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I have to say, This Princess Kills Monsters is an absolute gem of a read. From the very first page, I was hooked by its sharp wit and refreshing twist on classic fairy tale tropes. Ry Herman manages to blend humor, heart, and action into a story that feels both timeless and modern.

Melilot, the protagonist, is a delight. She's self-deprecating, relatable, and far from your typical "chosen one." Her magical talent may be hilariously useless, but her determination to survive in a world that constantly underestimates her is what makes her so endearing. Watching her navigate monstrous threats, political schemes, and her own tangled feelings had me rooting for her every step of the way.

The supporting cast is just as delightful. The twelve masked huntsmen are both mysterious and oddly charming, and the talking lion—well, I won’t spoil it, but their presence adds a whole other layer of bizarre hilarity. The book also does a wonderful job exploring themes of identity, love, and self-worth without ever feeling preachy.

What I loved most is how this story embraces the absurdity of fairy tales while also turning their clichés on their heads. It’s a satire, but it’s also a love letter to the genre, full of unexpected twists, laugh-out-loud moments, and surprisingly tender scenes.

If you’re a fan of fairy tale retellings with a feminist edge, laugh-out-loud humor, and a protagonist who’s both flawed and fabulous, this book is a must-read. It’s a whirlwind of monsters, masked heroes, and messy emotions that I didn’t want to end. Ry Herman has created something truly magical here.

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A really charming, funny retelling of the Twelve Huntsmen! Melilot is an engaging protagonist, clever and witty, and I loved rooting for her. Herman's use of fairy tales was incredibly effective. The romance was very sweet, I loved the family elements, and it was just an overall good time.

I really only had one issue, and it was a pacing/story choice in the middle; but overall it didn't affect my enjoyment of the book.

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This delightful retelling of classic fairy tale was a great read! Drawing in from several stories while blending them into a cohesive narrative and with a twist was something new and old. Set in a queernormative world our badass FMC is sent away from her difficult blended family in a magical kingdom to a limited magical kingdom with a patriarchal society.

The characters had depth and instantly adored everyone. Even the annoying characters and the villains. The plot was fast paced and a great adventure with twists. I experienced all of the emotions reading it and had relevant moments

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A modern retelling of one of the most bizarre Brothers Grimm fairy tales “The Twelve Huntsmen." This book uses that tale’s jilted, trouser-wearing fiancé, her eleven identical crossdressing doppelgangers, a talking lion, and, of course, the princess to explore queer identity, family trauma, and self-worth.

It's laugh out loud funny that grabbed me from the first pages and left me knowing this is one of the best fairy tale books I've read in a long time. It's so hard to find something to make you laugh and cry all while sharing a gentle message of fun and inclusion. This Princess Kills Monsters is full of action and sly humor, but with more focus on women, romance, and queer characters. It has the fairy tale vibe and feminist themes of Nettle and Bone by T. Kingfisher and Spinning Silver by Naomi Novak, but never lets go of its sense of whimsy.

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Princess Melilot is the stepdaughter of an all-powerful sorceress queen. One who dictates every single minute of not just Melilot's life but her step and half-sister's as well. She sends them off on ridiculous quests to track down dangerous magical artifacts, which has killed her older sister once. Melilot knows that to her stepmom no though is basically asking to be killed, so when she orders Melilot to marry thr new king of a new by country Melilot knows she has absolutely no choice, and of course in order to marry this king she'll have to travel through a forest that has been rumored to have strange and deadly creatures for years. Her trip is uneventful until one day a horrifying group of creatures attacks her carriage killing her guards and almost ending her life, except a group of masked men emerge from the forest telling her they are her future husband's huntsmen. As they guide her to her future home, Melilot knows that the attack on her was no coincidence and realizes these men may very well be handing her off to someone who wants her dead. Knowing she can trust no one Melilot follows the Hunstmen into the kingdom she is meant to rule and discovers that her future husband has been less than honest, he didn't need a bride, he needed a savior because the Kingdom of Tailliz is under attack and Melilot is 100% sure she is not strong enough to save them.

Full disclosure I didn't even read the synopsis of this one, I took one look at the cover and the title and knew this was the book for me. So imagine my utter delight when it ended up being an absolutely wonderful retelling Queer retelling of a Grimm's fairy tale. I was expecting something fun for sure, but Herman went above and beyond any expectation I had!

Now, I say Queer but I really want to stress that this is an absolutely wonderfully inclusive story that focuses on it not just being normal for a Princess to marry another Princess but the joy found in that being considered normal in the world. And while the Tailiz Kingdom is exceedingly backward (we'll get to that), the values and beliefs Melilot grew up with make this seem like a mountain easily conquered. The fact that Sam, Melilot's love interest is Transgender was just the icing on the cake on terms of how inclusive this was. Even though I read a ton of Queer positive books, it is still few and far between where you've got a character that is Transgender who is not only close to the MC, is their love interest. And while there is a conversation about his parents not accepting him when he first came out, it is just a side note. Herman just wonderfully focuses on the positive and demonstrates beautifully that you can have a world where it is just *normal* for Queer characters to exist and be worried about things normally reserved for straight characters, like whether or not your wife knows how much you care for her.

The characters in this are wonderfully done as well. Melilot, as the MC, is relatable to the point that I know what her reactions were going to be to certain situations because that's exactly how I would have reacted; with a crap ton of sarcasm to cover of the fact that I'm afraid to say what I'm really feeling. Her relationship with her sisters especially is oddly comforting because I think every person with siblings has felt the same way she does about hers. Especially in a blended family like this, I've listened to my own nieces and nephews complain about these same feelings of inadequacy due to being the "step child." Her personal growth is really well done as well. Writing a coming of age story like this can easily turn from a healthy conversation recognizing your own and your family's mistakes to an extremely toxic situation if not handled right, and Herman avoids doing that beautifully. Especially with Melilot's relationship with her stepmom. I was so afraid they would have just had Melilot say "I get it you're under a ton of pressure and even though I was just a kid I should have figured that out" as this is common in these types of stories. They did not, and that in itself is glorious.

The other thing I really enjoyed about this is how Tailliz being just ass backward is handled. There's a talking lion, he is the keeper of traditions and he wrote a book about it. A lot of these traditions oppress women. I'm just saying you can not convince me that the lion and the book aren't a shot at Christianity. We'll I supposed Herman could since they wrote it, but I'd rather this bubble not be burst as it's just brilliant if it is. So I'm just going to happily die on this hill if need be.

Finally, and this is probably the most important part, this is laugh out loud funny. And to be honest with a title like this, I feel like that's a give in, but this was freaking hilarious. I woke my husband up, laughing at least three times. Like if you don't care about all the rest of this, then at the very least, you should read it for the laughs.


Overall, if you are looking for an inclusive coming of age story that celebrates normalizing Queer characters, this is most definitely the book for you. And I know these are two extremely different themed books, but I am 99.9% sure that if you enjoyed Saint Death's Daughter, you'll love this as well. It evokes that same, just happy emotion while dealing with some tough topics surrounding familial relationships.

As always, thanks to NetGalley and Random House Publishing Group for the eArc!

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Thank you to NetGalley and Random House Publishing Group for providing this book, with my honest review below.

First, this cover just grabbed me. It is GORGEOUS! Then I read that it was a new take on a Grimm's fairytale. That made it a must read, as my father used to read us Grimms fairytales on the couch every night. 

Melilot gets along with her step sister and half sister well enough, but feels like she’s in competition with them because of her evil stepmother. Her stepmother sends her on quest after quest for seemingly no reason, and she usually ends up needing to be rescued by her more magically talented sisters. Her current mission, to marry the king of a kingdom she’s never been to, has her developing feelings for one of his huntsmen and his sister. 

I loved this book! It had me laughing out loud, squealing, and wondering if I was picking up on more fairytale references than other readers might. I think everyone can relate to Melilot in some ways. I’m so glad she got some closure and a happy ending, but it was also left open for more. This way definitely a fun and feel good story.

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Thank you to NetGalley and Random House for the e-ARC of This Princess Kills Monsters!
4 / 5 ⭐

This Princess Kills Monsters is a whimsical, queer fairytale mashup. The main character - Melilot - is the middle princess of three and the least magically talented; her life has been a series of difficult quests set by the evil queen of the realm, her stepmother. The most recent of these is an arranged marriage, but she’ll find more than a husband in her new kingdom. TPKM was such an enjoyable read; it doesn’t take itself too seriously and leans into and plays with fairytale tropes in both expected and unexpected ways. Would recommend!

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Thank you to NetGalley and Random House Publishing Group - Random House | Dial Press Trade Paperback for allowing me to read this book!

I loved the humor and twisted fairytale aspect of it, very T. Kingfisher. The queerness in it was spectacular, and the family!!! The family aspect!!! In how important it was for both the protag and her companions. She loves her sisters, an their relationship with the queen (her stepmother, their mother) is....
well. more than complicated.
and i am a fucking sucker for that because i'm a softie.

Doe she treat them right? no. is she ignoring their boundaries, and actively endangering them? Yes. Does she care? *Spoilers*, but I loved the familial discussions at the end, where she's looking at her family looking at each other with newer eyes. Her sisters, after all, are perfect, and she's just the stepchild, with the weakest magic and the least power.

Everyone in here felt rounded, real, and I'd love to read more in this world!

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This Princess Kills Monsters is multiple stories rolled into one wonderful adventure. You have Princess Melilot and her sisters being sent off by their mother to complete various quests until Princess Melilot is sent off to marry a king. It is this task that sets off the real adventure and journey where there are a variety of creatures, her fiancee, her fiancee's sister, and twelve very similar looking huntsmen.

What Ry Herman does with this story is so magical and I am in awe. As an English teacher, I adored the structure and set up. The diction is amazing and the overall tone? It's just so good! There was never a dull moment in this beautiful callback to the fairytale "The Twelve Huntsmen" and all the other fairy tales. I'm actually sad I read through to the end but I'm also very excited and happy to have had the opportunity to do so because in my time with this novel, I was a kid again. I was a young girl just enjoying her fairy tales. Like I said, never a dull moment.

If this is something that you're interested in and you want a bit of an escape, I highly recommend you pick this up when it comes out! I am super excited and cannot wait for it come out in June 2025.

Thank you to NetGalley, Random House, and Dial Press Trade Paperback for gifting me the opportunity to read this ARC! All opinions are my own.

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Thank you to Netgalley and Random House for sending me this ARC! All opinions are my own.

This Princess Kills Monsters is a whimsical, light-hearted jaunt through a magical world full to bursting with every fairy tale creature and trope you can think of. We've got dragons, trolls, fairies, talking animals, and people with weird magical powers to name a few. I'm pretty sure there was even a Lord of the Rings reference at one point.

I loved the humor in this book, I was giggling to myself every few pages at least. It has a goofy whimsical flavor to it that might not work for everyone, but it absolutely did for me. Special shout out to my favorite character, Melilot's sister in law Gnoflwhogir. She's a tall buff warrior fairy princess with a thirst for bloodshed and chaos and I loved her. Tbh I think Jonquil and Gnoflwhogir deserve their own novella at least. I found them so interesting and compelling even with the small amount of page time they got here.

I also enjoyed Melilot's dynamic with her sisters and their spouses. It was really sweet and heartwarming seeing how much love they had for one another even when they didn't 100% understand each other.

Now as for the romance, it was cute and did get one audible "awww" out of me, but overall I found it fairly underwhelming. I admit I could be being a little hard on it because my expectations were so different. Based on the book summary, I was expecting a juicy and emotional bisexual love triangle. I was so excited to see Melilot wrestle between her duties as a princess engaged to the king, and her growing feelings for one of the huntsmen AND the king's sister. Like omg the drama??? I was so ready to eat it up. But sadly for me, that did not happen here. It's pretty clear from the get go who Melilot actually has feelings for, and she doesn't really do any wrestling with those feelings. Which isn't a bad thing, like I said the romance we get here is serviceably sweet. But it just wasn't what I was expecting and hoping for.

I also found the villain reveal to be a bit disappointing and not terribly interesting. By the end I was feeling lukewarm about the plot in general.

But that said, I still really enjoyed this. Truly not many books have made me laugh as much as this one did. So if you're looking to escape reality for a bit and have a fun goofy fairy tale time then definitely give this a try!

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This Princess Kills Monsters is an irreverent fairy tale in the same vein as The Enchanted forest chronicles. It is fun quick read. The FMC has a very distinct voice that is fleshed out as the story goes on. She is a compelling heroine that makes this a joy to read.

I do wish there were less characters in the story. It is hard to tell them apart sometimes or which is talking. I like the relationship between the sister's. They could have easily been enemies but they were friends and wanted to help each other.

The novel takes several fairytales into one story. The plot goes along quickly and the author packs much action in every page. This is a magical book about personal growth, inner strength, and finding your own love.

If you want a story full of adventure and magic this is the book for you. This is a great mix of The Princess Bride and The Enchanted Forest Chronicles. I highly recommend this book. Thank you to Net Galley and Random House Publishing for providing an eARC for a honest review

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What a fun and lovely read!! Thank you to the publisher for the ARC. Not only was the cover captivating but the contents were surely enthralling.

We start with someone we’ve seen before ‘is this a retelling of sorts?’ But the authors voice is strong and unique which already gave it extra points on my end when compared to other retelling novels. However… this is not a retelling at all- the plot twists feel comedic and poignant. It’s funny and light hearted in very smart ways. To me, it never goes too far to the point that I can’t take things seriously when they deserve my attention. The narration is so, so good. It was refreshing to read someone with such a unique voice and writing style!

I have to admit- I’m 80% into this book but have made the conscious choice to perhaps leave it there so I can reread when it comes out in print.

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I may be biased because I am a sucker for a fairy tale story that isn’t a cookie-cutter retelling (think Princess Bride or even Shrek- hold for laughter but it’s a great example).
So much thought went into the world building of this story and it came across in the writing. The characters were well thought out and Melilot was a great main character.
Overall, I had an AMAZING experience reading this book, it was so much fun and I will definitely be picking up more by this author!

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A very fun, irreverent fairy tale romp!

The heroine is the single POV, and she has a very distinct voice and fleshed out character. I've read the pov of tons of fantasy FMCs, and this one is one of the best. The FMC is most definitely a young adult, but she's a funny and compelling main character with a satisfying growth arc. The queer romance was a small part of the story but is sweet and the relatively little focus on the romance lets the FMC shine on her own accord. I appreciated the family elements, especially the step family, and was very endeared to many of the characters.

The beginning was a little hard for me to get into, but, once the story picked up, it moved quickly. There was sometimes just too much going on for me to follow in the action scenes, but this is only because Herman is able to pack a lot of creative details into every bit of the story. You don't have to be super familiar with Grimm fairy tales to enjoy this, but it does make all the references more fun.

If you like twists on fairy tales and Princess Bride-like humor, you'll really enjoy this. The author did a great job, and I'll be interested in her other books.

Thank you, Random House Publishing, for the arc!

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This Princess Kills Monsters is an enchanting feminist retelling of the Grimm Brothers' The Twelve Huntsmen, not that it exactly sticks to only one fairy tale, mind you … this book borrows bits and pieces from allllll the stories. It's heartwarming and hilarious and action-packed, and I loved pretty much every moment of it. It is fairly heavy on the romance which isn't normally my thing, but overall the lovey-dovey stuff isn't too distracting and takes a backseat to the sorcery and saving the kingdom bits.

And there is a whole lot of sorcery. There are multiple sorceresses doing sorceress-y things. I mean, people get turned into geese, you guys. And would any fairy tale be complete without an enchanted spinning wheel??

And the characters? Fantastic. Melilot is a witty and likeable protagonist, but in my opinion Gnoflwhogil, Meliot's brave and slightly … aggressive fairy sister-in-law, is absolutely delightful and the real MVP of this book. For some reason she reminds me of Anya from Buffy the Vampire Slayer (or a considerably-more-violent version of Anya, anyway), and Anya was my very favorite character from Buffy so I guess I have a type? Even the villains are multifaceted and not entirely hateable, and, I mean, the reasonings behind their misdeeds aren't entirely without merit, so …

Oh, and there's a dragon. And spider wolves. And grumpy enchanted mirrors. And an epic battle à la the Battle of Winterfell. And also I'm probably going to get so many hate comments from Game of Thrones fans regarding that comparison, but whatever.

So, yeah. Fantastic book. Definitely read it if you're into feminist fairy tales with humor and heart and sorcery of all sorts. My rating: 4.55 stars, rounded up.

Many thanks to NetGalley and The Dial Press for providing me with an advance copy of this book to review. Its expected publication date is June 17, 2025.

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For Princess Melilot life threatening danger is just apart of everyday life. The step daughter to a powerful sorceress Queen who likes to send her daughters on quests filled with peril on a constant basis. However she has just been given her worst assignment yet, marry the new king of a neighbouring kingdom. But someone doesn’t want the wedding to happen and is willing to end Melilot’s life to ensure it doesn’t. With twelve eerily similar huntsmen, one who has caught her eye (an entirely unhelpful complication for the kings fiancee to have) , and the kings sister (who Meiliot is also finding extremely attractive) on the case and at her back she might just have a chance to save her new home.
This book is based on the fairytale The Twelve Huntsman and has nods and references to countless beloved fairytales. I cannot express how much fun I had reading this book. I loved the witty and sarcastic writing style. I loved how Ry Herman pokes fun at while also paying homage to fairy tales, especially some of the more absurd and abstract ones. This was a quick read for me because I refused to put it down. The only downside is if this sounds like your kind of book it won’t be released until June 17, 2025, but it is well worth the wait.
Thank you so much to @thedialpress and @netgalley for letting me review this fabulous book.
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If you haven’t read The Grimm’s Brothers Fairytale, The Twelve Huntsmen, you should read it first then jump into Herman’s book. The story focuses on the main character, a sort of sorceress princess, Melilot, from the mountain kingdom, Skalla. This princess and her two sisters are regularly sent on magical quests to search for odds and ends, such as: a dragon’s toenail or finding a way to plow a field with teeth and complete these tasks for their mother/Melilot’s stepmother, the evil sorceress queen of Skalla. The evil queen continuously sends her daughters on these crazy scheming quests, which ultimately leads to one more task for Melilot: she must leave their home in Skalla, travel to a faraway kingdom, and marry a king she has never met.
Overall, some of my favorite parts of this engaging story was the wonderful vocabulary that had me searching the dictionary for words like “bycocket”. I thought the author’s inceptive use of storytelling within this book was a neat way to broaden the characters backstories out. Despite liking the story within a story, I did think that some of the huntsmen in the story could have been fleshed out a bit more and not been so two-dimensional. Another kind of letdown was not being able to delve into the storybook world as much due to what I felt was a lack of descriptions of the landscapes and architecture.
This was a whirlwind of a story that kept you constantly guessing what would happen next. This Princess Kills Monsters was not only hilarious, whimsical and full of magical creatures and objects, but was nostalgic with its world based around the fairytales that we all grew up reading. It is worth the read!

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Surprisingly weird, deeply funny, and entertaining from the first page to the last. My only complaint was that the villain was a little lackluster and didn’t have much depth. Otherwise, this is a gem.

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This book was truly a treat to read! It's a melting pot of so many fairytale stories that most of us have grown up hearing, reading, etc. The story is seen through the eyes of Melilot, a young sorceress who only has one meager magical talent.
She is told she is to wed a King in another land and sets out!
Things go awry before she can arrive safely at the castle! I could not put this book down! It had me giggling all throughout!

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This book was so good! I loved the idea of retelling a fairytale from a first person point of view. The off hand mentions of other classic fairytales and folklore really added to the story and made for fun Easter eggs. A princess is sent on seemingly impossible quests by her evil stepmother only to be saved by her sisters. The next demand is that she is to marry a man in another kingdom. Before she reaches the kingdom, she is met with magically enhanced creatures and twelve identical huntsmen. She then hides her identity in order to gain information about her new groom which ends up leading her into many predicaments. Soon she is battling a mysterious evil, hidden identities and her own personal misconceptions. The book is really a compelling story of personal growth, love, and inner strength. The story includes beautiful queer representation while also having an enticing magical element. I really enjoyed it and fell in love with many of the characters while also understanding their flaws.

I had some trouble at times visualising what was happening in the book but that could be due to the magical element and me needing to use my imagination more. I think the pacing was done well and can’t wait for it to come out next year!

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