Ah man I really wanted to like this book. The premise and concept sounded amazing and reading the book I would say that there was so much potential. Sadly, I could not get along with the writing. The omniscent narrator was really unusual compared to other works now adays and I just felt like so many emotions did not get enough screen time because of it. To be switching between up to 3 peoples emotions in the course of one page is just too much and I would have preferred seperate POVs with more depth. Also the writing in general is rather simple but then drops some ancient words to adhere to the time I suppose?
Some of the other problems I had with the book were some story plots that seemed too handy and not really well introduced. Especially in the beginning when its about convincing the MC to take the deal.
Would have loved to read this book after another revision cycle but as it is now, it was hard to get through.

Borrowed Destiny presents a unique tale of a man who, driven by his sick mother’s wishes, takes a life-changing deal from a mysterious company offering a utopian escape. What starts as a chance to trade a harsh life for luxury quickly unravels into a web of ethical dilemmas and dark secrets. The exploration of personal sacrifice and the cost of achieving one's dreams makes this a great read.

Ever wondered if you'd trade your soul for a shot at a perfect life? 😱 Borrowed Destiny explores that wild what-if with a twisty plot that’ll have you on the edge of your seat! The Traveler thinks he’s getting a sweet deal for escaping his tough life, but soon finds out that Utopia comes with some seriously dark strings attached. If you love thrillers that mess with your head and keep you guessing, this book is a great read. Buckle up for a rollercoaster of moral dilemmas and shocking revelations! 🌟📖🔮

"Borrowed Destiny" offers an intriguing premise, but its moral dilemmas and plot twists don't fully deliver on the tension they promise.