Zodiac academy, meets dark and Gothic twistyschool., mafia meets Harry potter and the magicians. Interesting world and characters. Not my favorite thing in the world but saw what the author was trying to accomplish

I went into Kingmakers pretty blind. I haven't read a Sophie Lark book yet and wanted to try one. I was not disappointed. Normally, I do NOT like love triangles. However, I felt this wasn't really a love triangle. Anna never really liked Dean. She didn't even really want to date him, but he was super pushy and forced her. But, more about that in a minute.

Anna and Leo have been best friends their entire lives. Both of them start feeling more than friend feelings, but don't want to say anything to the other. Overall, I just loved these two! I was frustrated with their lack of clear communication, but honestly it all made sense. They acted like I expect college kids to act-scared to ruin a friendship. I also loved seeing how they brought the best out of each other. Anna needs Leo's confidence and pep. Leo needs Anna to keep him in line. The plot is interesting, since this isn't a normal "college". The danger of the competitions was cool and getting to know some of the other kids added depth to the story.

This was my first Sophie Lark book and it was a hit! I can't wait to dive into book 2!

Thank you Sophie Lark and NetGalley for the ARC!

3 Stars!

When I read the blurb and saw that this was a mafia world with a college specifically for their kids, I was so excited. I expected a fun school with lots of drama and romance. I loved the school and the atmosphere we got from it. I would love to attend for a day lol. However, we are given a friends to lover's story, and the chemistry wasn't there for me. I was confused on why we had the third pov from Dean, when he wasn't a love interest. I honestly thought it was the perfect opportunity for a love triangle. Then Dean did something pretty messed up, and I didn't want his pov any longer.

Overall, this one just missed the mark for me.

I absolutely love Sophie, I love her writing so much! I would literally read her grocery list. I really did enjoy this book but I think I need to go back and finish the brutal brightright series about the parents!

I'm not entirely clear on the official difference between YA and NA, but in my personal definition, YA is where the characters in the book are high-school aged, and NA is where the characters are university or college-aged. So, by that definition, this book would be New Adult, and I've always had a hard time with New Adult books, because I can never really relate to them. I find the characters are always too immature, or too mature.

In the case of this book, I found the characters to be too very immature, though to be fair, they were fresh out of high school. I also wasn't a fan of the character art that was at the end of some of the chapters, the art style wasn't my thing at all. Some of the art near the end was very pretty, but didn't actually depict the scene of what happened in the book very well.

By about 30%, I noticed that the story was reminding me of Fourth Wing a little bit, just without any dragons. Probably just because of the "four quadrants, and part of a school" part of the story.

At 37%, and only by reading someone else's review, did I find out that the Kingmakers series is actually the second story arc, and should really be read after the author's Brutal Birthright series. (Kingmakers seems to be king of "Brutal Birthright series, the next generation", as it's all the kids of the characters of the first series.) GAH I wish I had known that, I would have read that series first to really have more depth into these characters! A little author's note or something at the very beginning as a 'heads up' would have been nice. sigh! This series can be read on it's own, but I would have liked to have that additional background, because the family's backgrounds and feuds and things does come into play.

In the end, it was a fast-paced, entertaining read, which was great. No slow parts, no boring parts, I was always interested to see what would happen next. I definitely want to continue the series, but first I want to go back and read the Brutal Birthright series!

I really enjoyed this story, and that goes for the re-release as well!

The premise of Kingmakers is basically Hogwarts for children of mafia families- and I’m here for it.

The three person POV was interesting since it’s not a poly story, but I think it offered important perspective!

Looking forward to the re-release of the rest of the series too!

Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for this eARC. Unfortunately, after getting to 33% of the book, I decided to DNF this one for several reasons.

Maybe if I had it in paper form I would be able to flip back to the beginning of the book to see the family tree over and over again to figure out how everyone is related. There’s so many characters and backstories we are told up front that it was a whirlwind trying to put them all into perspective.

I also think that the language and characters are too young for me now. At 34, I think high school into college age is just not relatable to me anymore.

I was very excited that this was suppose to be a mafia college type book. As a fan of mafia romances, I was so excited but at this stage of the book there’s been nothing really giving life to this claimed theme. Maybe if I read more we’d get more into it but other than it being a literal college setting filled with other mafia groups children, this isn’t giving what I was expecting.

Maybe I can pick this up at a later date but as of right now, it doesn’t work for me.

e-Arc:
Rating: 3/5
Spice: 2/5

Summary:
Leo and Anna are childhood friends, raised with very close families who also happen to be mafia bosses. They're about to head off to Kingmakers, which is essentially college where you major in mafia 101. There are four categories you can be divided into: the spies, the accountants, the enforcers, and the heirs. The last group is where Leo and Anna are placed, along with other heirs to mafias around the world. One of these heirs is none other than Dean, who belongs to the Russian bratva.
Leo and Dean are technically cousins as their parents are siblings, but there has been a large feud when Leo's mom (Dean's aunt) left Russia to marry Leo's dad. Some very bad things happened, so there's no love lost between the two of them.

With the family feud, growing romances, school stress, and the year long competition between grades, the Quartum Bellum (which the freshmen have never won) tensions run high and dangerous things are coming their way...

Review:
Overall, this was a decent book. I wasn't the biggest fan of the writing style, which is part of why the I ranked it the way I did. Parts of the plot seemed messy and unnecessary. It was very slow to start, and I struggled getting myself to read it (had to start several times) but then seemed rushed at the end. It could have been spaced out better. I did enjoy the writing about the competition, I think she definitely could have leaned into that aspect way more. I also would have loved to see more of Miles and Zoe (the next book is about them) as I have no attachment drawing me in to read any further. I don't think I will be continuing this series, but it was still an OK read.

3.5 rounded up. I enjoyed this but I also wasn't fully taken with it. It gave mafia Harry Potter vibes, which I didn't at all hate. It was easy reading but something just didn't quite click for me. I'd like to keep going with the series though and would to see how the next one goes. Thank you so much for this ARC opportunity, gave me a few entertaining evenings!

3 -⭐⭐⭐


"Whether it's wrong or right, I'm always going to want you with me."

Year One: Kingmakers is the first novel in the new adult dark contemporary mafia romance series, Kingmakers, which is a spin off series to the Brutal Birthright series as it follows the children of these characters. In this we follow Leo (son of Sebastian and Yelena) and Anna (daughter of Ness and Mikolaj). Leo and Anna have been fast friends all their lives and together they take on the next big adventure, Kingmakers, a college solely from children of mafia families to build the skills they need to rule the underbelly. While tension rises between Leo and Anna over the idea of more, Leo is confronted by his cousin Deon, who is out for blood. Deon sees Anna and realizes he wants her and he will do anything to have her...

I have mixed feelings about this book.

On one hand I love the relationship of Leo and Anna. They have such banter, connection, and love. Leo is a stubborn and fierce character but he does have a quick trigger. He acts before he thinks but when he loves he loves fiercely. Anna is fierce as well but I felt she was a slow burn. When she finally gets angry she is fuming. I felt she struggled with voicing herself at times.

The world and characters also interested me from the cameos of the Brutal Birthright characters to the mafia underworld we got to investigate and connect with as we met more lineage.

On the other hand, the story gave off a very Vampire Diaries dramatic feel and it was not my thing. The immediate aggression between Leon and Deon over their family feud, Deon's need to take Anna's virginity to ensure she loves him, and more just had me struggling. I felt Deon was done dirty in this scenario because I understood where he was coming from with his background and I feel he will get a redemption arc but in this book he's made into a bit of a creepy character.

This book does contain spice - I would say 2.5 spicy peppers out of 5 spicy peppers. The spice for a good chunk of the novel is more rounding of bases than the full home run BUT it does contain elements of dubious consent so it doesn't feel good reading. The amazing spice was around the 80% mark where the love and passion between the two main characters was evident and I enjoyed that. There are at least twice full spicy moments between them and one that contains dominance and toys. The spice is explicit and very detailed.

Overall, I felt the ways in which the rivalry took place and used the character's relationships to toy with them meant I got less time enjoying the parts I did. I felt if the characters were more open to communicate a lot of the issues between ALL characters would have been resolved.

I will continue to read this series as I enjoy Sophie Lark's writing.

Thank you to Bloom for this arc!

I was a little nervous about this book being new adult as I'm quite a bit older, but I read and loved her adult mafia Brutal Birthright series so I wanted to try this. This is the next generation of the characters I loved, all going to a college for mafia heirs. There are challenges, games, different houses, kinda like another series we know and love 😉. This book centers on Leo Gallo as a friends to lovers trope with his friend Anna. The book was a lot of setup for the rest of the series, a love triangle where I was actually hoping for something to happen with Dean until... well, no spoilers! I'm just hoping he gets better by his own book. I wish the romance had happened before the last 20% of the book but overall i really enjoyed this book.
Thanks to Bloom Books through Netgalley for the advance copy of this book. The opinions in this review are my own and given voluntarily.

Sophie Lark is my favorite mafia writer and no one can change my mind!

I loved getting to see the second generation of the Gallos, Yennins, Griffins, and everyone else. The prologue being a whole family scene honestly made me tear up. I was so happy to come back into their world.

The DRAMA was SO GOOD! I'm not normally a love triangle girl, but Sophie stood out with this one! I truly was not bored for a second during this book and binged the whole thing! All the side characters coming in and out really helped move the plot and romance along in the best way.

The friendships that came out of the first year at Kingmakers made me really excited for the rest of the series. I can't wait to see what's next! Thankful for the ARC on netgalley from Bloom!

Was eerily similar to Harry Potter the one where they have the games, I’ve only read book 3 of HP, but with mafia kids. It was difficult to make the separation between HP and this book. Only until the last 30% did I start to get interested in the story, as there was the most action happening. The first 70% was a long world building. Has 3 POVs, but the issue for me was the POVs were all very similar in tone, I had to go to the beginning of the chapter to see whose POV I was reading.

Wading into the second generation of the Brutal Birthright series, I was excited for a new setting, new characters, and new stories. What I wasn't ready for was the 3 POVs this book switched through. I didn't like the extra POV from Dean in this book. It made the story feel clunky. We follow Leo and Anna through their first year at Kingmakers Academy. I like the expansion into other mafia families throughout the world. I'm definitely looking forward to the next book to see how Zoe breaks her engagement to Rocco. As with Sophie's last series, I found the series very easy to get through and enjoyed my read, minus the clunkiness. The year-long competition was a fun plot point that added some fun every so often. Leo was cocky but got his reality check and grew as a person. Anna was dark and solitary but I really enjoyed her making friends with Chay and Zoe. I'm giving it a 3.5 overall.

Basically a mafia Harry Potter, and I'm not mad about it. A very easy read (which I like), with decent twists and turns. The start felt very boring and it took me a while to get into the story/get attached to the characters, but once I was hooked, I flew through this book. Since reading the Sinners duet, I've really missed Sophie Lark's writing.

I HATED Dean which is a sign of great writing. I sympathise with him during his POV chapters, but I can't wait to see what direction the rest of the series will take him.

I can't wait to start book 2 and read Miles and Zoe's story! Sophie did a great job in building anticipation for the next one. I really enjoyed all the snippets we've had of Zoe so far.

Holy smokes. I read this in one single freaking day! I was instantly hooked! I need the others ASAP!

I read this when it first came out and I love the makeover it’s truly chefs kiss !! So excited for other people to read it

Like Hogwarts but dark and with mafia families. Unfortunately, I had a difficult time keeping up with all the characters and the familial lines at the beginning. It did get better when the characters started to attend the Kingmaker Academy. The story has three POV's Leo, Anna and Dean. The book has a love triangle which is my least favorite trope. I did enjoy the forbidden love, rivalry, and the artwork. Overall, I was quite disappointed with this book, and I typically love Sophie Lark's work.

This is the second time I have read this book. I don’t read many mafia books but this one is one of the best ones I have read so far.


I do highly recommend .

Booktok has had me wanting to read a Sophie Lark book for a while, so I greatly appreciate having the opportunity to start this series. To be honest I expected it to be much darker, but I am certainly pleased it wasn’t. It’s a solid new adult college mafia romance. Multi POV, academia vibes, just dark enough to not be traumatizing, believable world building, perfect love them or hate them character building. As this is a 5 book series it makes sense that not much happens plotwise until nearly halfway, then it became more engaging & exciting with the events/trials of the Quartum Bellum & finally a good dose of spice. A lot of care was taken with this book, from the playlist of songs to play during certain parts of the book & the character art. I’m keen to see what kind of character development happens with the cast over the next 4 novels.