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I love this one! I am on pins and needles waiting for the next book. It was such a beautiful world and I am obsessed with the characters. Night is everything and I can’t stop thinking about what is coming next.

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I am so disappointed! I very nearly had to respectfully DNF this one. This book is long, slow, and filled with telling instead of showing.
Let's start with the good, the why I picked up this book: the cover and title are chef's kiss great. I was immediately sucked in based on that alone. I'm a romantasy girlie, so the presence of a Shadow Daddy is another big plus for me. The language the author uses to convey her story is interesting. I liked the names of characters, and they were distinct enough that I didn't get any of the handsome men around confused.
The reasons for the nearly DNF: the pacing is terribly slow. I really struggled with the repetition of ideas and dialogue that I think a better editor would have cut down. There was also a lot of telling and very questionable decisions on the part of the FMC (why even go back to the house you needed to sneak out of in the first place when you plan to leave again almost immediately?) The Shadow Daddy was not more than a voice in the FMC's mind for so much of this, and without an established relationship it just felt like a cheap connection and a little unhinged with her even questioning whether he was real over and over again. This book feels like I've read this story before. The magic system might be unique, but it was hard to tell with how little is explained except for infodump chapters toward the end.
Why I did finish: I was up all night sick, and it helped distract me from how I was feeling. To that end, I was ultimately not upset with how long it is.
If you loved A Court of Thorns and Roses (specifically the first book in the series), you will definitely enjoy this one.
The audiobook narrators were fine, though Corvin King was difficult to understand at times, especially in the beginning. Most of the book is first person pov, with Jacci Prior reading the majority of the text, and King reads the first chapter and all male dialogue. I found the gravelly nature of his voice pleasant but not always clear enough.
Thanks to NetGalley and Macmillan Audio for this ALC.

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I had so much fun with this one. I love Chloe’s writing and I adore a spin off series. I am so glad she is getting the recognition she deserves and this is a brilliant story to be traditionally published.

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Great concept.. good story line! I like the characters, but felt disconnected from them, I think when the premise is that the main character has no memory it is difficult for writers to draw readers in-- it all feels a little stumbly bumbly, but the world building is very intriguing.

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C.C. Peñaranda's The Stars Are Dying is a captivating fantasy novel that introduces readers to a world where the stars are fading and the fate of humanity hangs in the balance. The story follows Astraea, a young woman who discovers she has a mysterious connection to the celestial bodies.

What I Loved:

Intriguing Premise: The concept of a world where the stars are dying is both unique and thought-provoking.
Compelling Characters: Astraea is a relatable and strong protagonist, and her relationship with Nyte, the enigmatic figure she encounters, is both intriguing and romantic.
Fast-Paced Plot: The story moves at a brisk pace, filled with action, adventure, and unexpected twists.
Well-Developed World: Peñaranda has created a richly detailed world with its own mythology, magic system, and political intrigue.
What Could Have Been Better:

Character Development: While Astraea is well-developed, some of the supporting characters could have benefited from more depth.
Pacing: In some parts, the pacing could have been a bit slower to allow for more character development and world-building.

Overall, The Stars Are Dying is a captivating fantasy adventure that will leave readers wanting more. Peñaranda's writing is vivid and engaging, and the world she has created is both fascinating and immersive. If you enjoy dark fantasy with a touch of romance, this book is definitely worth checking out.

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The audio narration on this is fantastic.

Really enjoyed the story telling and am beyond excited for book two.

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💫 Book Review 💫

The Stars Are Dying by Chloe C. Peñaranda
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This book took a minute for me to get into, because Astraea, who is the main character and the narrator, lost her memories and doesn’t know anything about herself, the world she lives in, or any of the people she finds herself surrounded by. However, once I figured out what was going on, I was totally sucked into the storyline, the world, and most importantly, Nyte. He’s a Shadow Daddy, who’s dark and broody, mysterious and secretive, and has major ”who did this to you” energy. This book had an intriguing mix of trials and puzzles that Astraea has to solve, a little bit of political drama, and a really excellent tension-filled slow burn romance. The dual narration was incredible. Jacci Prior does a great job with the female characters, and Corvin King’s voice for Nyte is absolutely delicious. This is a great start to the series, and I can’t wait to see where it takes us!
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My rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Spice level: 🌶️🌶️
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Read if you like:
▫️vampires, fae, and celestials
▫️competition with trials and puzzles
▫️villain gets the girl
▫️star crossed lovers
▫️slow burn
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Thank you to Macmillan Audio, NetGalley, and Chloe C. Peñaranda for the ALC. I received an advanced copy for free, and am leaving this review voluntarily.

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Thank you to Net Galley and Macmillan Audio for an ALC in return for an honest review.

You must read this book for the plot.

The plot: The male narrator's voice 🔥🔥

The audio production did an amazing job on this book. I would like to have had a better distinction between the male character voices but I was distracted a lot by the smokey, sexy voice. The dueting was wonderful.

As for the story, it wasn't for me. I think there was a lot going on and a lot of characters for what I thought it would be. It has a lot of potential and I did enjoy it at times. But the characters fell flat at times and I struggled to understand what was actually going on. I also think this book could have been two different books. The FMC was so sheltered at times it was annoying but the ending explained a bit why but by that point it was hard to have empathy.

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Thanks to MacMillan Audio for access to an ALC on NetGalley.

Sadly I must say I did not enjoy this book.; I felt distant from all of the characters and the plot did nothing to pull me into the story. Usually when I struggle to get into a book the audiobook is a great help. That was not the case here. Though we have 2 narrator's the audio does not follow the normal convention of rotating POV's with a chapter. Rather the main female character would narrate until one of the male characters had something to say and the male narrator would voice a male character's response- it was weird because there was little differentiation as to the voices of the male characters. I think the mood of the audiobook wanted to invoke a surreal vibe, but to me it simply sounded like all of the characters were whispering. All this did was put me to sleep. In short, not the best story to begin with and the weird production of the audio only added more frustrations.

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I had to DNF this book at 5% because the female leads meets her male lead in first chapter and alreadys shivering and quaking from his touch. Meanwhile, he is pulling out "who hurt you?" in chapter one. In the very next chapter, she is having biblical knowledge with her current boyfriend and lays back and thinks of england as her he f*cks her, while she was thinking of the mysterious dark haired man who she just met at a party. I was weeping tears of blood. I can withstand a lot in fiction, but I couldn't abide by these choices.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing an e-ARC copy of this book, in exchange for this honest review.

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Thank you NetGalley for the audiobook!

I had high hopes going into this one and was not disappointed at all. I can be incredibly picky on my books so a new author for me is always a gamble on whether or not I will like it, but to be honest I cannot wait to read the second book in this series!
The ending had me like “what the heck!?” So abrupt! And now I am seriously curious where he got that scar.

The romance left a tiny bit to be desired, there was chemistry for sure just not as much as I was expecting. That’s why I gave this one four stars.

Also I feel like anyone who has read this can collectively agree that Drystan and Hektor are the worst characters in the book. Drystan just because he’s a horrible individual, Hektor for essentially drugging Astraea and lying to her, holding her hostage and not allowing her any freedom.
Even though betrayal was a HUGE thing in this book, I do have hope for Nyte and A.

Loved this one so much, thank you!

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This was an enjoyable book. Some was predictable, but there was plenty of twists to keep you on your toes. The FMC does not believe she is as strong as she is and the MMC helps her to find herself. The end is wonderful cliffhanger making you want to beg for the next book to find out what happens next. You have your traditional Fae and Vampires as characters along with a human world, but the addition of "celestials" gives this book a refreshing change that sets it apart from other books. The path the FMC takes is tragic, adventurous, and character developing. Overall, the writing is enjoyable, the reading of the narrators is pleasant and wonderfully interactive.

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I've read so many vampire books lately, I had to put this one on pause for a minute so I didn't begin to confuse them all. For romantasy books these days, there has to be something really special about it for me to pick it up. The Stars Are Dying had me with the stenciled edges, so I knew I wanted to read this one because the cover and edges are beautiful. That said, I don't think I'm the right audience for this particular story. The vampires didn't seem like they were a major part of the story, despite the whole death games aspect being focused on protection FROM the vampires. It felt like a faerie book. More specifically, it reminded me a lot of ACOTAR. Which is honestly how a lot of romantasy has been for me lately, so maybe I'm in the minority.

My favorite part was when Nyte got out of his prison situation and started causing a little bit of havoc. I love some chaos. Also loved Cassia. RIP. Astreya felt very "pick me," which made her difficult for me to like because it seemed like she had a lot of tropes assigned to her. It was difficult for me to find her relationship with Nyte believable, too.

I received the ebook as well and will be posting this review for that copy, too, but for the audiobook specifically: I found the male voice that was provided just for dialogue to be... jarring. I wasn't a fan. Somehow it managed to surprise me at least a little bit every time a male character spoke.

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A Beautiful Read

Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Spice Level: 🌶️🌶️🌶️

I wasn’t sure what to expect going into this book. The blurb is intriguing but it barely scratches the surface of all this book has going on. When you’re dropped into the story, Astraea is a prisoner in all but name. Everything about her life is strictly controlled by a man she believes to be her savior, at least in a sense. You quickly learn that she doesn’t remember her past or where she comes from but you know she’s something more than the human she thinks she is.

It took me about five chapters to feel like I finally understood the “rules” of this author’s fantasy world. The lore is expansive. However, because your understanding of the world is limited by a character who doesn’t have her memories, you end up finding that there is much more going on than you initially thought. If there was a motto for this book, it would be: Everything is not as it seems.

Packed with twists and turns, this book will keep you guessing on just about everything right up to the last chapter. The only hangup I had is there were two major plot twists that I correctly predicted less than 50% of the way through the audiobook. I thought one of them was incredibly obvious. When Astraea figures it out, she says something to the effect of, “I don’t know how I didn’t see it,” and I actually replied out loud, “No joke, lady.” That being said, it didn’t deter me from the story at all.

Astraea isn’t the standout hero when you first meet her you immediately get the impression that she’s not weak or helpless either. She’s smart, loyal, and caring. The girl can also wield a blade so watch out. The romance between Nyte and Astraea is alllllllllll angst and heat. You have no clue if he can be trusted but there is an undeniable edge of passion and danger to his every word. So, of course, we’re drawn to him. Nyte is the proverbial shadow daddy, both in his morally grayness and in that he actually controls shadows. I’m here for it. All the way. The spice is high high HIGH tension but when it comes time for the deed itself, the scenes are a mix of fade-to-black and very mild (3 out of 5 chili peppers).

The review copy of this book was supplied by the publisher because the audiobook edition and a special hardcover edition are both being released on October 8, 2024. In fact, before being chosen to review the audiobook for release day, the fancy pants hardcover had already made it onto my radar. It’s gorgeous and I love the bare book cover art.

The male narrator, Corvin King, has a wonderful voice for fantasy novels. He has an almost inhuman sound to the way he reads this book. Nyte’s voice is often described as silvery throughout the book and that couldn’t be a more fitting description for the narrator’s performance. However, his vocal performance doesn’t differ much between characters so it can sometimes be confusing, such as when there are multiple men in a scene. At times, it can be hard to discern who is speaking when.

The female narrator, Jacci Prior, is a perfection for reading fantasy. Her vocal performance is a solid balance between strong and vulnerable for a character that’s mighty without really knowing it. This is a narrator I will be adding to my watch list for spending monthly Audible credits.

We have bonus scenes! The audiobook and special edition hardcover both come with two bonus scenes at the end that I think you will love. I’m not going to say what they’re about or who they star because I don’t want to spoil anything.

The author’s writing style lands comfortably in the sweet spot of approachable romantasy. It reads casually like an urban fantasy, it has the big world atmosphere of an epic fantasy, plus an extra-heavy dose of star-crossed lovers vibes. Overall, The Stars are Dying was a beautiful read and I will definitely be picking up the next book (and one of those special edition hardcovers, if we’re being honest). I suspect these characters still have a lot to reveal given that massive cliff of an ending we were left hanging off of.

Romance Tropes & Plot Bunnies
Morally Gray Shadow Daddy
Alphahole Antihero
Reincarnated MC
Soulmates
Lost Memories
Secret Identity
Unknown Power
Chosen Family
Destiny / Chosen One
Emotional Scars
Fish Out of Water
Fae
Vampires
Trials for Survival

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3.5⭐️ I overall enjoyed the book but I think there were a lot of answers in the plot line that are withheld, and even at the end of the book I'm still left with a lot of questions surrounding the FMC. In addition to plot holes regarding the FMC (there is a lot unanswered about her backstory), the plot felt a little slow in the beginning and then a bit rushed for me toward the end. I did love that the MMC is such a shadow daddy and I did enjoy the FMC and MMC interactions. I wish there were more answers in this book, but on the other hand it does set the book up for a lot of character development and answers in coming books. There were also a few parts that I thought were a bit predictable to me but still enjoyed the book overall. This series has massive potential, and I'm still anticipating reading book 2 & hoping to get answers regarding the FMC!
I received an ARC audiobook through NetGalley - thank you for the book! I enjoyed the narrator of the audiobook.

I've posted my review to Goodreads and my review is pending on Amazon.

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“I’ve always been right here. Waiting for you.”
The Stars Are Dying by Chloe Peñaranda

Magic systems, star crossed lovers, secrets, and so much more, what a captivating listen!

I love audiobooks and Corvin King and Jacci Prior did a fantastic job narrating this story!
Their voices enhanced the story and made the world building and romance even better.

This was the first book I ever read/ listened to by Chloe and it definitely won’t be the last. I can’t wait to see what happens next for the Nytefall series!

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Would love more moments enjoying the amazing world the author built. Such an intriguing story, but didn’t quite meet its potential for me.

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5/5 Stars

3.5/5 Spice

Thank you to Chloe C. Peñaranda and Macmillan Audio for providing me with an arc and ALC. All opinions are my own as always.

This is my first book by Peñaranda and I absolutely loved it. She has been an author on my TBR for a while. I just haven’t gotten around to starting the Heir Comes to Rise but it has massively bumped up my TBR. I can’t wait for book 2 as these characters were so fun and the magick was really cool.

This book follows Astraea who has lived in seclusion for as long as she can remember. It has been safe and truly not that bad but she has always wanted to know more of the world. When her best friend is picked to go to the capital to compete in a competition for the king she decides she has to leave. Around the same time she meets the mysterious Nyte who she can’t seem to stop thinking about and feeling new things about him. When a series of events happen on the road to the capital Astraea has to take her friend’s spot in the competition which unveils more things than she could ever have seen coming.

I absolutely loved Astraea and Nyte. Both have so much depth and I can’t wait to see more of them together and their abilities in future books. There is so much that we learn but also there is a lot we don’t know still and the main thing is how powerful Astraea actually is which will be so much fun.

I highly recommend this book which you can obviously read before the heir comes to rise series but I believe future books will be more connected to that series but you have time to catch up.

I recently was gifted an audio copy of The Stars are Dying by Macmillan audio and I decided to listen to the first 3 chapters so I could talk about the audiobook. The audio is fantastic from the bit I listened to and it is a Dual narration audio book. Corvin King and Jacci Prior did a fantastic job at bringing these characters to life and I was instantly sucked back into this story I already have fallen in love with. I definitely plan on fully rereading via audio before I read book 2 and I am so excited to come back to this audiobook.

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The Stars Are Dying follows Astraea, a woman who believes she is ill and can only receive medical care from a less than stellar source. Still, she wants to leave; she knows she needs out. Everything that happens after she leaves is, well, complicated. She ends up in a competition of sorts that is meant to bring safety to her home but ends up on a search for much more. She meets a mysterious man named Nyte, who seems to have some answers but never fully answers questions about himself. Who is Astraea truly, and what is going on with Nyte?

That ending. 👀 I'll be reading book 2!

The audio is good quality, and I was able to speed it up without issue, and that's an essential audiobook feature for me. I love that it is a duet narration; that is probably my favorite type of audio! Both narrators are great!

Thanks to Macmillan Audio and NetGalley for an ALC of this book for an honest review.

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“The dark belongs to the stars who can’t shine without out it. It’s where passion burns brightest. It’s peace and it’s company.”


Astraea has spent the last five years with broken memories, illness, and protection through her captor yet savior Hektor. When Astraea is given the chance to join Cassia on her journey to the King’s Central, she decides to break free from her cage. However, things do not go to plan and Astraea is faced with an unimaginable choice: become a competitor in the Libertatem or run.


Peñaranda crafted an engaging and complex story with The Stars are Dying. There was a lot going on with the plot which kept the pace moving at a pretty steady pace through most of the story between Astraea’s time with Hektor, reaching Central, competing in the Libertatem, and after. I do wish more time was spent on the trials and riddles. Having to figure out the clues was one of my favorite elements of the entire story. Overall, I do believe some of the plot points became unnecessarily confusing especially some of the scenes early on with Nyte. I was able to figure out what was happening but there were times I had to reread the scene to fully grasp what was happening.
I really enjoyed the cast of supporting characters especially Cassia, Zath, Rose, and Davina. I enjoyed Astraea but wish we saw more development from her. Given the issues with her memories, I’m hoping to see a lot more growth from her in the next book. As far as Nyte, I’m still on the fence how I feel about him. Given that he’s written in the morally grey/villain vein, I don’t think that’s wholly unexpected.
There are several fan favorite bookish tropes features throughout the story:
One horse
Who hurt you
Touch her and die
Memory loss
Magic trials
Star crossed lovers
I reread this via audiobook, and I thought this was the best way to enjoy the story. The audiobook is done via duet narration which is one of my favorite audiobook styles. I also thought Corvin King and Jacci Prior played well of each other with their character narrations. Overall, I enjoyed the story and plan to continue the series. There was enough political intrigue, mystery surrounding Astraea, betrayals, and twists to keep my interest.

Rating: 4.5⭐️

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