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If you enjoy the drama of F1, you’ll love Pole Position! Caffery injects just enough track strategy and behind the scenes details to pull the reader into the story.
Four time champion Kian Walker is all work, no play. Does that make him a dull boy? Rookie driver Harper James sure thinks so.
Harper’s dreams are coming true when he gets called up to racing’s big leagues, but will his unprofessional behavior cost him everything? Kian is sure of it.
How will these drivers make it through a whole season in close quarters with reporters watching their every move? And why are they both secretly attracted to the other?!
Just like Monaco, this has twists and turns and wrecks (literal and emotional), with just enough angst to make the resolution satisfying.
Thanks to NetGalley for an advanced reader copy in exchange for my honest review. My only gripe, and this may be resolved in the final edition, is that apostrophes are used in the place of quotation marks throughout, which was frustrating and often made dialogue read like an internal monologue. I hope it’s changed for print.
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Thank you to NetGalley and HarperCollins UK/One More Chapter for providing an arc in exchange for an honest review.
Pole Position releases June 6, 2024
This was… not good.
To preface: I am <u>not</u> an F1 enthusiast, so I was more so interested in seeing whether the romance could hold up on its own. It couldn’t.
- dual pov
- F1
- MM romance (one is bisexual)
- teammates/forced proximity
- age gap (25/33)
- taking care of scene
Kian’s teammate, Elijah, has just suffered a severe injury of a broken leg. To take his place, we have Harper, who is a driver in one of the lower leagues.
A key component to liking a story has to do with the characters, and I hated Harper with a fiery passion. He was so annoying! It’s one thing to be cocky, arrogant, and only care about fame, money and having a good time partying, but Harper had no sense of personal space or consideration for others routines and shared spaces.
The romance was not believable because the two leading characters were not compatible in any way. This was basically just a story of two head-butting teammates that wanted to scratch a sexual itch, and I honestly don’t know what Kian saw in Harper romantically or as a person.
From what I understand, this sport takes a lot of discipline, so I couldn’t really get behind how childish Harper kept acting. It felt like he was in a constant state of needing to be babysat which is not a turn on.
For how much focus there was on Harper’s friend, Johannes, I thought it was such a cop-out that we didn’t even get to find out why he became so closed off.
This has one of the most pathetic third-act conflicts ever (all because he didn’t say yes to going out to dinner!! lmfao!!), and I also really disliked the fact that the first intimate scene between Kian and Harper happened while Harper was basically black-out drunk and not in a clear headspace.
<i>“Silence makes me restless.”</I> Okay?? Doesn’t give you the right to pester someone else and be all up in their face when it’s clearly bothersome. Read the room!
cw: parent with Parkinson’s, abandonment issues, on-page panic attack, death of a parent
Thank you Netgalley and harper Collins for the arc!
When I saw that this was advertised as red white and royal blue meets f1 I was so eager to get my hands on this! I love sports romances and this was right up my alley. Unfortunately it did not meet my expectations.
The writing does a lot of telling and not showing which is something that takes me out off books and makes me less inclined to finish them. The overall story was cute but the characters did not feel fully fleshed out either. I liked them but the chemistry was lacking and the sex often felt like a way to cover up this lack of chemistry.
I really wanted to like this one but I think it needs a few more rounds of editing to really fine tune the plot and characters.
Let me start by saying… I ate this book up. I’m talking twirling my hair, kicking my feet, so invested in the characters…. Absolutely ate this book up. Pole Position is the queer F1 romance of my dreams, fast paced and instantly riveting I enjoyed every second with this book.
Not only was this book full of romance, it also had such interesting characters beyond the main characters. As well as interesting storylines, a mix of small ones and ones that lasted throughout the entirety of the book. The mix of these was what kept the book interesting throughout.
I found myself pleasantly surprised and intrigued by the characters not fitting the exact archetype that the back of the book painted. This made the book intriguing right off the bat, a great quality to have in a book. It had my curiosity from the start. Sometimes with books one character seems to have it together and the other doesn't, a bit of a tilted scale, but this book both characters needed to learn something from each other and the people around them. The characters were written to be perfectly imperfect. I would much rather have an imperfect character that grows than one who is perfect and never grows.
I also liked that the dual POV wasn’t split evenly, refreshing because usually in dual POVs it’s split every other chapter. With the uneven split we got to know more of what one person was thinking before immediately knowing what the other was thinking/ feeling. It created more suspense.
Finally, I like that the races weren’t dragged out, there’s only so much action in one race! We don’t need a full blown plot in every prix on the F1 schedule. That being said, there was just enough to keep the vibe of it being an F1 based book. The perfect mix.
Overall, this was such a swoonworthy book. I would recommend it to anyone who needs a quick, interesting romance. It would be a good book to get you out of a book slump.
***Thanks to One More Chapter through NetGalley for providing me an ARC for my honest review!***
I wish I had better things to say about this. I really dig sports romances, I've been learning to appreciate them a lot more this year as I've had the pleasure to read a lot more of them. I have a few F1 racing books on my radar, but this is the first queer one I've seen, so of course I requested it! I will start out and say god did I love the representation. Harper was the golden retriever who was secretly a mess and felt like he could never be loved, so he self sabotaged his own life. Kian was anxious and dealing with holding himself to standards separate from his own burn out father, whilst trying to stay together and not beat himself up for staying with his mom who has Parkinson's. This is the first time I've ever seen a book with Parkinson's rep in it, by the way. My grandma has Parkinson's, so it really hit close to home. I wish maybe it would've been expanded on a little more, but I did learn some things about the condition that I didn't know prior. Now as for the things that caused this low of a rating, it really just boils down to personal preference of mine. I don't typically like drunk sex, especially when only one person is drunk, and was piss pouring drunk only to be apparently fine enough to commit an sexual act not even half an hour later? That and the amount of times they did things like that together after moments in which they were down or upset. I just don't really see the appeal or like it when that happens in books. It feels like the acts are being done to distract from the bad things, or to make one another feel better and that just feels so dirty to me. I also abhorred Johannes so much as a character I almost couldn't stand it. There were a few grammar mistakes that don't impact my rating as I know this is an ARC, but there was one instance of a definitely not correct part described as a part of one of the two MCs that kinda made me cry a little bit inside because how do you not know the difference between male anatomy and female anatomy. Did you not research? All this to say, the premise was there. Really, it truly was. I just felt that it lacked and didn't deliver in some parts. I loved the F1 racing elements, I just wish it felt more like an F1 racing romance and not a romance with a dash of F1 racing. For as much as it was about F1 racing, and how often it was described, how many scenes included racing, it was simultaneously anything but racing.
This book was... not as good as I wanted it to be. (I wonder how many reviews I've started with some variation on that sentence.) I liked the premise, and the character setups were good, but the book ended up feeling awfully long—and that's coming from someone who adores long books. As at least one other reviewer has noted, there were some plot holes that needed filling, and the resolution felt too easy, given the issues that needed to be addressed. I think a stronger developmental edit might have made this a five-star read. As it is, I'm rounding up to four.
Oh, and the "maybe we should have kids" at the end... No. That almost takes it down to three stars for me.
My thanks to the publisher/NetGalley for an advance copy of this book.
[Thanks to NetGalley for proving me with an arc!]
3.75 ⭐️
I really really liked it. I don't know a thing about F1, but when the book mentions stuff about the sport, it never got boring. And I really liked the couple and side characters.
I feel like there's gonna be a second book about J. (with J.!, if my suspicion is correct). If so, can't wait to read it!
Love it! Love it! Love it! Pole position is soooo good, it is such a great read.
This book is a cute F1 romance, with well written and thought out characters. Who both underwent character growth and felt realistic. I loved the pace and story, but felt the romance could have been a bit more front and centre. I really hope that we get more books in this world.
Summary: Motor racing prodigy Kian Walker faces his greatest challenge yet: his new teammate Harper James, whose presence disrupts Kian's world on and off the track.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC of this book, all thoughts are my own.
A cute F1 romance! The characters are complex and we get to see a lot of their life outside the track with I enjoyed. I do think the relationship itself felt a little lack luster at times, but I still found myself not wanting to put it down! If you’re a fan of F1, you’ll enjoy this book.
Thank you NetGalley for providing this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
[ARC provided by NetGalley and One More Chapter. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review Pole Position.]
Rating: 3/5
When I saw that Pole Position was being described as Red, White & Royal Blue meets Formula 1, I hit that request button faster than Max Verstappen on race day. Expectations were pretty high because these are two of my favourite things, but at the same time I tried to not approach this too critically because I never pick up sport romances for realism. Unfortunately, even with that in mind, this book fell flat for me. I couldn’t connect with the characters at all and found myself bored with the predictable plot. If you enjoy Formula One then you might still enjoy a romance in this setting, but every other element leaves a lot to be desired.
Pole Position follows Kian Walker, an accomplished veteran of motor sport aiming for his fifth championship win, and Harper James, the up and coming rookie who has been given the opportunity to race in the big leagues. Harper is arrogant, hot-headed, and most importantly, Kian’s new teammate. The pair get off to a rocky start but as the Grand Prix calendar progresses, sparks begin to fly on and off the track, and the racing duo might just find some common ground.
I wanted to love this story, I really did, and during the first half I found myself ignoring some glaringly obvious issues that became common throughout the entire book. For example, the writing style was jarring to read and I often found myself being taken out of the story as my attention was diverted to the dull prose. This is a book where there’s a lot of telling and very little showing, so it can feel like there’s no room to form your own opinions and theories which for me is half of the fun with reading. This left the story feeling quite flat and had an unfortunate knock on effect with other elements such as characterisation and the overall story.
Another issue for me was the plot which I found underdeveloped. There were a lot of instances where something was mentioned that would seem important at the time but then never amounts to much and this stitching together of ‘almost moments’ made the story feel less impactful. The romance didn’t feel fleshed out enough either, because although Kian and Harper have chemistry, it mostly felt forced and unbelievable. I think I really struggled with imagining this pair as professional racing drivers and by the end of it didn’t really care if they were or weren’t together.
Although this missed the mark for me, I’d still recommend Pole Position to racing fans because there’s a severe lack of the sport in romance books. It looks like there could potentially be more relationships to follow so I might check them out, but I’ll probably wait to read other reviews first.
I LOVED this book. As someone who is a fan of F1 romance and also LGBT+ representation, I was so excited to see a book with an m/m relationship. I thought the characters were really well-written and the story was amazing. The concept of teammates dating was really interesting and I loved how the author explored the dynamic between the different personalities. I would definitely recommend this to any F1 and/or romance fans, as I thought this was fantastic!
Firstly a big thank you to NetGalley and @onemorechapterhc for sending me this ARC, I am so incredibly in love with Kian and Harper they had such a beautiful romance and they’re such complex characters, I think the writing style was just one of my favourite I’m very biased towards racing books cause there’s just not enough of it for me but this book was just a really sweet and fun read, I read the entire thing in like four hours I didn’t want to drop it at any point. I also need johannes’ book like rn, as a matter of fact I need Jackson’s as well I’m begging you ❤️🤍❤️
Sexy love story in racing world. It’s cute and spicy, but we were promised “Red, White and Royal Blue meets Formula 1” and definitely it didn’t deliver. Not all MM romance are RWRB by default, there should be the charm and storyline to back those claims.
Pole Position is actually rather entertaining and enjoyable. Characters are sweet and fun, progressing from rivals to friends to lovers. But I feel the properly visible character development happens only for Kian and when it comes to Harper, we are simply told it took place. It’s not believable really when we don’t see it backed up with the actions.
Racing world scenery makes the book feel fresh and exciting, with all the descriptions of the races quite engaging and easy to imagine.
The plot is also nice: the pacing and obstacles are appropriately balanced, it feels organic that it goes into a certain direction. It is not though as light and insightful as its inspiration.
Overall it’s a good book, stron 3,5/5 rounded down.
I grow up watching F1 and to be honest there were few things that I would say are not correct, or different named, buuuuuuuut.
Baby, this was good. I liked it.
Both MC had their character grow, they found something about them self, they tried to make it and even there were a lot of "gosh, grow up and communicate" I understood them. It's not easy with panic attacks etc. So, overall, I'm giving it 4 of 5 stars. Could have been more spicy, tho,
Thank you One more chapter for the ARC of Pole Position via Net Galley.
⭐️⭐️⭐️3.75/5 🌶️🌶️🌶️/5
Tropes:
🏎️ Forced Proximity
🏎️Grumpy x Sunshine
🏎️ Enemies to lovers
Kian is the golden boy of F1 and after his longtime teammate is out due to an injury, he is suddenly forced to spend all of his time with a new driver, Harper. Kian and Harper couldn’t be more different from one another, a seasoned driver who takes the job seriously and a newcomer more concerned with partying and enjoying the fast life.
The tension between these two grew over the first half of the book and then soon they gave in and it heated up. While I enjoyed the “relationship” I did find that for two people reluctant to get involved with one another, they sure did race into the sweet side a little too quickly for my taste. Kian tried to understand Harpers (not successfully) reluctance to be vulnerable and give into the relationship and I feel like there could have been more back and forth on this (although it does showcase the age difference/ slight age gap and maturity so maybe it just bothered me?).
Overall once all was said and done, I loved them as a couple and their dynamic with their friends and I really admired their ability to be very open about themselves and their sexual identities, it was a nice to have characters not question their sexualities and embrace them instead.
As a formula one fan I really loved the inclusion of the Cole and Kian scenes/ interactions because everyone knows the best part of the end of the season is the compilation of the ‘best team radio’ moments. I hope that team principles would be as supportive of their drivers and more lgbtqia+ representation like Anders (a king honestly) and I really enjoyed the scenes between the drivers and their team (second family).
Johannes book when…? I need to know why the sudden change?!
Thank you to NetGalley and one more chapter (HarperCollins) for the opportunity to read the ARC I thoroughly enjoyed this book.
This could've been my mood, but I had trouble getting into this one. The writing was very stiff imo, the main characters didn't sound like mid 20s-30s guys at all, and the chemistry was lacking for a lot of the way through. The miscommunication was also very frustrating and the pacing felt off almost the entire time.
I REALLY REALLY am always craving racing romances, and I desperately wish this worked better for me. I just didn't understand how I was supposed to root for these two as a couple especially with how they individually behaved and thought. The racing parts were fine at least, but there was a lot more show than tell in most of this with how events play out in other areas. The dynamics could've been fun, and some miscommunication is more than fine too, but it truly felt like these two were just bickering the whole time that the transition to becoming lovers didn't feel believable to me.
ok i’m dnfing at 66% simply bc i am over the build up to have a lackluster outcome from said build up lmao. it sucks bc this isnt a bad book hence the 3 stars for what i did like but i legit just cannot move past the building up just to be let down.
unfortunate bc there’s lots of potential, im sure this’ll be great for a lot of people but just not me
Having delved into the realm of F1 romances with just two books under my belt, "Pole Position" unquestionably stands out as my favorite thus far. What truly sets it apart is its gripping plot, which kept me eagerly turning pages despite some notable drawbacks.
While the storyline held my attention, I found myself grappling with issues in the writing style. There seemed to be an overreliance on telling rather than showing, leaving the prose feeling somewhat flat and lacking in vibrancy. Despite this, the strength of the plot compelled me to persevere.
Yet, as much as I was engrossed in the unfolding story, I couldn't shake the feeling that certain aspects were underdeveloped. The romance, in particular, felt like it was missing a vital ingredient, leaving me yearning for a deeper connection between the characters.
Nevertheless, the promise of future installments featuring characters like Jo leaves me optimistic. While "Pole Position" may have fallen short in some areas, I remain eager to see how the series evolves. Despite its flaws, the allure of the plot and the potential for improvement ensure that I'll be picking up the next book without hesitation
I'm conflicted about this one. It's difficult for me to find F1 romances that are enjoyable, particularly because so many of them get the terminology wrong, or they include something bizarre that you'd never see in the F1 world. Rebecca Caffery has absolutely nailed the F1 elements - they're not forced on you, there's enough character background that the F1 racing doesn't take too much of your attention. It is, primarily, a story about Kian and Harper. My issue with the book lies in the fact that I really didn't like either of our main characters - I think I'm just very over the 'my life is hard so I'm going to be an asshole to everyone and pretend to be misunderstood' trope. There's a lot of miscommunication and assumption making throughout, which just leads to two characters who have very little personality. Had there been more depth to Kian and Harper, I think I could've enjoyed this more.
AHHHHHH!!!! A gay F1 romance?!? The best thing ever. I related to Harper so much in this! I loved the pace and story! Can’t wait for this to come out!!