Best Hex Ever by Nadia El-Fassi offers an interesting take on the world of modern magic and hexes. The story provides a blend of humor and supernatural elements, making for an entertaining read. While it may not break new ground in the genre, it’s a solid choice for fans of light, witchy fiction.

*The Best Hex Ever* by Nadia El-Fassi is a spellbinding blend of magic, romance, and humor! Dina Whitlock, a pastry-baking kitchen witch with a knack for conjuring up more than just delicious treats, meets Scott Mason, a worldly museum curator back in London for his best friend’s wedding. Their chemistry is undeniable, but there's one little problem—Dina’s love life is hexed. Cue a weekend of magical mishaps, a spooky Halloween ritual, and a hedge maze you’ll wish you could wander through yourself. Can Dina break the curse before her love life crumbles? A charming, witchy romance that’s both sweet and spellbinding!

Paranormal Romance/Witchy Rom-Com, Half Moroccan Nonbinary Author, Dual 3rd POV, Kitchen Witch FMC, LGBTQIA+ Rep,

Pros:

Spooky, cozy fall vibes are on point

Inclusive/diverse cast of characters - Bi FMC, Enby barista

Cons:

Listen, I understand that there is a difference between good writing and a good story. Call me picky, but I need my books to be both. At the very least, I need the writing to not be a distraction from the story.

Unfortunately the writing is quite unrefined. It’s clear that this is a debut novel. There were many run on, rambling sentences stuffed with unnecessary or cutesy details. (Page 4 had an entire paragraph made up of one sentence. I’ve never had the reading voice in be head be out of breath by the time I finished a sentence before, so that was an interesting experience.) The grammar used to punctuate these run on sentences was atrocious, especially for a trad published book that should have access to editors and proof readers. There was also a lot of switching from 3rd person narration to 2nd person narration and breaking the 4th wall. (Pick a POV and stick with it.) Overall, the tone was trying a bit too hard to be quirky. It wasn’t the most cringey writing voice I’ve ever read, but it did grate on my nerves. I think editing and structuring the sentences differently would have eliminated the rambley, breathlessness of the tone and incorporated the quirky details in a more natural, organic way.

If all you need is vibes, this book has it in spades - cozy, autumnal, witchy, spicy, all the things. Unfortunately the vibes and tropes were not enough to compensate for the poor writing, in my opinion, and I had to DNF because my brain was screaming.

*I received a copy of this book as an ARC from NetGalley for review

Best Hex Ever is a swoony, witchy rom-com that is perfect for autumn.

Dina is the owner of bakery in London who also happens to a skilled witch. When a gorgeous museum curator comes in one day, Dina can't stop thinking about him, but knows that dating is off the table. Scott is a curator at the British Museum with an interest in protective charms and household rituals. He can't get the owner of the coffeeshop out of his head, but is wary of dating after a terrible breakup that kept him away from London for years. When Dina and Scott realize they are the maid of honor and best man at their friends' wedding, the weekend away at a cozy cottage on the grounds of a gothic estate might be too much for them to resist. But with a bad hex looming of Dina that causes bad luck to everyone she loves, Dina can't get too close to Scott. But then again, maybe there is a way to break the hex for good??

Best Hex Ever is a super cute and sexy romantic comedy, with lots of witchy vibes and a perfect fall setting. Dina is hesitant to get too close to anyone, lest the hex set in and cause harm to the people she cares about. She has gotten good at letting people go, and building walls around herself. It was great to see her growth in this book, as she comes to accept herself and let love in. Scott may be my perfect book boyfriend - he's sweet and devoted, and an anti-colonialist curator at a major museum who insists on repatriation of stolen artifacts - absolutely wonderful!. This was a super quick read - I read it in one sitting and just couldn't put it down. I enjoyed this book a lot and thought it was perfect for autumn.

Thank you so much to NetGalley and Random House Publishing Group - Ballantine for the advanced copy of this lovely book!

Dina is a kitchen witch who owns her own coffee/pastry shop; Scott is a museum curator who is creating and happens upon Dina’s cafe one morning and instantly the sparks fly. Coincidentally, later that day, they meet again on the train heading to their respective best friends’ wedding - and then it turns out he is the best man and she is the maid of honor - and the bride and groom in a matchmaking scheme put them in a cozy cabin together for the weekend. The attraction to each other isn’t the problem (this book has some spice) - this issue is that Dina has had a hex placed on her years ago so that anyone she falls in love with will be harmed, and Dina doesn’t want Scott to get hurt. Unless Dina can break the hex their relationship is doomed.

This was cute but a bit spicier than I am used to (I am not a prude, I just felt there was more than needed and I would have preferred more story because I was enjoying the story). I thought the premise was good and I would have liked more of the backstory of Dina’s origins (I felt that was left open — maybe for a sequel?) and I wish there was a bit less “instalove” between the two characters because I like a bit of a slower burn. I did like the story in general and enjoyed the read as well as the message in the end. This is a debut and I am excited to read her next novel; this is great for you if you are looking for a fun, sexy (very sexy), witchy Halloween treat.

3.75 stars

Thank you to Ballantine Dell and NetGalley for the ARC to review

if you want a super cozy witchy book with some ✨spice✨ to read just in time for Halloween this is for you! Dina is a witch who owns a cafe in london where she puts a lil bit of her magic in the pastries leaving customers to believe eating at her shop is good luck. which is ironic since she is hexed! a love hex to be precise which she fends off with by keeping potential love interests at arms length and just stays focusing on her cafe and baking for her customers. scott is a curator for the British Museum not only is he dina’s handsome new customer, he is the best man at her friend's wedding that she is the maid of honor of and they are gonna be stuck together for the entire weekend. the slow burn was so worth it to see the chemistry between these two. it had its sweet and funny moments and some deep ones, the relationships you get to see between Dina and the other characters like her female friends was amazing to see and her mom and dad were so sweet. Dina and scott was just perfect and it was written so well. 4✨

Tropes/things:
- witchy
- bisexual FMC
- maid of honor x best man
- forced proximity- only one cottage
- set in london
- insta love
- dating curse
- cozy fantasy
- slow burn
- spicy 🌶️


Best Hex Ever by Nadia El-Fassi coming out on October 1st!

A delightfully spicy witchy romance between a cooking witch who was cursed to have everyone she's ever love be harmed and the the museum curator who's stolen her heart. Dina Whitlock is a kitchen witch who has her own cafe in London. She serves up magical trats and has been careful to keep her heart at a distance despite wanting romance. Dina was cursed to have any partner she falls in love with be cursed with a string of bad luck and harm..... and then he walks into her cafe, Scott Mason. Scott is a museum curator who has returned from his global travels only to find out that his partner had cheated on him and now two years later he's still recovering from the breakup. Dina is attending as the maid of honor for her best friends wedding... and Scott just happens to be the best man for the groom. Dina knows she shouldn't let herself fall for Scott, but it's hard to be just friends when he's the sweetest and hottest man she's ever encountered. Can she make a relationship work without having him be harmed by her curse? This was the perfect witchy romance for my Practical Magic loving heart. it's equal parts cozy witchy vibes and spicy romance. I adored this book so much and will absolutely be reading anything else that the author comes out with. This is an absolute must read for the autumn season!

Release Date: October 1,2024

Publication/Blog: Ash and Books (ash-and-books.tumblr.com)

*Thanks Netgalley and Random House Publishing Group - Ballantine | Dell for sending me an arc in exchange for an honest review*

4.5 stars! Best Hex Ever is a super cute and spicy rom-com about Dina who is a curvy witch with a focus on baking magic. She is hesitant to date anyone due to a hex put on her by an ex many years ago. Since then, anyone who falls in love with her will get hurt in some way.

She ends up meeting Scott who is a dreamy museum curator and she can't stay away...especially when they are in the wedding party for their best friends' wedding. Needless to say, Dina can only deny her feelings for Scott for so long before things get spicy. Then, Dina has to make the decision to face the hex or give up Scott.

This was such a fun and quick read. I really liked both MCs. I always love a FMC with curves and a MMC who is obsessed with them. This is a great fall read.

Thank you to Random House Publishing for providing this book for review consideration via NetGalley. All opinions are my own.

October is almost here, and another witchy romance joins us tomorrow!

Dina is a successful entrepreneur - she owns her own cafe, where her treats are all homemade and infused with just enough magic. While she is thriving professionally, not much is happening romantically - not since she was hexed, and all of her partners find themselves in precarious and dangerous situations while dating her. So she's sworn off a serious relationship, which has worked for her so far. She has her cafe, her close relationship with her parents, and her besties. When a cute guy comes into the cafe she doesn't think much of it, until it turns out that he is the best man in the wedding where she's the Maid of Honor.

Best Hex Ever is cozy, sexy and perfectly witchy. It is the perfect fall read - quick, enjoyable and spicy. Debut author Nadia El-Fassi does an excelent job with her storytelling, and I really enjoyed these characters.

Big thanks to NetGalley and Dell for this ARC!

Best Hex Ever is a spicy paranormal romance delight. I loved all of the food references from Dina’s role as a kitchen witch, but it made me want a snack while reading. I also love how cute the cover design is for this book. It’s one of the main reasons I picked the book up. The chemistry between Dina and Scott was great, although it was a little more instalove than I typically want in my books. One of my favorite aspects of this book has nothing to do with the romance plot. I loved the found family friendship circle that Dina surrounds herself with. They make a great trio. While I didn’t love the third act breakup, it did lead to great growth and meaningful conversations. I was surprised by the depth of some of the topics this book addressed as well regarding how one views themself. If you’re looking for a great fall romance, look no further than Best Hex Ever.

The way I enjoyed this book! With this story we get to meet Dina and Scott. Loved that their first meeting the author conveyed their attraction perfectly. Loved the diverse rep in the characters and how relatable both characters were. I am definitely going to read more from this author.

If you remove all the steamy bits and a few other details, this was easily a 5-star read. But I found the spice in this to be excessive for my personal tastes and super cringe. The romance as a whole, while super cute, felt very sex-centered, and while I did see an actual connection, there wasn’t enough non-sexual connection on the page to truly convince me that this is a forever relationship.

The magic, however, was seamlessly woven into the plot, making it feel as real as everyday life. The friendships were heartwarming, and I found Dina’s parents to be delightful characters. The house, almost a character in its own right, was also intriguing. The cat and the dog added a wholesome touch. There were so many aspects of this book that I enjoyed, that I wish I could rate it higher. Unfortunately, I felt that half of the book was filled with the spice that I didn’t quite enjoy.

Overall, this book was a mix of absolute wonder and elements that didn't quite resonate with me. It's a 50-50 split, with half of the book being absolutely wonderful and the other half not quite hitting the mark for me.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.5
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️

This book is the perfect cozy witchy book to add to your TBR this fall! Autumnal vibes are immaculate.

Best Hex Ever follows Dina who is a kitchen witch that owns her own cafe in London. She uses her witchy powers to bake delicious goodies and blend tasty teas and other drinks that make her customers temporarily feel a certain way while eating/drinking. One day, the handsome Scott comes into Dina's café and when fate keeps forcing them to cross paths, coupled with their best friends' matchmaking scheme, their attraction for each other grows quickly and rapidly. The only problem is Dina is hexed and anyone who loves her will be hurt.

I absolutely loved this book and to think that this is a debut for this author is crazy. It was an amazing exploration of all kinds of love - familial, romantic, and self. Every single character was sooooo easy to love and root for whether it be Dina, Scott, their friends or their family. Dina and Scott's connection and love for each other was sooo beautiful and spicy let me tell you 😏 we love a man giving professor/scholar vibes that has a mouth on him. Not to mention Scott's exhibition!?!! Absolutely yes. Plus, between Dina, Immy, and Rosemary what's not to love? Two are authors of horror and all lovers of all things spooky and gothic. Superrrrrrrr excited for Rosemary's story 🤭

4⭐️ “Best Hex Ever” by Nadia El-Fassi, out today!

This book was so cute! 🥰 It was sweet, made me wish I was a witch AND a baker, and don’t let the cute cover deceive you…she’s got some spice!

🎃 Paranormal Romance
💒 Maid of Honor x Best Man
❤️‍🩹 Self-love & healing
🌈 Bisexual FMC
🇲🇦 Moroccan Heritage
🏠 Forced Proximity
🥐 Cozy Kitchen Witch
🐈‍⬛ Cat Familiar
🌶️ Spicy Scenes

I love a romance book that makes me want to kick my feet and giggle. Dina and Scott were so cute together, plus the adorable side story of Immy and Eric! So much cute romance packed in.

I also loved the healing both characters had to go through to be together. 🥲 They faced trials but they made it and it makes it even better. 🫶🏻

There’s a lot to love about this debut, like the forced proximity trope is executed excellently. But the pacing is off throughout and the hex on Dina’s love life, which serves as the source of the central conflict, is on the lame side. I would have loved for Dina to have to face some accountability for her actions that led to the hex, rather than a cliché, eye-roll-inducing resolution.

While I love to read bi romances (being a bisexual romance reader myself), I’m tired of coming out stories—especially when there's such minimal development for why Dina would think that her parents wouldn't accept her. Her parents are such loving, supportive characters that her fears of coming out don't make a lot of sense.

Scott’s a top-tier book boyfriend though (a British Museum curator that wants to return artifacts to their cultural lands??? Amazing!), and I’m excited to read El-Fassi’s next novel in 2025.

This book had all the potential. I love a good witch story around spooky season, but this one fell flat for me. The most chemistry the two main characters had were in the spicy scenes. Not believable outside of that.

“Best Hex Ever” by debut author Nadia El-Fassi is the perfect cozy fall read! This book will make you feel as good as a warm cup of hot chocolate on a cool autumn evening!

I couldn’t help but feel immediately immersed into the world El-Fassi created, and I felt so much for Dina after finding out her backstory and struggle with coming out.

This book is filled with flirty banter, excellent forced proximity moments and a good slow burn with a spicy payoff. So far this is my favorite witchy romance I’ve ever read! Just the perfect combination of playfulness and a great cast of characters.

Highly recommend this one! I’m considering buying a copy for my shelf when it comes out— it was that good! 🧡

Thankyou to NetGalley for an ARC in exchange for an honest review.

This was a perfect fun, witchy read for the season!

I absolutely loved the main characters and their friends (can’t wait for Rosemary’s book!), and I enjoyed the storyline. I highly recommend it for anyone looking for a non-creepy, funny but with feelings, rom com for fall!

Spice is obviously relative to the reader, but this book does have a little bit of a kick if you are either looking for that or trying to avoid it.

Best Hex Ever was excellent. Dina and Scott had excellent chemistry and their story was great to read and also pretty spicy. Great book, definitely would recommend to romance readers, perfect for the season!

Thank you to NetGalley and Nadia El-Fassi for the opportunity to read this book. This book will give you all the fall feels with a kitchen witch who owns a bakery. Unfortunately the chemistry between the two main characters was lacking and I felt that the story was a bit slow. Read if you want a light read with fall feels.