3.5 ⭐️ rounded up.

Let me just say, the beginning of Immortal absolutely hooked me. It starts off with a bang—action-packed and intense—and the God of War’s entrance? Amazing. It really felt like the story was going to deliver something epic.

But as things went on, I started to notice some cracks. The pacing was all over the place. Some events happened way too quickly or too conveniently, and then suddenly we were off to the next thing. It left a lot of plot holes and unanswered questions that were hard to ignore.

The romance was a mixed bag for me. At first, I was intrigued, but the back-and-forth dynamic got frustrating fast. So much of their conflict could’ve been avoided if they just talked to each other or, you know, trusted each other a little. And while the male lead, Zhangwei, definitely had his moments (especially when he embraced his God of War persona), he ended up feeling kind of bland.

Liyen, the main character, started off so different from most fantasy heroines—weak, sickly, and trying to navigate a world where physical strength is a big deal. I thought, Yes, this is going to be interesting. But before long, she turned into the typical fantasy FMC, gaining abilities and training to keep up. It made sense for the plot, but I really wish she’d stayed more unique.

That said, there were some highlights. The writing is gorgeous—seriously, Sue Lynn Tan knows how to create an atmosphere. The world-building is rich and immersive, and there are moments of humor and exciting action that really shine. Plus, there’s a twist early on that completely threw me for a loop. I was so impressed and couldn’t wait to see where the story went next.

Unfortunately, the twists didn’t keep that same energy. Later reveals felt less surprising and more disappointing, like they were there just to add drama rather than build on the story in a meaningful way. By the time the actual plot came into focus, I’d kind of checked out emotionally.

The ending, though, was sweet and tied things up nicely, which helped redeem some of the frustrations. Overall, while the book didn’t fully live up to its potential, it still has plenty of beautiful moments. If you’re into romantasy and enjoy lush writing and an atmospheric vibe, it’s worth a read—but maybe keep your expectations in check.

“One is enough, if they are the right person. It doesn’t matter how often you love, but how well.”“Love is the greatest freedom in the world, but you have to be capable of yielding it, to grasp its true meaning.”
Sue Lynn Tan. Immortal . Kindle Edition.

I absolutely loved this book! The writing was beautiful, and I found myself making so many notes and highlights while reading. The magic, mystery, and world-building were all incredible, with high stakes right from the very first chapter, which kept me hooked.

The love story between the two main characters was heartfelt, and a surprising plot twist made me fall even more in love with them. This is the perfect romantasy standalone for readers looking to immerse themselves in Chinese mythology.

Set in the same world as Daughter of the Moon Goddess, this book stands on its own and doesn’t include any spoilers from the series.

*Thank you Harper Audio for the audiobook, and Avon and Harper Voyager for the arc*

This was amazing. This might be my favorite read of the entire year. Inspired by Chinese Mythology and taking place in the same universe as Daughter of the Moon Goddess - if you haven't read this duology already what are you even doing - this is an epic and heart wrenching standalone cementing Sue Lynn Tan as a MUST read author for me.
Also whoever designs her covers needs a raise. UK and US versions are always stunning.

I feel like there is a glut of romantasy books on the market these days and sadly this one didn't stand out for me. Usually I am a sucker for anything Natalie Naudus narrates but even her voice talents couldn't save this one for me. If you loved Sue Lynn Tan's previous books you might still like this one but sadly it was a miss for me. Many thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for an early digital and audio copy in exchange for my honest review!

I really enjoyed Daughter of the Moon Goddess but this just didn’t work for me, I’m afraid. This is more a romantasy than a fantasy with romance (which is what DOTMG was), and the FMC was so bratty and knee-jerk defensive for much of the book that I couldn’t like her or understand the MMC’s attraction to her. That attraction is explained about 3/4 through the story, but by that point the FMC was unfortunately irredeemable to me.

As far as the audiobook goes: Natalie Naudus is a brilliant narrator, but I don’t think she was a great fit for this story. I know she’s of Asian descent, but a narrator with a Chinese accent would have been more immersive for this particular story.

I really liked this one!!!
What a terrific story and world, I got pulled right in! I didn't see the twist coming, and I just loved how this played out and ended. The audio narration was fantastic! Thank you, netgalley, for the chance to listen and review, I loved it!!

“When your days are dark you forget the existence of dawn”

I was excited about this book when I read the synopsis, I am a huge fan of romance and fantasy separately so I thought I would give it a chance together.

I was even more excited when I found out the main character was chronically ill, as weird as that sounds being chronically ill myself it is nice seeing representation at times.

I quickly got pulled into this story the Arthur being amazing at painting the picture of the characters, world and outfits making it come alive in my mind as I read.

That being said at around 30% into this book it did the one thing that makes me instantly lose interest in a book and it made me realize I may not be a fan of romance and fantasy together.

“Don’t let your grief turn inward, don’t let it hurt you.”

The next several chapters of the book focuses more on romance and Liyen trying to fight her feelings due to her lack of trust. admittedly her bratty attitude and inability to listen at all can at times become very grating and hard to handle.

“At the end of every night, no matter how long, comes the rise of the dawn”

Towards the end of the book it really pulled me in again with a twist and betrayal at times I felt like I couldn’t read fast enough because I needed to know what was going to happen next.

My final thoughts are that I really really enjoyed this book, there where a few things that kind of turned me off of the book but overall it was highly enjoyable and I recommend it to anyone that likes romance and fantasy.

Natalie Naudus did an amazing job at the narration of the audiobook, bringing so much emotion into each of the characters, completly bringing them to life.

I absolutely love Sue Lynn Tan's writing and if I had been writing a physical copy, there are several lines I would've highlighted. That being said, Natalie Naudus (who also narrated the Celestial Kingdom books) is one of my favorite narrators and I would happily listen to her narrate a grocery list. So, naturally, gorgeous prose paired with impeccable narration is a match made in heaven.

I also have to say, as someone who dislikes a lot of popular romantasy books, rest assured that Sue Lynn Tan delivers both lush fantasy world-building and sworn-worthy romance. Also, this is truly enemies-to-lovers, not just rivals-to-lovers or haters-to-lovers. Liyen is a mortal queen kept alive by a magical lotus, highly sought after by the ruthless immortals, including the treacherous God of War.

While some of the plot decisions weren't my favorite and I lost some interest in the middle, I recommend this for fantasy and romantasy fans alike. The ending is very satisfying and I appreciated that this is just a standalone! I'm excited to see what Sue Lynn Tan writes and Natalie Naudus narrates next!

Overall I liked this and while I didn't mind the narrators voice at all I didn't love the way she portrayed the female lead. It just rubbed me the wrong way for whatever reason. I was looking forward to turning this audiobook on when I got in the car to go to or from work each day though! The story had a lot of twists and turns and I really loved the whole world. It felt fully realized without bogging me down in minutia. I will say the spice factor of this left a lot to be desired for me personally, but overall a good read/listen.

WORKED FOR ME.

Fantasy standalones and I don’t always see eye to eye. I did go with the audiobook route and that was the click for me. I loved the audiobook and keeping it at the pace that I do helped me move through the story.

Yes, there’s a few plot quirks and I would have loved more of the relationship background BUT for a standalone this delivered. I love love love wild twists and plot moments I didn’t see coming. This had good reveals and I thought the unveiling of the story was executed well.

The romance was heated and swoony. I loved the connection between Liyen and the God of War. Perfectly timed tension and the build had my full attention. The lore was beautiful and I just can’t get enough of SLT’s writing style. It’s magnetic and the audiobook narrator brought everything to life.

Another gorgeous story that I loved reading.

Overall audience notes:

Fantasy Romance
Language: low
Romance: fade to black
Violence: moderate

Wonderful storytelling and narration. I fell in love with the characters immediately. Tan writes with a style that carries you along adventures and action while still keeping a tender sensation. In the midst of war and trickery, you begin to care for characters you thought you wouldn't. I loved the underlying message of justification and revenge, I'll recommend it to many!

I loved it! The story is amazing and such a great read. The audiobook was very captivating and well done with the narration. Overall this will be a book and audiobook I’ll recommend!
This has everything from a heart stopping enemies to lovers romance, twists and turns, and all wrapped into a Chinese inspired mythological story. I loved it. Truly ate it up in a day.

I received an early copy of the audiobook from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

Having read "Daughter of the Moon Goddess" when it first came out, I was excited to see that Sue Lynn Tan was releasing a standalone novel set in the same universe.

The story follows Liyen, who is poisoned, prompting her grandfather to steal an enchanted lotus to save her life. Once she ascends to the throne of Tianxia, Liyen seeks to free her kingdom from its obligations to the immortals. After receiving a summons, she travels to their realm, aiming to uncover their secrets while also developing feelings for the God of War. As dark forces close in and betrayal lurks around every corner, Liyen must collaborate with the God of War to protect her kingdom.

I loved this book and will definitely return to finish the Celestial Kingdom duology! Sue Lynn Tan has become a must-read author for me. If you're interested in historical fantasy and Chinese mythology, I highly recommend her works!

I AM OBSESSED.

I was very lucky to receive an audiobook and a physical ARC and I cannot tell which one would be better because they're both such a great way to consume this story.

I will forever read anything that Sue Lynn Tan reads. The way she can weave magic, romance, and mythology together into one grand adventure is beautiful, poetic, and astounding. Sue Lynn Tan rips you away from reality and carried through the magic portal that is her books. I loved the romance and loved the surprising reincarnated twist. The characters were well developed and I can't even tell you how many times I squealed. I felt so excited to read each page and hear each chapter.

Thank you so so much to NetGalley and to HarperAudio for this incredible ARC. I cannot wait to share it on goodreads and my bookstagram!!

Thank you Netgalley for this audiobook ARC. Though I will not intentionally spoil anything in this book, some deductive skills may pick up on some plots lines as I give my feedback

When you have someone like Sue Lynn Tan, you wonder if between her first series and second if the writing style will evolve/change. How on earth could it compare to her debut success?

Immortal was so..... enchanting. The words were lyrical and just flowed, engaging the reader and bringing them into the world. It doesn't just describe things in the world, it tells you how it feels to be there, what the sights and sounds evoke in you, and in turn, it lures in the reader to the world so immensely. You can't help but fall for this book. HARD. So, yes. Her world was just as beautiful and enthralling, and very engaging.

Onto the characters?

Liyen is very driven and loyal. She has true values and sticks to them. Not all good, mother-theresa qualities, but fair and honest and independent. Willing to do what needs doing. And it was great to see her character arc throughout this book.

The God of War? OMG I loved and hated this character. Hated him more in the beginning, but then as time went on, my heart MELTS for him. He seems very mysterious and wishy washy at first, but as the story gets along, his true character comes out and he is SET on who he is and why he does what he does.
I would go to war for this couple lol. Their chemistry is flammable and intoxicating. The BANTER omg. And the build up to the climax, their relationship. My heart hurts and is so full of happiness with how it evolves.

Last point, the story/timeline.

You start this book thinking it's a very linear "us vs them" storyline. Very straightforward.
Then the entire thing gets turned upside down, and your sympathizing with people you hated, small insignificant moments are major plots points, and your heart just ACHES with how it all ties up. Somehow Sue writes an incredible story where everything is all tied up, but you're yearning for more, your heart hurts. You would give anything for more. And that's one of the best things about her writing.

In closing.

This book is electric, enchanting and a delightful read that will leave your heart happy and hurt all at the same time

Look, this is what romantasy should be!! A beautiful tale woven with threads of mythology and magic.

Sue Lynn Tan's writing is so evocative, lush, and full of passion. Her characters are so bravely determined and you can't help but root for them. A wonderful addition to her works, and if you loved Daughter of the Moon Goddess - this won't disappoint! Plus, who doesn't love a concise, amazing fantasy standalone?!

Immortals was a pretty solid standalone novel. Though typical for me to always want a little bit more from a standalone, I think the author did a good job developing the story, the characters and ended with openings to potentially addition books with this characters but wrapping up the story. The audiobook was fantastic and the narrator did a great job portraying the characters.

Like Sue Lynn Tan's other books, this one hooked me from the beginning. Her ability to beautifillusyrate the world makes it such an immersive experience. Liyen is a wonderful protagonist that learns not everything is what it appears to be. Her strength of character and depth of love was heart-wrenching at times. I also loved this book for it's ability to portray m/f platonic relationships in a positive light. Great read.

4.5 stars! ✨ Big thanks to Avon and Harper Voyager for the ARC of Immortal by Sue Lynn Tan, and to HarperAudio for the audiobook ARC! 💖 Huge shoutout to NetGalley for making this magic happen! 🌟

Okay, guys, this book was EVERYTHING! 😍 Immortal was like diving headfirst into a world of magic and mystery and not wanting to come up for air! 🌬️ It’s the perfect mix of fantasy, romance, and political intrigue. The writing is SO beautiful, the world-building is next level, and let me just say, the chemistry between Liyen and Zhangwei? Scorching 🔥 I couldn’t stop flipping the pages (or hitting play on the audiobook)! 📖💥

✨ Tropes that gave me life ✨
✧ Enemies-to-lovers 💘
✧ Forbidden romance 💋
✧ Morally grey MMC 🖤
✧ Political intrigue 🏰
✧ Betrayal and vengeance 💔
✧ Forced proximity 🏠
✧ Impulsive, bold FMC ⚡
✧ Slow burn 🔥
✧ Fated mates 💫
✧ "Touch her and die" 😤

Where do I even begin?! 😅 Liyen’s journey from unsure heir to fierce ruler is SO captivating. She’s bold, impulsive, and makes decisions that will have you rooting for her even when she’s messing up (lol, same). 🙈 And Zhangwei, the God of War?! WOW. He’s ruthless, calculating, and SO magnetic. The tension between them? Literal fire. 🔥🔥

The romance? Deliciously slow-burn (my fave!). Every “will they or won’t they” moment kept me on the edge of my seat. And when they finally give in?! SWOON-WORTHY. 😍 The back and forth between Zhangwei’s cold exterior and Liyen’s fiery determination was EVERYTHING. The “touch her and die” energy? Can’t get enough. 😤💥

The world-building? Chef’s kiss 💋 The magic, gods, betrayal—it’s all so lush and atmospheric, and I was 100% here for it. Buttttt, I gotta admit, the first part was a tad slow for me. 😬 The political drama took over for a bit, and I was just waiting for things to get exciting. BUT, once the action picked up around 30%, I was hooked. The tension, the stakes—it all had me gripped for the rest of the book. 🙌

And the climax?! OMG. I was literally gasping, crying, and had my heart in my throat the whole time. 😱❤️ It was everything I didn’t know I needed, and totally worth the build-up. The ending might not have been crazy wild, but it was deeply satisfying and made me smile through the tears. 😢

Also, let’s talk about the audiobook—Natalie Naudus did an AMAZING job narrating this story! Her voice really brought the characters to life, and the tension between Liyen and Zhangwei was even more intense with her narration. I loved how she captured all the emotional highs and lows, especially in the more dramatic moments. She absolutely nailed it! 🎧✨

Overall, I’m SO glad I got to read this early. Immortal has ALL the magic I love: betrayal, love, politics, and characters you can’t stop thinking about. If you’re into epic fantasy romances, this is your book! ⭐️

CW:
- Blood
- Death
- Violence
- Death of a loved one

I can’t wait to see what Sue Lynn Tan does next! If you’re a fan of epic fantasy romances, you NEED this one! 💖

Thank you Net Galley for providing the audioARC for an honest review!
Sue Lynn Tan has done it again and even better. This book has the perfect balance of romance and political struggle that you will leave you satisfied. The character's dynamic is perfection and I was choking on my tears at the end because the book was over. She is an autobuy author for me and if you have ever wanted to read anything by her or mythology fantasies. THIS IS IT!!