Thank you NetGalley and the publisher for giving me an early copy to read and review. All thoughts are my own.

I was excited when I seen this book because it sounded so good but…it fell flat for me.

Honestly it was a so slow paced and I felt like nothing really happened. Where was the romance? Nothing even romantically happened between Elise and Layla until 200 pages in and the book is only 300 pages long. I thought they were suppose to be discovering their feelings for one another? No hint of love until like I said 200 pages and then all of a sudden they just fall for one other? 20 pages back, Layla was sleeping with Mei. It just didn’t make sense.

Also nothing even really happens or picks up in this book until 100 pages in. I felt like more should have been going on.

I mean the storyline was intriguing and the characters were likable but the plot just wasn’t there for me. I kept wanting more and waiting for something significant to happen. Maybe this book just wasn’t for me.

3 stars because it wasn’t bad but it just didn’t satisfy my vampire needs.

Thank you NetGalley and Sourcebooks Fire for the opportunity to read this book.

I don't think her writing style was for me. I found it very flat and the story never had any excitement. Vampire books are very hit and miss for me and the concept of the book is really interesting with the mystery and vampires but the execution was lacking. I didn't care about either main character and there was not intensity within the book to create climaxes and resolution. It's a decent story but just not for me.

Vampires are so in trend right now and this one I can't recommend enough!! The world is so captivating and I couldn't put it down. It is a unique twist on vampire lore and I can see this really being popular when it comes out. For the fans of Enemies to lovers, betrayals, lies and twists and turns!

This book had one of the strongest openings I have ever read. The prologue gave me literal chills. However, the entire book was a bit dull in comparison. It was slower paced than I expected, with certain sections feeling a bit dragged on. That said, I did love the main characters. Elise is so strong and determined and kind and caring, and she loves her little sister so much it made my heart explode. Layla is much more wild and vibrant, yet similarly driven and capable of love. They compliment each other very well and I loved their tension. I also loved how it switched points of view between them. I do wish we got a bit more of their past as children, and I struggled a bit with some of the villain characters being just so horrible and feeling like Elise and Layla failed to see it. As for the rest of the book, I loved the world building of the reapers and their lore and the Saint empire, and of course I adored the 1920s Harlem setting with all its glamour and danger. So overall this book did not quite meet my expectations but I enjoyed it and recommend it.

As a follower of Hayley Dennings on social medias, I was eagerly anticipating the release of this book, and was therefore delighted to have the opportunity to read an ARC. But ultimately, this novel was lackluster to me.

While I found the premise compelling, the execution was lacking in several key areas.
The dynamic between Elise and Layla, for which I had high hopes, did not meet expectations. Despite the physical attraction between them, their emotional connection seemed underdeveloped and unconvincing. I wanted a deeper and more nuanced exploration of their relationship, but it never happened. I think flashbacks from when they were kids would have made their relationship more compelling and the book more interesting.

The pacing of the novel was another significant issue. The story moved slowly, and I often found myself disengaged and bored. I considered DNFing the book multiple times. The sluggish pace contributed to the overall feeling of the book being forgettable—neither bad enough to question its publication nor good enough to leave a lasting impression. I won’t be reading the sequel.

I am so happy that this book exists. This is the first book in a new series that is perfect for fans of vampires and still want something unique. The characters, setting, mystery and writing style is going to appeal so many people.

Thank you to NetGalley, the author and the publisher for this arc.

2.5 stars. This sapphic vampire read unfortunately did not do it for me. It felt lackluster and in need of some big moments. The pacing needed work, and it felt like the story was stretched out too much because of a lack of plot. I felt like the MCs were infuriating and with their lack of awareness and senseless views. I liked the premise, however, that was it for me.

DNF’d at 38%

I feel awful about DNFing this, because the plot sounded so interesting! This was such an anticipated read for me, and it was the first ARC I ever got access to so I really wanted it to work.

But I just could not get into this book 😭 I started it back in March and it sat at 30% for so long because I could not bring myself to pick it up again. And I finally tried again but I barely got 8% further before I just couldn’t take it anymore 😭

The dialogue in particular is both infuriating and confusing. So many conversations made no sense and the characters were just saying things at each other with no cohesively, and the end of every conversation made me just??? Baffled about what had just happened, but the narrative would move on like “so that means-“ NO! DONT PRETEND IT MADE SENSE!

It was further confused by the character motivations which were either wishy washy unclear, or outright spoken in the middle of the WEIRD conversations.

The plot was tedious outside of that. I’m pretty sure I guessed everything and what’s worse I have no interest in seeing if I’m right because I don’t care about any of the characters or happenings.

This was a devastating DNF 😭

The first half of this book was so slow and a struggle for me to get through with. The second half redeemed it a bit but not enough for me to want to raise my rating. Transitions between scenes just did not flow at all and it felt like things were just shoved together with no explanation.

I wasn’t entirely sure how I felt about this one at first. But the further I got the more I enjoyed it! I try not to give anything away in reviews because I think everything can be a spoiler in a way. But suffice it to say it was actually pretty dang good and I can’t wait for everyone else to be able to read it so I have someone to talk to about it! Haha.
Thank you NetGalley for the ARC to do this review!

I've been following this author since she started writing this book and even before then. I'm so happy to have gotten an early copy so I can talk it up.

I will say I am not a huge historical fiction person so knowing this book takes place in 1920's Harlem worried me a bit, but honestly I think while there are historical references it's not like it's confusing. I also loved the talk about vampires and how the author talks about reapers or vampires in relation to how black people were treated during this time period. I think there are so many interesting talking points when it comes to this story. I also think vampires and the best friends to enemies to lovers will make it appeal to so many different types of readers. This book really has everything for every type of reader (besides maybe nonfiction)

I am only giving it 4 stars because the beginning was a bit slow for me. I do think this book is incredible and can't wait to read the second book when it's out but also can't wait to talk about this book.

Sapphic fantasy/mystery with vampires in 1920s New York, need I say more?!

I really enjoyed this one! The writing was very atmospheric and beautiful. The pacing was a little slow in certain parts, but overall I recommend checking this one out. I'll definitely be checking out book two.

I loved the unique vampire story featured in Harlem during prohibition. I wish the author had explored the racism more as I felt it fell short, but overall a really compelling and intriguing story that had an awesome cliff hanger!

This Ravenous Fate by Hayley Dennings - eBook ARC

This Ravenous Fate by Hayley Dennings is an engaging addition to the dark fantasy genre, weaving a tale of curses, secrets, and destiny. As an ARC reader, I had the pleasure of delving into this atmospheric world before its official release!

The narrative follows Elara, a young woman burdened by a curse that dictates her fate. Set in a realm teeming with dangerous magic and clandestine societies, Elara’s journey is one of self-discovery and battling against forces beyond her control. As she navigates through treacherous alliances and uncovers hidden truths, Elara must confront her destiny and the dark powers that seek to control it.

Dennings excels at creating a vivid and immersive world. The settings are richly described, transporting readers into a dark and enchanting landscape. The moody, almost gothic ambiance adds a layer of depth to the narrative, making the world feel both magical and perilous. The concept of a cursed fate and the protagonist's quest to break free from it is compelling. This central theme drives the narrative forward, maintaining a sense of urgency and intrigue. The relationships in the story are well-developed and add emotional weight to the plot. Elara’s interactions with other characters, whether allies or antagonists, are filled with tension and complexity, enhancing the overall reading experience.

While the story is engaging, some of the plot twists are foreseeable. Experienced readers of the genre might anticipate certain developments, which can diminish the element of surprise. At times, the plot feels straightforward and could benefit from more intricate subplots or unexpected twists. This added complexity would provide a richer, more satisfying reading experience.

This Ravenous Fate is a solid dark fantasy novel that will appeal to fans of the genre. Its atmospheric world-building and engaging premise are definite strengths, although the predictability and character depth could be improved. Overall, it is an enjoyable read and a commendable effort by Hayley Dennings.

For those who appreciate dark, moody fantasy with a focus on fate and destiny, *This Ravenous Fate* offers a compelling journey. While it may not break new ground, it is a worthwhile read that will keep you entertained from start to finish.

### Rating: 3.5 out of 5 stars

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Saying "This book proves that a great premise does not make a good story" would be an ungenerous exaggeration. But perhaps not entirely false.

The setting and character concepts of This Ravenous Fate are promising. ("Decadent Fantasy Duology in Jazz Age Harlem"? Sign me up!)
And while I'm neither a regular vampire-enjoyer nor a fan of writers arbitrarily renaming fantasy creatures, (vampires being called "reapers", in this case) I went into this genuinely expecting to be as dazzled by the story as I was by the premise.

And I will say, Layla and Elise oppose each other neatly - in theory, their dynamic makes sense and is sharp enough to set up a good romantic twist.
Where the problems begin is the length and uncertainty at which that dynamic is set up. We spend so much time vaguely sketching out what might have happened between them and Charlotte, I genuinely couldn't tell what their beef was about a third into the book.
There's nothing wrong with teasing a dramatic backstory. But the norm for that in better constructed books (such as Gideon the Ninth or Six of Crows) is to vaguely brush up against it once or twice and then initiate a flashback or recount the conflict in narrative voice. Not to go "and then she got really upset about that thing that happened years ago" literally every time the other character is namedropped and aggressively resist elaborating.
There was, I feel, a more concise and satisfying way to do this. What we get instead draws the mystery out but also takes the wind out of its sails, rendering it less urgent and less tense.

I'm sad to say this is also what kept me from getting immersed in the story. This book is tragically overwritten, to the point that a firm round of edits would probably cut each chapter clean in half.
Genuinely, there is so much needless explanation of concepts that every reader, nay, every human being should have a good idea of already that the writing feels almost deliberately dumbed-down. This is the absolute most common mistake beginner writers make - but in a thrilling murder-mystery romance novel, it kills any and all narrative drive.
Let's use a randomly selected sentence as an example:

"Elise's curls stuck to the back of her neck, where sweat steadily formed with each passing minute she spent outside, a cool breeze being the only respite from the heat."

*Google assistant voice* Try instead: "Elise's curls stuck to the back of her neck."

The relevant rest (she's sweating) is implied and everything that isn't implied (there is a cool breeze) is irrelevant.
I don't mean to be condescending. It's true that this is a common, fixable mistake. But when /most/ sentences in your book are troubled by it, the inflation of volume waters down the genuinely clever writing hidden within.

I don't think I could rank this book significantly higher if the ARC I received is not drastically rewritten before its release. But I see great potential in both the ingenuity of the narrative and Hayley Dennings as a writer. I firmly believe that anything coming from them from this point onward will only get better and better, and that some time from now, I will be able to say that they are one of the most capable authors in the genre.

Thank you SOURCEBOOKS Fire for an early copy!
This Ravenous Fate was such a compelling read. First of all, sapphic vampires!!! I needn't say more, though I will. The worldbuilding itself was handled nicely, it brought the Golden Age to life on paper and the complex relationship between the two main characters was everything I could ever ask for!!

I really wanted to like this book because the premise sounds so good, but I got about 7% in and I really just didn't care all that much about any of the characters. Something about the concept felt flat to me and I usually have to like at least one of the main characters to keep going. I can tell this book will have an audience, I just wasn't part of that audience. Maybe I would have had a better time if I could listen to the audiobook. I decided to DNF it after losing interest for a week.

This Ravenous Fate is an ambitious sci-fi/fantasy with a slow-burn romance. This book gets a lot of things right, but it suffers from pacing issues and inconsistent side characters. It is at its best when exploring America's history of scientific experimentation on Black people without consent and compensation. The science and the politics are the most beautifully, heartbreakingly written parts of this novel. The cultural differences between racism in America and Europe are brilliantly handled. The parallels of mistreatment and systemic eradication between Black and Reaper minorities horrifying.
The slow-burn romance was too slow for characters with such a life-long background as Layla and Elise. The plot lagged around the 67% mark, and then it felt like things fell apart shortly after. This book will have at least one sequel, so perhaps it was setting up for the next book, but there was not enough resolved here to be satisfying. Still, rounding up from 3.5 stars because the issues presented are extremely relevant beyond the vampiric romance/mystery.
Thank you to NetGalley and Sourcebooks Fire for this ARC!

Thank you to NetGalley for allowing me to read this book! The story of vampires and humans in war in Harlem. The characters are fun and totally bring you in as the writers words make your truly feel the journey of Layla and Elise Saint. Former best friends, enemies and then working together to solve what is happening to the Vamps. Loved the book.

Any book set in the 1920's has me at hello. I am all in! This book was no different. I felt repelled back in time as Dennings brought to life a story set in my most favorite era with such remarkable detail. I could imagine myself on the streets during the height of the age of jazz in Harlem. New York always seems to find itself as a character in books all on its own and never fails to be a tremendous backdrop to the stories set there.

Thank you to the author, NetGalley, & SOURCEBOOKS Fire for the eARC in return for an honest review. My thoughts are my own.

Elise Saint...wow! The writing...lyrical and flowing like a perfectly crafted poem.
You'll enjoy the Murder Mystery aspects of this story that add so much intrigue that, while it might not exactly keep you guessing, you can't wait to be proven wrong or right. Its not as obvious as one might believe.
I wasn't exactly ready for the intensity of the relationship between Elise and Layla, but I couldn't help rooting for them and enjoying the chemistry.

Do I have regrets? No, I do not!

4 outta 5 stars