Member Reviews
YESS THIS WAS FANTASTIC AND JUST SUCH A FUN TIME. I laughed and swooned and just had a joyous time reading this
This Sapphic romantic comedy about two cross country runners with a complicated past and uncertain futures is messy, thoughtful, and entertaining. A diverse cast provides plenty of PoC and LGBTQ representation, as well as some interesting socio-economic interactions. As the leads are forced to interact and work out their feelings for one another, they both discover more about what they really want. Thoroughly enjoyable.
This was fine, but I did feel like it probably could have used a couple more drafts. Many aspects of the plot felt a bit underdeveloped, including the dissolution of Taylor and Mari's friendship and the rebuilding of it. I also found their voices to be too similar in a way that made the dual POV jarring sometimes.