I really couldn’t connect with this story, but if you are a YA reader who loves the show “The Good Place”. I recommend checking it out. Thanks to NetGalley and the Publisher for the E-ARC.

In this darkly comical, heartfelt novel, a cynical sixteen-year-old girl has only ninety days to remember how she died and finally make peace with her mother to escape spending eternity adrift in a vast nothingness. For fans of Adam Silvera and The Good Place.

No one could be more disappointed about Mari’s sudden death than Mari, herself. And if she ever thought about the afterlife, she certainly didn’t think it would be a suburban enclave called Paradise Gate or that the biggest problem to plague her in life would follow her into the great beyond: her recently deceased mother, Faye. But that is exactly who greets her when Mari opens her eyes in the In Between—where the newly dead with no religious affiliation come to work out the unfinished business of their lives so they can ascend to whatever’s next.

Mari realizes quickly Faye is her unfinished business and in order to ascend and join her loving grandparents, she’ll have to make peace with and forgive her dysfunctional mother for being no mother at all But there’s too much to forgive: never holding down a steady job, never having a stable home, Mari having to constantly change schools and in the end, Faye choosing her criminal boyfriend over Mari.

It's a lot to sort through, but Mari tries to keep her eye on the ball—attending classes at the Center like Youga and sending grief scarves sailing in Expressive Arts to move her vibe tracker from an angry unsettled red to an ascend-worthy green—all the while trying to remember how she died and deal with Faye, who, of course, is in danger of being kicked out of Paradise Gate altogether. But then Mari discovers in addition to mother drama, there’s even friend drama and boy drama to be found in the afterlife and none are good for her vibes. Even worse is the suspicion that Paradise Gate isn’t at all what it purports to be...and revolution may be afoot.

Loved it. Will recommend to others

This is very very similar to The Good Place, I love the idea but I feel it could have tried to be a little more original. However I liked the dark but comedic tone and I liked the main character

Thank you Net Galley and Penguin Group for this ARC What Comes Next by Katie Bayerl.
Story starts with Mari who finds herself dead and in an afterlife simulator. The other definitely watched The Good Place and took a lot out of there. Basically the dead people have to earn points to get to eternal bliss….Mari and her mother Faye are both there navigating their strained relationship. There is skepticism regarding the point system and the accessions. This book for me dragged on far to king and was a tough finish. Just seemed like a Temu version of The Good Place.

Welcome to Paradise Gate, this is where Mari, who is dead, wakes up at.
To ascend though she must earn points and to do so, she has to go to classes and maintain status quo. It’s also where she meets her mother, who died a couple months before her.
I felt the story had a good idea but, I just couldn’t follow it or the plot. I will say the book does deal with morality and mother-daughter relationships in a very heart warming way but, it just wasn’t for me.

What Comes After is about Mari arriving to an alternate limbo and trying to ascend to something better. It was a little slow, but for good reason. I really liked the idea of people getting a second chance at finding their eternal happiness and what happens when there is a prescribed way to attain it. The characters were believable. I also liked how Mari had Faye there with her to work out her issues.

I rated this book 3.5 stars and rounded up to 4.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for an advanced copy in exchange for an honest review.

A teenager’s “Guide to Living in the Afterfile”. Mari awakes to realize she has died but she has no clue as to how or why. With only 90 days to learn those facts and resolve her earthly issues, Mari finds herself living again with the mother who died before her. Their relationship is not the only struggle Mari endures in this limbo. Friendships, boys, and family are all just as complicated after death as they were in life. Enjoy the adventure to discover whether or not Mari achieves her goals in 90 days. This is an ideal sci-fi title for students 12 and up.

I really wanted to like this book, but honestly, it just didn’t work for me. The idea of a cynical teen, Mari, stuck in the afterlife trying to make peace with her estranged mother to move on is intriguing, but the execution left me feeling lost.

The world-building had potential—imagine 'The Good Place' meets 'Black Mirror'—but I had a hard time following the rules of the afterlife. It felt like the story kept throwing new concepts at me without fully explaining them, and I found myself more confused than captivated. The pacing also felt uneven; sometimes the plot dragged, and I struggled to stay engaged with Mari’s journey to remember how she died and figure out her relationship with her mom.

Speaking of Mari’s mom, Faye, their backstory came in such small, repetitive chunks that it eventually felt like it wasn’t adding much to the overall story. And then there’s the romantic subplot, which really didn’t do anything for me. It felt like it was trying to add drama, but honestly, it just distracted from Mari’s emotional arc and made the story feel more muddled.

The tone was another issue. At times, the book seemed to lean into dark humor, but other times it took itself way too seriously. This inconsistency left me unsure of what kind of book I was reading.

This story has an interesting premise, but it never quite clicked for me. I think it could work for some, but it just didn’t resonate with me the way I hoped it would.

Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the eARC in exchange for my honest opinion.

Mari is dead. She wakes up at Paradise Gate—an afterlife with points to earn, classes to get to, and statuses to maintain before you can ascend—where she meets her mother who’s died just a few months ago. Although it presents an intriguing premise, I must admit I had a hard time following the overall plot of the story. Everything you learn from The Good Place, you’ll find it here, so I wasn’t so sure of the novelty of this book. Still, it’s a heartfelt book that deals with the complexities of morality, being your own person, earning a place in “heaven”, and mother-daughter relationships.

Thank you to Netgalley and Penguin Group for the ARC! :>

What Comes After by Katie Bayrel is a thought-provoking yet often frustrating exploration of the afterlife, blending elements of satire, mystery, and family drama. Set in the absurdly bureaucratic Paradise Gate, the story follows Mari, a 16-year-old who must confront her shortened life and work through her complicated relationship with her mother in a system that resembles a twisted, influencer-packed purgatory. While the world-building is imaginative, drawing comparisons to The Good Place and Black Mirror, the execution sometimes falls short. The pacing is uneven, and key plot elements, like Mari’s death and the afterlife's mysterious rules, can feel repetitive or lost in the shuffle. However, the themes of forgiveness and self-reflection are compelling, and the mystery of the afterlife’s deeper secrets keeps readers engaged. Despite some narrative hiccups, it’s a unique, heartfelt read that will resonate with those interested in unconventional takes on the afterlife.

Afterlife, but make it a capitalist, influencer-packed, propaganda-filled hellhole.

What Comes After is an absurd yet heartfelt story about life, death, and whatever comes in between.

Set in Paradise Gate, a community for recently deceased non-believers who are given 90 days to become better people and earn ascension, this book weaves elements of satire and mystery with heartbreakingly complicated family dynamics. At its heart, What Comes After is about forgiveness, growth, and, most of all, the love that drives us to do better.

Right from the start, the afterlife system shown in this book is so absurd it’s hard not to laugh at all the weird, nonsensical details. I’m sure I missed a few easter eggs here and there, rushing to take it all in and uncover the secrets of this odd place.

Finally, the storybuilding, although better as an idea than in execution, definitely deserves all the comparisons to Black Mirror and The Good Place.

Thanks to NetGalley for providing me with an ARC in exchange for an honest review.

Thank you so much to NetGalley and PENGUIN GROUP Penguin Young Readers Group for accepting my request for an ACR of this book!
“…I'm not that brave. I wasn't trying to be a hero."
"Oh, honey." She reaches for my knee. "Real heroes don't try. They just do.
1.75/5
Having just finished rewatching The Good Place prior to reading this book, I was really excited to go into a story that interpreted the afterlife. Which I did enjoy Bayerl’s take on the afterlife, and how the system was difficult, I had a hard time really getting into it because of the main character. I just couldn’t get past how Mari would act and reflex on her actions.

Book:
WHAT COMES AFTER by Katie Bayerl
Thank you Netgalley and PenguinTeen for the Earc (April 29)

Review:
2⭐
There were so many times I wanted to DNF this.
WHAT COMES AFTER follows Mari, who wakes up and learns she's dead. At first, she doesn't know what happened to her, but with all the speculation, she eventually learns. Couple that with her mother, [redacted] and the fact that everything isn't as it seems, Mari is on a roller coaster of drama in her afterlife.
I wasn't a fan of WHAT COMES AFTER. It wasn't as captivating as I would have liked, and it didn't hold my attention the way a book of this stature.could have. Like the potential was way up high and the execution fell flat to me. When updating Goodreads, around the halfway point, I described this as almost bipolar. For some instances, I was intrigued by what was going on (what happened to Mari, who did it, etc). More often than not, though, I was bored (when Mari's memories were nonstop talk, the "Youga", etc.). Honestly, the most interesting part was the end when all those revelations about the Ever After were made...

thank you to netgalley for the arc!

i really wanted to like this novel because of the comp to the good place, but it fell flat for me, unfortunately. i wasn't super into the narrative voice and i felt like the novel tried to tackle a lot of issues (neglectful parents, fame/influencers, being self aware) but did all of them half-heartedly. i also wish there were less flashbacks and was confused about the tone of the novel; at some parts it came off satirical but it was tonally inconsistent for me.

Thank you to NetGalley and Penguin Young Readers Group | Nancy Paulsen Books for the opportunity to read What Comes Next by Katie Bayeryl in exchange for my honest review.

In What Comes Next, Mari finds herself in a suburban-like purgatory called Paradise Gate. Her primary challenge is reconciling with her deeply flawed mother, Faye, who proves as much of a hindrance in death as she did in life.

Katie Bayeryl introduces an intriguing concept with the layered world-building of Paradise Gate—a setting complete with expressive arts classes, vibe trackers, and grief scarves, all meant to propel souls toward ascension. However, despite this creative backdrop, the pacing falters. The novel often drifts between Mari’s flashbacks of her difficult relationship with Faye and her present-day struggles in the afterlife, with the backstory arriving in fragments that feel repetitive and ultimately less impactful as the story progresses.

While potentially appealing to some, the introduction of romantic tension feels unnecessary. This subplot meanders without adding depth to Mari’s character arc or the central themes, creating moments that slow down the story rather than propel it forward.

Despite its creative setting, What Comes Next struggles to maintain momentum. Ultimately, while the novel explores important topics relevant to teenagers—such as communication, self-reflection, and resilience—its execution leaves parts of the story feeling sluggish and disjointed.
Those drawn to quirky depictions of the afterlife and stories centered on mother-daughter relationships may find What Comes Next worth exploring. However, readers seeking a more gripping or consistently paced read might come away from this book with mixed feelings.

I didn't really care for this. Maybe I was expecting something different or I missed something. Thanks to Netgalley for the opportunity to read this book

What Comes After by Katie Bayerl is a darkly comedic journey through the afterlife that feels like a blend of The Good Place and Sign Here (novel by Claudia Lux).

The story follows Mari, a recently deceased teenager who finds herself in an unusual suburban paradise called Paradise Gate, a limbo-like realm where the recently dead with no specific beliefs confront their unresolved issues. And for Mari, her biggest issue just happens to be her mother, Faye—whose failures and chaos shaped Mari's life in ways she’s not quite ready to forgive.

The book takes on the afterlife with humor, and I loved seeing it unfold through a teenager’s perspective. Bayerl’s portrayal of Paradise Gate, with its blend of Youga classes, “vibe trackers,” and various afterlife rules, brings a light-hearted yet insightful tone to the big questions Mari faces about forgiveness, love, and letting go. I loved that soap operas and reality TV make their way into the afterlife.

Though I found the pacing a bit slow at times, the book’s emotional depth and its thought-provoking message made it worth the read. The exploration of Mari's relationship with her mother is both raw and realistic, touching on themes of forgiveness and self-acceptance that resonate deeply. I would have loved to see more glimpses of the other characters’ past lives, as these perspectives could have added even more richness to the story.

Overall, What Comes After is a good read that blends humor, introspection, and an unusual twist on the afterlife. Bayerl’s take on the journey beyond is sure to appeal to anyone who enjoys a thoughtful yet darkly humorous exploration of life, death, and the bonds we carry even after we're gone.

Thank you Netgalley and Penguin Group for the ARC in exchange for an honest review!

Katie Bayerl’s “What Comes After” transports you to Paradise Gate, a quirky, unsettling afterlife where sixteen-year-old Mari has ninety days to make sense of her untimely death and confront the turbulent relationship she had with her mother, Faye. This darkly humorous, thought-provoking novel dives deep into themes of forgiveness and the messy complexities of family bonds. This is a book that younger readers will enjoy as they may relate to Mari, especially in regards to her strained relationship with her mother.

At its core, the story is about Mari's journey of self-discovery and healing. She’s a resilient protagonist whose determination to find peace and understanding is both touching and powerful. Through Mari’s perspective, Bayerl deftly explores the depths of unresolved pain and love, especially as Mari struggles to reconcile her mother’s many shortcomings with the enduring bond that ties them together. This intense mother-daughter dynamic is captivating, capturing both the frustration and the longing that define complicated relationships.

The world-building in “What Comes After” is imaginative and layered. Paradise Gate offers a satirical take on purgatory, complete with grief scarves, vibe trackers, and mysterious classes designed to help souls “ascend.” Bayerl cleverly uses these elements to add levity to the heavy themes of forgiveness and closure. The details are vibrant and intriguing, though at times the pacing slows, particularly after the revelation of Mari’s death. While the plot occasionally meanders, the allure of Paradise Gate and the looming sense of rebellion keeps you invested in the mystery.

Fans of “The Good Place” will likely appreciate the book’s blend of dark comedy and heartfelt introspection. Although the pacing could be tighter, “What Comes After” is a unique take on the afterlife, filled with rich themes and a relatable protagonist grappling with her own unfinished business. With its memorable characters, offbeat humor, and exploration of family and forgiveness, Bayerl’s novel offers a reflective, captivating journey for readers intrigued by life’s what-ifs and afterlife’s what-might-bes.

I received a free copy of, What Comes After, by Katie Bayerl, from the publisher and Netgalley in exchange for an honest review. Mari is 16 and she is dead, she never thought much of dying or the afterlife, before she died. Mari and her mother did not have the best relationship at all. I could not get into this book at all.

What Comes After is a rift of The Good Place. The afterlife is not quite what 16-year-old Mari expects. Not only does she have to come to terms with her shortened life, but she, begrudgingly, has to be a part of her incompetent mother's redemption period in death.

While I feel that there are some important themes for teenagers, including the importance of talking to others, self-reflection, and having positive boundaries with the toxic people around us, the pacing of this novel was such that I didn't finish it. The backstory of Mari and her mother, Faye, came in small drizzles and eventually felt inconsquential and repetitive. Similarly, the balance between the world-building of the afterlife along with the conflict has many passages limping along.

While I am a fan of a good reveal and would like to see how Jethro sorts into the story, I just cannot keep trudging along.

I certainly hope this hellish landscape is not what is in store for me in death, or it will feel beyond eternal.