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perfect for fans who have been clamoring for more specfic with older protagonists. there were things about this i adored and things i could have done without— from what i can tell this is a debut and it very much suffers for being a concept that is, perhaps, Too Big for the author’s current skillset in terms of craft. however, i see what they wanted to do/achieve with the story.

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DNF'd at 27%. While the premise is exciting, the execution falls short. The writing is often confusing and the distinction between Xandria's internal thoughts, the dialogue, and the commands from the AI were not easily delineated.

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This book has a really interesting point of view. To be set in the future with a main female who is older using artificial intelligence to help her fight a rebellion in the midst of also losing her memories.

I had a really hard time keeping up with the point of views of the robots. Where there two? One that was helping her and other that was going through files? Honestly I don’t know. I think this book could do a whole lot more on clarity and smoothing out the transitions.

This could be because this is a genre that I do not normally read. It was just unfortunate that I could not connect to anything in this book.

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