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**Review of *Mentor to the Marquess* by Melissa Kendall**

*Mentor to the Marquess* continues the engaging narrative of *The Seductive Sleuths* series, this time focusing on Olivia Heather, the Dowager Countess of Allen. A survivor of spousal abuse, Olivia now dedicates her life to mentoring young women, guiding them away from the perilous path she once endured. However, her noble efforts are complicated when a series of scandalous newspaper articles accuse her of murdering her late husband.

The central conflict arises when Thellusson Vaith, the Marquess of Lowell, approaches Olivia to assist in finding a suitable love match for his daughter. Although Olivia initially seeks to confront Thel regarding the damaging articles, she soon finds herself entwined in his life, helping him navigate the complexities of romance after years of mourning his wife. Their relationship evolves into a steamy romance filled with erotic tension and emotional depth as they uncover secrets that intertwine their pasts with the present dangers facing Thel’s daughter

Kendall’s writing skillfully balances the romance and mystery elements, though some critiques note that the mystery may not be as compelling due to a lack of actionable clues throughout the plot. Nevertheless, the chemistry between Olivia and Thel is palpable, making their journey toward healing and trust resonate with readers

Overall, *Mentor to the Marquess* offers a fresh take on historical romance, blending personal redemption with the thrills of matchmaking amidst societal expectations. It's an accessible read even for those new to the series, inviting readers into a world where love, trust, and resilience are put to the test. This book is set to be released on November 19, 2024, and promises to be a noteworthy addition to any historical romance enthusiast's collection

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In this story, the heroine, Olivia Heather, the Dowager Countess of Allen and a survivor of spousal abuse, dedicates herself to helping young women avoid her fate. However, her efforts are complicated when newspaper articles accuse her of murdering her late husband. To confront the situation, Olivia attempts to persuade Thellusson Vaith, Marquess Lowell, the allerged man behind the accusations, to stop his attacks, but he instead asks her to find a match for his daughter. Olivia becomes involved with the marquess, mentoring him in romance. As they uncover letters indicating that someone is manipulating his daughter using tactics similar to those Olivia endured, they must confront her painful past and family issues to protect the girl and clear Olivia's name.
The story is well written and provides some welcome plot variance to the usual Regencies. The mystery is not quite captivating, as there is not enough described action to identify the culprit. Although being the second book in the series, the story can be read as a standalone.

Some technicalities: In chapter 10, when Saffron visits Olivia, there is no mention of the tea being requested or brought; nevertheless, it is described as being there and being cold. Also, it is hardly imaginable that in a household with staff and a mistress in residence, there would be cobwebs in her sleeping room.

In chapter 11, "okay" is mentioned quite often. Not sure this word is time-appropriate.

In chapter 26, Olivia's reaction does not follow her earlier reasoning—she doesn't even get an apology but still reacts as she does.

I was provided with an ARC by NetGalley and read the book voluntarily.

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Thellusson (Thel) Marquess of Lowell hires Olivia, the Countess Dowager Allen, to find his daughter a husband, but it has to be a love match. Olivia's reputation is on the line as articles in the newspaper are accusing her of her husband's death. Thel doesn't believe she's guilty, but it makes being a matchmaker more difficult. Her past is replayed in his daughter's future. It's a game she must win to prevent heart break. An erotic affair between Thel and Olivia starts from the beginning. Very explicit sex.
This is the second book in the series and is good reading.
I read and reviewed a copy of this book from NetGalley.

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