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Aemyra and her brother grown up as the children of a town healer and blacksmith but are actually hiding a secret claim to the thrown. McBride provides you with loss, passion, the dangers of religion, and a touch of spice. I enjoyed the dragons and hope for more in book 2.

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“Aemyra had been forged in fire, but a queen would rise from the ashes.”
— thank you to netgalley and the publishers for the arc! please check tws before reading!!
🔥 enemies to lovers
🗡️ many dagger to throat moments
🔥 feminine rage
🗡️ marriage of (in)convenience
🔥 lots of “my wife”
i don’t really know what to say about this book! i liked it at times and then i didn’t and just have mixed feelings overall! the beginning was filled with so much world building that i feel like could’ve been explained better, i found it so confusing!! after reading more it started making more sense but it still wasn’t so enjoyable at the start!
i don’t know what to think of the fmc; i feel like the book made her out to be this strong and powerful fmc which at times she was but i feel like she barely accomplished anything if that makes sense? all her plans kept going to shit and i was just asking myself when something would change! i kept rooting for her to win and sadly it never happened :(
i wish we got more or fiorean, his character was okay and a bit bland but there was literally nothing more!
now my favorite thing about this book would definitely be the enemies to lovers! i think it was done well and i enjoyed the tension and hate between the characters!
i also wish there was more dragons!! i absolutely loved the authors take on bonds and would’ve loved to see more of it!
the ending i saw coming because sadly i saw a review with a slight spoiler hinting at it and i honestly would’ve been completely oblivious had i not seen that! THAT BEING SAID… (i think) i will be continuing this series!

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the opportunity to read this as an ARC. Unfortunately I have been struggling to read this book for over a few weeks now. It starts off well, but the main character irks me and I can’t seem to want to continue. I may come back to this, but it’s a dnf for me.

4 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ / 5 stars
Love dragons? And TWINS siblings? Pick this book up! Yeah, like now, now.
Here the MFC EARNS her dragon, and it was no easy task. The main reason i picked up this book is because (as you can see) of the dragons.
I loved the interactions between the siblings and their family. The writing is amazing and very unique. Some PLOT TWISTS! Loved it!
At first however, it was hard to get into (just like any other fantasy world) and definitely felt like Aemyra had a lot of hatred in her heart towards males. Her reason for it at the beginning was not sufficient. Her personality was something that it took me a while to get used to. I mean, even to her brother she was like that.
I understand her wanting to have a dragon (I mean, who wouldn’t?) and the way she earned it? Wow, was not expecting that.
Also, keep in mind this is a new fantasy world so there will be lots, LOTS of character and places names that will be somewhat confusing. Throughout the book, I had to keep going back and forth to the map because I could not memorize the continents and people. But then again, maybe it is just me.
Overall, it was definitely a difficult read but readers will get used to the plot and setting. Thanks for the ARC!

I am going to take a break from this, and come back around to it in a week or two because I just could not get into this.
I can't quite put a finger on it, but something about the main character just irked me-I did not like her personality and couldn't get very far into this at all. I'm going to try again in a bit and then update my review - I don't want to post any reviews on sites yet until I give it another go.

I really did enjoy the twists and turns in this one.
It has a nice dense magical system, Duileach's are blessed by the Goddess. And there are Duileach for different elements. In recent decades an oppressive anti magic religion, the True Religion, the 'chosen' have infiltrated the nearby countries drudging up anti magic sentiment gaining power. A formerly matriarchal country, Clan Daercathian was led by queens who were all fire duileach, bonded to great dragons, but no female heirs have been born in a century. Males have taken over the crown and their magic has been waining, dragons failing to thrive, people fearing a curse on the country and their people, of Tir Teine. They wait for a true queen to be born again.
Aemyra is the first to be born. Raised in hiding with her twin brother Adrian, they're from a branch family, cousins to the current rulers. Raised by a Healer and a Blacksmith, they aren't exactly what you'd call a typical Princess and Prince. They were still tutored to take up the roles expected of them in secret by their father who visits in secret when he could.
Waiting for the current king to die, Aemyra is just waiting to stage her coup and reveal herself as the True Queen. She's brash, bisexual, blacksmith and healer, she doesn't take crap from anyone. But she has to be careful, keep her hair constantly covered, and try not to reveal the vast amount of power she has. Adrian was born without power, he's not a Duileach- but a very talented swordsman and blacksmith as well. They always knew their lives would change.
She finds herself in a precarious situation when things don't exactly go as planned, knowing who she can truly trust may just cost her everything. It's an enemies to lovers to enemies again wild ride and it's a really good one! It's got dragons, stabbing as flirting, fighting, court intrigue, and a revolution to come.

Okay, so this book seems to have some pretty poor reviews. Many say it feels similar to a Game of Thrones book or fanfic, I however really enjoyed this book! It took about 20-30% to really get going but by the end I was hooked and I can’t wait for the rest of the series to drop! This book does have a vibe like it wasn’t thoroughly edited and it could have used a heavier hand with the editing so fingers crossed they do that before it hits the shelves. The entire first part is name dropping and trying to build this world but without much explanation so it doesn’t make sense or pull you into the story. You have to ignore the first 20-30% and then it’s fine. The main character does act young and impetuous but it works for this book. The true test will be if I can remember anything about this book by the time the next one comes out!
Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher/author for the ARC in exchange for my honest review.

I tried my best to trudge through this book, but frankly my dislike for Aemyra just made this story a no for me. The romance was half baked, though I always love bi/pan rep, and her energy towards other women drove me insane. I definitely can see where McBride pulled from House of the Dragon and the fight scenes were very interesting. I was hoping this would fill a gap left in my post Fourth Wing reading, and it truly felt like a chore to read.

I really tried to enjoy it but I just couldn't . All the characters were insufferable more especially the mmc. I was so close to ending it because of the way he acted towards to fmc. The book focused more on the spice instead of the development of their relationship. The synopsis looked promising but I fear this is a no for me
Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for this arc. The Arc was provided in exchange for my honest review.

I felt that the FMC was a bit hard to read at times (so vengeful and wishing death on everyone one minute, and the next saying that she would rule in peace is just one example). I also felt like she was a straight-up man hater and it didn't read as a strong feminist (which is what I'm assuming the author is going for). I liked the plot a lot however and felt like it was GoT meets Vikings. I am and will continue to read this series, I hope that Aemerya becomes a bit more palatable in book 2.
I almost felt like we needed 1 more instance of them softening towards each other before they initially kiss, because I'm truly believing they HATE each other. But again Fieoran was softening and we could see that. But overall I liked that they actually had tried to kill each other first- no fake enemies to lovers here!

I will not be posting this review to Goodreads. I will only be posting my rating of one star.
Random House reached out to me via NetGalley and sent me this book in exchange for an early review. I did not request to read the book.
At a glance, I was very excited to read A Fate Forged In Fire, as it was marketed as a Celtic romantasy, with dragon bonds and a queen in hiding. However, this book did not deliver, despite the ingredients list including some of my favorite tropes.
From the very first page we had more focus on sex, ego, and virtue than story line, and the story line very much suffered for it. I felt thrown into a world whose tale started long ago, and I was unable to catch up, like a child who sits in on story time at the half way mark and misses all the world building. I had no skin in the game. I just didn’t know enough about this world or its characters to care. It was hard to look over the poor writing and annoying characters. So much of the story felt forced and the story structure and arc felt, awkward.
The plot (outside of the romance) of the story entirely revolves around a religious war. If that’s your thing, you may enjoy this, but for me, it was a hard pass. It wasn’t a pass, necessarily for the material, but for the context and execution.
Overall, I did not feel the story delivered what was promised by marketing. The ingredients were there, the execution in my opinion, was not.

First I would like to thank Random House ,Hazel Mcbride,NetGalley for lettitng me read this E-ARC for an honest review! I loved everything about this novel!! It has fantastic world building inspierd by Celtic Religion, a Badass main character who will stop at nothing to gain thier rightful place as Queen, A True Enemies to Lovers trope done right, intriguing politics, and Dragons ! I would recommend this novel to anyone who enjoyes Enemies to lovers, badass Main Charaters and House of the Dragon! Though I'm limited to five stars i would give it ten if possible!

Hazel McBride truly deserves praise for giving us something so unique. I won't lie, I had just come off of Onyx Storm when I started this book and I was burnt out on dragon bonds and enemies to lovers romance. But this book, *happy feet kicking in the air*, it was like diving into 68 degree pool on a 105 degree day. While bonding with a dragon plays a crucial role in the story and Aemyra's character development, the book doesn't overindulge in endless sassy exchanges between her and the dragon. In fact, the dragons’ appearances are impactful and influential without ever overshadowing the main plot.
As a reader in my late twenties, it was exhilarating to have a female protagonist around my age rather than the usual 16- to 21-year-old lead. Aemyra’s journey felt more grounded and relatable, adding an extra layer of depth to her character development.
Now, let’s talk about Fioran. Can I just say how much I adored the true enemies-to-lovers dynamic here? His character isn’t just a pretty face with a chiseled body—THANK YOU! The tension between them is woven into the dialogue and their actions, not just his physical presence. There are no repetitive descriptions like "his eyes darkened," or "his muscles rippled," or "Gods, he was beautiful when he was murderous." Instead, you feel the tension in the blades, in their words, and in the intense back-and-forth, in the subtle body language. You root for them, and it’s so satisfying to see the relationship unfold in a way that feels natural, not forced.
The world-building was just as impressive. It was so well-researched, and the lore of the world was explained in a way that I never felt lost or confused—nor did I feel like I needed to have done a deep dive into Celtic mythology to understand it. The balance between rich storytelling and accessibility was chef’s kiss.
Speaking of chef’s kiss—those plot twists at the end? Perfection. I pre-ordered the second I finished and can’t believe I have to wait for the official release—let alone another year for book two. It’s going to be a long wait, but if this book is any indication, it’ll be more than worth it.
Move over Fourth Wing, A Fate Forged in Fire is taking flight, and in my personal opinion, it just might be the better beast.

As all first books in a fantasy series, the world building was tedious to get through. That being said once I got through that the story was amazing. The only complaint I had while reading was that this is an ARC read and I'll have to wait even longer for the second book.
Tir Tiene hasn't had a queen in ages and has crumbled under the rule of kings that have allowed the True Religion to take over the land. When the current king dies, Aemyra finally sees her chance to reclaim the throne for her family. She is the first daughter born to her clan and with her fire blessed magic she announces herself the Queen.
Now she is thrown into a world of politics and on the brink of war with the current royal family as well as the True Religion who seems to have a hold on them. But her greatest adversary is Prince Fiorean. She has to fight off his opposition to her rightful throne, and her growing attraction to him. As she gets deeper into his corrupt family, she discovers that they have more in common and might be fighting for the same thing. As the two of them share an unlikely alliance, will they be able to finally bring peace to Tir Tiene or will their plans blow up in a way they never saw coming.
Ending on a cliff hanger has me begging to read the second book as soon as possible.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for this book.
It is so, so good. Read it! You will never be the same.
Enjoyed every chapter. It kept getting better and better.
Highly recommend.

Thank you! Netgalley and Delray for my Earc🔥
A story begins long ago where a world is being colonized and brainwashed into being this sexist cult…and whos to save them well that would be the only living breathing dragon queen left in existence!!
I really enjoyed this book it gave me Reign vibes wirh the plotting and scheming of 2 sides but a hatred for the enemies prince turns into some love!! Also gave game of throne with everyone fighting for the throne and all denying claim to Aemyra the rightful ruler that had been hiding right under everyones noses…
I think the political intrigue was amazing! You really take a step behind the scenes of what rulers decide a lot books have a lot of action which i thoroughly enjoy but this explains it more. You also get to experience dragons in this world and i love nothing more than reading about dragons and how they came to pass
I think this is a great book that has a steady pace its not super fast but you really do get to understand the world better even without all the action. There is action its more towards the very beginning and the very end! Im sure we will see a lot more from book 2 about the lovers that are possible enemies and so many political conflicts….i hope Aemyra is victorious she was my absolute fave character!
I suggest this to all fantasy girlies especially if you have watched Reign im currently doing a rewatch ♥️

For fans of:
- A Fate Inked in Blood
- BBC's Merlin
- Fourth Wing
This book follows Aemyra through her journey to free her people and fight back against a malignant religious cult making its way to take over her homeland. Blessed by fire, it is her duty to bond to a dragon to reach her full elemental potential and step into her duty as queen.
This book includes:
- A hidden queen
- dragons, phoenixes, chimeras, and more
- ancestral enemies
- religious extremism
- misogyny in religion
- a mad king
- elemental powers
- soft magic system
- scarred and protective MMC
- Scottish inspired world
This book has a lot of great elements. I love the idea of individuals bonding with magical creatures as a way to symbiotically enhance each others supernatural abilities. The ethnic/religious conflict is very compelling, and I enjoyed the characters once I got into the book. Sadly, I had an issue with the pacing throughout this book. The first half was very slow and felt like it dragged on, whereas the second half felt forced and rushed. The chemistry between lovers, siblings, and friends all felt stilted, and I never found myself truly rooting for Aemyra. Fiorean was interesting enough that I will probably look into book 2 when it comes out, even though he is the irredeemable villain.
This is a little nit-picky, however, I cant STAND the way the author described Aemyra's clothes as satin 50 times in this book. Satin is a modern fabric that is almost always made of plastic. Silk can have a "satin finish" but satin on its own is made of polyester. These details matter when you're writing a fantasy book and it is what takes them from feeling amateur to expert. One use of the word? I would have moved on. But using it to describe her clothes on every occasion? I cannot forgive.
Beyond those criticisms, I do predict that this book will do well on Booktok and will probably become popular with fans of Fourth Wing. I felt like I was supposed to like this one (and honestly I was very close to falling in love with this one in a few parts), but it didn't end up being a great match.
I received this eBook as an ARC in exchange for an honest review. Thank you to NetGalley, Hazel McBride, and Random House Publishing Group for the opportunity to review this book. This review has been posted across my socials under the username @tinynightingales, check out my GoodReads profile https://www.goodreads.com/user/show/62314863
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Overall, A fate forged in fire, is a good first outing for author Hazel McBride.
The start of the book felt slightly slow and tedious. I stuck with it though and am happy to say the tension / action picked up. It is a fairly quick read and the enemies to lovers trope was handeled decently, however, the female lead, Ameyra, was not given enough control in this female lead society.
If not for the spicy romance scenes this would have made a great JF or YA book.
Unfortunately, the characters are not fully developed and the world building needs a bit of work. Hopfully ,these issues will be addessed in future editions .
Thank you to Netgalley and Delacort Press for the ARC of this debute novel.

The last 20 pages really PMO but that’s to be expected when another book is coming
This may become one of the next big enemies to lovers with dragons and I’m here for it!

This was such a captivating story! I loved the banter and protectiveness between the twins. I loved the tension between Aemyra and the prince, truly captivating and had me coming back for more! This is a book I would definitely recommend