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LET ME TELL YOU. WITCHY SAPPHIC. PARANORMAL. SCOOT PILGRIM. LITERALLY OBSESSED WITH THIS ONE. NEED I SAY MORE. Comes out July 15 🥹💕HIGHLY RECOMMEND.

Thanks you to NetGalley and the publisher for this book.
The story, plot, and characters were fabulous. I loved the book overall, however I am 63 and got really hung up on the slang. I know I'm not the YA audience the book was written toward, but perhaps a page with the slang words and definitions at the beginning of the book would help.
It made me pause and have to look up the word for a definition several times which deflected from my reading.
Overall I loved it other than the one clip.

This book was adorable! Just enough adventure and fun that made it a blast to read. Though Nova's story is a magical one, the complexity of real life emotions makes this an emotional read. As they embark on their quest, Nova and Kiara have great banter that is quite swoonworthy!

This book was adorable! The magic in the book was just the right amount. And the romance was so cute and banter filled.

A super cute witch romance. about not denying who you are and what you are fated to be in life. The characters are loveable and it's a great book to watch the growth of the characters.

This book was a complex story about a teenage girl dealing with grief, loss, and romantic interests. Nova, a seventeen-year-old girl is grieving her father who got lost in the woods seven years ago. When her mother proposes moving forward, she puts up a wall and decides to go find a secret wishing well that the town talks about. After accidently but not accidently cursing her rival, Nova feels the need to help her with the well too. So, she takes her rival, or her secret love interest? And her group of exes into the forest to find this well. In a story about trust, adventure, and love, the teenage characters handle the complex feelings of moving on but not leaving behind.

“Hit Me With Your Best Charm” boasts a fantastic premise that immediately grabbed my attention. I particularly enjoyed the subtle hints of magic woven throughout the narrative, which added an enchanting layer to the story. However, I really struggled to connect with Nova, and many of the characters felt somewhat two-dimensional. Their lack of depth made it difficult to become fully invested in their journeys. Despite these shortcomings, the imaginative elements and creative world-building left me with a positive impression, making it a worthwhile read for those who appreciate a touch of magic in their stories.

The book started off strong and interesting when Nova accidentally places a hex on someone. I did enjoy that Nova felt remorse for doing this and decided to help Kiara try to undo the hex. It felt as if the book was lacking plot during the middle portion. Nova and her group of friends spent a lot of time disagreeing about things and just didn't really seem to go anywhere. This book is definitely targeted towards teens more than young adult in my opinion.
Nova's two best friends get stuck guarding the entrance of the forest for most of the book so I felt as if they were almost pointless characters to add into the story. I did enjoy Nova's developing friendships with both Kiara and Tayla. I did find it a bit surprising that Kiara had so many exes and that somehow they were all still friends with her. I feel as though teenagers can be a bit spiteful and resentful especially when it comes to relationships, so this part felt a bit unbelievable to me.
I did expect the ending, however the part about Tayla did surprise me. This book was a decent read, but I do wish there was more magic like the cover of the book would lead you to believe. Thank you to Netgalley, PENGUIN GROUP Penguin Young Readers Group, and Lillie Vale for an ARC of this book. This review is my own honest opinion.

This was a cute, though I wouldn’t necessarily call it cozy since the stakes were a bit too high for that. I loved the Fellowship of the Fling and how many of the characters were bi. Evan was my favorite ex. I also liked how the book kept me guessing whether what was happening was magic or coincidence. I enjoyed the mystery of the forest and the tiny touch of House of Hollow creepiness to the explanation for the people wandering there. Although—not gonna lie—when time started distorting I was really hoping they’d wandered into a faery realm.
I do wish Nova and Kiara’s relationship had included a bit more enemies-to-lovers banter and been better developed. Since Kiara was absent for a good chunk of the book, I felt like that took away from their love story. Nova’s fixation on superficial appearances also bothered me a bit at times, although that’s not necessarily unrealistic for a teenager. I liked the choice Nova had to make, but didn’t feel Kiara’s immediate forgiveness seemed earned.
I didn’t care for the twist at the end—especially since I saw it coming a mile away, that trope is one of my pet peeves, and it kind of got swept under the rug right after the reveal rather than being given the weight it deserved. That twist and the epilogue would’ve felt more fitting in a horror novel instead of a fluffy fantasy.
I received an advanced copy from the publisher and am voluntarily leaving this review.

This story is a YA book, and I am not the intended audience, though I do enjoy this genre. Hence, why several times I had to look up references to slang that was written into the book. I find this to be a flaw, however, as a book should be able to stand the test of time, and any slang should be explained in the text, or a footnote. That way all readers, now and in the future, will understand.
The copy I was given, please note, is a rough draft, and this may be corrected in the final edition. However, other books that have done this did not in the final edition, so cannot say how it will go.
I liked the characters, and the plot of the quest, but I felt the makeup of so many trans, and gay folks was a bit much and unrealistic. Though it is possible to have a bunch of friends that come together that have the same sexual orientation, this is suppose to be both enemies and friends, and it seems to not be that natural of a makeup of what you would find in a normal teenage group. But, again, I am not the intended audience, so it is possible the people this book was written for is for this segment of the population.
I was hoping there would be more magical elements, and though there is some, this book is more of a coming of age style story. It is more about the relationships of the teens, and their place in the group, the city, and their own lives. Especially our protagonist who has been majorly changed by the disappearance of her father.
The middle of the book is slow, and I have to admit to wanting to skip ahead. The beginning, and the end have a lot of plot, development, and character portrayal that I enjoyed the story, but feel the middle went on about two chapters too long. But, overall, this is a book that was enjoyable to read, and do recommend for the intended group it was aimed at…high schoolers, especially those in the LGBTQ+ community.

"Hit Me with Your Best Charm" by Lillie Vale had so much potential, but ultimately it didn’t quite hit all the marks for me. Let’s dive in! 🤿✨
The premise of the book is super intriguing! 🧙♀️ Nova accidentally hexes Kiara, leading to a curse that could ruin everything. That magical twist hooked me right from the start. I loved the small-town setting with its charming mystical vibes. 🌙✨ Nova's journey to figure out the curse while also grappling with her feelings for Kiara kept me curious throughout the story.
But… 🤔 the characters, especially Nova, left me feeling a bit mixed. She’s relatable and vulnerable with her grief over her dad’s disappearance 💔, but at times her behavior felt a little bratty and hard to connect with. 😬 Kiara, on the other hand, is sweet, but I wanted more depth from her—there was a lot of potential there that didn’t quite get explored.
The romance between Nova and Kiara is cute, though it’s a very slow burn 🔥. Honestly, I was waiting for a bit more tension and spark, but it didn’t quite live up to the build-up. While the chemistry is definitely there, it felt like the plot meandered a little too much without getting to the heart of their relationship until late in the book. 🥰
The pacing was a little hit or miss. Some chapters dragged, and I found myself skimming through parts of the story that felt repetitive or didn’t add much to the overall plot. 😕 I also felt that some subplots (like Nova’s friendships) took away from the main story, which made it harder to stay engaged at times.
Overall, I did enjoy the book—there’s something about the magical world and Nova’s growth that kept me invested. But I just wish there had been more depth to the characters and a tighter plot. It’s fun, light, and magical, but doesn’t quite have the oomph I was hoping for. 🌈✨
Definitely worth reading if you’re into magical realism, but don’t expect a rollercoaster of emotions or a fully fleshed-out romance. 🎢❤️

So...like...this would have been moderately okay if not fir the fact that literally ALL of the actual action took place in the last 17% of the book. Until then? So. Much. Navel gazing.

I didn't read the synopsis of the book and just dove in. Not sure I would have chosen to read this book, it was entertaining, just didn't feel like a YA book. I read to escape, the themes of grief was a little to close to home at this time in my life.

I ended up DNF'ing 25% through. It unfortunately didn't grab my attention enough to care to continue,

I love a book about complicated family relationships and magic and I also love sapphic rivals to lovers so this was a particularly fun book for me.

This was a very engaging book about love, family and magic. It’s a very sweet romance and very cozy - definitely worth a read!

I really enjoyed the last 25% of this book. I thought the characters were all well written, but sometimes they felt younger than they were supposed to be and it made it hard to connect to them. The beginning of the story was very slow and I had to get into it but once it got to the 70-75% mark it really picked up and I had a hard time putting it down.

What a great story! Can't wait to read more by this author!
Thanks Netgalley and to the author for the ARC!

This was such a good book. I loved the story and the writing so much. The characters were great and the story flowed smoothly. Will definitely read more books by this author in the future.

Overall, "Hit Me with Your Best Charm" is a good fall read and an interesting YA sapphic rom-com. It's a bit reminiscent of Scott Pilgrim, mixed with some magical realism. As much as all of that speaks to me, I found myself wanting a little more from this book.
The main character, Nova, is attempting to break a hex she placed on her love interest, Kiara, by going to find the infamous wishing well deep in the forest. She reluctantly teams up with Kiara's exes. I liked the overall premise, however, the book's uneven pacing wasn't for me, with the book really picking up at the 80% mark. The ending felt rushed and we didn't get a chance to sit in everything that has happened to these kids. It was a quick read, but I would have rather had an extra chapter or two towards the end rather than at the beginning.
I did like the representation shown throughout the book, and thought it was done in a way where it was thoughtful and worked with the characters. Additionally, the balance between the romance and overall plot was nice and it didn't distract from what was happening.
Thank you to Viking / Penguin for an early copy of this book for review purposes. All thoughts are my own.