Thank you, NetGalley and the publisher, for providing me with an advanced eARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.

Unfortunately, I was unable to finish the book and DNFed it at 14%.

I attempted to read a few chapters, but I found myself losing interest and skipping paragraphs or checking my phone. The main character's narrative felt juvenile and reminded me of a 10-year-old's journal entries.

For example:

"That choice was mine, by the way."

"Thirteen seconds, Cemmy. You're in or you're out?"
"Make a decision here, Cemmy."

Additionally, there was a significant amount of info dumping at the beginning of the book, which made it confusing and difficult to follow. It was unclear whether the author was explaining the magic system or describing a specific event.

Overall, while I wanted to enjoy the book, it unfortunately did not resonate with me.

This is the first book I've ever DNF’d, and it wasn't an easy decision. I really tried to push through, but after four days and only getting to 49%, I had to call it quits. The story just didn’t make sense, and I felt it was important to write a review because my issue wasn't about personal preference or technical problems—it was about the book itself.

I honestly had no clue what was going on in the world. The little bits I did get were so confusing. For a book that’s only 300 pages, there was way too much info-dumping with almost no explanation. It felt like I was being told “this is how it is” without any real connection to the story, and it just kept repeating without ever being fully explained.

The characters were so underdeveloped that every time one was mentioned, I had to stop and think about who they were, and even halfway through, I still didn’t know anything about them, aside from a little of Cemmy and Chase. Maybe a bit about Novi being Cemmy’s ex, but beyond that, I couldn’t tell you a single thing about her.

I think I get what the author was going for, but it just didn't come together for me. Unfortunately, I couldn’t finish it.

This was very well done and I was quite impressed with the pacing, the magic system, and how fleshed out and considered the world-building was. This isn't what I would consider to be romantasy, as the romance is sort of a second sub plot to the core of the story, but I was so engrossed by the world-building and the betrayals and twists and turns that I didn't find myself wanting.

"We're always in between something" what a great read! I loved Cemmy and Chase, their enemies to lovers dynamic was done so well! The entire crew was well fleshed out and lovable.

I loved the unique magic systems divided by colors with further variations in the delutided hues, it was fun and different. Plus the added challenges of the alternate reality of the Gray kept things interesting. I really enjoyed the ride and look forward to the next book.

An incredible new fantasy with stunning world building and a hint of romance.

I really enjoyed the pacy plot and how well thought out and detailed the colour magic was.

At times, I found it hard to remember all the magic rules and the traits of every colour. This sometimes got in the way of the flow of reading.

Overall an original and exciting new YA!

We will always love a good heist novel. Even more so when there's levels of secrets, subterfuge, and questions about motivations. And if I know something, it's that Dylan writes a great heist. While it was a bit disorienting to understand the color magic off the bat, you can quickly get into it. What begins as a story about heists, turns into an even broader plot. A conspiracy with intrigue, control, and power. There's the questions of what will make someone join the heist.

I was actually really excited to read this because the premise sounded super interesting, but unfortunately this didn't work me.
The magic system is far too complicated for a book this short and there was so much information/explanation dumping which took so much energy out of me while trying to understand everything and made the story flow less smoothly. Unfortunately, I had to dnf this because I just could't get into the story and the characters just didn't feel fleshed out enough for me to care about them.
The writing wasn't bad though and others might enjoy this more, but this just wasn't for me.

Thank you so much NetGalley and the publisher for accepting my request to read and review this one early!

Honestly I wasn’t sure what to expect going into this, a sci fi but six of crows / darker shade of magic vibes? Sign me up!

Let me start by saying I did enjoy this book, and I’m nit writing a whole bunch of negatives in order to say I rated it low, I actually rate it a 3.5 out of 5 which is a fairly decent rating in my opinion.

Okay so my thoughts:

1. I wasn’t fully connected to the characters of the book. To some degree they all felt one dimensional, and while it made the book likely easier to read, it meant I wasn’t exactly emotionally attached or on the edge of my seat. I just felt like the protagonist Cemmy wasn’t relatable, and her decisions were not ones I would make.
2. I felt like the book was too short. I’m never usually someone to say this but I did feel like elements of this were ultimately rushed.
3. I wasn’t a fan of the magic system of this world, in fact I just struggled to understand it at all to be honest. There was definitely a fair bit of info dumping.

Comparing your book to six of crows and a darker shade of magic does lend itself to assuming greatness.

I did however, really enjoy the authors writing. And for the alone I will definitely be adding this author to my future “keep an eye out” list!

My expectations for YA are definitely higher these days especially due to having mostly grown out of it, but I will say that a lot of the rings I had an issue with I think could be solved with an edit through and some extra passages and detail. Overall I did have a good time.

*Actual rating is 4.5 stars*

Until We Shatter is a standalone fantasy featuring a magical heist and an interesting magic system. Set in a world split between magic users called shades and anti-magic normals, the inbetweeners - called hues - belong to neither faction. Cemmy is a hue, who becomes part of a heist to retrieve a powerful magical relic from the most secure non-magic place in the entire city. With a sick mom she has no choice, but with fellow hue Chase around the job has its perks.

The magic system is based on colours, and a person's colours determine their magical abilities. Since the hues are half magic and half normal, their magic has a connection to its parent colour. It’s a really interesting magic system of abilities and skills that you have to read yourself to fully understand. But one thing I’m gonna say about it, is that it puts a heavy emphasis on in-betweens. It’s a cool magic system, and I wish there were a few more pages to fully explore it.

When it comes to the characters, they’re the embodiment of the found family trope. First you have Cemmy, a very skilled thief who’s determined, sarcastic and caring but is hindered by her own doubt and fears to reach her full potential. She’s the kind of character you can’t help but root for, even if she came across as a bit shallow at times. Her little gang of misfits are wonderful, and includes both queer and disability representation. I honestly wish that we could have seen more of them, as I would love to see the friend group become more fleshed out. The one character besides Cemmy who is fleshed out is the love interest Chase. He’s a complex character, and there were times where I wished we could have gotten a couple chapters from his POV just to get an idea of his actions and thoughts.

I really enjoyed the book, even with its flaws. But I think the book could have benefitted from being longer. As a standalone, there’s only just so much you can cram into 320 pages.

I received an E-ARC thank to NetGalley and Hodderscape, this book was such an entertaining read, the story felt refreshing as I never read or seen a world with magic based of colors I really enjoy the magic system and the plot was really interesting mostly towards the end every plot twist had me broken, sad, and the end personally left me fulfilled as I’ve read that a person who truly love you love you for who you are including imperfections and the fact that both characters are able to acknowledge it and still decide to have happiness made me feel warm, the fact that both were victims of corrupt system both working to help each other while sabotaging each other this story really had me hooked. I would recommend this book!

“When power is afraid, you can always trust it to make the most morally bankrupt choice.”

“I am the violence the world made of me.”

Dylan has moved out of YA sci-fi into fantasy! There are similar ingredients that previous fans will already know and love: unlikely team ups; grey morality; challenging the system, and non-stop action. But this time Dylan’s built and set it all up in a brand-new world, complete with power hierarchy and colour-based magic system, in a compact 300 page novel. No mean feat, and it is at times tricky for the reader to get to grips with the details of what Colour can do what, but it pays off providing you can remember. It doesn’t necessarily have the extra complexity and political depth or length that you might expect of an adult novel so still feels YA to me, but there are some fun twists and turns. Dylan manages to cram a fair bit of character development into not a lot of space (although I would’ve loved more expansion on the rest of the cast!) and I will basically always love a heist story, so this was very enjoyable for me.

This book had a rough start for me. To be fair, I think in part I struggled with the pdf arc where I couldn't adjust the font size. On my tablet, the size and formatting was horrible and it took the first 100 pages or so to get used to it. I'm sure it'll be better in print as royal hardbacks are larger than my tablet.

Anyway, this book has a fast start, right into the action, and keeps up that fast pace throughout the book. This did mean the book doesn't take a lot of time explaining things, which meant most magic was introduced in the middle of the action, and in the beginning I struggled with all the colors, understanding the concept of the gray and especially what an In-Between was.

I really appreciated the training scenes a little later on, and from that point on I had a good grasp of what was going on and how everything worked, and from what point I really started enjoying the book.
Difficult as the magic system was at first, I do think it's really creative. Perhaps a bit much for a short, action packed book, but I did end up enjoying it.

The world building excelled in the magic system, the rest of it was minimal. An important adversary of the MC's is the Church, who believe magic is bad and must be purged, but beyond that I couldn't tell you what the Church believes in. Other states beyond the main city are mentioned, but we don't know much. I don't think it needed much more worldbuilding than was present, bt I would have liked knowing a little more about the Church beliefs.

The plot was the strongest aspect of this book. Fast paced, action packed, and an interesting story with some twists I didn't see coming. Cemmy is a Hue, an illegal half Shade with less magic but unique abilities different from what full shades can do. She and her other Hue friends survive as thieves, but get roped into a big heist by Chase, another Hue who works for a not very trustworthy Shade. Cemmy and the friends are not so excited about this as they believe it's too dangerous, but have little choice but to go along, and for a long time Cemmy and Chase don't fully trust each other. I won't say much, but the lack of trust does have consequences and is a flaw for both these characters.

To clarify, because this book is tagged as lesbian, the MC is bi and one of her Hue friends is her ex girlfriend, but the main romance is between Cemmy and Chase (m/f). It's not super prominent, but if you're looking for a main sapphic romance, that's not in this book.

I liked the characters. They're not super developed, it's a plot book more than a character book, but I do think it's clear how Cemmy and Chase's flaws influence the story and I really liked learning the reason behind Chase's scheming and lies in the end.

I would recommend this mainly for the fast paced, action packed heist story and unique magic system. It's labelled as crossover YA/adult, I think, and I'd say this is accurate. The MC's are about 19. It's appropriate for a teen audience, but I think it's still suitable for a younger Adult audience.

Unfortunately, I DNF at 20%.

The magic system was a little over complicated and felt like homework. I kept forgetting what everything meant. Because of this, I reached for it less and less and of course because of this I would forget what everything meant every time I did try and read it again.

I'm sure this will absolutely find it's intended audience.

Thank you to Netgalley for the eARC in exchange for my unbiased opinion.

I truly liked the concept of this book.

The magic system was very interesting, but it did take me a while to get used to and understand it. I think it was a little too overcomplicated for a stand alone novel of this length. Though I did really enjoy learning more about the world and the magic together with the main character.

The entire cast of characters was great and I liked the dynamics between them, even though, besides the main character, they could have been developed a bit more to get to know them better and form a connection to them.
Saying this, the romance between the main character and the love interest was lacking some sort of chemistry for me, and I would have actually preferred one of the other characters to be the main love interest.
The struggles of the main character felt reasonable and I could totally understand her actions throughout this book.

I was intrigued by the plot itself. Especially towards the end, when everything started to gain speed, I couldn’t bring myself to put this book down. There also was a great plot twist that I didn’t see coming.

For me, I think it would have been a good choice to let the plot gain speed a little earlier and develop some of the characters further, instead of focusing on an overly complicated magic system.

In conclusion, this book was definitely worth a read, with an interesting magic system and likable characters, that both just lacked a little bit of development and foundation.
I will keep my eye out for forthcoming releases by this author :)

i had to dnf this very early on - there is so much infodumping going on that it's just very confusing. the world just doesn't make sense to me and i think it's pointless to read a fantasy book where i don't understand what's going on. this is really unfortunate as i loved six of crows and i hoped this would live up to it.

thank you to netgalley and the publisher for an arc

The prose was beautiful. However. The Magic system lost me. I never found myself becoming attached to the characters. And as someone who usually doesn’t inspect stories too deeply to find plot holes, there were quite a few.

2.5⭐️

If you like books that info dump for more than 10% of the beginning of the book & no real talked of the characters, then you will enjoy this book. Unfortunately for me, it left me bored & not engaged with the book. I need to have equal parts information & building the story to catch my attention. It just lacked depth & just felt like I was being told things instead of living in the story.

While there was a lot of information being thrown out, nothing really made sense. Which I’m sure some of it would have made sense if I didn’t decided to DNF the book. It just felt like the book was giving so much information about the magic that it could have used a dedicated magic chart. But from what I was seeing from others, there are a lot of plot holes.

In the defense of the book, maybe it was just not the right time for me to be reading it. So I may eventually give it another chance but nothing was pulling me in.

Thank you NetGalley & Hodder & Stoughton for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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Until We Shatter by Kate Dylan
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This is a tricky one. There were some aspects that were absolutely amazing and it really could amount to something. But there was just to much going on! Trying to enjoy a read should not be this complex.

I think the book would have been an easy 5 star if it wasn’t so “messy” and confusing. There is definitely the potential there but it requires some work going forward

Thanks so much for the arc!!!

I dont even know how to begin but it was such an epic journey. Kate really did a brilliant job with the world building and the twists and turns! I could not put it down .....

Thank you to NetGalley for this e-arc!

Ended up dnf'ing.

The lack of organization just threw me off and I didn't find myself connecting to the world, magic system, or characters.

I will try to look into the author's other work, since this is the first thing I read from them, but this just wasn't the book for me.