Member Reviews
Heather S, Reviewer
I only got through about 1/3 before I had to put this book down. The formatting and editing are so horrible I can't get through this. The bit of writing I did get through was okay to the point I'm not sure I'd want to finish. I was bored, honestly.
Mike M, Reviewer
This book desperately needs editing and formatting. I stopped reading about 10% in because there is a carriage return every two lines for the remainder of the novel making reading painful.
If Freisen Press is helping this author, they have failed.
Take the book down. Run it through editing software like ProWriting Aid to fix punctuation and other typos. Fix the formatting, then upload and try again.
Once the book is edited and formatted properly, I'd be happy to give it another try.