Naina’s character is far from perfect, but very relatable. I appreciate a protagonist who acknowledges their shortcomings and is willing to face them in order to be better. It’s a weird feeling judging a character but knowing deep down you’re extremely similar. I think Barath did a great job in showcasing grief and trauma and how it affects us in forming relationships with people. Especially how we try our damndest to protect ourselves from getting hurt again.

I received an ARC copy from NetGalley and 831 Stories in exchange for an honest review.

The third 831 Stories novella, which comes out in January, is COMEDIC TIMING by Upasna Barath. The story of a young woman who has just moved to NYC from Chicago following a breakup, this novella is short, sweet, and delicious. Naina just broke up with her girlfriend of 5 years, and it was her first relationship. When she gets to NYC, she meets David, a friend of a friend, and begins to have confusing feelings for him. She has never been with a man before, but she can't deny the chemistry. As they form a friendship, feelings begin to change slowly and the slow burn begins.

I felt like the writing was very true to life. I could see this being thinly veiled autofiction. I felt for Naina, especially when David leaves for a trip for 2 weeks after their relationship intensifies and things go off the rails. I also felt for Naina as she described the horrors of having a bad boss in a new job, and dealing with roommate drama in a new city. It's a great novella, but I didn't love it as much as the first two 831 Stories to be honest. I wanted a little more from the plot but I did like the chemistry between Naina and David and would def read more from Barath in the future.