2.5 rounded up

This book was not for me. I ended up speed reading though it. It felt very amateurish and immature.
It kind of sucks because I was really looking forward to this. The story sounded so good.

As a reader, I was drawn in by the promising premise of "The Witchstone" by Henry H. Neff, but unfortunately, the execution left much to be desired. The book, which revolves around an ancient curse and an unlikely duo's quest to break it, failed to captivate me due to several shortcomings.

One of the most glaring issues was the immaturity of both the characters and the narrative style. The characters felt remarkably juvenile, lacking depth and failing to elicit any genuine connection from me. Rather than being relatable or engaging, they came across as shallow and uninteresting.

Moreover, the plot fell flat, lacking the depth and complexity needed to sustain a compelling storyline. The quests intended to infuse suspense and action into the narrative ended up being tedious and uninteresting. The attempts to create tension and excitement during these moments fell short, leaving me feeling disengaged.

The excessive use of profanity added to the overall feeling of immaturity, feeling forced and unnecessary. Instead of adding depth or authenticity to the characters, it came off as a gratuitous attempt to appear edgy, ultimately detracting from the reading experience.

The writing style itself left much to be desired, failing to evoke any emotional response or investment in the story. Overall, "The Witchstone" felt like a missed opportunity, with a promising premise overshadowed by immature characters, a lackluster plot, and subpar writing.

Disappointment lingers as a result of the unmet potential within the book. Despite its intriguing description, "The Witchstone" failed to deliver a compelling narrative, leaving much to be desired in terms of character development, plot execution, and overall writing quality.

Rating: ⭐️ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ (1/5)
Spicy Level: 🌶 ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ (1/5)

This was a review for an Advanced Reader’s Copy of The Witchstone by Henry H. Neff given to me by NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. Thank you NetGalley and Henry H. Neff for letting me read and review this title. The Witchstone is set to be published June 18th, 2024.