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This is the first book in The Everlands Trilogy. It is a story surrounding the city of First Light, where vampires have exiled themselves. They can never leave. The nobility drink the finest animal blood to be had, and the rest survive on whatever they can scrounge up. Sam, one of the palace maids, hates the nobility and wants out. She throws her lot in with the Leeches, a group of rebel maids, and soon they have added a sorcerer whose deductive skills make up for his lack of magic, a deadly werewolf assassin and a countess who knows a city’s worth of secrets to their ranks. What began as a murder investigation has uncovered a vast conspiracy by the ruling elite, and now Sam must find the truth before she becomes another victim.

I am torn about this book. I like that this is a vampire book with nary a human in sight. This is completely different from any other vampire novel I have ever read. Also, I like that the vampires drink the blood of animals, and depending on the type of animal, the magicked blood gives them a certain extra power like night vision, flight, etc. The main drawback I found, at least for me was the vast number of people, sections & groups to try to keep up with. I began feeling like I needed some sort of flow chart or index to keep in front of me to keep it all straight. Granted, that could be old age talking, so there you go. Also, the book jumped around a lot, which also didn't help with keeping things straight. Will I continue to read the rest of the series as it is released? The jury is still out on that............

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It’s a little political intrigue, a little action-adventure, a little epic, a little class war, a little clash of beliefs, a little international incident, a little supernatural war, a little conspiracy, a little feminine power… Lightfall has its fingers in a whole lot of little pies but ultimately it left me wondering, “When is this book going to end?”

I was enjoying this book for most of the first act: I liked the plot set-up, was enjoying the character introductions, and felt invested enough in the story that I could connect with it and engage. That feeling didn’t last long though, because by just shy of 50% I was amazed I hadn’t even reached the halfway point because it felt like I had been reading forever. The rest of the book felt like that to me, with the third act feeling like an ill-kept cobblestone path of pacing leading to a rough ending that sealed the deal on whether or not I’ll be continuing on with the series.

The characters were enjoyable. The worldbuilding was fine (if overly descriptive). I like how there was little to no romance. I felt like the cast of characters was well-rounded and that made the dialogue enjoyable. I also liked the chapter length and the multi-POV. But when a book feels like it’s taking forever to end and has become a chore to read then you know it’s not a good book for you.

I was provided a copy of this title by the publisher and author via Netgalley. All thoughts, opinions, views, and ideas expressed herein are mine and mine alone. All reviews rated three stars or under will not appear on my social media. Thank you.

File Under: Action Adventure/Adult Fantasy/Book Series/Dark Fantasy/Fantasy/Fantasy Series

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I was very intrigued by the premise of Lightfall, and although I thought there were some pacing issues, a lot of characters, and at times things did come a bit too easily I found myself enjoying the story. The further we got into the story the more I liked the characters, with Sam and Sage becoming fast favorites, and the more the mystery and intrigue pulled me in. Certain parts were a bit slower and I did find myself starting to get a bit bored during those moments, but as the story progressed and new things were being revealed I had to keep reading to see how this would end.
I thought there were some great fight scenes, and now that we've established the world-building, and gotten to know the characters better, I am definitely intrigued and invested enough to pick up the second book and see what's going to happen next.

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Ive been looking for a new vampire, werewolf story since Twilight so I had high hopes for this one. Sadly, this story didn't do it for me. I thought the dialogue was unnatural a lot of the time and there wasn't a character that drew me in through the multiple POVs.

Thank you to Netgalley and St Martin's Press for the chance to read this early in exchange of an honest review.

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I wanted to love Lightfall, I really did. The concept sounded like it would be right up my alley, but a few chapters in I found myself so bored.

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I have not finished this book - but I want to. I am caught in a curious space of both thinking that what I'm reading is good stuff that will probably have a good pay off and feeling impatient and having a hard time focusing enough to get caught up in it. This may be a personal failing, or it may be that the pacing is lacking. I will be revisiting the title, and that is rare. Usually a DNF is a DNF.

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A tale of immortals - vampires, werewolves, and sorcerers - in a fantasy world where mortals have long ago disappeared and the immortals face the continuous threat of the Grays, an interloper to this world that ran the vampires from the city of Lightfall 200 years ago. The vampire kingdom is run by the nobility of the city of First Light, the last vampire city and the place where they fled after Lightfall was overrun. We meet some wonderful characters - Sam, Daphne, Alanna, Sage, Jacob, and Raven - vampires, mages, and werewolf coming together to solve the murder of a Prince of the city. The magic in this world is unique and wonderfully developed. An excellent story that I highly recommend and have greatly enjoyed reading!

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If you like paranormal mysteries with vampires and werewolves and sorcerers oh my this is your book!

I had a bit of a time getting into it but once I did it was a book that was comply different than anything I’ve read. I cannot wait till the next one as the ending was a jaw dropping moment.

Thank you NetGalley, St.Martins press and Ed Crocker for the ARC of Lightfall

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I took a bit of time starting off the book because of the holidays but I didn’t want to put this book down!! I was hooked into the store and I now can’t wait for the next book.

I love the story and the writing.

I do highly recommend Lightfall.

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Thank you netgalley for my ebook arc

After reading the description, I was excited to receive the ebook arc. However, I DNF this book around 20%. The first chapter definitely hooked me in but I quickly became bored. There are interesting and one of a kind ideas being told in this story, it just fell through.

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How long do I have to wait for book 2?

I want it now!

LIGHTFALL is the first book in The Everlands Trilogy, and I loved it!

This is a story of vampires, but it's absolutely not just another vampire story. The social classes, world building, and plot are completely original. We have magic, murder, mystery, and memorable characters.

I was fully invested every step of the way.

Side Note: LIGHTFALL is also Ed Crocker’s debut novel. I’ll be politely stalking him for all future books.

*I received a free eARC from St. Martin’s Press, provided via NetGalley.*

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7 / 10 ✪

https://arefugefromlife.wordpress.com/2025/01/10/lightfall-by-ed-crocker-review/

No humans, only immortals.

First thing’s first: I loved the concept. An original take on the classic story of things that go bump in the night. Vampires, werewolves, immortals of untold power—all just dropped on their own continent and left to duke it out.

I loved the aforementioned concept, story, and characters—all of which build on one another to make the read better and better as it goes on. The characters especially brought the world to life! So many distinctive and interesting leads, all told in first-person (which has a tendency to throw the narrative for me, but which didn’t here). Maybe because they worked together so well, or because the plot flowed seamlessly between one narrative and the next. The story itself ran along quite easily, and was never any trouble to read. Just the opposite. The pacing took off early and… at least tried to stay fast throughout, though it stumbled on numerous occasions before the end. Also, a few consistent issues spoiled the ending for me, though not completely. At the end of the day, this was an innovative, interesting, and generally immersive read, with a good story, one that would make a great miniseries one day!

Unfortunately, therein lies the problem.

My main issue with this is that it’s like the author was pressed for time, or just cared nothing for intrigue. Everything came too easily. The was torture within, but it never got anywhere. The way to get your mark to spill their entire story was to just ask them. At multiple instances, a character will just vomit up their entire, shadowy backstory for no reason. There’s an integral part of the plot, maybe halfway through (which I won’t spoil in any detail) which required a few chapters worth of planning, and at some length gains access to their quarry. And the quarry spills what they know when confronted with essentially “you can trust me”. It was here that I noticed everything came too easily. Everything. There’s precious little intrigue in this, and no subtlety. People are collected and killed constantly—unless they’re central to the plot, whereupon they inexplicably escape, right away. No waiting, no worrying. In prison and out in no time. It’s the problem of time, see, a bit like any TV show or movie. We skip from event to event, action sequence to action sequence, as to keep the audience entertained. It’s like an epic fantasy trying to exist jointly as a thriller, which… can work, just in this case doesn’t seem to.

Like most problems, it takes quite a bit of time to explain them compared to the relative ease of detailing just what I loved. Thing is, with Lightfall, the good still outweighs the bad. It gets my overall approval, though my recommendation may be a bit tepid. If I were you, I’d read a few more reviews, then check out a sample of the text before buying. As one typically does with a debut author, regardless.

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It may have taken a bit for this book to really sink its teeth into me, but just before the halfway point, *things* started to happen that really grabbed my attention, and lead to a thrilling back half.

This is a world of immortals (Vampires, Wolfkind, and Sorcerers) who have scattered from the Centerlands, to their own corners of the map, after the arrival of the mysterious “Grays” and their deadly bullets.

We primarily spend our time in First Light, home of the Vampires, but worry not, we also spend time with a badass wolf lady, and two sorcerers.

There’s a murder mystery at the heart of the story, but as we learn more about this city of Vampires, we also get class struggles, politics, and a really unique blood system that I don’t think I’ve ever seen before.

I really liked the characters, and loved their interactions with each other.

Along with the overarching mystery hanging over the characters’ heads, there was plenty of action and scheming, and I never knew where the plot was going to take us next.

I had a hard time putting this one down and I am definitely looking forward to continuing on with this series!

Thank you to @stmartinspress and @netgalley for providing me an early copy of this ebook. All opinions are my own.

What this book is giving:
✅ Fantasy
✅ Multi-POV
✅ Vampires
✅ Wolfkind
✅ Sorcerers
✅ Mysterious Enemy
✅ Detectiving
✅ Plotting
✅ Action

Rating:
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️½ / 5

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It all begins with a murder...Lightfall is a fantastic read. It has vampires, werewolves and sorcery. Ed Crocker did a phenomenal job building this intricate world where there are no humans, which really added to the creativity of the story. I genuinely liked the characters. The characters were well developed and no one seemed to have overly powerful abilities as books sometimes do. The only slightly disappointment with this story is how easily things are resolved and cleanly wrapped up. I'm sure people who love and easy happily ever after will love this aspect. For those who prefer a little more struggle before the characters achieve a happily ever after, there will be a slight disappointment.

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Thanks NetGalley and St.Martin's Press for the ARC!

After reading The Familiar (and not particularly LOVING it like most people did), I was hesitant to get back into a vampire-centric novel. However, this was definitely way more up my alley!

With the beginning of a trilogy, and a very interesting lore involving the co-habitation of vampires, werewolves, and sorcerers in a post-human society, the world-building was integral to the novel. While it took some getting used to (and I appreciate the author treating the readers as smart and capable beings who are able to figure out some things), the novel also uses creative ways to impart the history of this new world with excerpts from books the protagonist has read. The lore of Lightfall is dense (and we're still missing a lot of it to hopefully come in the next two novels), but manageable... And while there is a lot of explanation and world-building, it is woven nicely throughout the novel that it doesn't feel like I'm just reading a history book.

I thought the plot was exciting and had many unexpected twists, some brutally gory imagery, and a setting that was atmospheric and moody. I didn't expect to see a vampire novel so layered and tackle sophisticated themes like social inequalities, the impact of losing a loved one, and the problems of blind trust in societal norms. For those who want a fantasy that isn't a sapphic romance (which is all the rage right now), this is a solid choice.

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A novel of vampires, werewolves and sorcerers yes please. I am for sure getting a physical copy when its released cause this book was everything. If your like me and love anything with Vampire, Werewolves and sorcery this book is for you. Loved Ed Crocker's writing style a lot. Will for sure be reading more of his work in the future. I highly recommend this book to everyone.

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Lightfall by Ed Crocker

100 years ago, the society of vampires was torn to pieces by a mysteries enemy. Now, they have rebuilt a city but can not leave its walls without being shot by the Greys. When a member of the royal family is found dead outside its borders, a variety of misfits bands together to get to the bottom of it.

We’ve got a maid, a Lady, an assassin, a werewolf and two sorcerers obsessed with mortals. We also get a mystery, a heist, a lot of battles, entertaining conversations, spying and a hidden library.

A true fantasy, with quite a bit of world building. This is the first in a series, so there was a lot of character development and history of the city and world. I didn’t mind though, it was interesting and unique!

I loved this book and found it hard to put down. It was refreshing to have zero romance, just a good old fashioned fantasy adventure. I can’t wait for the next in the series and to find out what else awaits these characters.

Thank you to @stmartinspress and @netgalley for my advanced copy! This is out on the 14th.

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DNF at around 50%
I really tried to get into this book but I have to admit, it just isn't for me. The pacing was slow, I didn't care for the characters, and the world-building felt messy and overwhelming. As a huge fantasy fan, I'm fairly used to being thrown into the middle of a world and being expected to keep up and follow along. Usually, this isn't an issue for me but this time I wasn't hooked. This felt like a different type of overwhelming than the typical new names and magics being tossed my way. I might try to pick this up again in the future, as the plot truly sounds like something I would enjoy, but for now, it's a no.

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This was an engaging book with a really unique plot which I really loved! The characters weren’t my favorite. For one there are quite a lot of them to keep track of and the multiple POVs at time in this book just turned me around and made me loose the flow of the story. With so many characters I also found it difficult to connect with any of them more than surface level. I loved the idea of not having any humans in this book it was really original and was explored and explained really well. Overall and enjoyable read that I definitely recommend giving a read!

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A dark fantasy murder mystery that turned out much better than I anticipated. It's a dark, dark world in the Everlands, as vampires, werewolves, sorcerers, and the mysterious Grays co-exist in a tenuous balance of power on a war-devastated land. Mortals are mythical beings that only a few people believe are real. No one seems to remember where they came from, especially the sorcerers, among whom there are no children.

Into this strange land emerges a young vampire scullery maid, among a class of vampire commoners known as the Worns, who struggle to live in a single-city vampire society of elite nobles, an industrial middle class, and then the working, peasant class. Different types of blood, magicked or not, can give the vampires special powers, such as quick thinking, extra strength, or even flight.

I was suprised at myself for reading this so quickly, as I didn't think I would like it at first with some unfortunate info-dumps at the beginning. Once that was settled, however, I quickly became trapped in the same world that our young Sam was in, trying to get out of her desperate situation and solve the murder of the young Azzuri lord at the same time.

An enjoyable book! I understand this is a debut novel, so props to the author for that! And, of course, my thanks to Netgalley, the publishers, and the author for an early copy for a review. My thoughts are entirely my own.

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