She forgot to put a message in his cookie but was going to give it to him without but when he was taking the cookie from her, he scratched her and she felt this overwhelming need to write a fortune for him. She actually even felt dizzy with the need to write out his fortune. She wrote out the fortune and gave it to him. He looked at it, made a face, and left. Lissa had no idea what she had written down as his fortune. They locked the door after he left, cleaned up the kitchen and store, took out the garbage, and went home.

The next morning, they got to work and there were police cars in the cul-de-sac by the store. It turns out there was a body in the dumpster behind the store and Lissa ended up being a suspect in the murder.

During the story, Lissa feels that she needs to find the murderer and clear her name but also find out more about her new “superpower” of baking fortune cookies and writing fortunes.

I found the book enjoyable. The characters were fun and the book moved at a good pace. Lissa’s youth made it interesting and her relationship with Kelvin was good for the story. While it is part of the new Magical Fortune Cookie series, I would say that the “mystical” part of the book was not heavy-handed and was just fun. I would suggest that you read Ill-Fated Fortune.

I was given a copy of this book so that I would give an unbiased review.

Thanks for reading!

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I loved it! You ever think some times tradition can't be broken. Well it can! Felicitys finally gotten blessed by the magic of baking. Her matriarch line bakes. It took her years. A fortune cookie seems simple to some, but the writing of the fortune is where the real magic is. Well she isn't the only one with a good cookie. Her best day ever ends with some questionable characters. The next morning a body is found near the dumpster in the cul de sac of traditional businesses. This leads Felicity to find clues and follow the crumbs! Drama and visions continue to the end! This was my first book reading with this author, and now I want to read everything. The Chinese history glimpse and culture are fascinating to me and I liked it! P.s. Kelvin!

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A Magical Fortune Cookie Novel
by Jennifer J. Chow

#IllFatedFortune #NetGalley

So often, I find that I am starting a new series but not with the first title. Here I got to begin the series at the beginning. It was nice not to have missed anything.

This story is set in a town called Pixie which certainly evokes a possibility of magic. Then there are the goods that come from Felicity Jin’s mother’s bakery. They make folks very happy.

However, things take a turn when there is, as the title states, an ill-fated fortune. That leads to a murder that needs to be solved, especially because Felicity is a suspect.

Readers who love light hearted mysteries will want to take a look at this one. I enjoyed it and look forward to the next entry in the series.

Many thanks to NetGalley and St. Martin’s Press for this title. All opinions are my own.

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Felicity Jin works with her mom at the family bakery. Her mom infuses her baked goods with happiness and joy. Lisa has yet to find her magical gift or even how to bake. When she is inspired to make a fortune cookie, the fortunes she writes begin to come true. When a rival cookie maker is found dead in their dumpster with his fortune from Lissa in his pocket, she becomes the prime suspect. It will take all her magic and her best friend, Kelvin to solve the puzzle. This is a good beginning to a new series. I love learning about cultures and adaptation to the world around them. This story gives a small taste of this. Loved the setting and new characters. Looking forward to more to come!

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In the first in her newest series, food is magic. Not just metaphorically but literally. Felicity Jin’s family has infused magic into their baked goods; her mom owns a bakery in Pixie, California where she weaves joy into her pineapple puns and egg tarts. For most of her life, Felicity or “Lissa” feels left out, after showing no evidence of magic or ability to bake. But one day, Lissa discovers she can make handmade fortune cookies that make people happy when they eat them. Not only that, but she also realizes that she can give personalized fortunes to people…that come true. When a customer turns up dead in their alley with his daunting fortune in his hand, Lissa has to clear her name.

Chow got the idea from her life-long love of fortune cookies. She remembers going on a special field trip to a fortune cookie factory in Chinatown in elementary school. She was so excited to watch them make the cookies and slip in the fortunes. “I kinda identified with the fortune cookie. It's kind of my life as a mix of identities, because I'm Chinese American. So it kind of resonated with me that way. It was interesting to research the origin of fortune cookies…that there's Japanese roots,” Chow said.

When asked about food being magical, Chow explained, “the love of making the food and also this idea of creating food, it's magical in itself because you're taking all these ingredients and Poof! You’ve made it into something else… I also want to explore the world. The reader is finding out the magic along with Felicity.”

Plus Chow loves focusing on the mother-daughter relationship as well as the fact that Lissa is third generation. “It’s not quite a typical immigrant story or second generation,” Chow pointed out, “What does that look like for her and her family?” Plus Chow wanted to pay homage to Miss Marple with her small community in St. Mary Mead.

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This is the first book in a new series. The Jin family runs Gold Bakery in the small town of Pixie, California. Felicity Jin's mother is known for pineapple buns and egg tarts, both bringing joy to the eaters. Alas, Felicity does not seem to have her mother's magical baking touch until she tries making some handmade fortune cookies with customized handwritten fortunes. But when a male customer’s is found dead in the dumpster near the bakery, his ill-fated fortune puts Felicity in the cross-hairs of the police. With the help of flower shop owner & BFF Kelvin as well as getting advice from a new bunny friend, Felicity looks at staff working at Fresno’s Foo Fusion restaurant & rival Smiley Fortunes as possible suspects. This is a promising debut with a set of interesting characters.

I received a digital ARC from Netgalley and St. Martin's Press. All opinions are my own.

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This was a fun start to a new cozy series set in a little corner of a little town in California that has more than its share of magic. Felicity is struggling to come to terms with her talent and where she fits in her family's legacy as well as figure out just what she wants and how she wants to live her life. This could easily her into an angsty or immature main character but while she is definitely young and a bit impulsive she keeps on the right sign of that character line. I couldn't help but sympathize and root for her. The magic element is strong in the bakery and in the other areas in Felicity's life which I really enjoyed.

I enjoyed the mystery. The victim was a dreadful man and figuring out who disliked him enough to want him dead was an entertaining read. I loved the bits about baking though it did want me to go find a homemade fortune cookie and get a pineapple bun and an egg tart!

I've been wanting to read this author's mysteries for awhile and I'm glad I picked up the first book in this series. It was a fun mystery with a likable cast and a unique twist. I'm looking forward to reading the next book in the series.

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The Jin family is thrilled with the success of their magical bakery. Felicity Jin’s mother bakes pineapple buns and egg tarts filled with happiness and joy. Her customers love every bite. Although hesitant, Felicity joins the fun by baking fortune cookies filled with magic and fortune’s she personally creates for each customer. Everything is going well for them in the small town of Pixie, California until tragedy strikes. One of her customers dies after eating her cookie which included a fortune that is suspiciously accurate about his demise.

The police investigate and all the attention turns to Felicity being responsible for the man’s death. Naturally, their bakery suffers when customers are afraid to eat there. Plus, the joy is gone from baking and the taste of their baked goods reflects the sadness and hurt.

Felicity, and her best friend Kelvin, are determined to discover the truth and clear Felicity’s name. Not to mention it will save the bakery’s reputation.

This is the first book in a new series. It’s off to a solid start. The idea of personalized fortune cookies is quite an interesting concept. Felicity, her mother and Kelvin are all well written and make a great team.

The author keeps you guessing as to “whodunit”. There are several legitimate suspects. I sort of figured it out, but I didn’t figure out the specific “whys” and “hows”. The book moves at a steady pace. There were a couple of spots that were a bit slow, but overall, a good start to a new series.

I’m looking forward to reading the next one in the series.





FTC Disclosure: I voluntarily reviewed a free Advance Reader Copy of this book from NetGalley and the publisher. I was not required to write a positive review. All opinions expressed are my own.

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lll-Fated Fortune by Jennifer J. Chow is the first book in the new Magical Fortune Cookie series. Felicity Jin lives in Pixie, California and helps her mom run a bakery. Felicity's mom has the gift of transferring the joy she is feeling into her baked goods. Felicity has always felt she didn't have anything to offer their customers, but discovers she has the ability to make custom-written fortunes that come true for the customers. However, when one of Felicity's fortunes seems to predict the suspicious death of the recipient, she is accused of killing him!

I enjoyed seeing Felicity and her best friend Kelvin investigate the death to find the real killer and the ending of the book is touching, especially between Felicity and her mother. Kelvin, who runs a floral shop, is a likable character. It seems like there could be more than friendship between Felicity and Kelvin in the future. They are great friends and I think they could be an even greater couple since they care about each other and support each other. Overall, I'm not sure this is the series for me, (I would rate the book 3.5 stars), but I am still looking forward to reading Chow's LA Night Market series.

I received an advance copy of this ebook at no cost from NetGalley and St. Martin's Press. My review is voluntary and unbiased.

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3.5 stars rounded up. This is a very solid start to a new cozy mystery series. Felicity, or Lissa as she is known to her best friend Kelvin, and her mom own a bakery where the items are made with the secret ingredient - joy. As Lissa finds her magic in baking, she becomes a suspect in a rival’s death. I liked the unique story of magical baking and the story felt original enough to make a full series interesting. I look forward to seeing how Lissa grows in her baking confidence while protecting her loved ones in Pixie.

Thanks to NetGalley and Minotaur Books for the arc.

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