Member Reviews
In some parts of this book, the author does a really good job. In other parts, not so much. The interactions between characters go well. I think the descriptions of the characters actions in those parts is at least intriguing. In the descriptions of other parts of the book, especially as it pertains to the background, not so much. This book just wasn’t for me. Thanks to the publisher via NetGalley.
"The Journeyer and the Pilgrimage for the Origin of Magic" is a spellbinding epic that swept me away on a thrilling adventure filled with danger, mystery, and profound revelations. What I liked most about this book is its richly imagined world, where ancient legends and mythical creatures come to life in vivid detail. Gai Laguna and Gimchi make for a dynamic duo, their bond and determination driving the narrative forward with heart and courage. The exploration of magical essences and ethical dilemmas adds depth to the story, challenging the characters and readers alike to ponder the nature of power and responsibility. As the fate of Arkadia hangs in the balance, the tension builds to a breathtaking climax that left me eager for more. Whether you're a fan of fantasy or epic quests, this book is sure to captivate and enchant you.
Didn't get far in this before the language defeated me. It's one of those where the author is going for high-flown but doesn't have the chops for it, and occasionally drops a clanging colloquialism like "ass" in the middle of the attempted eloquence.
My spidey-sense always goes off these days when I read that an author has a degree in creative writing; whatever they teach in creative writing class, it's not basic mechanics like punctuating dialog or avoiding comma splices, clearly; based on the examples I've seen, maybe it's to attempt to write books that you don't yet have the experience to pull off.
Plus, there's a prophecy (a negative for me) from a character who is on drugs (big negative) who is apparently 10 years old (huge negative, when paired with the drug use), and it's post-apocalyptic (that's another negative).
Other people liked it; you may too. I did not.