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This was delightful! I really enjoyed McLeod's version of a grown-up Mary Bennet, the glimpses of Regency queer society, and Charlotte's gradual blossoming. I also loved all the flower language and scientific allusions. I had a good time with this one!

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the arc! Opinions are my own.

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Thank you Harlequin - Romance and Netgalley for an ARC in exchange for an honest review!

Four years have passed since the end of Pride an Prejudice and we find Charlotte has become a widow after Mr Collins passing. This tale follows her as she decides what is next. Will she wed another husband ensuring her future or follow her heart with an unexpected love?

I love Pride and Prejudice and getting to go back into this world is always so fun! Getting a different view of Charlotte as well as Mary was so exciting and I loved every moment! Would recommend to any regency era fan as a fun read!

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Sheer, absolute perfection perfect for fans of Austen and sapphic romance! It is always daunting to live up to Jane Austen but this book is a lovely continuation of Charlotte Lucas’ story with so much queerness and hot sex and longing glances. Loved it!

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I quite enjoyed this sapphic Pride & Prejudice continuation. With every book that begins in a Jane Austen world I look to see if the author stays true to the characters I know and love as well as staying true to time and place. While Mary Bennett and Charlotte Collins have grown in the past four years they are recognizable. As they renew their acquaintance after the death of Mr. Collins (not a spoiler) Charlotte begins a journey of self discovery and possible happiness.

Thank you NetGalley and Harlequin Romance for the opportunity to read and review this book. My review can also be found on Litsy.

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This book was a fun and reflective journey through the passion of first queer relationships and the upending nature of figuring out who you are later in life. I enjoyed the subtle winks to Pride & Prejudice and almost wished for more contact with the original characters. Nevertheless, any queer retelling that centers two unabashedly in love characters is good in my book.

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I received an ARC from the publisher via NetGalley and am voluntarily posting a review. All opinions are my own.
After falling into yet another reading slump, I knew I wanted something more “familiar” this time around. Fortunately, The Unlikely Pursuit of Mary Bennet was one of the ARCs I had next ony my schedule to read, striking a balance between being a new story with familiar characters.
While writers of Austen “fanfic” don’t always get the characters right, Lindz McLeod did a fairly good job of remaining true to the characters readers know and love, while also making them her own. And it does help that, with Charlotte and Mary taking center stage, each has evolved since the original novel, with Lizzie and Darcy being relegated off-page and referenced largely through letters. And with these two being the characters in Austen’s world that have been the center of much queer speculation (especially Charlotte), there is fertile ground to probe and build on.
That said, I really liked how McLeod interpreted Charlotte and Mary, with Charlotte in particular going on a journey of self-discovery in the wake of Mr. Collins’ death, and being able to finally be a fully autonomous person after being defined as someone’s daughter or wife, and having been resigned to that fate. And while the story definitely centers Charlotte’s journey more than Mary’s, that’s only because she’s already come into her own as a person, fully cognizant of who she is, and is now able to help Charlotte.
And while the interactions between the two in the source material were few and far between, I love how the text acknowledges how they more or less just circled each other before, with their bond growing deeper, based on their initial, earlier acquaintance-ship.
And while there is some inclusion of some characters from P&P, I appreciated the shift in focus to the original characters, particularly those in the environs of Rosings and whatnot, including a reasonably interesting antagonist. The choice makes it feel more like a Regency romance in its own right, in spite of the Austen characters that center the narrative.
While the plot and pacing was sometimes a little slower, especially initially, I liked how it set the tone, prioritizing the internal and interpersonal growth of the characters.
I absolutely loved this one, and would recommend it to readers who love Jane Austen and/or sapphic historical romance!

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This was a beautiful and original written, sweet yet sexy historical romance about two women and the problems they faced back in that era. It was entertaining with fun, wit, and wonderful characters. I enjoyed as their romance built into love. I highly recommend reading.

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"Jane Austen meets Bridgerton in this sapphic romance between Charlotte Lucas and Mary Bennet that begins four years after the end of Pride and Prejudice.

When Mr. Collins dies after just four years of marriage, Charlotte is lost. While not exactly heartbroken, she will soon have to quit the parsonage that has become her home. In desperate need of support, she writes to her best friend, Lizzie. Unable to leave Pemberley, Lizzie sends her sister Mary Bennet in her stead.

To Charlotte's surprise, Mary Bennet is nothing like she remembers. Mary's discovery of academia and her interest in botany (as well as getting out from under her mother's thumb) have caused her to flourish. Before long, Charlotte is enraptured, and with each stolen glance and whispered secret, their friendship quickly blossoms into something achingly real.

But when her time at the parsonage begins to dwindle and a potential suitor appears, Charlotte must make a choice - the safety and security of another husband, or a passionate life with Mary outside the confines of the ton's expectations."

Like Bridgerton because of the Regency or because of the sapphic?

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3.5/5

I really enjoyed this book. I felt there was some great tension through the beginning, particularly as Charlotte came to terms with her sexuality. I appreciated that the book was single POV because I really felt the longing!

That being said, once we hit the 2nd half things seemed to progress really quickly which didn’t seem very realistic to me, especially given how much build up there was.

I think the third act conflict made a lot of sense, however it resolved really quickly and was kind of predictable.

All in all, I had a great time notwithstanding a couple of things. This was a fast and easy read, and I loved the continuation of the Pride and Prejudice world!

🌶️/5

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Thanks to NetGalley and Harlequin for the eARC!

This was such an interesting take on the the love lives of a pair of the side characters from Pride & Prejudice. I really enjoyed getting to know both Charlotte and Mary better. The story included really great exploration of what a sapphic love might have looked like in that time. While there were places and moments that felt repetitive in the book, overall, I really enjoyed it. I loved the focus on flowers and their meanings - I love that flowers were central to a lot of important moments in the book. I loved the life that Mary had created for herself. And I loved the way jealousy showed up in the book. I loved the relationships both Mary and Charlotte had created with their household servants.
This was a genuinely delightful book, and I hope to read more from McLeod in the future!

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Oh my gosh, I was not expecting to enjoy this as much as I did, and it was such a pleasant surprise. I am always looking for good sapphic books and this absolutely delivered. The tension between Charlotte and Mary was evident from the start, and it made me all the more invested. Their developing friendship felt very natural which made their romantic and sexual chemistry feel very realistic. And of course, the spicy scenes were very enjoyable.

My only gripe was the third act breakup, but that's my own personal preference. It made sense within the story, especially because Charlotte is so new to acknowledging her queerness and her insecurities, but it irked me nonetheless.

I definitely recommend this to anyone who enjoys regency romances or Pride & Prejudice spin-offs. It was such a sweet story with low angst, and I enjoyed it a lot!

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This was a very fun twist on a beloved story. The romance between the two were sweet and endearing! Definitely a great read!

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The Unlikely Pursuit of Mary Bennet by Lindz McLeod is a third person-POV historical romance reimagining of what happens after Pride and Prejudice from Charlotte’s POV. Four years after getting married, Mr. Collins passes away and Charlotte must adjust to life as a widow. Charlotte’s best friend, Elizabeth, sends her sister Mary to keep Charlotte company, but nobody expected Mary to reignite feelings Charlotte had long buried.

As a long time fan of Pride and Prejudice, I requested this one as soon as I saw it. I don’t think I will ever get tired of seeing how authors put their own spin on this classic and I was pleasantly surprised by this one. We don’t get time with the leads from the original story, but we do get brief life updates of Elizabeth and Darcy, Anne de Bough and her mother, and Jane and Charles Bingley. We also get to more of the larger world all of the characters are part of and the sphere of influence Darcy truly has even though his reputation was subpar at best before his marriage.

Mary is fairly entrenched in the Queer community of the time and has had at least one other partner prior to meeting up with Charlotte again. As a character, Mary has grown a lot and isn’t the same somewhat oblivious character as she was in Pride and Prejudice. Given what happened with Lydia (which does get brought up) and the four year time skip, it felt believable that Mary could transform into someone who is more confident though still bookish and will go after what she wants while realizing the pressure society and her mother are placing on her. Mary and Charlotte talk a lot about the language of flowers, which had some significance in the Queer community in the Victorian era.

I really appreciated how Charlotte has always been kind of aware of her feelings for women but doesn’t really embrace it until she’s thirty-one and after her husband has passed. Some people really do figure their sexuality out in their thirties and forties and even later, in part because compulsory heterosexuality is so strong. Charlotte more seems to think that there’s nobody quite like her so she doesn’t even really consider going out and finding community until she reunites with Mary, which speaks to the loneliness many Queer people without community feel even if they constantly push it aside. Charlotte tried to make the best of her marriage, but it’s with Mary that she can finally be herself and I love seeing Sapphic couples happening a little later in life.

I would recommend this to fans of Pride and Prejudice reimaginings and retellings and readers looking for a Sapphic interpretation of two minor characters in classic literature

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Charlotte was your very typical English wife who is more concerned with what society thinks of her than doing anything about her own feelings. Luckily, once Mary enters the picture, Charlotte’s personality is suddenly much more likeable and relatable. Not sure what to do with her growing feelings when she never knew such a thing was a possibility. I loved the exploration of her self discovery and journey of finally accepting that her feelings are more important than expectations. Her concerns were valid, especially for someone who had never felt anything like that kind of overwhelming feeling of true love. It was definitely enjoyable to see her grow a backbone and be able to tell Mrs Tremaine off and be able to hold her own in academic discussions. Her passion for flowers was truly felt, and I loved how she used her knowledge and love of flowers to declare her love and intentions with Mary.

Mary on the other hand was instantly loveable. I couldn’t get enough of her wit, charm, intellectual maturity, and her not so subtle hints of feelings toward Charlotte. Every emotion, whether she was frustrated, inspired, infatuated, angry, or in love, felt authentic and real. I couldn’t help rooting for her from the very beginning. I also really adored every moment when she was teaching Charlotte something, whether it was how to make love, how to hold her own in an academic lecture, or how to not give a damn about societal expectations. Her progressive views and mature understanding about what truly matters in life was very admirable. She definitely had great chemistry with Charlotte, I only wish Charlotte wasn't so oblivious and didn’t have to struggle so much internally to believe that Mary’s feelings were genuine.

As far as side characters go, I honestly enjoyed all of them and that usually doesn’t happen. That only makes me wish we had more time with some of them and got to know them a little more. For example I would have loved so much more information about Delia and how she and Mary became so close. I also wanted to know how Mary’s Aunt Cecily became so progressive and accepting of the LGBTQ+ community. And Pitt seemed like he had an interesting life and backstory that we didn't get to hear much about. Along with Mr. Mellor and how he got to be so kind and accepting. Between Mrs. Tremaine and Anne, they provided the right amount of tension despite not knowing much about them other than their relationship to Mary. They were all just developed enough to appreciate and add to the story in their own unique way and fit the setting and worldbuilding wonderfully. Despite never having read Pride and Prejudice, I still enjoyed the setting that was perfectly painted that seemed to follow what I already knew about that time period and societal expectations.

I do have to admit that I found myself skimming a lot of tedious details and descriptions, especially in the slow beginning of the story. It didn’t take away from the fairly decent pacing of the story, I just personally wanted to get the romance quicker. Even though the slow burn became a little too much for me, I know it is supposed to fit the narrative a certain way, especially when Charlotte is discovering her sexuality for the first time, which I know from experience takes time. Once Charlotte and Mary discovered their mutual intentions toward each other, I just wanted more. Which made the inevitable forced third act breakup all the more upsetting and annoying. Charlotte at that point was unnecessarily self-deprecating herself even though it was more than clear how much Mary loved her. Even with the predictable plot and rushed ending, I absolutely loved and adored the romance, characters, and the historic England setting, along with all its societal issues.

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This book was fantastic! I've read quite a few books written in the style of Austen, but this sapphic followup to "Pride and Prejudice" was one of the best. The love story was well plotted, and the writing style really made me feel like I was reading something out of the 1800s. I also enjoyed the queer touches all throughout the book via side characters and an apparently robust queer scene in Canterbury! Mary's character didn't appeal to me much, but Charlotte was such a dear. That said, they really are a lovely match. I hope the author will continue writing about their world, even if the stories feature all new characters unrelated to P&P or other Austen works.

Many thanks to NetGalley and Harlequin for the opportunity to read this ARC and provide an unbiased review!

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“God, Mr Collins had always claimed, did not have a sense of humour. Charlotte had privately thought if that were so, perhaps God had not yet seen her husband without clothes on.”

Rating: 3.5 starts
This was ok. I really liked the premise which is that Mr Collins passes away a few years after his marriage and Charlotte is left to fend for herself and redefine how she wants her life to look like. She asks her friend Lissie Bennet to visit but she can’t and instead send her sister Mary to keep Charlotte company. With the arrival of Mary, Charlotte starts questioning her sexual orientation and it turns finds out her feeling might be reciprocated!
I really enjoyed the first half but felt the second half dragged and it was just taking tea or reading. The ending also felt rushed and there were secondary plots that were not explored at all.

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I thought Charlotte gave off Sapphic vibes in the original story, so I was really pleased to read this imagining of Charlotte falling for Elizabeth's younger sister Mary. This was pretty much exactly what I expected, a lovely historical Sapphic romance with the surprise of being a little spicy. Fans of queer historical fiction will enjoy this, especially those who enjoy flowers.

Thank you to NetGalley and publisher for the opportunity to read and review.

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⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
The Unlikely Pursuit of Mary Bennet
by Lindz McLeod
Pub Date: April 29, 2025

✨ Sapphic Romance
🥹 Friends to Lovers
🏳️‍🌈 Secret Dating
🌸 Bridgerton

A sapphic, slow-burn romance set in the Pride and Prejudice universe. You don’t need anything else about this book besides the fact that it is perfect!

After being married for four years, Mr. Collins dies and leaves his wife Charlotte in a predicament. She’ll be forced to leave the parsonage soon and has to portray a grieving widow in mourning even though she’s not heartbroken. She writes to her beloved friend Lizzie for help, who then sends her sister Mary Bennet to keep Charlotte company.  Either way, only Charlotte can determine her future.

Overall, this was a great read that I would recommend to any reader who enjoys reading retellings, especially historical fiction with some romance (sapphic anyone lol)! I have to say this might be one of the best retellings I have ever read…do yourself a favor and read it.

Thank you to NetGalley, Carina Adores, and Lindz McLeod for the ARC and for allowing me this opportunity to read and share my thoughts!

#historicalfiction #lgbtgia #romance #retelling #netgalley

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I love queer Pride & Prejudice fan fiction! This book set up realistic queer characters, fantastically played off the original story. and provided something that felt aimed at me, a queer reader. One minor issue, which is probably just personal preference, is that the MC overthinks, rabbit holing to an EXTREMELY annoying extent. I loved this book!

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When Lindz McLeod takes readers into the world of Jane Austen four years after the conclusion of Pride and Prejudice, they will never think of Regency England in the same way again! The Unlikely Pursuit of Mary Bennet follows the budding relationship between the quiet, forgotten Bennett sister and the practical Charlotte Lucas, Lizzie Bennett’s best friend. The novel opens with the death of Charlotte’s husband Mr. Collins, and while she isn’t heartbroken by his death, she finds herself alone and in need of a home once again. Since Lizzie is unable to leave Pemberly, it is Mary Bennett who arrives to comfort the grieving widow.

Mary brings Charlotte to her Aunt Cecily’s house where Charlotte discovers a whole new world. Mary has blossomed into an intelligent flirtatious woman who knows exactly what she wants from life, and as Charlotte’s intimate feelings for Mary grow, she has to navigate a lifetime of gender, sexual, and social conditioning to accept the possibility of a new life with the woman she loves.

The Unlikely Pursuit of Mary Bennett is a sapphic love story that explores queer love during the Regency Era. Mary and Charlotte are not alone in their sexual identity; Charlotte discovers that her own Aunt Ethel had a female lover, and everyone who works in Mary’s home pursues a “more secret kind of love.” Although Charlotte wrestles with internalized expectations of societal rules, she ultimately finds acceptance in the arms of her family and passion in the arms of the woman she loves. The relationship between Mary and Charlotte is a slow burn, and readers looking to enjoy a Jane Austen aesthetic with a contemporary twist are sure to be delighted with the plot and characters. Mary and Charlotte converse through a language of flowers, secretly confessing their attraction to each other before finding the courage and space to talk to each other openly. McLeod gives two of Jane Austen’s most sober side characters their own happily-ever-after, and it is a joy to watch their love story unfold. If you have ever dreamed of reimagining the romantic possibilities in Pride and Prejudice, add this book to your list today!

Thank you to Netgalley for a free copy of the book in exchange for a fair review.

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