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Oof. The premise is so interesting but the execution was lacking. It needed more editing. Many scenes jumped around or weren't explained well. If you like spice, this might be your thing but the spicy scenes were cringy to listen to. This was my first journey into romantasy so maybe that's why? I read romance books and normally don't mind the smutty parts. A lot of the lines just seemed too corny and far fetched for me to believe. I will still read the next book in the series. Hoping the editing will be better next time. The narrators were ok.

Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to read and review this ALC!

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This book moved very quickly which I think helped me because I was struggling to get through it. It took me a while to write this review because I wasn’t sure how to much into words what I felt about this book. Overall it was just a typical romantasy so if you enjoy those books you’ll like it. The male narrator did the same voice for all the characters which was a strange choice. But overall I still would read a sequel to this book.

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Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for an advanced copy of this audiobook. The narration was really well done on this book. Unfortunately I had to DNF this one as I simply could not get myself to care about the character or stories. Just seemed like repetitive tropes with not a lot of substance or world building.

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Thank you NetGalley and Macmillan Audio for this ARC Copy!

I was so excited about this book and was looking forward to it for a long time but I am sad to say that it really fell flat for me. I can definitely see how it will have its fans and I know they will love it, but it is just not for me.

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Generally speaking, I really enjoyed the world-building, the variations on magic, and the character development, the final 20% of the book felt rather erratic and oddly planned. I'm interested to see where the rest of the story goes but hope we see some more consistency in the characters in the next book.

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This was my first taste of Romantasy, and I believe it won't be my last. I enjoyed the enemies to lovers trope. Also, the contest trope. I enjoyed that the trials were based on the seven deadly sins. The politics were a little confusing, but that was the only thing negative about this story.

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A gripping introduction to a new fantasy world replete with a complex magical history, interwoven past lives, and characters who aren’t as they seem (either through deception or outwardly imposed amnesia). Astraea has entered into this world with little memories of her life before being entrapped in a gilded cage, but that doesn’t stop her from craving adventure and freedom. Enter Nyte, a shadowy being who Astraea can’t escape but also can’t fully trust, she doesn’t even know if he’s real or a figment of her imagination. When tragedy provokes her to enter into a competition where the winner receives protection for their country and the losers end up in their graves, Astraea is forced to reckon with how very little she knows about the world around her, and her complicated past within it.

There’s a lot about this book that I really loved! The star-crossed lovers aspects to Astraea and Nyte’s relationship was as enticing as it was tragic. The immersion into a fantasy world with different kinds of magic-wielding vampiric creatures and the humans who try to survive in a world subjected to them was fascinating. And there were a plethora of well-developed side characters who I hope to see break away into their own in the series.

My biggest issue with this book is that I felt like it should have been seperated into two different books. I understand why each section had to be so developed and detailed, and each part of this book had scenes that made me swoon or sweat, but it was so so so longgggg. I definitely felt myself slumping at certain points as the book dragged at some points.

There were some issues with the audiobook where certain sections had differentiations in volume. But the narrators did an EXCEPTIONAL job bringing this story to life and helping me immerse myself so deeply!!!

Regardless of the book’s length, I was thoroughly entertained by this story and will definitely be eagerly awaiting the sequel!

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Rating: 3.5 ⭐️
Spice: 2 🌶️

Strengths: "The Stars are Dying" brings together all the elements I love in a romantic fantasy—star-crossed lovers, enigmatic villains, and an immersive magical setting. The audiobook truly elevates the experience and the narrators deliver outstanding performances. Their ability to breathe life into the characters of Astraea and Nyte was particularly impactful, delivering emotional depth and a vivid sense of their world.

Narrative and Pacing: The story starts off strong, captivating my interest with its intriguing setup and unexpected developments. However, the narrative stumbles a bit during the trials, which, although crucial to the plot, lack clarity and the thrill expected from such pivotal scenes. These trials, meant to be climactic, instead felt muddled and lacked the thrilling edge typical of such high-stakes competitions in fantasy novels.
The pacing generally moves well, but the ending stretches on too long and becomes repetitive.

Consistency and Development: There are moments when the storyline seems to jump unexpectedly, which briefly pulled me out of the experience, wondering if I had missed a part or if my audiobook had accidentally skipped.
I’m also left with several lingering questions , but look forward to the sequel for answers.

Conclusion: While not flawless, "The Stars are Dying" offers a richly crafted unique story, and an interesting world with compelling characters. All of this is amplified by stellar audio performances making it undeniably engaging and well worth the listen.

*Thank you the NetGalley for providing me with the ALC.*

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Chloe C. Peñaranda delivers a captivating start to the Nytefall series in The Stars Are Dying. She blended intricate world-building, emotionally complex characters, and a refreshingly unique premise into a story that kept me hooked from start to finish.

One of the most impressive aspects of the book is the world-building. Peñaranda masterfully crafts a rich and immersive setting, layering details about the world organically throughout the narrative. Instead of overwhelming the reader with exposition, the story gently reveals the intricacies of the world, making it feel alive and dynamic without ever detracting from the central plot or characters.

The emotional connection between the characters is another standout feature. The relationship between Astraea and Nyte was beautifully developed and filled with intrigue. Peñaranda’s ability to convey raw, authentic emotions through her characters drew me in and made me deeply invested in their journeys.

The premise of the story itself is strikingly unique, blending elements of fantasy, mystery, and a touch of romance into a fresh narrative that feels unlike anything else I’ve read. Peñaranda’s creativity shines through every twist and turn, keeping me eager to unravel the story’s secrets.

Now that I’ve finished The Stars Are Dying, I’m already anticipating the release of book 2, The Night Is Defying. Peñaranda has set the stage for what promises to be an unforgettable saga, and I can’t wait to see where the story takes us next.

If you’re a fan of fantasy with compelling characters, immersive settings, and a plot that keeps you guessing, this is a book you don’t want to miss!

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This series has a lot of potential, with its intriguing world-building, political intrigue, and a unique magic system that could set it apart. The premise is strong, and while the pacing in this first book struggles at times, I’m still invested in seeing where the story goes. However —there are too many unanswered questions for the first 300 pages, and the fmc, Astraea, does little to move the story forward or actively seek answers. Her character arc, which focuses on overcoming the trauma of abuse and developing confidence, is compelling, but it conflicts with the mysteries at the heart of the plot. As a result, the book feels a bit dragged out, and I found myself frustrated by Astraea’s lack of urgency in solving the central mysteries.

While Astraea's personal growth is one of the book's stronger elements, her reluctance to question anything or take initiative was a major frustration. As the mystery of her past remains unresolved and side characters' secrets take center stage, the plot at times felt underwhelming. The romance, however, has great chemistry, and I found the world-building fascinating, particularly the themes around memory, identity, and the integration of light and dark. Despite the slow pace and unanswered questions, the ending did leave me intrigued by the plot twist, and I’m hopeful that the second book will improve on the pacing and offer more clarity about Astraea’s purpose. Though the first installment wasn’t perfect, the potential for a gripping series is definitely there, and I’m looking forward to seeing how it develops.

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The Stars Are Dying by Chloe C. Penaranda introduces Astraea, a young woman with no memory of her past, trapped under Hector’s control and longing for freedom. When she joins a high-stakes competition called the Libertatum, she faces dangerous trials and mysterious enemies, including the elusive Nyte, who appears whenever she’s in peril. The story is packed with fantasy elements, though the pacing can feel slow at times, with lots of information crammed into the final chapters. The audiobook, with its strong narration, makes it easier to stay immersed despite these pacing issues. Fans of dark, slow-burn fantasy will likely enjoy this.

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I DNFed this. It was so boring. I love a lot of CCP's work but man the world building is slow. I will try this again later

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The stars are certainly not dying for this book, I loved loved it and couldn't get enough of the way the narrator really dragged you into the story and the characters. The writing was astounding and delectable I want more

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Thank you to Netgalley & Macmillan audio for providing me with an advanced listener copy of this audiobook. The following is my honest opinion.

Book/storyline: 3 stars
Audio: 4 stars

I really wanted to like this book more. The world-building was well done, however, the pacing felt really slow. There were brief periods where the pace would pick up, then would promptly fall right off a cliff.

The main character is suffering from memory loss and does not remember anything before the previous 5 years. One would assume that she would make it a priority to uncover more about herself or attempt to regain her memories, but instead she is easily distracted throughout the story. I did appreciate that she becomes less of a victim as the story progresses. I hope to see her stand on her own more in the sequel.

Audiobook review: I thought the narrators portrayed the characters well and I felt immersed in the story. My only complaint is that the audio changes a lot to demonstrate when he is speaking in her head and at times the volume change between this and what is being said out loud is quite jarring.

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I found it hard to get into and stay connected. I was lost as to what was happening for most of the time. It may just not have been my cup of tea, but it didn’t stand out to me from any other fantasy read.

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The Stars Are Dying by Chole C. Penaranda follows Astraea, a young woman that can't remember her past. For the last 5 years Astraea has been a prisoner in Hector's household and is only allowed to leave her rooms when he commands her to. Wanting to leave Hector's control, Astraea is going to leave with her friend Cassia as she embarks on her quest to win the Libertatum. Nyte is a figment of Astraea's imagination or is he? He is always around when Astraea finds herself in any kind of danger. Now Astraea is taking Cassia's place in the Libertatum and she must collects keys as she completes each task of the game. The Stars Are Dying is a cross between The Hunger Games and any book that has vampires in it. Astraea and Nyte play a cat and mouse game through the book as Astraea tries to figure out who she is and what Nyte really means to her. This is the first book in the Nytefall Trilogy and can't wait for book 2 in this series. I would like to thank both NetGalley and Macmillian Audio for an advanced copy of this audio book.

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This book had me hooked! As a new series, it has so much potential & I can’t wait for more. I still can’t stop thinking about it.
Some of the twists and turns didn’t happen in the way I thought. Were some predictable, yes but I still enjoyed the build up. This book was sitting at a 4.5 for most of the series but I did find that a lot happened in the last 20% that it felt very much like an info dump & took me out of the story a bit.
This has everything I love in a fantasy book & can’t wait to be immersed in this world again.

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Liked it well enough!! However, I think this book is a little too high fantasy for me to read and really understand what’s happening through audio

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Unfortunately this was a DNF at 55% for me… I did the audiobook and the beginning was fairly interesting and the plot was promising but soon after I started to get very confused and couldn’t follow along with the writing style. I had to repeat listening to sections over and over again… Perhaps a physical copy would have fared better for me but at this point I’m not too invested to pick this up at this time.

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I received the audiobook as an Arc from NetGalley. Thank you NetGalley!!

I did not read the synopsis prior to reading the book and I’m not going to lie, I was not prepared for vampires. Magic, yes. Love story, yes. Vampires? Didn’t even register. That aside, the plot points are familiar - trials, forbidden love, corrupt king, etc. Pacing was a bit of an issue and there was some drag time in the story. The concept of the world and magic system were interesting and the vibes . . .they are immaculate. There is some spice and a bit of tension but we all know they are going to fall in love. That is why we show up for these kind of books. I enjoyed this story and look forward to the next installment.

I did buy a physical copy from Amazon because the special edition is absolutely stunning.

Overall, I’m giving the book a 4

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