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I really liked this!!!
Things I loved
- how gay it is from the jump. Everyone is into everyone, as it should be.
-I loved the third act resolution. I was initially frustrated, but I liked that we got some real emotional growth out of it.
- the world building felt very real!
Suggestions for improvement
-I don’t like sir’am. I understand wanting a gender neutral honorific, but I can already see my book club rolling their eyes.
-I don’t think we got great clarity for why Margot wants to do everything on her own. Yael’s motivations feel clear, but Margot needs just a little more fleshing out.
- would have loved to see young Margot at the waterfall early in the book so we understand it’s importance later on.
Overall, I really loved this and will be recommending to friends!!!
Ok, first things first, I don’t give out five stars easily. I am PICKY with high praise. Especially when it comes to romantasy as it tends to be very tropey for my tastes.
And then there’s Homegrown Magic. Which I would argue is a solid blend of cozy fantasy and romance.
Anyway, onto the actual review. Wow. Just wow. Fair warning, I was hyped about this book since the announcement of its deal came out, I was little worried because it seemed exactly my thing. And historically, I hype up things too much and end up disappointed.
Dear fellow readers, that was not the case this time. Homegrown Magic was everything I wanted and more. It feels like reading a novelization of someone’s D&D game. Which is absolutely my thing. We get worldbuilding, but there isn’t so much that the narrative ever feels like it takes a backseat.
Let me talk about the rep in this book for a second. As a nonbinary person, I constantly struggle with queerness in fantasy typically being subjected to real-world issues. Which makes no sense. It’s a fantasy world, why have homophobia?
My fellow readers, that isn’t an issue here. Being queer, either in your sexuality or gender identity, is not an issue in this world at all. Yael, one of our main characters, seems to be aware of being non-binary from a young age, approximately 12 or even younger. And it’s never an issue. There doesn’t seem to be any deadname. There’s no one misgendering them. They’re just Yael, they/them from page one. And I can not emphasize how much that meant to read. There is also a term used in the book which was clearly come up with. Sir’ram, which seems to be a gender-neutral honorific like sir or ma’am. And it isn’t just used for Yael. It’s used for everyone. Which makes me even happier.
Ok now that I’ve waxed on about the rep, let me talk about the plot and chemistry between Yael and Margot. The vibes are cozy, but the stakes of the plot are high. Margot is trying to save her town while Yael is trying to figure their shit out. In the midst of all of this, these two who were formerly friends reunite and there is instant chemistry. There is the issue of class disparity clearly shown and done well. There is found family. There is cool magic (seriously, the plant magic alone constantly had me green with envy I hadn’t thought of that but also utter delight).
And then there’s the chemistry. Now, I loathe insta-love so when Yael first shows up in Margot’s lil town and they are making eyes at each other, I was WORRIED this would ruin the book for me. Pacton & Podos masterfully write two characters who are clearly VERY ATTRACTED to each other without instantly thinking they’re in love. The chemistry is present from the get go, but the friendship between Yael and Margot comes first. It is only after that relationship is built up more that they feel comfortable acting on their mutual attraction. Which is MY JAM.
Let’s talk about the other things I would normally loathe. Fair warning, there’s a wee spoiler here. Margot is keeping a big secret from Yael. One that leads to a third act breakup. Now, if you know me, you know I LOATHE a third act breakup. Most of the time, it seems to be simply for the point of drama and could be solved with a simple conversation.
Well, this time, the breakup seems inevitable from the time we realize the decisions Margot has been making leads to. The cause of the break up is a BIG DEAL. One that neither Yael or Margot seem to fully know how to handle. One that can not be solved with a conversation. Heck, at the time it happens, I really didn’t know how it’d be reconciled. Plus, the parting of our main characters allows for genuine character development apart after they’ve spent most of the book together. So we see what happens when they’re left to their own devices. (Also the breakup made me legit cry and I have to give the authors credit for that.)
Oh, let me talk about the vibes again. Because this book, while it gets serious at times, never strays too far from being cozy. Even amidst the capitalist hellscape main capital it is occasionally in, there is whimsy and softness in the interactions between characters. Bloomfield is a cottagecore dream, as Margot’s greenhouses. This book is like drinking your favorite tea )maybe ginger-hibsucus) and eating scones with heartbreak healing strawberry jam while wrapped in a blanket.
I hope this book takes off. I hope it finds others like me who feel so seen in Yael. Who see a cozy fantasy world that accepts their existence as just being. Thank you Jamie Pacton and Becca Podos for creating that.
This is absolutely about to be one of my top reads of the year. I read it in the span of a few days and I wish I could read it for the first time again.
Cozy fantasy, centering around gardening (a topic I like!), with a meandering pace that's a good fit if you're looking to feel immersed in a pleasant magical world. I agree with those comparing it to Legends and Lattes: has that kind of vibe. Nice to see a they/them main character, and the couple's scenes got spicy, which I also liked! I would be interested to see a spinoff about Sage and Araphi, so I hope that's in the works.
Margot, a plant witch struggling under the debt her parents left her with after spending all her late grandmothers money, is trying to save her family greenhouse and remedy business. One night Yael, a former childhood friend, who is fleeing their own familial responsibilities of working at the bank for the rest of their days, shows up in Margot’s tiny town and tiny tavern. With an old childhood friendship and new adult crush forming between them, Yael helps Margot with the greenhouses while Margot herself works on solving a potion that would clear her debts to Yael’s family entirely.
This is super cute. The only tiny complaint I have is about words that should not exist in any fantasy novel. At one point something is described as merlot red but, similar to champagne, these are French terms. Since France doesn’t exist here these terms can’t either. I would’ve also enjoyed a slightly longer epilogue or more upfront conclusion of the fight with the Clauneck company but overall I’m pleased with how it all shook out.
Thank you author, publisher, and NetGalley for providing me with an eARC of this book!!
For a long time I thought I didn’t like cozy fantasy just because I read one really boring book that people describe as the peak cozy fantasy so I went into this with pretty low expectations. I can’t tell if I didn’t like the beginning because it was bad or if I was bitter that I was reading a cozy fantasy. I definitely had a bad start at it but when it got into the story It felt so soft and warm that I can’t help but love it.
I thought this was cozy and soft but also still had an engaging story. I enjoyed the characters love story so much probably cause I love a second chance romance plot but still. Am I turning into a cozy fantasy lover?! I think so
It’s a short and sweet distraction of a book - I had a great time with it. Alternating POVs are distinct, but there were a few too many contrivances that could have been easily resolved by a mature conversation. I wasn’t in a critical mood and had a fun time, though.
This book had its charms but wasn't really quite for me. Though the romance was sweet, at times it leaned too heavily into "this problem could be solved by a single adult conversation" territory, which is always frustrating, and the "villains" of the story were just a bit too one-note. It also may be petty and my own issue but I cannot stand that the book was entirely in third person present tense.
That said, the cozy was amply provided by plant witchery and I loved the entire concept of the plant witch helping the town and making heartbreak curing jam and little potions for her neighbors. I also love when a book universe just doesn't have homophobia - when queer and trans characters just get to exist and none of the conflicts are about that aspect. That's a whole other level of cozy and I always appreciate it.
I just finished an interesting sci-fi novel. Homegrown Magic was an engaging and engrossing story that kept me thinking.
Homegrown Magic has all of the beats of a cozy fantasy-romance with some additional twists and turns. (Some which work better than others.) Our Protagonist is Yael Clauneck, the young heir of a prestigious (and very rich) family of warlocks, who also own a bank. (The most important bank in the kingdom, which is also the kingdom's mint and money exchange.) Yael, who is overwhelmed with the knowledge they are just another cog in the wheel of the family machine opts to run away from home on the night of their graduation party.
They steal a mechanical horse and head off for Bloomfield, the home of Yael's childhood friend Margot.
On Margot's end of the plot, Our Heroine is struggling to keep her business afloat. She's a plant witch with a grandmother whose remedies are famous. Thanks to some really bad financial decisions and recklessness on the part of her parents, her home and the town she lives in is in danger of being foreclosed if she can't create a potion that her grandmother had been working on before her death. When her childhood friend Yael Clauneck turns up, she is stressed and desperate enough to view Yael as mostly a business opportunity. Her feelings become more complicated when she takes Yael in as an assistant.
Yael meanwhile stumbles into this situation without any knowledge of what Margot has been going through. Despite this, they and Margot quickly renew their friendship, though Margot spends a lot of time holding back on her feelings because of Yael's family, and the problems she's been having with her research. Yael in turn finds a lot of enjoyment in working for Margot and living in a place that makes them feel less stressed and feeling like they have to perform. As Yael and Margot become closer, and become more open with each other, they enter a more intimate romantic and sexual relationship.
The plot went in a lot of directions I didn't expect, or found frustrating. As an example, Yael is written as being emotionally abused by members of the family, including the family's patron. (The family are Dungeons & Dragons-style warlocks. Which means they get their power from an eldritch patron of some variety.) We don't get a resolution on this situation, and I think it could have been handled better. We're told that Yael doesn't fit in, and they've ruined their potential according to their parents--but we aren't shown what potential the family thinks they see in Yael, when Yael's predestined job is a middle management desk job they have no interest in.
With Margot, Yael seems to have some innate skill at marketing and making deals--which should have met with family (or at least patron) approval--but for some reason, it doesn't. Yael's family are presented as stock villains (except for one cousin who seems too nice to have had an abusive toxic upbringing Yael's feelings toward their family imply). I really would have liked to see Yael sitting Margot down and working with her on front end sales and marketing. It would have been a bonding experience, and brought some more depth to their partnership (on the business side) and their relationship (on the romantic side).
We also have the usual romantic "misunderstandings that could be easily resolved if the characters would just talk to each other." The characters tend to talk past each other, or aren't completely honest about the situations they're in, so the misunderstandings are at least valid--if still exasperating in the face of their otherwise good dynamic. Margot and Yael rapidly become a team, so it's a little frustrating when Yael rushes ahead before checking with Margot, or Margot holds back on the bad situation she's in with Yael's family.
Homegrown Magic is a cute, cozy fantasy romance that turns more serious toward the the end, with higher stakes. It's a very fast, light read despite the darker dip toward the end. Yael makes some tough, though still reckless decisions. The characters are engaging, but I would have liked more depth concerning Yael's relationship with their family. It leaned more toward tell than show. Granted it would have made the novel less light and cozy, but complicated family dynamics are my jam.)
This review is based on a galley received from NetGalley.
4.5 stars. Well written and very good pacing. A sweet cozy lbgtq+ story that was so good I read it in a day and a half.
I will start off by saying this book wasn't terrible. It had a really cute overall meaning and I liked that it wasn't your typical hetero-love story. There are just a few things about it that I personally thought could have been better, which is what resulted in the 3 star rating for me.
First, I really was confused trying to keep up with the third person story line when it switched from Margot to Yael. Since Yael uses they/them and Margot uses she/her I feel like a good chunk of the story used their pronouns ALOT. I feel like this could've been avoided if the story was in first person for the character's while still using their pronouns in a way that brought the point across but didn't over use them.
Second, I loved all of the word choices, but after a while it got repetitive. It made the story feel more dragged out and tedious to read and really kind of took away from the ambience that was trying to be created throughout the book with the imagery.
Lastly, the ending felt really really rushed. I wish it would have either just ended without the epilogue and picked up in a new story, leaving this one with a cliff hanger than just being rushed through how they saved the town. It would have been nicer to have more details there and really showed the community coming together rather than keeping them just kind of in the background as a second thought, when throughout the story the community helps the two of the main characters the most.
overall good story, just feel like it could've been better.
Homegrown Magic is a sweet, queer, & cozy fantasy. I loved getting to know our main characters, i loved the world they lived in, and the magic within it. The conflict within the story felt strong enough to drive the plot without overwhelming the cozy fantasy feelings. There was some slow parts, which I normally dislike in a novel, but i loved the parts where our characters just got to exist. Tend to flowers, make jam, fall in love. I'm sure this will be a huge hit when it is released.
Thank you to the publisher and Net Galley for providing an early copy for me to read in exchange for a review.
This is an adorable sapphic fantasy with the best cozy cottagecore vibes. The lovestory is sickeningly sweet and the conflict is low risk and just dramatic enough to provide that needed conflict. There is a minor 3rd act breakup but it isn't overdone in my opinion. There is great representation of nonbinary characters as well as a society that has normalized same sex couples. If you're a fan of low stakes cozy fantasy stories you'll get sucked into this story!
I thought this book was amazing and wanted to immediately reread it. It was excellent! The characters were well-developed, the world-building was wonderful and it just swept me right into the book and held me through the whole experience. It was warm and wonderful and ever so satisfying.
It was a little tricky in the first chapter, with so many moving parts, to get used to the main character being they'their, simply because so many people were introduced and I got a bit confused as to whether we were talking about the main character or a group of people. The next chapters were easier.
Thank you to NetGalley for the ARC!
What a cute, cozy, fall, read! This was such a fun read with the perfect amount of magic, coziness, and quirkiness. The alternating chapters from Margot and Yael's POV were well written and both voices were clear and unique, which a lot of authors cannot accomplish. I thoroughly enjoyed this book and it kicked off my fall reading perfectly!
A glacial pacing due to heavy-handed exposition resulted in a DNF at 11%.
If I am not invested in a character or their journey by that point, I don't see a reason to continue reading.
This is 10/10 delightful. Usually I have a few things I might have changed about a book, but it was so heartwarming, funny, sexy, unique, and interesting - I have nothing to add! I found Yael exceedingly charming and Margot simply adorable. No spoilers in this review, but I’m quite happy with how it ended. The whole plot read to me like a perfect romcom, with tension and resolution, but no annoyingly slow parts or misunderstandings between beloved characters. Yael and Margot are a dream team.
Homegrown Magic is such a cozy, romantic fantasy that I absolutely adored!
Margot is a plant witch who must save her town from her childhood best friend's family. Yael is said childhood best friend who runs from their former life and stumbles back into Margot's. They end up working in Margot's greenhouse and romance ensues.
I loved both characters and the conflict was just dire enough to keep things interesting but still kept the book firmly in the sphere of cozy reads.
If you want something cozy and romantic definitely pick this up!
This was a cute and quick read that's more cozy cottage gardening than witchy magic Halloween season.
The main characters are likable and are a cute couple. This is a childhood friend/crush story, so it doesn't feel like there's much progression to their relationship within the book. The writing was a little overly descriptive at times, but I will say I didn't realize there were two authors while reading because the writing of the two is so seamless.
The cozy tight-knit small town setting and gardening parts were fun. The pacing was a little off, with abrupt jumps in time that made me feel like I had missed something while reading. The third act break up was very predictable and felt really unnecessary to me. This was a fast read that I enjoyed, but I don't think I'll be reading the next in the series.
Thank you, Random House Publishing Group - Ballantine and Del Rey, for this arc!
Netgalley ARC review.
DNFed at 15 percent. Can't get past the ridiculously clunky and heavy handed exposition (one of those "the MC looked at a chair and it reminded them of the entire history of furniture manufacturing so let's infodump about that irrelevantly" kind of deals) and poor sentence structure. The generic concept, whiny NBMC, and juvenile quality of the writing made this an unpleasant hour or two. This isn't being released for some time and could use a much heavier handed edit. Pass.