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This was a great read! It took be a little bit to get used to the writing style, but the story was a beautiful fairytale that felt both classic and modern with just the right amount of spice. I love the dynamic between all of the characters and the bonds they all share. I recommend this to anyone that loves a good fairytale retelling with plenty of twists to make it unique.

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I was pleasantly surprised by this book. At first I wasnโ€™t so sure as Iโ€™m not a huge crazy fan of fairytale retellings. But after the first few chapters I found myself sucked completely in. I finished this book in about two days and fully intend to buy the physical copy. I seriously hope this story continues on Finnian and Ellieโ€™s journey. I would love to see what these two get themselves into next!

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๐•ฝ๐–Ž๐–˜๐–Š ๐–”๐–‹ ๐–™๐–๐–Š ๐•ฎ๐–Ž๐–“๐–‰๐–Š๐–— ๐•ฑ๐–†๐–Š ๐–‡๐–ž ๐–‚๐–๐–Ž๐–™๐–“๐–Š๐–ž ๐•ฏ๐–Š๐–†๐–“

"๐๐จ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐  ๐ฆ๐š๐ญ๐ญ๐ž๐ซ๐ฌ ๐š๐ง๐ฒ๐ฆ๐จ๐ซ๐ž ๐ข๐Ÿ ๐ž๐ฏ๐ž๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ง๐ข๐ ๐ก๐ญ ๐๐จ๐ž๐ฌ๐งโ€™๐ญ ๐œ๐จ๐ง๐œ๐ฅ๐ฎ๐๐ž ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐ก๐ž๐ซ ๐ข๐ง ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐š๐ซ๐ฆ๐ฌ."

โญ 5/5
๐ŸŒถ๏ธ 3/5

๐Ÿฅฟ Cinderella Retelling
๐Ÿ”ฅ Elemental Fae
๐Ÿ–ค Enemies to Lovers
๐Ÿ•ฐ๏ธ Only One Horse
โœจ Arranged Marriage
โค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ”ฅ Slow Burn
๐Ÿ’• Dual POV


This was the first book I've ever read from Whitney Dean and OH MY GOODNESS her writing is addictive. If you love SJ Maas and Carissa Broadbent, you will LOVE her.

Rise of the Cinder Fae is a pretty loose Cinderella retelling, with a fae twist and plenty of spice! Elora is an absolute spitfire, and I'm obsessed with her. She's so kind and compassionate, but fierce and loyal to her people. Finn is tortured, and I love seeing him open up. This was an emotional rollercoaster and I can't wait for Whitney to play with my heart again!!๐Ÿซถ

Thank you Whitney Dean and NetGalley for the review copy โค๏ธ

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โ€œ๐‘ฉ๐’†๐’„๐’‚๐’–๐’”๐’† ๐’๐’๐’„๐’† ๐‘ฐ ๐’”๐’•๐’๐’‘ ๐’‰๐’‚๐’•๐’Š๐’๐’ˆ ๐’š๐’๐’–, ๐‘ฌ๐’๐’๐’“๐’‚, ๐‘ฐ ๐’˜๐’๐’โ€™๐’• ๐’˜๐’‚๐’๐’• ๐’•๐’ ๐’”๐’•๐’‚๐’“๐’• ๐’‚๐’ˆ๐’‚๐’Š๐’. ๐‘ฐ ๐’˜๐’Š๐’๐’ ๐’ƒ๐’† ๐’„๐’๐’Ž๐’‘๐’๐’†๐’•๐’†๐’๐’š ๐’„๐’๐’๐’”๐’–๐’Ž๐’†๐’… ๐’ƒ๐’š ๐’š๐’๐’–. ๐‘จ๐’…๐’…๐’Š๐’„๐’•๐’†๐’….โ€
โ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ขโ€ข
๐‘ด๐’š ๐’†๐’๐’†๐’Ž๐’š ๐’ƒ๐’š ๐’ƒ๐’Š๐’“๐’•๐’‰โ€”๐’Ž๐’š ๐’‰๐’†๐’‚๐’“๐’• ๐’ƒ๐’š ๐’‡๐’‚๐’•๐’†.
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๐Ÿ–ค Enemies to Lovers
๐Ÿ–ค Arranged Marriage
๐Ÿ–ค One Horse
๐Ÿ–ค Slow Burn
๐Ÿ–ค Found Family
๐Ÿ–ค Dual POV
๐Ÿ–ค Cinderella Retelling
๐Ÿ–ค Spice 3/5

This is my first read of a Cinderella retelling, of course darker and spicier than the original. This did not feel like an exact regurgitation of the story we all know, it had many unique characters and plots that I never knew exactly where the story was going.

Elora pulled on my heart strings from the very beginning. She not only is forced to become the maid to her stepmother and stepsisterโ€™s, but she also endures mental and emotional abuse daily and practically starved as punishment.

Finnian, our dashing prince, at first glance seems to be exactly the arrogant, broody, and tyrant prince everyone thinks he is, but we quickly discover that he has much in common with Elora in that they are both controlled and abused by horrible parents.

We get a slow building romance with spice that will have you ๐Ÿฅต๐Ÿฅต snarky and flirtatious banter that will make you ๐Ÿ˜‚ and side characters that make you wish you could be adopted into the family ๐Ÿ˜

This Cinderella retelling hit all my โœ… for what I looo for in a fantasy romance!

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Love Love Love. Is there more to say? These are the books that make you fall in love with fantasy. Also the cover is gorgeous!

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I really enjoyed this book! It took me a while to get to it and get started but once I did I thoroughly enjoyed it. I love any retelling of a classic story, so the Cinderella aspect drew me in immediately. I thought the world building was well thought out and allowed me to really immerse myself in the setting - although at times it felt like it dragged a bit. The slow burn, for me, was a bit slow. However the eventual romance along with the dual POVs more than made up for that. Overall very enjoyable and looking forward to more from the author. Thank you for the E-ARC!

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This book roped me in with the dark-Fae-Cinderella retelling, and for the most part, the storytelling works. The characters are dynamic and appealing while the romance intrigues the reader with a smoldering burn. The writing and pacing could be more fluid however, especially when it comes to the world-building, and if this could be refined Dean could probably nail this whole novel on the head and have a real exceptional page-turner.

Thank you Netgalley and Victory Editing for a digital ARC copy!

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Rise of the Cinder Fae was everything I love about fairy tale retellings. This spin on Cinderella was so unique and fun and to read. I found myself thinking about it in my non-reading time.

Whitney Dean weaves a thorough world where Cinder Faeries are enslaved by a selfish King who only wants to have what others cannot.

Elora, friend of the faeries, is forced to a ball where she meets Prince Finnian and attempts to seduce him into marriage in order to protect her friends. Chaos ensues, naturally.

This book is well written and thoroughly enjoyable. The characters had me smiling and laughing out loud as well as feeling empathy for their struggles. They were largely like able characters.


The plot was enjoyable and well thought out. At times it felt a little disjointed like there were too many aspects, but ultimately things all came together.


Overall, I felt like it was a great read!

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This book is one of my absolute favourites already this year. The world building completely enraptured me and I adored all of the characters, including King Jasper whom I loved to hate! Would definitely recommend!

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I absolutely adored this book! The slow burn was worth the wait, and it definitely included some twists I was not expecting. I'm excited to see what comes next in the series. It's long enough that it took me a bit to read, but I was never bored and enjoyed being able to make my way through it slowly.

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This book is well worth taking the time to write a review! It was so so good and I loved every minute of it!

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Amazing! I loved this Cinderella retelling so much! Poor Elora is put through the mill, but I absolutely loved her relationship with Finn, the love to hate you vibes were on point!! I also loved how his sister totally took her side!

Jaspers character was made to be horrid and you just hated him more and more throughout the book, which I thought was brilliant.

Loved the little twists and turns throughout and the pumpkin theme from the carriages in the Disney film too!! Perfect!

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In Whitney Dean's captivating novel, "Rise of the Cinder Fae," we are transported to the forgotten kingdom of Ashbury, a realm overshadowed by the dominance of neighboring Pumpkin Hollow. Elora, a young woman harboring deep resentment toward Pumpkin Hollow's royals, finds herself entangled in a web of secrets and impending danger. Ashbury, separated from Pumpkin Hollow by a mysterious glass bridge, exists as a desolate and neglected kingdom, solely dependent on Pumpkin Hollow's promise of protection. However, the arrival of the enigmatic Cinder Fae twenty-five years ago brings both warmth and a shroud of mystery. These winged creatures possess the ability to transform mountainsides into coal, providing sustenance for Ashbury. Elora and the Cinder Fae share a profound secret that threatens to unravel the very fabric of their existence. Despite Elora's persistent inquiries, the Cinder Fae remain tight-lipped about their origins and their inability to return home. Driven by desperation, Elora resorts to drastic measures, drinking from an enchanted spring in the hope of enticing Prince Jasper of Pumpkin Hollow to fall in love with her and secure Ashbury's safety. As the plot thickens, Elora's actions set in motion a series of events that challenge her beliefs and test the boundaries of loyalty. Dean masterfully weaves together themes of love, betrayal, and the indomitable spirit of a kingdom struggling to survive in the face of adversity.

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SUCH A GOOD BOOK!!! It took me a minute to read it but I loved every minute. The second half is wayyy more emotional than the first but I was here for the twists and turns. Irina is the sister everyone deserves. Honora is amazing as well. Finn and Elora were perfectly matched with scrappiness and love for each other.

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Thank you, NetGalley and Undying Raven Press, for the opportunity to read this title in exchange for an honest review.

I had a difficult time immersing myself in this story. I will not leave this review on GoodReads because I think this was a personal issue rather than something inherently 'wrong' with the book. Thank you again for the E-ARC.

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I really enjoyed this book! The romance was amazing and it had all the tropes I love so much. The world building was great and the plot was very well thought out.

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Worldbuilding is a little stiff but the characters make up for it!

This book is also very tropey & at times fell a little flat for me. Extra star for no third act breakup !!!

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As my inaugural Cinderella retelling, I find myself torn on how to evaluate this book. Firstly, I acknowledge that this book may not have resonated with me personally, and that's acceptable. While I remain uncertain about delving into the sequel, I am optimistic about revisiting "Rise of The Cinder Fae" in the future to reassess my perspective. Despite enjoying certain aspects of the book, I sensed that I wasn't the primary target audience. This being my first encounter with Whitney Dean's work, I appreciate the evident effort she invested in crafting the story. However, I struggled to establish a connection with either the narrative or its characters. The endearing pet names used by Fininan for Ellie felt somewhat juvenile to me, evoking a distinctly young adult vibe. While I found the book to be satisfactory overall, it didn't evoke strong feelings of adoration or disdain. I encountered some plot and character-related issues that prevented me from rating it higher. Nevertheless, it remains a book I would recommend, and I'm grateful to have had the opportunity to read it.

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drool worthy rags to riches, enemies to lovers dark Cinderella retelling with a pinch of fae! This had everything I was looking for in a romantasy read and I was captured by the writing and immediately fell in love with Elora and Finnian ๐Ÿฅฐ and their quest to save the kingdom. In a world with strange magic, human greed has left the kingdom of pumpkin hollow lush and the supporting town of Ashbury to suffocate under ash of the mines. But a Phoenix has risen from the ashes and she intends to right all of the wrongs of the corrupt monarchy. How will she do this? By swindling the eligible prince, of course. Love and war are rarely fair and this story is not like the others.

I am genuinely more excited for the following book because it hints at being a bit more focused on the fae world and thatโ€™s more my jam but this book is also a great standalone! Thank you to @authorwhitneydean and netgalley for this wonderful ARC

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โ€œThank you NetGalley and Whitney Dean for graciously sharing this eARC in exchange for an honest review ๐Ÿ–ค

Rise of the Cinder Fae โค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ”ฅ a dark Cinderella retelling, dual POVs, arranged marriage, and found family๐Ÿ–ค

Overall, I struggled with finishing this book mainly to the inconsistent writing style, overuse of smut (70-90% mark of the book) which just made me dislike Finnian over his obsession/addiction with sex. I also would struggle to call this an enemies to lovers but to each their own

Rise of the Cinder Fae included maybe 3-4 short cameos from the actual Cinder Fae and focused too much for my liking on being an exact Cinderella retelling. The introduction of magic and pumpkins and having a magical bridge that was the ENTIRE plot was never revealed why it was Important or even magical. Therefore the plot fell through for me in too many ways.

The last 10% of the book was AMAZING, definitely a reward for not DNFโ€™ing. The plot twist led to the chance of a second book. After the writing style mature with the last 10% of the book I have more hope that it will be continued in the next installment.โ€

I have published my honest review on my Goodreads today (3.3.24) as linked below.

Thank you for the opportunity to read Rise of the Cinder Fae โค๏ธ

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