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I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.

Following the story of a young indentured servant living in Jamestown during the starving time, To the Bone explores the horror and the inhumanity the colonizers experienced. The main character, Ellis, is limited in life by her impoverished upbringing, the demanding oversight and beliefs of her master, and the limitations of the colony. Ellis has some dreams, but minimal courage to pursue. The people  around her age are far more lively and push her beyond her comfort zone, often getting her in trouble. When she starts to have feelings for Jane, she is shaken to her very core. The weather begins to turn, after an unsuccessful growing season, and the local indigenous peoples will no longer help, and the colonists are pushed to the end of their humanity. Ellis' world crumbles around her as she is subsumed by fear.
While this is based on the Starving Winter at Jamestown, it took me a while to realize that this was the moment in history being explored. The beginning has an almost otherworldly, or at least alternate history, tone about it. It was a little jarring as a reader to feel thrown in without a firm sense of place or time. My biggest critique of the book, however, was the repetition of Ellis' thoughts. She felt very limited, which I guess is the point, but I could never really feel invested in her. She kept thinking, saying and doing the same things over and over again without learning. She had the same doubts, fears, and feelings. She felt flat and it made it hard to keep going. Even as the tension rose and the horrors increased, she still seemed to focus on the same things. It was frustrating. The romance made sense in the story, though I felt it was overshadowed by the other hardships faced. The other characters also seemed fairly flat, though they did change over the course of the story. While it was an interesting premise and setting, I was a little let down by the characters.

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I've always been fascinated with Jamestown, even more so after a visit a few years ago where we could see what recent archeological excavations had uncovered. So when I realized that this story was placed in Jamestown (even though the narrator never explicitly said it), I was pretty pumped. I think the author did a good job of conveying what life was like from the perspective of a young indentured servant girl, and just how hard and desperate the Starving Time was. The winter of 1609-1610, the colonists were under siege by the Natives, had no opportunity of resupply, and were still woefully oblivious to the realities of life in the New World. Bruzas drew on the proof of cannibalism that has been uncovered and worked the real-life "Jane" into the story in an effective way. My only criticism is that the narrator is <i>so</i> simple that I had a hard time truly connecting with her. I understand the author's choice in vocabulary and speaking style, and I think it achieved what she wanted, but reading an entire book that felt like it was written by an 8-year old was challenging.

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I didn't realize this was a teen book when I requested it, and unfortunately I am personally not super into teen fiction. That being said, I think we will most likely purchase a copy for our teen collection.

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I was mildly disappointed with To The Bone. With the description, it had enormous potential to dive a bit deeper into the psychological effects that displacement, abuse, and hunger have on the human mind. It fell just short of the mark of shocking me, however heartbreaking the situation. That being said, I feel like the length of the book is just right. The writing was exquisite, as the description claimed, and I was entertained. For me, it fell short of convincing me that these were real people that I should care about; I failed to be able to suspend my belief throughout reading. That's on me.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily. Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for giving me the opportunity to review this book. All opinions are my own.

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A very unique approach of colonization with a horror touch.
I didn't expect this book to go in the direction it did.
I had fun reading but the thre stars are because I had hard time to go in to it at the beginning.

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Thank you so much for this novel. I opted not to finish this novel. I really was intrigued by the historical setting but this novel was not for me.

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A harrowing historical tragedy, not for the faint of heart, this left me conflicted. To the Bone is told from the point of view of Ellis, an indentured servant girl in the English colony of Jamestown. The setting and cover of To The Bone captured my interest, and I thought Ellis’ internalized struggle with her feelings for another girl, Jane, were well done, but the stream of consciousness writing style fell a bit flat and felt repetitive. I think that it might’ve worked better as a novel in verse in capturing the story in a more concise but equally emotional way. I also wanted more depth to the characters. I did appreciate the author’s note at the end and that she acknowledged the wrongs of the colonists and the historical context, and it was very well researched.

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This book mixes aspects of historical fiction and horror and made for a quick and thrilling read. While I definitely was glad the book veered off from Ellis obsession with Jane, it takes a quick and startling turn into one of the darkest times in Jamestown history, the starving time.

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Review: Ever Since was one of my favorite books I read last year, so I was really excited to get my hands on an ARC for this. Unfortunately, I was left disappointed. In general, while the story was interesting, I never felt connected to the characters. It always felt like they were just too far away to grasp, too far away to connect to.

Synopsis: It’s 1609 at James Fort, and Ellis has recently arrived from England with Henry Collins and his wife, who she serves as their indentured help. To orphaned Ellis, James Fort is an opportunity – a fresh start in a new world. And now that she has fallen for the bold and glorious Jane Eddowes, she feels even more hopeful about her future. Foolishly hopeful, for soon she comes to understand the horrible realities of her home: the crimes that her fellow settlers have committed against the Native Americans there, the terrible shortage of food they are facing as winter draws near, and the cruelty of her employer, both to her and to his pregnant wife. Ellis will call upon all her fortitude, but will it be enough? Gripping, shocking, and exquisitely told, this is crucial U.S. history seen through the eyes of an extraordinary fictional teenager.

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To the Bone was an interesting look into the settlement of Jamestown and other early colonial settlements, but from the perspective of the girls who endured so much in those early days. I highly recommend this to anyone looking for a gritty historical fiction book that is not about WWII.

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Wow, this is truly a heavy read. This book tells the story of colonialism from a unique standpoint; a queer teenager girl. This book tackles many horrible things that happened during that time including resorting to cannibalism. I found this book to be really heavy and sad, but wished it had a bit more depth to the actual characters. I would say read at your own caution and check trigger warnings!

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written to “demonstrate the violence and tragedy of colonization,” to the bone is a stark, intimate story set during the starving time in jamestown.

i still don’t know how to feel about this book. it’s very well-researched, with an underlying sense of creeping dread, but i think bruzas’ choice of narrator restricts the scope of the story too much given her goal in writing it. ellis is an uneducated indentured servant, so her perspective is necessarily limited and often focused more on the personal tragedy of her life rather than the larger tragedy the settlers—ellis included—are inflicting on the native americans. bruzas manages a lot of nuance despite those limitations, but i think footnotes, or maybe a second POV, would have been helpful to further explore some of the themes she touches on.

i’m also not sure how i feel about the writing style, which leant itself to the horror aspects of the novel but sometimes felt overly simplistic for historical fiction.

i can’t say i enjoyed to the bone, but i do think it was a worthwhile, compelling read about a horrific chapter in history.

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I received an ARC of this novel from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

I learned quite a bit about the early settlers that I wasn't taught in school. History is so important.

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I was in either Fairfax or Yorktown for almost all of elementary, middle, and high school, not to mention college. I've done school trips to Monticello, Mount Vernon, and had the historical reenactor who inspired the look for Disney's Pocahontas visit our class to tell us everything that was wrong with the movie. And for *some* reason I never heard about the 'Starving Time'. I think I would have remembered that, even if the teachers had omitted the cannibalism. Instead I get to learn about it at the age of 46 from a YA historical fiction novel.
While this is indeed a YA historical fiction novel, it's dark. There's cannibalism, there's gore, there's the creeping horror of isolation, there's the breath taking audacity of colonizers arriving with little food and no concrete plan to obtain more beyond hoping the people already living there giving it to them.
While this is a very good book, it is an intense read.
Thank you very much to NetGalley and Penguin Young Readers Group and Rocky Pond Books for the ARC!

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I am a history teacher and I loved this historical fiction novel for middle school and high school students. I enjoyed the colonial America setting and the Erie vibes that this book had. I would love to recommend this book to my students.

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Stark and disturbing but distressingly true recreation of The Starving Time in the Jamestown Colony in the 1600s. This novella follows the story of an indentured servant brought to the Americas in search of her father and a better life who instead finds hardship, cruelty and evil. This is an incredibly difficult read but an important commentary on the hubris of colonization and the pervasiveness of greed.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for my copy. These opinions are my own.

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After the death of her mother and sister, a young girl named Ellis seeks a position as an indentured servant to a married couple traveling to James Fort. Once there, she hopes to find her father who settled in the colonies a few years back. However, Ellis soon wonders if she has trapped herself in a prison rather than a new life. Master Collins begins to show a growing controlling abusive nature towards herself and Mistress Collins. The viciousness of the colonists towards the indigenous population is making tensions brew and the surrounding area increasingly more dangerous. The only bright spot in this new life is Jane, the bold and beautiful girl she has begun to fall in love with. But with winter coming, a deep hunger grips the fort. And now they must all do what it takes to survive.

I’ve noticed a recent trend towards colonial era stories and it’s a little worrying. I don’t fully trust white authors to handle the subject matter appropriately. However, I think Alena did a solid job. She was able to inspire sympathy for the horrors our main character faced without painting the colonists in a positive light. The suffering Ellis faced was solely at the hands of her own people. Ellis comes from a very poor and uneducated background. She doesn’t know what her indentured contract entails as it is hidden from her. She is lowest on the peaking order, relying solely on leftovers for food. She is treated as property. But she is still a colonist. She still lacks an understanding of the selfishness of her people as even she dreams of owning land in this new country. At the end of the story I still felt firmly on the side of the Powhatan, as they were never the villains of the story. It was the hubris and violence of the European settlers that caused their own suffering.

Well researched historical fiction will always hold a place in my heart. Alena provides a selected bibliography at the end of To the Bone that lists a few of the sources she consulted in her research. Her author’s note is a must read as it delves deeper into the real historical figures she based her characters off, as well as the events that inspired the story. She points out a few verbatim quotes she used in her dialogue that came from primary accounts as well. Even without these resources you could still pick up how well researched this is just by the language used in the prose. There were many terms I had to look up because I’d never come across them before, only to learn that they were 15th century vocabulary. How cool!

This story is horrifying. It details the violence of colonization, the plight of indentured servants, life in the colonies as they tried to uphold the same religious, classicist, sexist social hierarchies from back home. I could totally see this being an assigned reading in school because of how educational it was.

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This book read like a slow descent into despair. I had a hard time in the beginning of the book—some of the details felt so random—but as the story continues to spiral towards something more sinister. The narrative style was so well done, and the voice of Ellis made the wound cut a little bit deeper. The hardships faced by the settlers was put into their proper place—historical accuracy was extremely important, and that is clear in the text. The story became so intense I couldn’t put it down!

Definitely recommend!
Thank you Netgalley and the publisher for an advanced copy of this book. Opinions are my own.

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Thank you Netgalley for the E arc of this release!

Now, this had everything to be a perfect fall read, and guess what, it is. It is grim, first and foremost. This is YA(I'm sure) but for YA this pulls no punches. This blends horror and history perfectly. 4.5 stars

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Ellis is an uneducated Englishwoman, following her father's footsteps and traveling to the New World after the deaths of her mother and younger sister. Being poor and untalented, Ellis becomes indentured to the Collins family, helping Master Henry Collins with building their house and growing crops, and tending to the needs of his pregnant wife, Mistress Blythe Collins. She finds herself falling for the free spirited Jane Eddows, but Master Collins says that she is a wicked girl and prevents Ellis from seeing her. While Ellis came to the settlement to find her father and to get a new lease on life, she slowly begins to learn that life in the colony isn't as glamorous as she imagined, especially as winter begins.

'To the Bone' is not an easy read. At just around 150 pages, it took me longer to get through than some 400 page novels. There are two reasons for this: One is Ellis's writing voice. She writes in choppy half-sentences and run on sentences, which help to illustrate her being uneducated. While this works, I did find it a bit annoying at times, especially with how often she chants to herself about being not good. Being bad. Being wicked. The other reason is how -bleak- the story is. Maybe I wasn't in the right headspace to read it, but there are times when so much pain and suffering just kind of loops back into being comical. It's sad when people die from easily-prevented deaths and back stab each other, but when background characters who are barely more than names get brought back in later chapters just to die every other page, it seems a bit silly. I know it's set in the Starving Time and that the cast should be dropping like flies, but so little time is spent on characters outside of the Collins and Eddows households that it feels more like a list of names than a tragedy.

While there is a bit of a sapphic love story in the book, I wouldn't recommend this book based on that alone. I didn't find Jane a particularly compelling character--she never tries to be secretive about their relationship even though she knows Ellis is forbidden from seeing her and doesn't seem to be genuinely sad about the things that affect Ellis (at one point, Ellis is sad at the sight of a dead snake, and Jane gives her a flat 'well everything dies' response). I think even her realizing that Henry is not good and giving Ellis more of a 'hey this guy's taking advantage of you' chat instead of a 'haha, your master is a loser with no friends' chat would have helped endear me to her more. I'd hardly consider their relationship a love story, since they mostly just kiss a bit when no one's around.

What I found most disappointing, however, was the relationship between Blythe and Ellis. Our introduction to Blythe is Ellis being disgusted by her, combing her greasy hair and retching from her smell. Blythe doesn't have many kind words to say about Ellis, either--when we finally hear her side of things, she describes Ellis as a little dog who does whatever her husband says. They are both victims of Henry's abuse and see what happens, but are silent and unsympathetic to what happens to each other. There is a nice moment between them, where Ellis is combing through Blythe's hair and Blythe opens up to her a little, but it seems like a reset button is hit after each nice moment they have. It's a shame, because I wanted to see their relationship grow.

I didn't like most of the characters, but I do want to give a shout out to Rowan. I liked that he was a sensitive guy who loved animals, and was never seen as weaker by the narrative for it (even though he was certainly punished). I'll admit, I felt sadder for his chicken's death than most of the human characters. Poor Peasblossom (which I realize now is probably -not- a Midsummer Night's Dream reference in the canon of the book since the play came out less than a decade before the book, though I guess it's possible Rowan saw it before crossing the Atlantic Ocean and was so moved by an incidental fairy character that he had to name a chicken after her).

'To the Bone' isn't a bad book, but I think it's hurt by following the fates of its historic counterparts to a T, especially with the Collins family. There is simultaneously too much and not enough before the Starving Time sets in--more character build up and interactions would help, but less fluff that amounts to 'I went swimming with Jane and her skin was soft on mine and she was beautiful'. I appreciate the research that went into making the food production and building construction period-accurate, but following the steps of grinding and washing and baking grain over and over again doesn't make for an entertaining read.

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