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Interesting premise and worldbuilding, but the writing style and narrative pacing leaves a lot to be desired. There's entirely too much telling and not enough showing. The foundational fantasy framework and the emotional grounding necessary for a story about being trans in a magical world misses many steps and made it difficult to be immersed for way too long or care about any of the characters. Will circle back to the author once they are more established in their style in the genre.

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