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Just Our Luck by Denise Williams ✨
I had the chance to read Just Our Luck as a pre-release ARC, and it was such a fun, feel-good romance with a twist of fate! 🌟
Sybil, a woman waiting to find her place amidst her dreams of a better life, wins the lottery. But there’s a catch — she leaves the winning ticket behind at a donut shop. Enter Kieran, a kindhearted guy who is left the ticket and embarks on a mission to return it to her.
What I loved:
💫 Sybil’s journey of self-discovery and her struggle with the sudden change in her life felt relatable
💫 Kieran is such a swoon-worthy, thoughtful guy—his quiet determination to do the right thing made him such a compelling love interest.
💫 The slow-burn romance was both charming and heartfelt, with plenty of swoon-worthy moments.
While I did feel the pacing was a bit uneven at times, and I would’ve loved more emotional depth in certain scenes, the chemistry between Sybil and Kieran kept me hooked.
If you’re looking for a lighthearted romance about fate, second chances and finding love in unexpected places, Just Our Luck is definitely worth picking up on release day - March 25, 2025.
Thanks to NetGalley for the ARC! 📚💖
If you are looking for a cute interracial romance with plus size fmc, neurodivergent rep, and burnout rep then this book is for you.
This was a solid 3.5 ⭐️ book. I enjoyed the banter between Sybil and Kieran. I liked how Kieran came around and was supportive of Sybil and helping her find a purpose in life, when her mother was always calling out her flaws. I also liked how Sybil helped Kieran loosen up and learn to have some fun. I didn’t enjoy how Kieran was kind of mean towards Sybil in the beginning, but I think that was his way of protecting his heart. I also didn’t like Sybil mother because she was so mean to her. Overall, I really enjoyed this book and want to read more by Denise Williams.
Thank you NetGalley and Penguin House for an ARC!!
3.5 stars.
I first would like to bring up that I like how closer to the end of the book they brought up a statistic that women tend to be under diagnosed with ADHD due to it showing up and manifesting differently in women than it does in men. Luckily, I was diagnosed at the age of seven. I am not almost 40 years old. I will say when it comes to being neurodivergent and ADHD I can say my decision in making is impulsive and I can see that in the female main character. But that is where her and I in our similarities in ADHD stop. No ADHD can manifest differently and I acknowledge that and I do know that time blindness is a thing, but that does not happen with me as it does with this character. She always tends to be late, especially in the beginning of the book. She has a hard time waking up, which I did have when I was younger, but I did not use an alarm clock.
Overall, I thought the book was very well written. I liked the premise of the book. The book is told in dual POV. I like that our MMC takes time off school to take care of his family due to medical reasons and makes it his priority. I also love that it takes place and a donut shop. And that is how their mate cute begins. I also love the idea of a lottery ticket and the whole lottery system in the book. I do feel the representation was well written in the book. I do feel, though that the middle of the book dragged for me. The pacing was very hard for me personally and the reason I continued was because I wanted to know what happened in the end.
I would definitely give this author another try and do plan to try her back log.
Well goodness, that’s a meet cute to remember! Thanks so much to @berkleypub @berkleyromance for the free book! I don’t know what these reviews are talkin bout. I was in the feels with Sybil the whole way. Except maybe at the 90% mark that decision was a little outta line. But anywho I feel her character represents a lot of people still trying to make it happen and just keep falling short. Everyone wants to win a jackpot and no one ever does. So it was nice to see someone win for a change. Also the cover looks just like me and my boo so that was a bonus.
thank you NetGalley and the author for this arc!
I DESPERATELY wanted this arc read. Let me just say that
Let me just say this I’m all for a messed up character can’t get they life together things never go there way . Etc but at some point a shift has to be made?
By 85-90% of the book The FMC called that MMC school (he is going to be a doctor ) and she donated a lot of money and didn’t it be consequences?!?! He lost his spot , granted he was trying to figure if he even wanted to go back but STILL not your job FMC . Accountability was needed I was like why the hell would she do that?!? And somehow it’s the MMC that fixes it… everyone like you apologize. I mean idk maybe I read it wrong but that irked me
Now I did like seeing the budding romance but the romance doesn’t start till further in the book which surprised me considering when the couple first meet , they already getting semi busy (he ate her out ) like yall kissed already why every moment a kiss was supposed to be had they were overthinking it?!
The side characters were good except for the FMC family I did not care for them what kind of family uses embarrassing moments that they know are hurtful as dinner talk?! Puh-lease!
Overall it was an okay read .
I adore Denise Williams. This book ranks at the bottom of the pack of my reads of hers thus far. I really disliked the two main characters and the central conflict - esp the lack of communication good lord. But it did keep me entertained enough to finish.
I’m a sucker for a forced proximity fake dating
romance and Denise Williams did her big one with this book. I fell in love with this book from jump with its Cinderella meet cute and 90s rom com vibes.
Thank you to NetGalley and Berkley Publishing for an advanced reader copy of Just Our Luck by Denise Williams in exchange for an honest review. I really wanted to like this book more - I’ll start with the positives! I really liked the spice level as well as the plus sized FMC and ADHD representation. The premise for the story was fun - who wouldn’t want to win the lottery, especially if your life was in shambles?! However, the FMC fell flat for me. I also didn’t enjoy a good portion of the dialogue between the two main characters - at times their chemistry felt random and unrealistic. The overall story was light hearted and easy to read, but I expected more. 2.75/5 stars
Just Our Luck is an irresistibly cute and fun romance. Sybil, who lives her life carefree and directionless, crosses paths with Kieran, a no-nonsense premed student taking a break from his studies to help his grandfather run a donut business. Throw in a winning lottery ticket and fake dating, and you’ve got yourself a delightful read!
I truly enjoyed how Sybil and Kieran, despite being complete opposites, managed to help each other grow. Their differences made for a refreshing and heartwarming dynamic. And the introduction of a disorder in the storyline was handled with such sensitivity and depth—it added a meaningful layer to the narrative.
This book had me hooked from start to finish! A perfect blend of romance, humor, and heart. Highly recommended for anyone looking for a feel-good read. 📚💖🍩
'Just Our Luck' was one of my most anticipated romance releases for 2025. This is a story about two people down on their luck trying to get their lives together when a winning lottery ticket falls into their laps and they have to fake date for mutual benefit.
Denise Williams is one of my favourite contemporary authors. In my mind, she can do no wrong! I'm a little sad that this book didn't live up to my expectations or what I expected from the exciting synopsis/tropes. I loved the chemistry between the two main characters, Sybil and Kieran. They're attracted to each other right away but it's a bit of a "right person (?), wrong time" situation. This book is an easy and quick read - I'd recommend it to anyone who enjoys a nice fluffy romance.
My disappointment is on a few different aspects of the plot and the characters. The lottery aspect of this story is so negligible. Sybil wins upwards of $200 million and it's mentioned as an afterthought. Even the money that's supposed to be split with Kieran, which is a big a huge amount that alleviates his financial worries, is mentioned a couple times at best. The last quarter of this book also felt so rushed and the main characters were behaving so rashly. It was in character, but deserved to be explore with a few more chapters than it got.
I'd give this a rating of 3.5 overall - I had a great time with this and found it to be the right kind of fluffy read for the winter and spring season!
Thanks so much to @berkleypub and @berkleyromance for the free book and the opportunity to read and review!
Thank you to the publisher for sending me a digital copy of this book to review!
I have read several Denise Williams books now, and I keep going back for more! In this book, our two love interests were “fake dating” for a majority of the book. However, it was pretty evident from almost their first interaction that it wasn’t fake at all, and that there were feelings involved from the jump. This wasn’t necessarily a bad thing, but it was definitely something I noticed. It did lead to moments of really intense tension in the book, which was great to read! Another aspect of this book was the third act breakup, which I think could have been handled a little bit better because it felt a little abrupt. I would have loved if Sybil’s diagnosis/ Kieran’s career setbacks were addressed more at the end. Again, I didn’t necessarily mind the third act breakup, just how it felt a little sparsely written.
Overall, this was a cute story! It wasn’t my favorite ever Denise Williams book, but I still had a good time reading it. I would definitely read more romances in this world between some of the other characters we were introduced to in this book!
eARC Review; Just Our Luck by Denise Williams
Pub Date: March 25, 2025
Thank you to @berkleyromance for the advance copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own and I am leaving this review voluntarily #berkley #berkleypartner
Just Our Luck follows Sybil who can't quite hold down a job long term and who just sort of generally struggles with being an adult. After a chance encounter at a donut shop and some incredibly chemistry, Sybil gets tracked down by Kiran. But not because of their chemistry, instead because she left a lottery ticket behind, and it just happens to be a winner! Overnight her life changes and she and Kiran go viral and decide to keep using that virality to their benefit.
I had a bit of a mixed experience with this book. While I did like parts of it and thought other parts were pretty charming, I had some major issues with other parts of the book. I really struggled with Sybil as a character. As someone with ADHD, I know each persons experience with that diagnosis is different. However Sybil's experience felt almost like a caricature and made her feel MUCH younger to me. It wasn't until towards the end of the book that I realized she didn't know she had ADHD. While that did help explain some stuff to me, I find it somewhat unrealistic that she had gone through 30some years of her life with NO ONE ever mentioning it to her, especially nowadays where I feel like we are much more conscious of it. I also hated the third act conflict so much. I did think that Sybil had really grown as a character and it felt like we lost all that growth at the end.
I've liked this authors books before but ultimately I think this one just wasn't quite for me!
This book started out so outlandish that I was hooked from the jump. I'm always a fan of an interracial couple getting their time to shine, especially one's that do not conform to "standard beauty conventions". This story featured two folks at different points in their life (they're probably 22+ year olds) who meet by happenstance.
I thought that their initial meeting was plausible BUT what I was not excited for was how much of a backburner the major plot mover took to other things throughout the story. The main male character, whose a baker for now but has his eye on medical school was not a nice person to our main female character, a girl just trying to figure out her place in the world and how to stand up for her self. They were completely different personalities, both I'm very familiar with, so I thought the depiction of, and the reactions from people around the main female character were also plausible.
The book immediately has the main male character being obsessed with the female main character after a "sneaky" link in his place of employment. Their banter was cheesy but funny. Overall I had high hopes for the book but the more it went I was not seeing the growth I thought I should have and for the most part I don't see why the main male character would have ever talked to her again.
Adult | Rated R for spice
This story was sprinkled with cuteness and a whole lot of luck!
Sybil Sweet is lost in the world. Her family doesn’t take her seriously, she’s often the one her friends laugh at, and her career is nonexistent. When she’s fired from her job, she decides to drunkenly buy a lottery ticket on a whim. That same night, she stumbles into Joe’s Donuts. Kieran Anderson has been managing Joe’s since his grandfather’s stroke, putting medical school on pause. When he meets Sybil that night, sparks immediately fly. On her way out the door of the bakery, however, she accidentally leaves her lottery ticket behind. The ticket, it turns out, is a winner, and Kieran’s attempt to return it to Sybil goes viral. The two hatch a fake dating plan to help Joe’s Donuts and to keep Sybil’s family off her back. But as the fake dating progresses, the “dates” start to feel much less fake and a whole lot more real.
It took me a little while to get in to this, but I ended up really enjoying it! Firstly, I love the cover! I found myself repeatedly going back to it while reading to find all the little hidden details. Secondly, I loved the progression of Sybil’s relationship with her family. It was so heartwarming to see her family come to love and respect her for who she was (not who they wanted her to be). I also loved Grandpa Joe and Tom’s characters!
I will admit that the third act of the book was not my favorite, but I did enjoy the very cute grand gesture at the end! This was my second book this year that featured a lottery winning heroine (the other being Best of Luck by Kate Clayborn) and I definitely want to read more!
Preorder or request Just Our Luck from your library in time for its release this upcoming spring.
Thank you to NetGalley and Berkley for the ARC!
3.5 stars I received an ARC from Netgalley. Denise Williams is an author from Iowa and this story takes place in Des Moines which extends the charm of the novel since I’m familiar with DSM. The FMC is a fun hot mess and the MMC is the stoic protective man taking care of everyone around him and sets his goals aside to take care of his grandfathers donut shop. A winning lottery ticket changes the lives of all parties.
JUST OUR LUCK by Denise Williams is the first book I read by the author and I really enjoy it. It had an enjoy premise with the unique plot and the characters were so intriguing.
I appreciated the various representations in the story as well as how the author intertwined important topics like mental health (ex. ADHD) into the story, it was done beautifully. She displayed a realistic view of what one goes through everyday with ADHD.
I really enjoyed the romance between the two characters, seeing how their relationship progressed and deepened as the story went on. Despite being complete opposites they have a connection and their chemistry was so sweet and adorable.
I’m excited to read more of the authors work
Thank you Netgalley and Berkley for this digital arc
This was adorable! Anytime we have main characters who deserve happiness and seem like good people - I'm INTO it!! Our main characters are down on their luck - but they're both truly such generous and loving souls that they were easy to love and want to be together. This is one of those that I call a 'bathtub' read - and it will definitely be relaxing because none of it is too heavy.
If you're down on your luck or having a hard time getting things to go right for you no matter how hard you work - this will be a heartwarming read!
**Thank you to Berkley for the advanced reader copy. I received this book for free, but all thoughts are my own. – SLR 🖤
Engaging and escapist. A recommended purchase for collections where contemporary romance is popular.
I was super excited to read this one because I am a big Denise Williams fan and the premise sounded so interesting! While I really enjoyed the premise and earlier parts of the story, I did struggle a bit with feeling like the resolution was satisfying.
We see Sybil struggle throughout the story with "adulting". This is something I really sympathize with because I often find there are a lot of things no one taught me. However, I feel like it was a bit extreme in her case. She makes mistakes that hurt people and I felt like she needed to do some learning and growing before she was ready for a relationship. Kiran also had some figuring out of his goals to do and I wish we had seen more of that growth on page.
At the end of the day, I enjoyed parts of this story but don't know that I would recommend it. It is a quick read and has some great parts but it wasn't one where I really felt the story was over.
I typically love Denise Williams books, but this one was not my favorite. Overall, I think that there was something missing in the story. I couldn't connect with the characters, and the last 10% of the book ruined my enjoyment of it. The ending really didn't sit right with me, and because of this, I didn't really enjoy the book.
I liked the idea of winning the lottery and it changing your life, but I don't feel like it was executed well.