Great book that follows the main character Mess Hopkins, who runs a hotel for the down and out. I didn't realize this was part of a series, and will definitely be reading the 1st book of this series. This author is great and held my attention!

Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for the ARC of this book!

Mess is back and hip-deep in another mystery. I thoroughly enjoyed Orloff’s Sanctuary Motel where he introduced Mess and his motley cast of characters at Fairfax Motel. Mess is the affable but tough guy who reluctantly wants to help, and he’s definitely in such a position here. I enjoy Orloff’s writing style which reminds me a bit of Carl Hiassen. Nicely done.

I really wanted to like this one but it was incredibly slow, where the story just wasn't moving along until the very end. It dragged out where little was actually happening. Finn who came back was just frustrating to me, we never really found out what happened during his time on the streets which is what I was hoping to find out by the end of the book. It all lead up to something that was lacklustre and finished within a paragraph or two.

I was so excited to dive into a new Mess Hopkins mystery, and this didn't disappoint in the slightest. Mess, Lia, and Vell are back, and this time things are hitting even closer to home. I love the varying character personalities, and how well they mesh and play off each other while still being unique. Then there's Mess's uncle, who isn't the actual villain, but sort of villain lite, who doesn't see the value in what Mess is doing. (I swear I'd like to get a few moments alone to try and knock some sense into him - or at least send someone to point out how un-Christian he's acting despite acting very holier-than-thou). Finn was an interesting new character, and the way he's presented makes him feel more intriguing than anything at first. The story moves along at a good pace, with enough twists to keep you guessing until the very end. There were heart-pounding moments where it felt like you could cut the tension with a knife. Orloff does an excellent job painting a vivid picture, making it feel like you were watching a movie unfold instead of reading a book. Although this is a sequel, you don't need to read book one, but there's a lot of foundation laid out for the characters, so you'll have a better understanding of them and their motives if you read book one first.

As a reader, and as a writer, I put a lot of stock into themes. For me, multiple plot lines need to come together, not just to build the plot, but to pull all of the thematic strings together. 

Late Checkout by Alan Orloff is a crime mystery thriller that follows Mess Hopkins, the owner of a motel who helps those who are down and out. When his cousin, who has been missing for years, shows up out of the blue, it sets off an investigation involving local politicians and celebrities that seemingly has him at its center. The idea of Mess Hopkins is a good one. A charitable motel provider who becomes embroiled in the affairs of the people he tries to help has the potential to be a brilliant drawcard, but I feel like Late Checkout didn’t quite hit the mark here. 

The plot moves along at a pace that is to be expected of a novel of this kind, but it seems to move from plot point to plot point without any regard to thematic cohesiveness. Mess’s personal conflicts don’t feel as though they are inline with the main conflicts of the plot and feel a lot more like they’re thrown in for the sake of it. While I found the plot to be intriguing, I didn’t feel like it did quite enough to keep me wanting to read the next chapter. 

For its genre, the prose is exactly where it needs to be. Thrillers thrive on simple writing because this allows the action and intrigue to shine through. However, I felt as though the dialogue needed some work, with characters often talking for a bit too long, or saying things that didn’t need to be said. Over all, I think that Late Checkout is a decent read if you’re looking for a simple thriller to burn through quickly.

It wasn't a bad book, persay. Just not a good one.

The characters were kinda flat, the mystery incredibly slow. I skipped large portions of the book and was able to pickup the story with no difficulty.

No method, professionalism, or common sense. Finn didn't make any sense, neither did Mess or Lia. They all just ran around like idiots trying to get themselves killed for nothing. I thought the reveal was stupid and, given the time and patience invested, I deserved more than one paragraph to wrap things up. It was like a passing thought. Once the Three Stooges were done the author didn't seem to care about the story itself. Vell was okay but we didn't get a chance to know him, which is sad. He had FAR more potential than any other character.

I wanted to love this. I was surprised in the first few chapters of the mystery unfolding, but then the story slipped into a lull. It never quite climbed back out. Both the story and the characters felt flat and not much more excitement happened.

In Late Checkout, motel proprietor Mess Hopkins runs the Fairfax Manor Inn, a sanctuary for those in distress rather than a money-making venture. When his cousin Finn unexpectedly arrives, having been presumed dead for six years, Mess is drawn into a dangerous situation. Finn witnessed a violent incident, making him a target for those who want to eliminate the sole eyewitness. Teaming up with his girlfriend Lia Katsaros, a newspaper reporter, and his friend Vell Jackson, Mess must unravel the mystery and protect Finn from those who mean him harm.

While the premise of Late Checkout is intriguing, I found myself feeling a bit disconnected from the characters. Although it’s clear this is a sequel, it’s not necessary to have read the previous book to follow the plot. However, I wonder if familiarity with earlier events might have added depth to the characters, who often felt one-dimensional and flat. Mess's name, “Mess,” seemed oddly glossed over, leaving me puzzled about its significance.

Unfortunately, I didn’t find myself particularly fond of many characters. Finn struck me as whiny, and I wished for more insight into his backstory to elicit a bit more compassion. Mess's sanctimonious attitude was frustrating, and I found myself irritated by his girlfriend Lia, especially when she discussed "outing" people under the guise of public interest—it really made my blood boil. Vell was the standout for me; he seemed like a genuinely cool character, but once again, he wasn’t fully fleshed out.

The plot itself was serviceable but didn’t deliver any major surprises. I also had issues with the portrayal of MMA in the book. It presented MMA fighters as bloodthirsty monsters, which is a stark contrast to the reality of the sport. MMA is a competitive sport, not merely a violent spectacle.

In summary, while Late Checkout had potential and an engaging premise, it fell short for me in character development and plot execution.

Thank you to Level Best Books, Alan Orloff, and NetGalley for providing a copy of this ARC.

LATE CHECKOUT by Alan S. Orloff

It was good to reconnect Mess, who just wants to help people but manages to live up to his nickname. The motel can’t turn a profit if he keeps giving rooms away, but then, it might not anyway, in its shabby state and in a poor economy. Meanwhile, he keeps offering sanctuary to wayward souls, including the most wayward of all, his own cousin Finn, who has been missing for six years with no contact, running from the bullying disapproval of his dad, dear old Uncle Phil. Family strife pales in comparison to Finn’s other woes, an affair that has to be secret, marginal employment possibilities, and, oh yeah, two bad guys after him because he may have witnessed a murder . . . another fine mess, Mess.
None of that counts as spoilers, as they are presented at the very beginning. There are, however, many surprises in store that I will not spoil and which I did NOT see coming. I love the loyalty of Mess and his cadre of friends, and I enjoy the humor in quips and observations, and I was quite caught up in the mysteries of “who done it.” A well-executed (puns intended) and adventurous tale, recommended without reservations.

This is the follow up to Sanctuary Motel, the first in the Mess Hopkins series. Both the series, and indeed the characters are, shall we just say, a wee bit quirky, so I'd do yourself a favour and read that book first...
So... as per the first book, Mess is still fighting to keep the Fairfax Inn as a bit of a sanctuary for anyone who needs it, any waif and stray, moneyed or skint and to heck if the place is haemorrhaging money... and to heck with Mess's uncle who is supposed to be overseeing the place in his parents' absence... He is dealing with such a summons from his uncle when a blast from the past lands at his door. His cousin Finn. Who he hasn't seen in 6 odd years when he supposedly ran away. It transpires that Finn has broken his cover as he needs Mess's help. Apparently he has seen something that has put him in danger. He can't tell a coherent story though, and what he does say doesn't add up. Irrespective of all this, he needs Mess's help, and they were very close once. But Mess can't do it alone and calls on his girlfriend Lia and best friend Vell to assist...
And so begins a cat and mouse game that led me all over the place as Mess and his crew try and make sense of what Finn is saying. Aside from the main story which is playing out in the present, we also return to the past, to witness Finn and Mess as they grow up, and the shenanigans that ensue along the way. Whilst this doesn't really add too much to progress the main story, it is lovely to sneak a glance at Mess's past, and does add credence to the times that Mess gives Finn the benefit of the doubt along the way in the present... And it isn't too intrusive... Oh and we also obviously have the prodigal son's return and his parents reactions to contend with!
As you can tell from the 5 glorious stars I blooming loved this book. It ticked every box for me: great characters; an interesting and intriguing story that held my attention all the way through; no superfluous waffle or padding so said story got on with itself very well indeed; an ending that delivered complete satisfaction. In fact the only bad thing about the book was finishing it and having to say goodbye to all the characters again! Hopefully book three will not be long coming.
My thanks go to the Publisher and Netgalley for the chance to read this book.

I was super excited to see another Mess Hopkins book published. Mess is a great character. Always looking out for the little guy and helping those in need, often to his own detriment.

This installment has Mess trying to help his cousin Finn, who until recently had been missing for six years and presumed dead. Finn is hiding from dangerous men for seeing something he should not.

This is not just a really good thriller, its a powerful story of the importance of standing by and helping family (and friends who are chosen family). Mess is always a stand up guy. If you're a Robert Crais/Elvis Cole fan then you seriously need to check out this series. I hope Alan Orloff keeps rolling these out. It's become one of my new favorite crime series.


Thanks to the author and NetGalley for the advanced copy. I sincerely appreciate being the opportunity to read and review this.

Running a motel is not an easy task. Mess Hopkins expects to inherit one from his parents, but instead has been left with the management task. Problem is, Mess is a very compassionate man and is a sucker for a sob story. He is an emotive character, garners empathy, and is easy to become invested in. The motel is barely staying afloat and continues to limp along.

Finn is his cousin who has been missing for years. Mess and Finn were best friends as youngsters and they are happy to be back together. Finn has confided in Mess that he feels he has people after him.

Killers hunting for Finn and continual management issues keep this novel moving. Will mismanagement finally doom the motel? Will the killers catch up with Finn and eliminate the family problem? Will the rest of the family finally accept Finn for who he is and bring him back into the fold? Read this well-written novel and find out. 4.5 stars – CE Williams

Late Checkout features Mess, who is running a rather shabby motel that makes virtually no money. Especially since he gives rooms away to those in need.
His cousin - whom he long thought dead - shows up are the motel and brings with him a whole lot of trouble that entangles Mess and the motel.

This thriller is full of twists and turns and is sheer suspense. I couldn't put the book down. The characters are well written and the plot is believable.

I heartily recommend this book

Was looking forward to reading this since it takes place near my town in Virginia.
Overall the story was interesting and kept my attention. The characters are pretty well written.
The ending wasn’t surprising, I had a few inklings as to what was happening.
Overall a good read.

Thank you NetGalley for the opportunity.

LATE CHECKOUT by Alan S. Orloff

It was good to reconnect Mess, who just wants to help people but manages to live up to his nickname. The motel can’t turn a profit if he keeps giving rooms away, but then, it might not anyway, in its shabby state and in a poor economy. Meanwhile, he keeps offering sanctuary to wayward souls, including the most wayward of all, his own cousin Finn, who has been missing for six years with no contact, running from the bullying disapproval of his dad, dear old Uncle Phil. Family strife pales in comparison to Finn’s other woes, an affair that has to be secret, marginal employment possibilities, and, oh yeah, two bad guys after him because he may have witnessed a murder . . . another fine mess, Mess.
None of that counts as spoilers, as they are presented at the very beginning. There are, however, many surprises in store that I will not spoil and which I did NOT see coming. I love the loyalty of Mess and his cadre of friends, and I enjoy the humor in quips and observations, and I was quite caught up in the mysteries of “who done it.” A well-executed (puns intended) and adventurous tale, recommended without reservations.

Fairfax Manor Inn owner Mess Hopkins has helped people seeking refuge but he doesn't expect his cousin Finn to suddenly show up. Having left home 6 years earlier, his family thought Finn was dead. Instead, Finn has tried to clean up his life but he is in big trouble. With the help of Mess' newspaper reporter girlfriend Lia & his friend Vell, Mess will do his best to protect Finn from some bad guys who want to kill him. The recent murder of a shady local real estate developer and the ongoings of a WWE star's home are related.

This book was good! It definitely kept me turning the page and had such a good story line. Would love to read more books by this author

Late Checkout is a gripping mystery novel that follows the life of Mess Hopkins, a motel proprietor whose primary goal is to help others. His life takes a dramatic turn when his cousin Finn unexpectedly reappears after being presumed dead for six years. This shocking reunion sets off a chain of events filled with danger and suspense.

The story begins with Finn arriving at the Fairfax Manor Inn, bringing with him a harrowing secret that puts his life in jeopardy. He has witnessed something dangerous, and now he is the only witness to a crime that could have deadly consequences. Mess, along with his girlfriend Lia Katsaros—a determined newspaper reporter—and their friend Vell Jackson, must work together to uncover the truth behind what Finn saw before it’s too late.
Late Checkout is an engaging read for fans of mysteries and character-driven narratives alike. With its blend of suspenseful twists and emotional depth, I promises it keep sreaders on edge while also tugging at their heartstrings.

This book is more than just a thrilling mystery; it tells the story of family bonds, the consequences of past choices, and the lengths to which people will go to protect their loved ones. The writing is sharp and engaging. The plot twist definitely got me at the end was not expecting that!! The book is a great read and it kept me guessing until the very end. Overall, this book is a must-read for mystery enthusiasts and fans of character-driven narratives!! Thank you for the Chance to read and review!!💜

This was really good! I loved the characters - Mess, Lia, Finn, Vell. And it was a great storyline that was more suspense than anything. It keeps you turning the pages as quick as you can so you can see what's going to happen next. I recommend picking this up if you need something that's a little thriller-y, but leaning more towards suspense...and if you love dysfunctional family dynamics. This one proved my theory that God gives us our families, because he knows we darn well wouldn't choose them!!