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Book Review: Starlight Empires: Death is Collapsing by Hans Wilms
Hans Wilms’ Starlight Empires: Death is Collapsing delivers an intriguing blend of hard science fiction and existential fantasy, creating a cosmic epic that challenges the reader's perception of reality, humanity, and mortality. The first book in what promises to be a thought-provoking series, this debut is packed with rich philosophical undertones, a unique narrative voice, and a story that lingers long after the last page.

The Premise: A Universe with Limits
The premise of Death is Collapsing is captivating from the outset. Humanity’s exploration of the stars, thwarted by the discovery of the Edge of the Reachable Universe, introduces an immediate mystery that sets the stage for larger existential questions. Wilms combines this cosmic boundary with a deeply personal story about Simon, a maintenance engineer whose ordinary existence becomes extraordinary when he becomes the unwitting recipient of a cryptic message: "NOT WHAT THEY SEEM."

This single phrase acts as the narrative’s fulcrum, foreshadowing twists, existential revelations, and a journey that delves into questions of identity, belonging, and the nature of the universe itself.

Simon: An Unlikely Hero
Simon’s perspective grounds the story in a relatable, human experience. Far from being the archetypal hero, he is a flawed, lonely, and introspective character grappling with personal loss and professional monotony. His background as a maintenance engineer provides a refreshing departure from the usual action-packed protagonists of space operas.

Wilms crafts Simon’s arc with care, letting his growth unfold organically as he is thrust into the chaos of a universe in upheaval. His initial goal of reconnecting with his crumbling life on Earth is both heartbreakingly human and tragically futile, as time dilation and technological advancements leave him stranded in a reality that has evolved without him.

Simon’s struggle to adapt—to new AI constructs, alien technologies, and even the whispers of a tired God—makes him a compelling lens through which readers can explore the narrative’s philosophical depths.

A Universe of Infinite Mysteries
The world-building in Death is Collapsing is one of its greatest strengths. Wilms constructs a richly textured universe where humanity’s corporate-driven expansion collides with the mysteries of alien civilizations and the metaphysical forces governing existence.

The Edge of the Reachable Universe is not just a boundary but a metaphor for the limits of human understanding. The alien technology that Simon encounters—indistinguishable from magic—is a testament to Arthur C. Clarke’s famous adage. Wilms uses these elements to weave a tapestry that is as much about humanity’s hubris as it is about its resilience.

Themes: Nihilistic Optimism and the Human Condition
Wilms threads the narrative with themes of nihilistic optimism—a seeming paradox that gives the story its emotional resonance. The collapsing boundaries of reality, the enigmatic message from a malfunctioning AI, and Simon’s encounters with Death itself all point toward an existential crisis. Yet the story refuses to surrender to despair.

Instead, Death is Collapsing argues for the enduring power of human curiosity and the connections we form with others, even in the face of a seemingly indifferent universe. The idea that life’s meaning is not preordained but created through individual choices and experiences permeates the narrative.

The tired God and Death as a character further emphasize the novel’s exploration of metaphysical questions. These figures are not omnipotent but weary entities bound by the same constraints they once helped create. Simon’s interactions with them blur the line between mortal and divine, raising questions about the nature of free will, destiny, and the costs of survival.

Pacing and Structure
Wilms balances introspection with moments of high tension and action, creating a story that is both thought-provoking and engaging. The pacing is deliberate, particularly in the early chapters, as Simon’s solitary existence and isolation are carefully established. This slower start pays off as the narrative builds toward its revelations, allowing readers to fully immerse themselves in Simon’s journey.

The writing style is evocative and poetic, especially in scenes describing the Edge of the Reachable Universe and the alien landscapes Simon traverses. Wilms excels at juxtaposing the vastness of space with the intimate thoughts of his protagonist, creating a sense of awe and melancholy that permeates the novel.

A Few Quibbles
While Death is Collapsing is an impressive debut, it is not without its minor flaws. Some readers may find the philosophical tangents and slower pacing in the early sections challenging. Additionally, certain secondary characters, particularly those tied to the corporate entities driving humanity’s expansion, feel underdeveloped compared to the richness of Simon’s arc and the metaphysical elements.

However, these issues are overshadowed by the novel’s strengths, particularly its thematic ambition and narrative depth.

Final Thoughts
Starlight Empires: Death is Collapsing is a bold and thought-provoking entry into the sci-fi genre. Hans Wilms combines philosophical inquiry with vivid world-building and a deeply human story, creating a narrative that resonates on multiple levels. Simon’s journey is both a personal odyssey and a reflection of humanity’s place in the cosmos, making this book a must-read for fans of speculative fiction that challenges the mind and touches the heart.

Whether you’re drawn to the mysteries of the universe, the exploration of identity and belonging, or the existential struggles of flawed yet determined characters, Death is Collapsing offers something truly special. It’s an impressive start to the Starlight Empires series, and readers will undoubtedly be eager to see where Wilms takes this story next.

Rating: 4.5/5
Highly recommended for fans of speculative fiction with a philosophical twist, such as works by Liu Cixin, Ursula K. Le Guin, or Stanislaw Lem.

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The "good" thing is the future seems to be now, the bad thing is that this book is a few decades too late to shine.

Respectfully, this book needs an editor, both for the science, and the fiction parts. And the accidental references to real people that one should be extra careful with. More research is also needed on the AI, tech, and science topics it plays with.

I'm giving it two stars, because it's an indie debut, and because some underlying ideas made me curious.

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Great book for fans of sci-fi fantasy! Death is Collapsing is set in the future, in a time where the people of Earth have begun their expansion into space and the surrounding galaxy. Early in the book (prologue), we find out that the human race has finally made contact with an alien race. While the world is filled with excitement, we start to wonder whether or not this is a good thing.

This book did a good job setting the scene and catching the reader up on how the human race got to this point of space exploration and alien contact. The main character is one that I ended up loving and also hating. He has both admirable and annoying qualities that kept me entertained. The plotline pace was medium - I was never bored, but it also wasn't so fast that I felt like I needed to reread passages to keep up with events. There were a handful (10 or so) spelling or grammar errors in the book that jarred me out of the storyline, but I would definitely read the next installment in this series.

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𝗢𝗳𝗳𝗶𝗰𝗶𝗮𝗹 𝗧𝗶𝘁𝗹𝗲: Death is Collapsing
𝗠𝘆 𝗧𝗶𝘁𝗹𝗲: Tears of the Perishing
𝗔𝘂𝘁𝗵𝗼𝗿: Hans Trevor Wilms @scienceandcats
𝗙𝗮𝘃 𝗖𝗵𝗮𝗿𝗮𝗰𝘁𝗲𝗿: The Little Rebel
𝗥𝗲𝗮𝗱𝗮𝗯𝗶𝗹𝗶𝘁𝘆: Easy
𝗧𝘆𝗽𝗲: Novel
𝗚𝗲𝗻𝗿𝗲: Sci-fi Odyssey
4/𝟱

🌵𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗲𝘅𝗰𝗲𝗹𝗹𝗲𝗻𝘁

Dude with a gf as annoying as he is 👀, allegedly, wakes up 80 years later after trying to rush back to her, to a world that has tech, music & life beyond what he knew. As he tries to navigate the culture shocks & find his place in this new world, he will find friends & enemies in unexpected places. One, in particular, that will consume everything.

I love a sci-fi book that pitches us into a new world with enemies & challenges & such (especially when it is truly intergalactic and there are new species and new worlds)… While I found that the author took too much time explaining things he didn’t have to (I love books that have me figure it out), the overall effect was an easy, rewarding read.

Was I fed up with the irritating behaviour of the MC (whose name I have forgotten 💁), yes. Will I read the next books? Yes.

✨𝗚𝗶𝘃𝗲 𝗶𝘁 𝗮 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱.

🌵𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗺𝗲𝗵
The angsty behaviour in a 24+ year old and the over-crying. This dude did a lot of crying. Justifiable? One can argue that yes, but it was A LOT of crying. 👀

♡🌵 𝗕𝘂𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗮𝘁'𝘀 𝗷𝘂𝘀𝘁 𝗺𝗲 ;)

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I really enjoyed the concept of the book - the aliens, the society, and the story. The main character Simon, can easily describe anyone who's felt like a cog in the machine, with no real joy in life, and throughout the book he struggles to find where he fits in. Set in the future, one can easily see how society could end up exactly as described in the book.

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This was a strong start to the Starlight Empires series, it had that element that I was looking for and enjoyed from the description. The characters worked well in this universe and was engaged with what was happening. Hans Wilms wrote this perfectly and had me guessing what was happening in this world.

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