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A Peter Pan retelling with a spicy twist. Peter Pan has history with Wendy, but it's not the one we remember from childhood. Peter and Hook are the same man. Wendy is all grown up. And Tink is evil.
This version of the book is way better than the previous version I read by this author written under a different name. I really enjoyed how this retelling got totally twisted around and is nothing like the original fairytale.
I felt the gaps were filled with the information and events that were lacking in the other version. The spice is spicy and doesn't hold back. The characters all have a darkness to them, it gives this creepy or sinister vibe throughout the book. I enjoyed how the story wrote the beginning of Wendy and Peter's story throughout the book.
Thank you to Netgalley, Evelyn Montgomery, and the publishers for this free ebook. This review is 10o% my own and honest review.

Dark Peter Pan retelling and I’m here for it! I love that he went back for Wendy years later. Spice and second chance romance, swoon. There is a trigger free version of this book but I definitely don’t want it!! Definitely recommend.

I really enjoyed the past and present aspect of the book to create the story of Peter and Hook being one character but everything else was kind of just mediocre. There were some things that happened in the book that didn’t really have a purpose and probably could have done without.

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Losing Neverland by Evelyn Montgomery
⭐⭐
I am so sorry to leave such a low review, but my goodness. I love a retelling and even better a dark retelling.
What I do not like is almost no plot or story line. I DNF The Ever King for the same reason. I need some sort of plot and story to keep me more interested.

This book was an intense out-of-body experience that completely transported me to another world. The juxtaposition of Peter Pan in a dark and twisted setting was absolutely mind-blowing. My younger self was overwhelmed with emotion, screaming, crying, and even feeling physically ill at times. As an adult, revisiting this story and reimagining it through a darker lens was both exhilarating and nostalgic. The intense emotions and vivid imagery had me experiencing a wide range of feelings, making it a truly unforgettable read.

I recently had the opportunity to read "Losing Neverland" by Evelyn Montgomery, and I was completely enthralled by the imaginative and dark reinterpretation of the classic tale of Peter Pan. The story presents a captivating and unconventional perspective as it unravels the hidden truths and untold secrets behind the beloved characters of Peter, Hook, and Wendy.
Montgomery's masterful storytelling and evocative prose skillfully subvert the traditional narrative, offering a fresh and intriguing take on the iconic myth of Neverland. The enigmatic and complex portrayal of Wendy Moira Angela Darling, who emerges as a central figure in the story, adds depth and mystery to the plot, keeping the reader engrossed and guessing until the final page.
The author's ability to blend elements of fantasy, mystery, and psychological depth creates a haunting and atmospheric reading experience. The narrative unfolds with a sense of foreboding and tension, drawing the reader into a world where nothing is as it seems, and every character harbors hidden truths and motivations.
"Losing Neverland" is a mesmerizing and thought-provoking novel that challenges preconceived notions and breathes new life into a well-loved story. Fans of reimagined fairy tales and dark fantasy will find themselves drawn into Montgomery's richly textured and hauntingly beautiful portrayal of a familiar tale turned on its head. I highly recommend this book to anyone in search of a unique and compelling read that lingers in the imagination long after the last page is turned.

The Peter Pan Retelling I didn't realize I needed!
I found the concept of Losing Neverland quite fascinating. The story shifts between past and present, revealing how Peter Pan and Hook became intertwined and exploring the evolving relationship between Wendy and Pan.
THE WAY I DEVOURED THISS!! I loved it so much.

I tried to like this book but just couldn’t. I felt like there wasn’t enough character development to help flesh out the story/plot. I also couldn’t quite figure out how old Peter was, which made me dislike the romance aspect (was he just 13 throughout the book??).

What did I just read? Who ends a romance book like that! The audacity! But seriously....all joking aside.....I'm confused.
Are they going to rewrite their story? Do they get their HEA? Explain how John gave up Michael. Take away the fact that she wrote adult characters and say they were 17. Nothing about them was a child. Not their language, not their bodies, not their personalities, nothing. Why add an age that obviously doesn't fit just to go along with a fairytale you totally changed?
I just have so many questions. And things I would change. Was it bad? No. Was it outstanding? No.
The author wrote a new take on Peter Pan and I loved the whole Hook spin. I loved how she rewrote some of the original characters to fit this tale. The darker side of Pan as he wants to grow up with the only girl he's ever known. The scene where he goes to her room and she sees him cry. Ouch.
Yes the author has something here. But please change the icky parts and then you will have something outstanding. Also, give me that HEA.

This book was very interesting to me but I do have a hard time with the characters being minors. I tried to look past it as much as possible while reading.

"Losing Neverland offered a tantalizing premise with its exploration of a mature Peter Pan and Hook dynamic. The novel’s strengths lie in its bold reimagining of classic characters and the palpable sexual tension between its protagonists. However, while the spicy elements were well-developed, the overall plot felt underdeveloped, leaving several intriguing threads unresolved.
The abrupt ending was disappointing, especially given the potential of the story. Wendy’s character arc felt incomplete, and the lack of attention given to her daughters was jarring. Peter’s complex relationship with his children was barely explored, and the significant betrayal by John was entirely overlooked.
Despite these shortcomings, the novel's beginning was promising, and I'm curious to see how the author develops the world-building in future installments. While "Losing Neverland" didn't fully capitalize on its potential, it's clear that Montgomery has a talent for creating intriguing characters and atmospheric settings."

"Losing Neverland (A Dark Retelling)" by Evalyn Montgomery is a gripping and haunting twist on the beloved classic. This reimagined tale dives into the darker corners of Neverland, where shadows loom larger and secrets are more sinister.
Montgomery’s writing is both evocative and chilling, painting a Neverland that’s far from the innocent paradise we remember. The characters are richly developed, with Peter Pan, Wendy, and the Lost Boys facing challenges that test their very essence.
The plot is intense and filled with unexpected turns, keeping you on the edge of your seat. It’s a story that explores deeper themes of loss, identity, and the struggle between light and darkness.
"Losing Neverland" is a thrilling read that will captivate fans of dark fantasy and those who love a good twist on a classic tale.

Most definitely another take on good old Peter Pan.
This story was steamy as hell. I usually am not that much into smut, but I like stories that are based on the Peter Pan story.
So I'd thought I'd give it a try. It was definitely not disappointing.
I didn't manage to finish the book before it expired, but what I read was nice.

I love a good Peter Pan retelling and I love Dark Romances even more.
I enjoyed myself while reading this book. I think it was an interesting take on what happened to Peter when Wendy left and he lost his innocence. I enjoyed the development of the characters and the storyline. I found it compelling and had a hard time putting the book down. I enjoyed the split timeline as it gave more background that was needed as the book continued. Overall, I enjoyed this book and am excited to read more of the series when it continues.
4/5 Stars for this book. Thank you Evelyn Montgomery and NetGalley for an eARC in exchange for an honest review. I do recommend this book if you are a fan of dark romance, spice scenes and are in search of a good Peter Pan retelling.

Oh! My! Lanta!!! This take of a Peter Pan retelling was DELICIOUS!!! Where Peter is the bad guy and his alternate personality is not what you would have thought! Even Wendy’s brother has a dark side! Got me sucked in from page 1! Hello Peter Pan!

The plot was confusing. Peter and hook are the same man but it didn’t really make sense how. It was very spicy. I liked that Peter truly loved Wendy however I didn’t like that Peter was 17 and Wendy in her forties. Like make him at least 18

Losing Neverland is a Peter Pan/Hook and Wendy smutty retelling, with multiple POVs.
I love Peter Pan retellings and did enjoy reading this. I enjoyed the Hook/Peter idea and it had some good spicy tension throughout.
However, I found some of the plot to be a bit underdeveloped, including plot and characters. I also found the ending a bit rushed and am personally not a fan of vague/ambiguous/abrupt endings. I'm not sure if some things will be addressed in other books in this series by Montgomery but I do feel like Peter and Wendy's storyline is over and there are some things that are unresolved.
There was potential here but some character plotlines were not really explained.
I felt like there was very little care for Wendy's daughters - I get that they're in college but they're still only 17 and we're barely mentioned/she didn't seem to care much about seeing them again. I also found it weird that Peter did actually realise they were his but still reacted negatively towards seeing Wendy at the beginning and didn't seem to want to know his children at all. John's betrayal was also completely glossed over/forgotten - there was no resolution or even acknowledgement that Wendy knew he had betrayed her.
A few elements just didn't work for me, unfortunately.
I did enjoy the beginning and premise of Losing Neverland, and would try other books by Montgomery, but this didn't quite hit all my boxes for a good, Peter Pan retelling.

Give me Peter Pan and Wendy in a adult fantasy that can really drive someone to a very steamy path... Also a very interesting and hot one.. I'm still blushing that's all I have to say

**DNF**
I'm a simp for a good spicy dark romance. Make it a retelling, even better. And the concept had me totally intrigued. Especially once I realized the twist. But I just couldn't get into this one. I gave it to 25% before finally making the decision to DNF. I found the writing style to be a bit awkward and it was like the author was trying to hard to make Pan/Hook a bad boy. The amount of times he put a smoke in his mouth, or dragged it between his lips, was ridiculous. I think he spent more time smoking than doing anything else before I stopped reading. As well the age appearance difference was a bit off for me. Where in Wendy aged appropriately while Peter still looks 17. Add in some cringy dialogue /inner monologue and I finally just had to put it down.

I feel like I was left with more questions than answers and overall it has left me unsatisfied. The end of the book seemed so rushed and out of place. I needed more showing in this book and it just wasn’t there for me.