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I loved this book so much. The romance and the banter was top tier. I ate this book up. I would highly recommend!

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The premise of this book was very cute, the delivery...not so much. Everything seemed rushed, there was no character building whatsoever, and honestly, I felt that I was missing the beginning and a bunch of in between. There was no build up, no explanation, just "Here we go."

The banter between June and her boss was very cringe.

Thank you to 8th Note Press and NetGalley for this advanced copy of Make Believe Proposal.

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Thank you to 8th Note Press and NetGalley for an advanced readers e-book in exchange for an honest review of this book.

Make Believe Proposal follows the lives of June, a nanny, and Roland, June's boss. Roland helps June by fake-proposing to her in front of her ex-boyfriend and that's where the plot line seems to begin.

Given this book is only 177 pages, I wasn't expecting a lot of detail. However this book fell incredibly flat. The romance is very forced and seems to go from no feelings to "Oh my Gosh, I'm in love" in one sentence. There's honestly next to no chemistry between June and Roland.

There were a lot of unnecessary plot lines in this book, like finding a dog and Roland going on a date with Barbara. This book was all over the place and all in all, not for me.

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