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"Li Jun is only sixteen, born under the Red Star. He's the youngest competitor at the tournament, and even though he doesn't have a breathmark, he fights as if divinely inspired by Dragon himself.

Breath of the Dragon is the first novel in its duology about sixteen year old Jun and his journey to fight in the Guardian’s Tournament and become the protector of the Scroll of Earth.

This was so beautifully written, I knew I would enjoy this book, but it really captivated me with the storytelling! The fear and sadness that Jun felt really showed across the page. I appreciated that he acted like a teenager and made choices that felt real. I loved the magic system they used for the breathmarked and the fact that even though Jun was not, his power still shone through! I loved all of the action scenes, I felt like I could actually visualize what was going on as if I was watching a movie.

I’m super excited for the next book in the series and I can’t wait to see what we learn about more characters, both old and new.

Thank you NetGalley and Wednesday books for this eARC in exchange for an honest review.

“Call him . . . the Little Dragon!”

4.25 ⭐️’s

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I was absolutely immersed within the first chapter. I knew this book would be well written because of the authors, and they definitely delivered. Brilliant story and very well told. Highly recommend.

Thank you to SMP and NetGalley for the opportunity to read and review this book!

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Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for an e-ARC of this book. Fonda Lee is one of my favorite writers and this book clinched it for me. I loved the ties to Bruce Lee and that his daughter was involved in writing this book. I loved the world, the angst, the tension and the character work. Li Jun was flawed, reckless and immature, but I found his character development and growth so relatable and well done. As his sense of himself, talent and worldview grows, so does his actual world and I found the way the story progressed so satisfying. I had a hard time with the pacing at times since this is a very slow build, but the payoff was definitely worth it. I will for sure be reading this whole series and will continue to pick up and buy everything Fonda creates, and I love this collaboration.

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(Thanks to Wednesday Books for giving me an eARC of the book.)

The premise of martial arts mixed with magic captured my interest. The story shines in describing the action scenes. It started slow with the setting up at the beginning but speeds up at around 45% of the book when the tournament happened. As the story progressed, the plot became more complex. The main character had good character development; the side characters were varied and distinct. I liked how the story ended in a natural spot, without a massive cliffhanger or sudden ending, and set up for the next part of the story. However, I did think there were too many different curse phrases. That being said, I'm excited to read the second book.

(Content Warning: death, grief, cursing, mentions of blood/injuries from fights)

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The Lee’s do it again. The queen of fantasy is back. This book did not disappoint, you need to pick it up!

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I thought this book was incredibly addicting and I absolutely loved the writing and can't wait to see where the story goes

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This book was a generally entertaining read. I thought the world-building was beautiful, and I loved the idea of the tournament. I had a hard time with Jun as a character because he felt inconsistent, but it wouldn't be enough to deter me from reading the next book. I'm interested to see where Jun and the rest of the story goes.

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Shannon and Fonda Lee are such strong writers. The fight scenes were intense, planned and thought out. The writing was immaculate.

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I chose this book because I saw Shannon Lee's name and that the story was inspired by her father, Bruce Lee. I had not yet read anything by Fonda Lee. Let's just say that I will be adding more of her books to my TBR. The writing was fun, engaging, and solid. The fights were in-depth and obviously some thought was put into how to immerse the reader into this world of martial arts. I really enjoyed the world-building as well.
I did not really take to Jun at first, but he grew on me. The rest of the characters were a little more grabbing from the beginning. I will say that I am not much for the potential love triangle that was hinted, but romance is a small blip on this story which was rather refreshing in the world of YA romantasy stories taking the world by storm.
I highly recommend this story to YA readers as well as anyone who enjoys martial arts-inspired stories, adventure, action, and fun.

Thank you to Netgalley for an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.

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This was a really engaging read. While I'm not an avid anime watcher, I could still see its influence here with the style of the high-energy battles, the training sequences, and the importance on emotional beats & self-discovery. Overall, I really enjoyed it.

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Fonda Lee can do no wrong in my humble opinion, and I will read anything they touch 100% of the time

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Thanks to NetGalley and the Publisher for the early read. This was a great fantasy read. Fonda Lee and Shannon Lee together is a great author duo. READ IT!

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3.5 stars.

I had originally gotten an arc of this book but I've finally finished reading it via audiobook. I love Fonda Lee's work so I eagerly picked this one up.

This the perfect book for the YA reader who is actually in that range group. There's a lot of action, the pacing moves swiftly, and the prose is clear and easy to understand. The main protagonist is a boy so this is a great pick for those young teenagers who wanted to read more boy books. Also, for those of you who aren't interested in the strong romance plot lines, there is very little to none in this book.

If you're a fan of martial arts movies or wuxia films/dramas then this would definitely fulfill your checkbox for it. I could totally envision this as a great kids show or TV show.

I thought the worldbuilding and the magic was great, it's very easy to understand and the world the authors built immersive that I could slip into it right away. The main character is impulsiveness and a bit of a hard head, doing things first and thinking later but it's not aggravating since I'm sure many people are like this in real life. There's a lot of familiar character/plot tropes in here that might make you smile if you watched some of those old shows.

I wasn't very interested in the underlying political and I found my mind sort of glazed over those bits and took away from the tournament and what not. But it didn't affect my overall enjoyment of the book.

Definitely recommended for action lovers and YA readers.

arc provided by NetGalley.

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This book would really appeal to readers who enjoy stories about martial arts, especially with a tournament arc. Jun was exiled from his homeland for training in martial arts without being "breathmarked," essentially, born without special powers like his twin brother. Jun is determined to enroll in a national tournament and defeat the strongest fighters in the West to become the Guardian, the protector of a sacred scroll. I really enjoyed Jun's relationship with another boy from his school who participates in the tournament. In most stories, they would have just been rivals, but they end up being very supportive of each other and become good friends. I also thought it was interesting that, in a world full of people with special god-given powers, our protagonist is powerless, but still becomes an incredible fighter. There are also important themes about government propaganda and division between nations. The East and the West are barricaded by the "Snake Wall", which reminded me of the Berlin Wall and the Cold War since the two countries are not exactly fighting each other, but deeply distrust each other and have radically different ways of life.

There is a slight romance subplot with a girl named Ren; I liked Ren as a revolutionary character, but I got bored when the boys thought about her in a romantic way. She and her dad help radicalize Jun into realizing what is really important-- not just winning the tournament, but safeguarding the country from warmongers.

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Amazing world building. Amazing characters. Amazing storyline. This was an amazing read that I won't forget for a while. Reading about the passionate feelings toward something as beautiful as martial arts is exuberating and I'm thankful for the opportunity to read the eARC in exchange for an honest review. I highly, highly recommend giving this one a read!

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I don’t read much YA anymore, but I loved this book so much. Co-written by Fonda Lee and Shannon Lee (Bruce Lee’s daughter!), this novel is an absolute love letter to Bruce Lee’s life teachings and the love of martial arts. The worldbuilding was beautiful, the writing powerful, the emotions raw and vulnerable for characters that I was extremely invested in! It did take me a little bit to fully get into the story, and there is some immaturity in the MMC, but it is apropos, as he is young, and his maturity arc is heartwarming to watch as well. I am eager to read the second half of this duology, and highly recommend it! 4⭐

*Thank you again to NetGalley and the publishers for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.*

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I thought this was very good and I will have to add this to the shop shelves. Thank you for the chance for us to review.

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If you were ever a fan of martial arts movies, either version of The Karate Kid, or Chinese historical dramas, I highly recommend Breath of the Dragon by Shannon Lee and Fonda Lee. The story follows Li Jun, who is separated from his breath-marked twin brother and mother, forced to move beyond a divided wall with his father. Although Li Jun lacks the blessing from the dragon gods, he hones his martial arts skills and strives to one day become the Guardian—a mighty warrior tasked with protecting an ancient scroll. As his journey to becoming the Guardian unfolds, Li Jun realizes there is more at stake than just his own life.

Reading this book felt like watching one of those old-school action movies where you can tell the actor truly possesses martial arts skills, rather than relying solely on special effects. Having dabbled in martial arts myself, training two hours a week from ages 9 to 11, I can confidently say the authors have a strong understanding of martial arts—something I confirmed with a quick Google search. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this book. There were moments that nearly brought me to tears, and I really appreciated Li Jun’s character arc. It was a fantastic read, and I highly recommend it to everyone!

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Overall this was a fun read, but did not really give me the substance I experienced when reading The Green Bone Saga - which I was expecting. The novel was very action-packed and I could definitely tell that was all Miss Fonda Lee. The worldbuilding was also really well realized; I wasn't ever confused by it and I found it to be really interesting. I also appreciated the influence of Shannon Lee as there was clearly an influence of her father's teachings and lessons that were sprinkled throughout. They never felt awkwardly placed, but I could definitely tell that was Shannon's addition to the book. I do have to say the story dragged on for a bit towards the end. I think the final 50 pages could have been removed to work as the set up for the second book as I was starting to get a little bored towards the end as the story felt complete a couple of chapters previously. Overall, I think this was a fine YA book, just not totally memorable.

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This was good, but I was waiting for it to be godly levels of great.


It's an interesting read, and I grew to love our main character, he started from a self-centered brat to someone who realized there's something bigger in life and something worth fighting for. His journey from someone who knew next to nothing about politics to being radicalized after seeing firsthand how the government oppressed his people and that he could actually do something was my favorite aspect of this. The martial arts were so fun even if sometimes I didn't understand certain things (I'm bad with fight scenes). Overall, it's not the best book out there, but I would recommend it.

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