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***Thank you to NetGalley & Random House Publishing Group for sending me an arc to read in exchange for an honest review.

I wanted to leave this book five stars so badly because I COULD NOT PUT IT DOWN!!!! It was such a good fast paced novel that it was torture to put it down in order to do life. It is rare for me to wish a book was longer, but this one actually could have used some more length just to better define the world and the terms used. The language I can see being difficult for slower readers to understand. I stopped trying to read the words after the first chapter because I didn’t know what anything meant. I was confusing myself when I didn’t have to. I can honestly see how someone would get confused and give up, so I suggest possibly having a discussion in the beginning of the book about using the Irish words & what they mean instead of the back. Possibly add in a reference guide for people that need to understand every single word.

I really enjoy enemy to lovers, and this one did not disappoint with that. I knew it would happen eventually, but I loved the slow burn to get there. It was so worth it when they finally gave in to their desires. I could not get enough the way he fell immediately for her. Their forced marriage, the way she slowly fell for him…I loved them so much, and I did not expect that ending at all the way it happened. I’m not sure that’s a good thing though because it was painful. I’m hoping the next book fixes that ending because I would hate for their story to end that way.

I honestly liked the FMC badass not being 16, but she sure did act like a little kid throughout most of the book. Dont get me wrong, overall I really loved this story!! I just would have loved it five stars if the FMC was a little bit more badass. As a reader it was exhausting listening to her constantly say “I’m the Queen” and then make ZERO good decisions for her people. Zero. None. She followed what her father wanted or made rash terrible decisions every chance she got. This was exhausting & infuriating. I’m hoping she grows up a little in book two & becomes a stronger independent woman who can rule.

I want to say that I loved the role of the brother princes. One was an asshole while the other only appeared to be an ass around his older brother. I just did not expect that kind of ending from what we learned about Fiorean through the entire story - beginning to end - it almost felt like we didn’t know him at all. Again, I hope I’m wrong here and there is a great explanation coming…

Draevan?! Hated him! A father that abandons his daughter for her own safety magically shows up in time for her to be crowned the Queen?! Suspicious?! No one is looking at him this way except me?! I get that he’s her father, but she is a grown-ass adult QUEEN!!! Put your thinking-cap on for one freaking second girl!!! I badly wanted her to see through him, but again…she acts like a child throughout the story.

Terrea, the Terror was built perfectly. I knew from reading Fourth Wing that our FMC would end up with the biggest dragon that was rumored to be dead. I figured correctly, but I loved how the author made it a challenge for her to bond with. I also love that she’s a female dragon!!! How awesome is that?! I did not love that the dragon knew where she was while she was emprisoned, but she didn’t come looking for her. Their bond was broken by a magic blocker, but she should have came looking…am I wrong?! It seemed unrealistic to me that she would just stay out there away while Aemyra was being held captive…even tortured.

The brutal rape scene was horrific. What the priest did to Aemyra hurt my stomach so badly. I was biting my nails and breathing sharp breaths through my teeth during that scene. Screaming in my head WHERE THE FUCK IS FIOREAN AND TERREA?!?? Like come onnn!!!!! I think this scene needed to be there and so horrific for the readers to be sure 100% that Armyra’s side is the good side. The True Religion are fucking asshole bastards that need to be wiped out!

Overall, this story was impossible to put down. It was so close to five stars for me just because I felt obsessed while reading it, but it still wasn’t perfect perfect to me for reasons listed above. I absolutely loved the story & will look forward to the next book for sure. I’m just really hoping to see some character growth in the next one as well as more of that romantic relationship! It took so long for them to figure out their love, and then they didn’t have enough time together! They need their sexy sexy time together for us readers to witness! Please!!! I’m willing to hear Fiorean out & hope he can redeem himself in the next book. It cannot end this way. I refuse to believe it.

This is my goodreads review.

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I stopped after chapter 4 (11%). The worldbuilding is extremely heavy, and even dialogue feels like it's just delivering worldbuilding and backstory. In chapter 4, our MC watches a play about their history---which is even more worldbuilding and backstory, but we are no longer an active participant, we are just watching the play through the eyes of the MC. I'd guess this will appeal more to fantasy readers than romance readers.

Thank you to NetGalley and Random House for the ARC.

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- [ ] This was a fast paced book and a lot happened in 330 pages! It was a bit hard for me to get into at first as I’m not very familiar with Scottish Gaelic and there was a lot of names/places/words that were complicated. But after I got used to it, it was a fun and wild ride! I love me some dragons and some strong queen energy. The ending irritated me a bit. I know cliffhangers are a thing but um, rude. I’m kind of mad at the MMC but there has to be a good reason for his behaviors that have made me want to punch him in the face…… THIS book doesn’t come out until May 2025…. And I allllready need the next book because I want to know what happens next! Review is up on Goodreads!

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In A Fate Forged in Fire, Hazel McBride delivers a Celtic-inspired fantasy romance that blends dragons, fire magic, and political intrigue. Aemyra, a blacksmith destined to rule, must navigate a treacherous court, overthrow a corrupt regime, and bond with a dragon to claim her rightful place as queen. Along the way, her animosity for the arrogant Prince Fiorean evolves into something far more complex as they forge a reluctant alliance that sparks forbidden desires.

This novel successfully combines some of the most beloved tropes in fantasy romance: a true enemies-to-lovers dynamic, an arranged marriage setup, and a possessive yet protective male lead. The addition of dragons and female rage makes for an exciting, high-stakes backdrop, while the queer representation is a welcome and appreciated inclusion.

The enemies-to-lovers chemistry between Aemyra and Fiorean is a highlight. Their fiery dynamic keeps the tension high, and the progression from reluctant allies to something deeper feels satisfyingly earned. Fiorean’s protectiveness adds depth to his initially cold and arrogant demeanor, while Aemyra’s rage and determination make her a compelling protagonist—though not without flaws.

Unfortunately, these strengths are tempered by some weaknesses. Aemyra’s characterization occasionally falters; while her fiery spirit is admirable, some of her decisions come across as frustrating or inconsistent. Additionally, parts of the story veer into cheesy territory, with overly dramatic dialogue or predictable plot points that undermine the narrative’s intensity.

The ending, while action-packed and twisty, was not something I enjoyed. I wish it took a different turn, especially for a duology, having such a big betrayal at the end of book 1 felt like too much.

Rating: 3/5 stars
Despite its issues, A Fate Forged in Fire is an enjoyable read for fans of enemies-to-lovers romances and dragon-filled fantasies. While it doesn’t fully realize its potential, the strong central romance and unique Celtic-inspired setting make it worth a try—especially for readers who appreciate fiery heroines and protective male leads.

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Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley.

This was one of the VERY BEST books I've read this year, and one that I'm still thinking about a full week after finishing it.

What to expect from this novel?
- the best *genuine* enemies - to - lovers I've seen done; very angsty, true conflicted emotions involved; not at all sappy
- a fiesty, feminist, bi-sexual FMC
- a fierce, intelligent, incredibly sexy MMC who loves the FMC's fire and spirit
- politics and court intrigue
- realistic dialogue
- fast-paced and full of excitement
- the promise of even greater angst to come in the sequel

I am just shy of feral for the sequel to this masterpiece.

Please, Ms. McBride, have mercy.

Any fans of fantasy, romance, romantasy, DRAGONS, fierce FMC, enemies to lovers, etc. MUST pick this up. This one is not to be missed.

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This book is dragons meets Avatar The Last Air Bender! I loved the concept of the magic system in this book. I loved the idea of feminine power and the oppression of women in power. It promised enemies and lovers and delivered. I am nervous and excited to see what the next book has in store, especially after that ending!

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A Fate Forged in Fire was an incredibly fun read with strong female main characters, dragons, other worldy elements and a hero we know that will be perfect for our heroine (in all due time).

We follow the story of blacksmith Ameyra as she battles for her birthright and finds love with her supposed enemy, Prince Fiorean, a dragon rider who isn't the enemy that she originally thinks she is.

There are a lot of characters and it took me several chapters to get everyone straight, but once I did, I really enjoyed this book and lost myself in Amerya, her twin brother, Adarian and the other characters adventures.

If you can stick through the beginning and introduction of everyone you'll be rewarded to a great fantasy that makes you really look forward to the next in the series.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for this ARC. All opinions are my own.

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thank you so so so much random house publishing, netgalley & hazel mcbride for this INCREDIBLE arc !!

guys. genuinely buckle up. i’ve been complaining all year that i haven’t read a new all time fav n i’m happy to report i finally have … this book was one of the best things i have ever read

i don’t know where to begin & i don’t know how to make this an organized review but i will do my best 🤣

the first half of this was really focused on the world building, political landscape, & introducing our fmc, aemyra.. who is going down as one of my favorite book women EVER ..

the plot has some similarities to house of the dragon w the female heir not getting her throne simply bc she’s a woman & an incompetent male heir w a smart & cunning brother … but what rlly stands out is the anger i felt for aemyra while reading this … otto hightower doesn’t even compare to the “true religion” 🤬

but the 2nd half of this is rlly where i fell in love w the book bc it focuses on the romance between aemyra & fiorean… if i had to describe their relationship i think it gave a mix of darcy & elizabeth (p&p) & neytiri and jake (avatar) … it was enemies to lovers but it was so much more than that n i just fell in love w fiorean as aemyra did & i just can’t tell u how much i loved reading their story … 😭😭😭

also the dragon fight scenes in this gave me CHILLS i can’t even explain how good the writing was i could see it all in my head so clearly !!!

the ending of this literally gave me heart palpitations & i promise whatever u think is going to happen, it’s not … i was shocked & i will be sending my therapy bill to ms hazel bc what in the actual hell just happened

please look up trigger warnings as there were a lot of violent scenes & one scene in particular that made me feel actually sick …

but still 5💫 if you couldn’t tell!!! … request this on netgalley if you have an account or put it on your tbr for may 27 bc everyone MUST read this !!!

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A Fate Forged in Fire follows the fmc through trials and tribulations as she battles her way to her destiny. There are dragons, magic, and unexpected twists leaving you wanting more. This book kept me engaged and on the edge of my seat with a cliffhanger I did not see coming! As an avid fantasy reader, this book exceeded my expectations and Hazel McBride has gained another fan.

Thank you Random House Publishing and NetGalley for this ARC! I can’t wait for book 2!

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Aemyra is going through it all to get her rightful throne. My heart hurts for her after all she’s lost so far, I can’t believe the ending and need book two.

This book shows the nasty side of how men are using religion to justify utterly disrespecting and abusing women. But Aemyra, goddess blessed and full of feminine rage, will stop at nothing to gain her throne and free her people from the tyranny of the covenants

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Political Intrigue. Hidden Heir. Betrayal. Dragons. Cult. Just to name a few.

The FMC and the MMC are the definition of enemies to lovers with some much going on in their world. The plot kept me immersed in the story. The twisted ending was completely unexpected and my heart hurts for her.

Can't wait for Book 2.

Thank you Random House Publishing and NetGalley for this ARC.

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A Fate Forged in Fire was an absolutely captivating read. I adored the fierce protectiveness and playful banter between Ameyra and her twin brother, Adarian. What twin hasn’t jokingly thought about “eating the other in the womb” at some point? Their adoptive parents beautifully illustrates that family bonds can transcend blood relations.

This book is not merely a compelling narrative; it reflects the challenges faced by women in our society today and the struggle for autonomy over our own bodies.

Several passages struck a chord with me, such as:

“No wonder so many like him, mostly men with no magic of their own, had eagerly converted to the True Religion. It was the only way they could exact control over others, and it was no secret they despised powerful women.”

Or this thought-provoking line:

“It’s surprising how many lies
people will believe if they are said with enough conviction.”

And this powerful reminder:

“A woman’s purpose can be found in having children. However, a woman is so much more than just a mother. She is an individual with her own passions and desires far beyond those of her husband. Just because we possess a womb doesn’t mean that we don’t also have a brain.”


“This is so you remember that a woman has her own power, and that you do not have any right to take it from her.”

In light of recent events, this story resonated deeply with me and sparked inspiration.

The pacing of the narrative was perfect; it never dragged, and I found myself unable to set the book down, eager to discover what would unfold next. Naturally, it concluded with a cliffhanger, leaving me eagerly anticipating the next installment in the series.

And perhaps the best part of A Fate Forged in Fire?

There are dragons!

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I sadly wasn’t a huge fan of this one! It felt like a lot of effort to pay attention and understand, only to be disappointed with the storyline! I really wanted to like it, but it just didn’t click with me as much as other fantasy novels in the past.

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A Fate Forged in Fire by Hazel McBride
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Thank you NetGalley and Random House Publishing Group for the opportunity to read this eARC. Overall, I really enjoyed A Fate Forged in Fire. The world building in the beginning started out a little bit slow for me. It was just a little bit confusing at times with the unfamiliar language. I know on a reread it would be much easier to follow. After about 30% the story starts to move along and I ended up reading the last 40% in one sitting. I was up way too late and even after I finished the ending kept me awake.

The politics are interesting and the enemies to lovers trope is very well executed in A Fate Forged in Fire. I also loved the dragons. I hope there is more about the dragons in the next book. I really loved the journey that the FMC, Aemyra, is going on. Her character development by the end of this book has me so excited to see where she goes in the next book.

That cliffhanger at the end is not okay. It can’t be true! I’m going to be wondering what happens next for a while. I need my friends to read this as soon as it comes out so I have someone to discuss it with. I will absolutely be reading book two as soon as it comes out! I can definitely see this being one of the next popular romantasy series.

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A Fate Forged in Fire

The first book in the Celtic inspired duology follows Aemyra, a Goddess blessed blacksmith as she fights for a throne that is hers by birthright. This story is laced with political intrigue, a royal family who have been heavily influenced by an oppressive cult like group who are anti magic, Dragons and bonded riders, and a slow burn romance of enemies to lovers with a twist so shocking at the end you’re going to long for the next book. Fans of Sarah J. Maas, Jennifer L. Armentrout and Danielle L. Jensen will find their next favorite Romantasy read with this one!

A Fate Forged in Fire is my new favorite read of 2024! The story was a bit slow to start, only because the need for world building but it quickly ramped up. The story is so full of politics and playing the games at court; Aemyra quickly realizes that she will do just about anything to keep the people she loves safe. Forced into enemy territory, she becomes entwined with Prince Fiorean, the most powerful fire wielding dragon rider with an arrogant and cold demeanor. Aemyra realizes that maybe there is more to Fiorean than he’s willing to let show, and a hot steamy romance ignites. There is so much heartbreak in this story, I found myself on the verge of tears several times and full of rage at others for these characters that Hazel McBride created. I cannot wait for the 2nd part of this story and I know I’ll be re-reading this one until it comes out!

On Sale Date - May 27, 2025

Thank you NetGalley and Delacorte Press for a copy of the digital ARC. All opinions are my own

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This was a fun read! I loved the twins and their dynamic. I love the confidence and strength of the FMC. It took me a minute to understand the world and the magic and what/who True Religion was and how that played out but once I got it I was able to truly dive into this story!

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Dragons, danger, and a queen-in-the-making—this book has it all!

Tìr Teine used to be all about strong women and magic, but now it’s a mess thanks to a string of weak kings and the True Religion messing everything up with their anti-magic beliefs.

Aemyra is a queen-in-the-making who’s been hiding in the shadows, waiting for her moment to bond with the late king’s dragon and claim her throne.

Prince Fiorean is cold, arrogant, and frustratingly loyal to his corrupt family. Basically, the last person Aemyra would want to deal with. But as the chaos unfolds, these two have to team up!

This book is packed with action, political drama, and romance that will keep you glued to the pages.

Aemyra is such a fun heroine, fighting for what’s hers. And Fiorean? He’s the perfect mix of broody and complex, making their enemies-to-lovers tension feel so real.

Oh, and did I mention the dragons? Because DRAGONS! I absolutely love books with dragons in them!

I’m obsessed. The twists, the intensity, the slow-burn romance—I’m hooked. I need book two yesterday!

Thank you NetGalley and Delacorte for this free ARC.

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After she was born, Aemyra, who is Goddess blessed and a powerful fire wielder, was hidden away and was secretly raised to one day overthrow the patriarchy that has taken over her once matriarchal-ruled kingdom and take her place as the first female heir in centuries. However, Tir Teine, once devoutly loyal to the Goddess, has been infiltrated by the True Religion, a religious group that believes magic is evil and women are meant to obey their husbands and bear children. With news of the king's impending death, her father emerges from hiding and readies Aemyra to claim her birthright, but plans go awry and Aemyra's crown and throne slip through her grasp. War looms on the horizon, and Aemyra finds herself at the mercy of Prince Fiorean, who believes his family is meant to rule. Will she be able prove to Prince Fiorean that she is the rightful Queen without giving her heart away?

This is such an intense and action-packed story with a strong, snarky, and, honestly, unhinged heroine, who has a good heart and wants the best for her people. She's irritating at times and makes dumb choices, but you understand why she makes them and can't help but root for her. Fiorean is broody and cold, but has a softer and merciful side to him. I love these characters because there is so much depth to them that makes you understand and care for them.

The enemies-to-lovers was truly enemies-to-lovers. They genuinely try to kill each other before being forced into an unwanted alliance through the machinations of others. The romance made sense to me, and the electrifying chemistry between them gave me goosebumps. The spicy scenes were immaculate and just *chef's kiss*.

The writing flowed nicely, and it was easy to read. There are Gaelic phrases throughout the story but I thought they were a great addition to a story that is Celtic-inspired. The world building was intensive, and I really loved that the kingdom was a matriarchal society. The story also has dragons, other elemental magic besides fire, and queer characters. The book does end on a crazy cliffhanger, and I am anxiously awaiting the next book.

I had such a fun time reading this, and I am so excited for others to be able to experience it too. My favorite part about this book is that it really emphasizes the idea that books are inherently political. It has themes such as the oppression of women and forced religious conversion. It's such a powerful book and a must read for readers who want to see powerful women overcome the patriarchy.

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I loved this book from the moment I read the dedication. This book reminds me of Barbie the movie in the sense where women and men would benefit from reading the book because of the heavy topics discussed throughout the story. Some parts were definitely hard to stomach but also very important to read as I felt they were very much alike the things we are experiencing in real life.
The romance in the book had me at the edge of my seat, it was a true enemies to lovers, slow burn which in my eyes is hard to come by sometimes.
The cliffhanger at the end has me in shambles, i can’t wait to read more and find out what happens next!
The only complaint I have is that the ending felt a bit rushed but the plot twist at the end more than made up for it! I can’t wait to reread it when it releases. I’m obsessed

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Enemies to lovers, strong female character, slow burn, and DRAGONS! What a great read! Thank you so much for allowing me a copy of your book to read in advance.

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