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I always love a Maisey Yates romance, and this one definitely didn't disappoint! Hades and Florence were great, complex characters and I really feel like they earned their HEA. I think this book made for an excellent category romance, but I loved their story so much I definitely would have read a longer book, too!
Pregnant Enemy, Christmas Bride has the potential to be a wild Christmas romance if only the author really embraced that crazy essence that existed in this story.
I like a category romance. They are quick and easy reads and often have bonkers storylines. When I read the synopsis for this book, I knew I needed to read it because the plot sounded wild. I hoped for lots of delicious drama, lusty tension, and sharp banter. Unfortunately, I didn’t get any of that in this book. This book just didn’t work for me. I don’t have any problem with the plot. I actually don’t mind accidental pregnancy, which leads to a marriage of convenience or forced marriage trope. I devour that kind of drama with a smile on my face.
The problem I had was the way this book was executed. First, for a short-category romance, there was way too much internal dialogue going on. It takes up most of the book, which means there is a limited amount of dialogue. One of the great things about an enemies-to-lovers or rivalries-to-lovers story is the sharp and fast banter between the two MCs. I didn’t get that in this book, and when these two did talk, it was rigid and felt off. Their conversations and how they unfolded didn’t make sense and made for a jarring and confusing reading experience.
The chemistry between these two characters didn’t really exist for me. Florence’s feelings and actions toward Hades are all over the map, and not in a good way. She went from only sex buddies to I have to have him for myself in the blink of an eye. I know things often move fast in the category of romance, but that doesn’t mean they can unfold in a confusing and illogical manner. There is an art to writing fun, crazy, quick romance; unfortunately, that didn’t happen in this book. It was hard to get a read on Hade’s character; I think it might have been a good idea to include his POV. I might have been able to connect with his character.
Even though this story was a miss for me, that doesn’t mean it doesn’t have potential. I love the plot idea behind this book, and I think with some rewriting and tweaking, it could be a great read.
Two billionaires battle it out in boardrooms but secretly tryst every change they get for a decade.
I thought Hades acted like a jerk for most of the book before realizing his ice cold exterior was his protection and Florence was his major weakness that no one could ever find out about.
I thought for a few chapters Florence was surrendering her power to him but Yates wrote it that way to show Florence was really seeking something else.
It’s super charged with intensities and breaking down barriers.
Pregnant Enemy, Christmas Bride by Maisey Yates is a story of two people who are enemies in public, lovers in private. Hades and Florence were attracted to each other as teenagers but as their fathers were rival business enemies they had to keep their distance. After the deaths of their fathers they each take over the businesses, while still appearing as rivals and enemies in public; all to keep up appearances. For the past ten years, they have been having a secret affair. When Hades announces his engagement and Florence is devastated by the news. She goes to confront him at his office, only they end up having unprotected intercourse, leaving her pregnant. What follows is two troubled characters finding love and understanding together.
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This story started out slow but got really interesting. Florence and Hades had an very secret affair for 10 years and neither admitted their feelings for each other. When she found out he was engaged, she was heartbroken and furious. She went to confront him and they had their way with each other again, but this time there were consequences. - she was pregnant. She went to tell him on his wedding day and he decided he would marry her instead of his intended. His intended didn't mind at all. That's where the story really got interesting. For all the time they spent in bed together, they really didn't know each other. Dark secrets started coming out and she felt so bad for him. Also, she opened up to him about her life. The last couple chapters were perfect and it was a very happy ending.
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Pregnant Enemy, Christmas Bride (Harlequin Presents by Maisey Yates (
This was unfortunately not for me. I usually like her books but I struggled here to finish this one. I didn't like either MC and for over 80% or so, I didn't like Florence Clare’s or Hades Achelleos or so-called "romance.
Florence and Hades have shared an intense, decade-long, purely physical relationship rooted in their intertwined family histories and personal traumas. Both were shaped by their late fathers, rival CEOs who groomed their children to take over their respective companies. Despite their shared history and frequent encounters during business trips and social events, their relationship remained devoid of romance or genuine emotional connection.
Things take a turn when Florence learns Hades is engaged. Furious at his casual attitude toward their arrangement, she confronts him, leading to an angry farewell encounter. Determined to move on, Florence retreats to Lake Como to process her emotions, only to discover she is pregnant with Hades’ child. On the day of his wedding, she informs him and his fiancée, which leads to an unexpected twist—Hades cancels his wedding and marries Florence instead, fulfilling a stipulation in his father’s will.
The second half of the story shifts focus to the emotional growth of both characters. As they navigate their new marriage, they begin to confront their past wounds, open up about their feelings, and develop genuine affection and understanding. Over time, Florence and Hades transform their fractured dynamic into a real partnership, finding healing and love along the way. Their journey ultimately leads to a satisfying happily ever after, despite the rocky start.
Not my favorite by Maisey Yates, but I finished it. Standard book that defines the Harlequin story . The couple are attracted as teenagers but their fathers are mortal business enemies. Their affair lasts for 10 years, the deaths of their fathers, and now he announces his engagement and she's devastated by the news. When she goes to confront him they have unprotected sex leaving her pregnant. What happens next is pretty standard for a Harlequin book.
Although I received a free ARC ebook from Net Galley and the publisher, all thoughts and opinions are my own.
I have this author before many times I use to enjoy it. I’ve grown up read harlequin books since I was teen I guess I out them since the story wasn’t my cup of tea. The story was good. The couple in the start out as enemies who rival each other with respected companies. This kind of story where they spend most of the book fight each other is not my favorite I usually like to the story to a combination of both and for the romance to flow better. The couple end up have an affair but the romance I wasn’t feeling it. And I usually like Maisey Yates stories I guess my taste has changed.
This was not what I'm used to from Maisey Yates but it was still an enjoyable read imho. The main characters Hades and Florence were possibly not as likeable as most of the characters from her books but became more likeable as the book progressed. Quick read as this one is under 200 pages long. Pick this one up in November 2025.
This was unfortunately not for me. I usually like Maisey Yates reads but I struggled here to finish it because I didn't like either MC and for over 80% or so, I didn't like their so-called "romance.
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MCs come from rivaling families and they have been having a secret FB type relationship for ten whole years! Other than sex, they don't know anything about the other in any real sense since there is no discussions or anything deep and for this "relationship" to continue for 10 years without them wanting anything more from one another was just too lame for me.
So in the present, heroine learns that Hero is getting married and is angry that he had slept with her previously without telling her that is he is engaged. So what does she do? She has sex one last time with him (angry sex) and tells him it's the end for them.
Hero thought he would continue the sex with heroine since his marriage is one of convenience but she sets him straight. Then on the day he is set to say his I do's, she finds she is pregnant with his kid so goes to tell him & his fiancé. Hero ends up breaking things off with the OW and marrying the heroine instead.
While the last 20-30% or so was better, when 60% of it is not enjoyable at all, it makes no difference..
In terms of safety, it depends how you view/interpret it. He f****d heroine for 10 yrs and still planned to marry OW and cheat on said wife with heroine. Uhm... NO. Just no.
I was provided a free copy by NetGalley for my honest opinion.
This book is written in the first person, which I’m not crazy about. There is too much introspection on the h’s part. The h and the H are business competitors by day, and by night lovers. Their affair has lasted ten years. The h finds out that the H is going to marry someone else and doesn’t tell her. At the same time, she finds out that she is pregnant.
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Pregnant Enemy, Christmas Bride is a romance trope superstar. Maisey Yates delivers an addictive mix of enemies-to-lovers, surprise pregnancy and Greek billionaire romance that is filled with chemistry between the two main characters. festive.
Rating 3.5-3.75 (I can't decide)
I've been wrestling with my rating on this one. I liked some parts but not others. It almost seemed like to different stories to me. But in the end I liked the second half of the book. I kinda see what MY was doing here, but think the execution could have been smoother with more depth. But again she did only have 192 pages or so to deliver the story. 🤷🏻♀️
Florence and Hades have had a physical relationship only, for ten years. No relationship at all but sex. They each have major Daddy and some Mommy issues. It's shaped each of them into who they are now. Both Fathers were very successful and intelligent businessmen. They were actual rivals in the business world and intermingled in the same social and financial circles.
And this is how Florance and Hades got "aquanted". They kind knew of each other as preteens to young adults. Florance was infatuated with Hades but was very careful of showing it as her father would have been furious. At eighteen she sent a note to Hades asking him to meet her in her hotel room. She convinced her father she was old enough at this point to have her own room. She lost her virginity to Hades at eighteen that night. Their sexual encounter was very intense and obsessive. So let me say upfront that their sexual relationship was very much on the erotica side. They each traveled with their Fathers for business as the Father's were training their children to take over as CEO's. Each father eventually passed away and they took over as CEO.
Whenever they were in the same city, or social circles/functions or had business together, they always ended up having sex. There was never any romance, no really conversation and no real relationship. Both have become successful CEO's. We pretty much only get the heroines point of view in this story. She is dealing with image issues and especially as a woman CEO. She feels a huge amount of pressure to put on a certain image. So each has decided to keep this secret as they are rivals. And this goes on for ten years. I had a problem with how long their sexual relationship lasted.
Well surprise, surprise on month after a recent hook-up Florence learns that Hades is getting married in a month. And all of a sudden she is furious and decides to confront him as his office. She goes off on him for not letting her know on their last hookup that he was engaged. She ends everything as he will be married and he see's no need for them to really stop their hook up's. That pissed me off that Hades had no problem with them continuing their relationship, but we will learn later why, wish it was made clear at the beginning, his thought process here. I did not like Hades for about a third or half of the book. I also struggled with liking Florence ,because like girl what the heck are you doing with this jerk. Oh and they have angry sex when she went off on him and let him have it. Florences says it's her good bye and last time, that was her thought process. 🙄
Florence runs away with her assistant and friend Sarah to Lake Como where her Mother has a home. She has to get away from everything and process her hurt. I think it was the day or so before Hades is to get married that her Mother and her are having a conversation and she's asking a lot of questions because Florence seems different. Well low and behold during the discussion her Mother asks her if she's pregnant and Florence realizes she is but has been ignoring/blocking all the signs.
She decides she will have to tell Hades before he marries. She arrives the day of his wedding and informs him and his bride that she will be having his baby. Well we begin to learn more about Hades from this point on. Florence becomes the bride that day as Hades insist they marry and his ex was fine as he compensated her with money. They were marrying for convenience. Hades because of a stipulation in the will from his father and the ex was more for money and fame.
From this point on we begin the "relationship" part of Hades and Florence. I have to be honest I was about to DNF this book but decided to stick with it. MY rarely fails me in her stories. So I pushed through and continued.
The last half was a good read. We see the development of who they are, what caused them each so much pain, dissatisfaction with life and their lives. It's a process of them finally communicating and opening up about their feelings. I learned to like Hades and understand him to a certain point. They each worked through their past and made some discoveries of who they really were individually and as a couple. They definitely got their HEA.
A few points I have to share
Ten years was wayyyy too long in my humble opinion.
This review was longer than I intended but again I really wrestled with this story and wasn't sure what I was going to write up for this book.
I didn't really like the first half. But see that maybe MY was luring us in and giving an outside view/perspective before delving into their emotions and feelings. I really am kinda guessing here, not sure. Wish it was a different first half, still thinking I didn't care for it.🤷🏻♀️
I would have liked more of Hades thoughts and feelings.
I appreciated how Florence evolved, grew and accepted who she really was and lived HER life.
I liked Hades towards the end.
I so appreciated that MY made each of them stay true to each other in 10 years. Especially Hades. Thank you Maisey Yates.
Nice epilogue and HEA for both of these poor souls who had terrible childhoods and parents.\
Oh one more thought. I would LOVE a story for Sarah, Florence's assistant and her half brother. Yes please.