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Ich habe mich über das Buch sehr gefreut. Es ist nicht nur fließend zum lesen sondern auch sehr spannend.

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This debut kept me interested until the end, despite its flaws.
I had a few issues with the pacing, not so much with the plot, but with the relationships.
The story is heavy on the political intrigue that includes warring rival courts. The slavery aspect of the story is a little overdone, but I'm willing to overlook that.
The author shows great promise (the writing got better that the book went on) and I am curious to continue the story.

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This was a hard book for me to review. It contains a lot of themes that I like (fantasy world, gradual understanding gained, political maneuvering), but it also contained a lot that I could live without (lack of character agency, mentions to the modern world/technology, blatant lying from characters that are supposed to be well liked).

Overall, what stopped me from giving this book 4 stars was the lack of agency for our main character. She was pushed around and being very blatantly used for the duration of the book. Any choices that she was able to make were ultimately inconsequential and the story would have proceeded much the same way regardless of her choices.

That said, what prevented me from lowering my rating to 2 stars was the political intrigue of this world. It went more in-depth than I expected from the description and set itself up well for a sequel. In general, Avasi did a good job of giving information to readers over time and letting us string the pieces together (with one notable exception involving secondary character backstory that I felt was very "on-the-nose" and obvious despite Anthea not putting the pieces together).

I enjoyed reading The False Pawn and will probably pick up the sequel if I come across it.

Thank you to NetGalley for the opportunity to read and review this novel.

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Thank you NetGalley and the publisher for an early copy of this book! Below is my honest review.

Trigger warnings; torture, violence, sex scenes

I'm not going to lie: I was so close to DNF-ing this book. I was about 20% into it and thought that the plot was too slow, but i pushed through and I actually enjoyed this a lot more than I expected! If you're worried about it being too much like SJM's books (specifically ACOTAR), I would say that it doesn't really feel like SJM's books. Yes, there is a strong, independent female protagonist in this book, but I don't think she is an exact copy of Feyre or Aelin or Bryce. The worlds are different and the magic system is also different. Yes, there are people who are hundreds of years old and have magical abilities, but that's not unique to SJM's worlds.

I think what made me really enjoy this book is Anthea, the protagonist. At first, I found her to be a little unlikable, but once she discovered that she held all the power in her predicament and started giving no Fs on whether she lived or died, I became more intrigued on her story. In terms of the world, it was easy to understand and you can see that there is room to grow it. So definitely excited about that. Overall, I'm sad at the ending but will definitely be picking up the next book in the series!

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I may be biased but I’m super happy to be able to find this gem. I read a lot of isekai manhwas so this was up my alley. There’s a mystery element and a lot of angst. This was mostly an introduction of a foreign world rich with monsters and magic that the main character originating our mundane world, fell into. So hopefully the second installment is more action packed (with a generous dose of romance).

I loved that Anthea wasn’t the typical tiny and innocent looking woman that was also so physically capable of everything under the sun. She was independent and intelligent who knew she was severely lacking strength and combat capabilities. What I didn’t like though was that by the middle of the story, she became so dependent, heavily reliant on a male savior. I didn’t agree with most of her choices during this turning point in the novel. It was also odd that the first time she saw a long pointed ear humanoid in person…she thought ‘alien’ instead of elf. Pretty sure elves are pretty popular mythological creature in our world. But if she’s not well versed in fantasy, she’s at least seen emojis on her phone showcasing the differences between an alien and elf. Those are my only gripes about our little miss female lead that I can recall.

Everyone keeps comparing it to ACOTAR but since I’ve never read that series, I couldn’t really agree or disagree. But if I had to compare it other known works, very loosely - the premise (minus the deception and dark topics such as torture, enslavement and mentions of SA) reminds me of ‘The Saint's Magic Power Is Omnipotent’. By the end, it gave ‘Yona of the Dawn’. (I’m not explaining any further because I don’t want to ruin anything for future readers).

Thank you Netgallery for an eARC in exchange for an honest review!

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This was an amazing fantasy debut novel! The story follows Anthea, who is transported from modern day into a world of elves. The FMC is multifaceted and relatable. I liked that she was able to use skills from her real life employment to navigate relationships and court politics in an unfamiliar setting. The plot and world building were intriguing. As a reader, you don’t know who to trust, which keeps you on your toes. The romance was more of a side plot but didn’t really pull me in. It seems like the intention may be to continue the slow-burn into the next book. There was some spice. However, it didn’t add to or negate anything from the story. I felt impartial about it. The naming of the characters was somewhat difficult to follow. There was a Fyrlion and a Fyralin??? It would be helpful to have a list of characters and their role as a reference in book two.

Thank you to NetGalley for the ebook. Overall, I really enjoyed this read. I am looking forward to continuing this series to see where the story goes!

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(3.75 easily rounded up to a 4)

I had fun with this! And I love the premise: When you’re just living your normal, everyday life and all of a sudden end up in a magical fantasy world.

I do think that Anthea was way too okay with this whole situation way to fast. I would’ve been in shock and wonder and fear for a hot minute.

Anthea’s decisions and personality don’t always make sense to me. Sometimes she’s super smart and then sometimes she’s whiny and making less-than-smart decisions.

Elven magic doesn’t impact Anthea the way it should, so instead of figuring out how to get her back home, they want to figure out what this magical immunity is all about. And humans (like Anthea), are treated like slaves in this world. So this adventure doesn’t start out too fun for Anthea, as you imagine.

And there are so many untrustworthy characters that make this so interesting and intriguing. Especially when it comes to what happens later in the book (and for what could happen in future books).

Elves and court politics and secret missions and long-since-thought-dead-dragons ANDDDD a prophecy…

Thank you to NetGalley for the digital copy of this book in exchange for my honest review! My review is already up on Goodreads and my TikTok (Zoe_Lipman) review will be up at the end of the month with my monthly wrap-up.

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Did I devour this book or did this book devour me?

Let me say, I was hooked from page 1 and could not put this book down, reading until the wee hours of dawn. I loved the pacing of the book; each bit of new information had me forming theories, questioning characters, and eagerly turning the page to learn more. I found the plot fascinating and intriguing and after that ending cliffhanger, I am desperate for the next book in the series.

Overall, I LOVED this book and couldn't get enough :)

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This book follows Anthea who is thrown from her world into another very different world. This new world she finds to be very different from her own, as it is inhabited by elves. She quickly finds that not only is she different as a human but that she is immune to their magic as well. This book is full of new twists and turns and I found I couldn't put it down.

At times it was a bit repetitive and I struggle with the way it ended but I would highly recommend the read. And I can't wait for the next book.

A big thanks to NetGalley and A.E. Asavi for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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I devoured this book! We first encounter Anthea, our female main character, who is fed up, exhausted, and looking for a new path. The majority of us can say that we have been in her shoes before. However, one should always be careful what they wish for. After a night of partying, Anthea meets a stranger and is transported to an entirely new universe and falls into the arms of a handsome elven prince. Our dream, right?

Our author has created a world that we fall into with Anthea and must figure it out with her. There are politics, hierarchies, class divides, much different than Anthea's home universe and the more she learns, the reader does too. Asavi gives us just enough to follow along with Anthea but leaves you desperate with wanting for the next book in the series. This book is a true cliffhanger.

If you are a fan of spice, do not fear, there is plenty to thirst after. If you are looking for world building, you will also find it here.

Well done for a debut and I look forward to the next in the series.

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Woefully adequate. I wanted to love this and I wanted it to be my next big, amazing fantasy read but alas it was not. I didn’t hate it and I didn’t love it.

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Firstly, I have an issue with books that don’t include a trigger warning list, this book definitely needed one. There were many difficult topics broached, including slavery, sex slavery (though not explicit) and human sacrifice. Whilst these may not have been the worst instances I’ve ever read I do believe it would have been courteous to consider the audience and allow them warnings as these were difficult to read.

That said, this book was enjoyable, it had mystery and intrigue and a lot of the best romantasy tropes. The eventual romance that bloomed didn’t feel forced and developed in a natural way, with some cute run ins. The twists and turns weren’t entirely predictable, and still caused some pleasant surprise. However, there were times where the story felt mistimed and incomplete, there were objects and places mentioned once and then forgotten, or moments where the FMC repeated herself unnecessarily.

Overall the story was enjoyable and I will be looking out for the next book, but it sadly doesn’t break into my list of best books of 2024.

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This was a take it or leave it for me. I kind of didn't really like anyone and the story itself was kind of over done. I think that this could have been fleshed out a little more and then could have been epic but as it sits if it does turn out to be a series I most likely won't read the rest of them.

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Overworked Anthea struggles to fit any excitement into her life as she's too busy working and taking care of her two younger sisters. One evening, she ventures out on the town, to escape a life on the crazy hamster wheel - except she gets more that she bargained for.
Waking up in a world inhabited by Elves, Anthea finds her life completely changed. These elves are vicious, steely and focused and they need Anthea. The plot felt very well paced, and it has the perfect balance of romance, fantasy and intrigue.
A great debut and I'm looking forward to the next instalment to see where Anthea's journey ends.

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This books follows a woman from modern day who is thrust into world filled with magic, but the elves she encounters are intrigued by her because magic does not affect her. All she wants is to return to her world and her family, but the elves don't know how to return her there and they would rather test and use her immunity to magic for their plans.

This is definitely not going to be the book for everyone - the characters are not very loveable and some aspects of the story might be disturbing to readers, such as torture, death, and mentions of sexual assault. Despite this, I enjoyed this story and am am 100% looking forward to the next book in the series, which is set to release in early 2025.

Thank you to NetGalley and A.E. Asavi for providing me with a free copy of this book in exchange for my review!

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The fact that this book is a debut surprises me a lot because it was VERY well done. If you want the perfect balance between fantasy, romance and mystery, that’s your book!! For me the only (small) flaw was the FMC, Anthea. She didn't captivate me even though I understood her motivations.

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I thoroughly enjoyed this book. The whole elves and humans plot line had gotten a little old for me but I loved it in this book.

The action and expected romance kept me going. There were moments that left me speechless and almost in tears as I read through Anthea's pain. I appreciate that romance isn't the main storyline within this and our heroine has a real purpose and strong personality.

This book does include some violence, which could be a turn off for a lot of people. That being said it isn't a main thread through the story.

One thing I struggled with was the names, in particular similar sounding names or spelt names (this may have just been a me problem though).

Overall, loved it and was getting more anxious as I saw how little I had left and how much more I needed to know. Really excited to see how this series will be brought to life.

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Initially, the romance aspect of the book felt unnatural, but by the second half, I completely understood why—and I loved the little twist in direction! This is definitely a slow-burn romance, and it's set up to span multiple books, which I adore.

In the first book, the female main character is thrust into a magical world separate from Earth. We follow her journey as she learns that humans in this realm are slaves, meets some elvish royalty, embarks on mini heists, and travels through multiple courts—all in an effort to discover her role in an ancient, mysterious prophecy.

At times, the writing style felt like a YA novel and was a bit repetitive, but the content was more mature/new adult, which was a little strange to me. It also took me a while to form a connection with the characters, but as I mentioned earlier, the story is well set up for a second book!

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4.5 ⭐️ Wow. I devoured this book. I literally couldn't put it down. It was fast paced and the action never stopped, basically meaning outpr poor main character never got a break lol. My only co okaint is that the character names were too similar and the side characters were only introduced one time. I had lots of trouble remembering who was who so different names for side characters and a little remainder about who they are would have been helpful for me. I will 100% be reading book 2.

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First of all, I liked the plot, which kept me from giving up on the book. The idea and world-building were interesting, especially the concept of humans being slaves. It made me think a lot about the book. Even though I don't agree with slavery, reading this made me wonder how I might see it differently if I lived in Isluma or another place where it was normal. This book stayed on my mind even when I was reading other books.

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