This book needed a better editor. The plotting was inconsistent and there was some anachronistic language.

This was such a fun, dark and whimsical tale. I absolutely adored all the nymphs and the complex dynamics around the main "baddie". I cannot wait for the next one!!!

I wish I had liked this one more, as the cover is absolutely STUNNING! Unfortunately, it fell a bit flat for me.

All of the main characters were annoying and felt WAYYY too young to me. I understand that this is more of a YA novel vs an adult story, and that teenagers do act like this, but their arguments really started to get on my nerves. Gisela was kind of rude and dismissive of everyone who was kind to her, Kazik was far too grumpy for my liking, and Alexi was too perfect.

The story and the old-timey folktales were nice, but not impressive enough for me to look past a lot of other annoying bit. I also appreciated that the author was trying to be very progressive and open (especially since I do realize that spirits/creatures are not bound to the same heteronormative aspects that today's culture is), but it almost felt like they were trying to cram everything in that they could with every line of dialogue. I do appreciate normalizing polyamorous romances and having the characters talk about it, even if it was a small amount of talking.

One thing I didn't like is that this does not need to be a series (nor is it listed as one on Goodreads). However, it ended on a cliffhanger that is definitely to set up book 2, as the storylines are not finished in this novel. How frustrating! DON'T TRICK ME INTO THINKING THIS IS A STANDALONE!

Overall, I think others could like this one, it just really wasn't for me!

**Review of *This Fatal Kiss* by Alicia Jasinska**

Alicia Jasinska’s *This Fatal Kiss* is a spellbinding tale of dark romance and haunting beauty, weaving elements of fantasy and Gothic allure into a richly imagined world. Inspired by the myth of Hades and Persephone, the story takes readers on a journey through a realm where love and death are inextricably intertwined.

The protagonist, Selene, is a fiercely independent and morally complex character who must navigate her connection with the enigmatic Lorne, the Prince of Shadows. Jasinska excels in crafting vivid imagery that immerses readers in the shadowy landscapes of the Underworld and the lush vibrancy of Selene’s mortal life. The prose is lyrical, evoking an almost dreamlike quality that heightens the novel’s sense of mystery and tension.

While the romance between Selene and Lorne is the beating heart of the novel, Jasinska also delves into themes of agency, sacrifice, and the duality of light and dark within human nature. The pacing is brisk, though some secondary characters and subplots feel underdeveloped compared to the central narrative.

Fans of lush, atmospheric fantasy with a touch of romance will find *This Fatal Kiss* an engaging read. It’s a tale of love that blooms in darkness and a testament to Jasinska’s evocative storytelling.

4/5 stars
"Just think how boring your life would be, if I'd never dragged you into this."

I enjoyed this book! The story had a dark, magical vibe that was super easy to get into, and the characters kept me hooked the whole way through. I especially liked the subtle hints (or not-so-subtle) of poly relationships. It made the story feel alive.

The pacing was solid, and while it wasn't perfect, it was a fun read overall. If you're into dark fantasy with messy characters and a bit of romance, this is one to add to your list!

3.5 stars

Good enough for a whimsical, magical world and cozy YA fantasy romance.

It has a good plot and interesting characters, but for me, it's not the best. I’d say the writing feels a bit too modern for the timeline I imagined like something more old-fashioned. That threw me off a little at times. The main plot isn't my favorite since it relies too heavily on romance and drags a bit with the lovey-dovey scenes. That said, I really enjoyed the Slavic folklore and the bits of lore scattered throughout. However, some parts felt repetitive, like the characters were just going in circles to stretch the story out.

As for the characters, I liked their youthful and quirky vibes, but I didn’t really connect with any of them. I slowly lost interest because they didn’t feel fully developed beyond their cute romance. I did enjoy seeing the growth of their friendships, but once again, the romance didn’t do it for me. It’s a poly relationship, but it felt like the focus was pushed too much on one specific couple, while the third character seemed more like an add-on to complete the throuple. The limited number of this one character also made the story feel a bit bland.

The ending is okay, pretty acceptable and leaves room for curiosity about another mystery. So I’m guessing there will be a sequel. At least, I hope so. Overall, I was entertained by the plot and characters, but honestly, I wouldn’t read it again. It’s just not for me. However, if you’re looking for something easy to read with a light theme, you might want to give this book a try.

Thank you to NetGalley for an e-arc in exchange for an honest review.

3.25 stars

We're bound here by our grief, by our anger and regrets. It's what made us rusalki. If you want to regain your humanity, you have to find a way to tether yourself to the mortal world with another equally as powerful, transformative, and all-consuming feeing-like love. You need to forge an emotional connection with a human who'll act as your anchor.

Gisela, a water nymph yearning to return to her human life for the sake of her family, faces a challenge: to regain her humanity, she needs a kiss from a mortal. Enter Kazik, a spirit hunter determined to rid the world of creatures like Gisela. Despite their opposing natures, a twist of fate forces them into an unlikely alliance. Gisela discovers Kazik's secret-he's losing his magic-and strikes a deal: she will keep his secret if he helps her getting a kiss from a mysterious mortal that she encounters. As Kazik takes on the role of matchmaker, their plan is fraught with unexpected complications. Old wounds and hidden, threatening their fragile partnership and forcing them to confront pasts events. Will they succeed in their quest, or will their haunting histories doom their plan?

The characters were refreshingly original. In most retellings or mythologies, nymphs typically play side roles, so it was enjoyable to see them featured more prominently in this book. Their unique powers were intriguing. Despite the detailed descriptions of their personalities and traits, there was a lack of vivid visual portrayal. This was disappointing, given the immersive nature of their world. As for the world- building it was well-executed, at times, with information revealed gradually throughout the story. I just wished for more detail again because, like the characters, the world was unique, and I could envision our reality with some whimsical elements.

This Fatal Kiss is a poly romantic fantasy with creatures of myth from Eastern Europe. Gisela is a cursed water nymph who has to work with Kazik, a spirit hunter. I LOVE books based off of real world mythology, particularly ones that I'm not super familiar with, so I was very excited for this book!

And it didn't disappoint! I had an amazing time reading it. It's written to be kind of light in tone and I really enjoyed the humor. I liked the main characters and how they grew throughout the story. I liked the queer representation with the main and side characters and that the love triangle turned into a polycule. It all worked really well together for me and I highly recommend it if you're looking for a fun read!

Overall, 5 stars from me! Definitely recommend. Thank you to Peachtree Teen and NetGalley for the eARC, my thoughts are my own!

Beautiful, mysterious, but too long for the material. I think a lot of filler words were used, and wished the world building was more. I understand wanting to work on the characters and storyline between them, but I can't get immersed in a book if you're also not describing the specific circumstances and context in which they're happening. Either way, great to have some representation of non-monogamy in literature!

Thanks Netgalley for the ARC

An eerie and beautiful story.
I really enjoyed this one. The main character was so layered and captivating, I truly loved her, she was funny and fun but still had a deeper side. I was a little less into the romance of it all but I definitely enjoyed the three points of view. I loved how when the third one appeared it added a new layer to the story and we saw the twist coming in the best way. i love knowing things that others don't know.
Anyway, this was so very great. The world was so interesting and I loved the story behind the creatures and everything really.
So yes, this was such a great read and I can't wait to read more by Alicia Jasinska.

The stunning cover grabbed my attention instantly! This somewhat cozy story instrugues with it's promises of mythical creatures, exorcisms and a queer relationship. I'm so glad I could read that as an ARC!

This book includes:
- whimsical forest creatures
- a girl on a mission
- a boy with a dark secret
- an exorcist
- healers with supernatural gifts
- LGBTQ
- multiple POV

"This Fatal Kiss" is a fun and silly story about a young spirit looking to regain her humanity. Despite her enjoying her life as a water spirit, she yearns for the opportunity to join the land of the living. The only catch? She must earn a kiss from a human boy in order to be transformed.

The story is lighthearted in its approach to heavier topics and I was able to enjoy this book as a fun palette cleanser between heavier tomes. It even had a creative and unexpected twist half way through the book. I really enjoyed the protagonist, Gisela, and her impishness, but each of the POVs had fun elements. My only complaint is that there were many moments where the author broke focus from the story to lecture the readers. I don't disagree with the lectures, they were just completely unnecessary. Other than that, it's an enjoyable read.

For fans of:
-Thornhedge

I received this eBook as an ARC in exchange for an honest review. Thank you to NetGalley, Alicia Jasinska, Holiday House, Peachtree, and Pixel+Ink for the opportunity to review this book. This review has been posted to GoodReads check out my profile https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/62314863 and it will be posted to my bookstagram account https://www.instagram.com/tinynightingales/ and booktok https://www.tiktok.com/@tinynightingales?is_from_webapp=1&sender_device=pc

I loved this and I thought the gothic feeling of the book would be perfect for Halloween and I agree. I thought this was a really well done book about a gotchic mythological romance novel and I’m putting this author on my “to-read-always” list.

I liked but did not love this book, and for some reason it took me ages to get through. So many of the ideas and character quirks included in here were SO GOOD, but there was a disconnect that I can't quite put my finger on. It's still a very worthwhile read, and I'll definitely recommend this to any YA fantasy/romance fan.

Thank you to NetGalley and to the publisher Peachtree Teen/Holiday House for the digital ARC, it has not affected my honest review.

TW: death, violence, references to rape and suicide, blood, murder, drowning

'This Fatal Kiss' is a cozy and sweet YA following a drowned girl turned water spirit trying to find a way back to life, the exorcist who keeps trying to stop her and the boy they both fall in love with. I loved that this book shows a polyamorous relationship and I liked the world, I just struggled a little with the main character who- despite her circumstances- didn't seem to take anything seriously.

Jasinska’s writing is immersive, with a sharp, atmospheric quality that pulls you deep into the world she’s created. The romance is intense and fraught with tension, while the stakes are high, making every decision feel life or death. While some twists may feel familiar to fans of dark fantasy, the compelling characters and emotional depth elevate the story, making it a must-read for anyone who loves stories of forbidden love and high-stakes magic.

You know how sometimes you'll sit through an hour-long meeting at work and think, "This could have been an email?"

This could have been a novella. Maybe a short story. But it was not 400 pages worth of material.

I don't like leaving negative reviews, but I'm truly struggling to come up with anything I liked about this book. The characters were flat, chapters would pass without anything happening, there was no real chemistry between the three main characters (lines would SAY there was, but since most of their interactions happen off-page, how would we know?). On top of that, there were SO many conversations that would be hashed and rehashed and re-rehashed that by the time something actually happened, starting at about 80% of the novel, I no longer cared. Major plot "twists" were given away early on, and then discussed outright by some characters, and then presented again later as if they were supposed to be dramatic reveals. Multiple times. I was deeply frustrated, as is probably obvious.

I liked the premise, so I was really looking forward to this one, but it took me weeks to read because I kept getting bored and putting it down. I would have DNFed entirely if I hadn't gotten an ARC and felt some obligation to see it through to the end. Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher; I think it's pretty obvious that being granted an ARC didn't impact my rating or review.

For anyone wondering why I have nothing particularly good to say about this book and yet have still given it two stars: for me, one star reviews are for books that actively offend me, which this did not. I'm mostly just sad that there are so few poly books out there, and that this one fell so short of my expectations.

2.5 Stars.

This Fatal Kiss by Alicia Jasinska. Highly Anticipated, Hugely Disappointing.

This Fatal Kiss did not give me the reading experience I was expecting. I struggled through the first 35% or so of the book, DNFed it, then gave it another try and then felt disappointed by the last 15%. My issues with this book can fall into a few different categories:

1. Writing
2. World Building/Setting
3. Et Cetera

Let's tackle my issues with the writing. The writing of this book struggled since the author - at least in my opinion- tried to include "tiktok humour" By this I mean, there were a couple of phrases or descriptions that were intended to be funny but instead came off so jarring as they didn't match the setting of the story (we'll get to my issues with the setting later). Phrases like "Sky Daddy" and "That's a mood" felt extremely out of place.

Now, World Building/Setting. My biggest issue with the setting was, that I had no idea what the setting was. Most of the setting had a vague historical vibe (what stage in history, don't ask me) but then there would be some throwaway phrases that had more modern or technically advanced items with no explanation of how they fit into the story. Now there was magic in this story, and magic was used as an explanation for some details but those details are not what I am focusing on. I was mostly confused about the transportation but there were a few other things that felt odd. I didn't judge this book too harshly for these issues since the book is Fantasy and because the author didn't give us a specific time period to work with I couldn't exactly say those details didn't belong there.

The final category isn't necessarily a category but these issues didn't fit into one specific category. I took the biggest issue with the ending of the book. I went into this book, thinking "This Fatal Kiss" was a standalone but Jasinka wrote the ending in a way that left space for a sequel. This would've been fine except it resulted in the last part of the book feeling rushed and instead of the open-endedness feeling purposeful it just felt like Jasinka had no idea how to resolve some issues so she. . . . didn't.
I also felt that the dynamics in this book surrounding this poly romance could've used a bit more work. The only dynamic I felt was sufficiently fleshed out was between Kazik and Gisela, I couldn't didn't understand why I was supposed to believe Kazik had such a huge crush on Aleksey when all we know is Kazik finds him attractive and he was nice to everyone. But the initial impression I got was that even though Kazik found Aleksey attractive he didn't really like him. So I wasn't sure why he was so against Gisela choosing Aleksey to be the human to kiss her. Then Gisela and Aleksey didn't interact much without Aleksey there and I felt their connection was more friendship than romance.

There were parts of this book that I enjoyed. I loved the Slavic folklore and how it was included and explained throughout the plot. The discussions around sexuality (particularly bisexuality) and polyamory were interesting and enjoyable to see discussed and defended in the setting of the book.

The middle section of this book was very quick to read and I enjoyed that part of my reading experience. (Although I'm not sure if I actually liked it or if it was just a relief after struggling through the first section)

Another one to add to the list of fantasy with vibes of Uprooted and Enchantment of Ravens and Where the Dark Stands Still. Which contains some of my very favorite books.

I loved the mythological creatures and the way they interact with the humans. I love the way Gisela and Alexsey annoy Kazik into befriending them and changing his stance on how he deals with spirits. I especially love the polyam love triangle between the three. It is absolutely the only sort of love triangle I like and I will no longer accept any other kind.

This was a perfect blend of dark and sweet and funny.

I also love how slow-burn it is. It allowed me to revel in the story and the characters and their burgeoning relationships for longer.

I dearly hope there's going to be a sequel, after that ending! I need more!

*Thanks to Peachtree Teen for providing an early copy for review.

The storyline was absolutely gorgeous. Beautiful writing style plus wonderful characters. There are some dialogues that felt unnatural, but aside from that, it's a great book with a great excecution.