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Wow! This was a fast read. You get wrapped into everything happening for everyone’s prospective. Then when get Part 4, you’re amazed. I didn’t see that coming then the last few chapters are WOW!! Karma!

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I received a free ARC ebook of <i>The Business Trip</i> from NetGalley in exchange for an unbiased review.

The only reason I finished this book is my commitment to NetGalley. I am an avid reader of many genres, including mystery thrillers, but this novel is ridiculous. Using a first person narrator can be problematic but using multiple first person narrators makes the novel choppy at best. The author uses text messaging, both as sender and receiver, to help fill in the blanks but then must revisit the texts later in the novel to prove their true impact.

Using a doppelganger and voice simulation software is intriguing but this novel does not reach the potential possible.

This novel is a miss.

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The Business Trip by Jessie Garcia tells the story of two very different women and how their chance meeting changes each of their lives forever.

While I like the concept of this book the execution was awful. The characters were cartoonish and the writing felt amateur. Each chapter felt clunky and cobbled together. I did like the twist at the end...didn't see it coming...and the story was compelling enough for me to finish it, but...eh.

I was given this book in exchange for my honest opinion. Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for this ARC.

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Thank you Net Galley and the publisher for an ARC of this book.
Two women on a plane one that is heading to a convention the other feeling an abusive relationship. It was a little over the top that they resembled each other and one was able to succeed in playing the other one. The abusive boyfriend was angry and annoying. I was hoping for some more from this book

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The Business Trip was a fast read! Two women are on a plane one running for her life and one traveling to a conference for work. Suddenly, one goes missing. Then, the second one. There were so many twists and turns with a variety of different character's' points of views. The ending was a grand finale to this awesome book!

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Do not waste your time! I wasted mine and will spare you the injustice. The book starts out intriguing but once you get to Jasmine, preposterous and ludicrous are only a couple of words that immediately come to my mind. How much does the author want to hit us over the head with Jasmine’s unhappy life? She despises people who have lives better than hers, to the point of wishing them harm. News flash Jasmine! Work on making your life better rather than loathing those who have made theirs successful. I am sick and tired of this “have and have not theme.” Pull yourself up by your bootstraps, stop associating with worthless Individuals and make positive changes in your life! If the author’s intent was to make the reader feel sorry for Jasmine, she doesn't get my vote. Thank you NetGalley and St. Martin’s Press for sending this book for review consideration. All opinions are my own. #TheBusinessTrip, #St.Martin’sPress.

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Thank you to NetGalley and St. Martin’s Press for this ARC of The Business Trip by debut author Jessie Garcia.

I loved this book! Short, suspenseful chapters, a twisty mystery, and multiple first-person POV chapters.

The plot focuses on the main characters, Jasmine and Stephanie, two women who happen to become seat-mates on the same flight to Denver. They are strangers before the flight and then each goes missing afterward. Is there a connection?
The unfolding answer through the book was so entertaining!

Both happen to meet a great guy once deplaned, an Atlanta station news director, named Trent McCarthy.
The women separately send texts to their respective friends about him.

We learn side-characters’ perspectives through their own chapters. This fleshed out the plot and added to the suspense for me, giving a behind-scenes peek at the lives of the two MCs and the immediate aftermath of their disappearances.
The true reality of their experiences was realized as the story reaches its climax, as a fascinating retrospective via the action of one of the main characters.

By the middle of the book my head was spinning from twists. I was riveted.
I had no idea what was going on and I loved it!
Then when the pieces started to come together, I loved it even more.

Without leaving spoilers, I absolutely love the trope of the main plot twist! I often seek out thriller books containing it. It was an unexpected bonus to this propulsive story!

I did not at all mind the times I needed to suspend disbelief - the story was too much fun.

TW: Non-graphic violence including domestic and sexual, and emotional child abuse.
It also contains class envy.

Five stars!

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As a self-proclaimed thriller lover, The Business Trip checked all my boxes! Unlikeable characters? Check. Chilling? Check. Read-in-one-sitting material? Check. The only portion I struggled with a bit was the pacing being a little relentless - I feel like it started out slow (as most thrillers do), but somewhere in the last quarter, it amped way up.

I didn't realize this was a debut novel until I checked the NetGalley description - sometimes it's obvious but this was one of those refreshing times where it wasn't obvious.

Thank you for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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Excellent Story! What starts out as a gal in a bad relationship becomes a murder story. Clearly should not talk with a stranger on a plane. What twists and turns. As the story unfolds it quickly became a page turner. I like the view from a few different people. And that shock at the end...Superb, This is one every mystery reader will enjoy.

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I was a bit concerned when I started the book, and it was about a woman fleeing from an abusive relationship. I really didn't want to read a book about a woman being tracked down by an abusive ex. Thank goodness, the book took a left turn quickly and that wasn't what it was about at all (whew!). Yes, Jasmine sneaks out after her abusive and controlling boyfriend falls asleep with an extra-large dose of sleeping medication he unknowingly consumed. Jasmine has been squirreling away money from her bartending job and with the help of a friend, Anna, she decides to head across the country to Denver for a fresh start. In the next chapter, we meet Stephanie, who is a TV news producer in Madison (I assume Wisconsin). She is being sent to San Diego to yet another conference she has no interest in attending. Her neighbor and friend, Robert, is recruited to watch her cat. Stephanie is divorced and her adult son is somewhat standoffish toward her. Once Stephanie reaches the conference, she begins to exchange text messages with Robert and her co=workers. She also updates her Facebook pages with information from the conference. But on the day she is supposed to return home, she texts everyone that she'll be gone for another week. She confides in Robert that she's met a man named Trent and they have hit it off -- so much so that she's returning to Atlanta to be with him. Once in Atlanta, she also sends Robert more texts and photos of Atlanta and about her new love interest. Before long, the texts begin to alarm Robert and he and Stephanie's co=workers begin to think maybe she's not the one sending the messages.

This book really had a lot of twists and turns! You really get into the heads of the many awful characters in the book and their justifications for their actions seem entirely plausible. The story is told from multiple viewpoints and while the solution is somewhat intricate, it was fascinating to see how all the pieces of the story fit together. I didn't give it 5 stars because there were a few things that didn't really add up, but if you can overlook a few leaps in logic, this book will certainly keep you turning the pages!

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Thank you for the opportunity to preview The Business Trip. This is a wild ride!
Unexpectedly one of the best debuts I have read.
A battered young woman and a successful business woman meet on a plane. Both seeking a change in their lives and both will experience just that within a week.
Written with several voices this book takes you into the minds of each character and how wanting a change in life leads to unexpected results.
Fast paced and well written this is a suspenseful and entertaining read. 4 big stars. Recommend!

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This is a fun twisty thriller that will surprise you in the end.

Stephanie is a news director in Madison, WI. Her station is sending her to San Diego for a conference of news directors.

Jasmine is a down-on-her-luck waitress who is escaping a bad relationship. She's going to Denver with a little bit of money she's saved up and plans to figure it out when she gets there.

Stephanie and Jasmine will cross paths on an airplane. A week later, both text friends that they have met a great new guy, Trent, and they are going with him to Atlanta. Then Trent is accused of murdering them both.

What really happened? You'll have to read the book to find out!

I won't say much, because this is a book that very much needs you to go into it knowing as little as possible. I will say some of the twists are pretty predictable, while others were not. That made this a very fun read. Some of the characters are pure caricatures rather than 3-dimensional people, and that could be a problem for some readers. It also has murder, sexual assault and kidnapping, so be warned.

Thanks to Netgalley for the advance copy of this book.

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This is a fun debut for this author. The plot is creative and it moves along at a nice pace. I almost gave up on it about half way through when it just felt repetitive with all the characters repeating the same things obviously from their point of view but it got to be a but much. Trent’s chapters were positively obnoxious and I skimmed over 90% just looking for anything I needed to know. I wish there was a way to re work the last 1/4 of the book so that not quite so much is revealed so quickly and in some cases SO MUCH DETAIL. It does require the reader to suspend disbelief just a little to believe some of the characters actions, but won’t spoil it for other readers. The outcome was satisfying enough although it was so obvious how it would ultimately end after comments made by one of the characters. Definitely worth reading. I received an ARC from the publisher through NetGalley.

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5 Brilliant Savvy Stars !!

Y'all stop what your doing and pay attention !!!

Add this book to your TBR NOW!!

If you are looking for a fast , fun , bingeable and unputdownable read that will literally have you picking your jaw up off the floor then The Business Trip is your next read !!

I am still processing this book and I can't believe its a debut novel , it was so cleverly written and so well executed that you would have thought Jessie Garcia has been writing for years and I seriously can not wait to get my hands on another one of her books!!

Without giving too much away this story is told from MANY POV's and lets just say many "unexpected" moments that had me hollering OMGEEE!!

Two complete opposites are on a plane to San Diego both with different motives. Stephanie is on a business trip to a work conference and Jasmine is running from her past to start a new life .

When Stephanie doesn't return to work Monday , the office starts asking questions and Stephanie's phone is blowing up with text messages and she just wants some peace and time with Trent a new guy she has met .

Jasmine's phone is also blowing up with text messages from her Narcissistic and abusive boyfriend Glenn , and she is determined to never return or see him again and put the past behind her.

Someone on the other hand as an alternative motive and if their not careful with their scheming ... is someone going to end up dead ??!!

You need read this to find out what this clever twisty little story is all about!

Thank you Netgalley , St. Martin's Press and Jessie Garcia for this cunning and sharp digital ARC!!

Respectfully Another Read by Angie !

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Jessie Garcia weighs in with her variation on a common fantasy in her debut novel, “The Business Trip,” which invites readers to imagine what it would be like to chuck their own lives and take up a new existence elsewhere free of all existing complications or entanglements.
Particularly appealing the prospect is for the novel’s Jasmine, whose arm bears marks of her boyfriend’s regular abuse. Enough finally becomes enough, though, and early one cold January morning, careful not to awaken him, she rises early and takes an Uber to the airport, where she has gotten only so far in her planning as to board a flight for Denver, where she will see what she will see.
Once on her flight, though, she crosses paths with fellow passenger Stephanie, a TV network exec whose ostensible purpose for being on the flight is to attend a conference in San Diego but who is herself experiencing dissatisfaction with a life that has made for business success but at the expense of a failed marriage and a grown son from whom she feels estranged.
Revealing much more would be a disservice to the author, other than to say that the two women go missing and their acquaintances back home begin receiving strange, even alarming, texts indicating that the women have met a man named Trent McCarthy with whom it seems they’ve become involved. And as the texts become ever more alarming and things overall become stranger and stranger, the reader is given to wonder if perhaps the women have been done in by Trent or if they’re themselves colluded in a plot to do in Trent or perhaps, even, that Trent doesn’t exist at all but has been fabricated by the women as part of an elaborate scheme that the women have hatched to facilitate an escape from their regular lives.
All good fun it makes for if you enjoy this sort of thing, and there’s even a stab at a greater theme of class consciousness as Jasmine mentally remarks on the better quality writing paper or even toilet paper at the sort of hotel Stephanie would stay in. “Just another way the class system in America rewarded people like Stephanie,” Jasmine thinks.
Overall, though, the novel exemplified the sort of over-the-topness that puts me off about mysteries or thrillers, in particular how one of its characters does things as part of a grand scheme that defy credulity. Also, there’s a finale that I found superfluous.
Still, the novel is a particularly ingenious instance of its genre which will have fans of this sort of thing impatiently turning its pages.

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The premise of this looked interesting so I decided to give it a go. The first 40% was fast paced and I was back and forth trying to figure out where the story was going. There are a lot of different POVs to keep up with. Some of the POVs like Glenn were a little juvenile with the writing. 65% through when it switched back to Jasmines POV, is where it felt rushed and far fetched. The beginning was strong and then I feel like the author was trying to rush to tell what happened. Then the final plot twist came out of nowhere. Some of the writing made me cringe when the police officer said "well let me tell you how we found out" and listed step by step the whole process. I don't know if I would reach for this again but as a debut novel it wasn't bad just the second half of the book kind of ruined it for me unfortunately. Thank you for the ARC.

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I wanted to like this book better. It had potential but not the follow-through. There were many characters and their sides of the story. It didn't confuse me; it just didn't add anything special to the book. The twists in the middle and at the end (can we even call them twists?) were not shocking or thrilling. It just made for a hum-drum story overall.

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This was great. Wonderful plot and when you think you have figured it out, trust me, you haven't. This is a new author to me and I will be looking forward to her next book. This book was good to the very last drop.

Watch out mystery writers, there's a new kid in town, and she's awesome.

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I was invited by the publisher to review this book. I enjoyed the way this book played out, which was essentially two missing women and the viewpoints from those people in their lives - I thought this was a unique approach, and I never felt lost with the different characters as the author did a good job distinguishing them. Thus, there are a lot of layers to this book and it was entertaining to read it all unfold. This is a pretty fast paced book as well, so the plotline moved quickly, even without hearing from the two main women who went missing.

Thank you to NetGalley and St. Martin's Press for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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The Business trip was a great story with lots of twists and turns! Although it was a little lengthy in the descriptions occasionally, I really enjoyed this tale of murder and deception. The characters were great, I especially Jasmine .. her character development was great! The story line kept my interest .. so much so that I finished the book in 2 days. A wonderful debut novel! I look forward to more of Jessie Garcia’s books. Thanks to NetGalley for sending me an early copy.

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