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The Lost Apprentice by Tara O'Toole presents an intriguing premise, blending mystery with adventure in a world where secrets and hidden talents drive the narrative. The story centers around a young protagonist discovering their powers while navigating the complexities of their world, but the execution falls short in some areas.

The pacing of the novel is uneven, with certain sections dragging on while others rush through important moments. The characters, while likable, are somewhat one-dimensional, and their development is not as deep as one might hope for in a story like this. The world-building, though creative, feels underexplored, leaving many questions unanswered that could have enriched the plot.

While The Lost Apprentice certainly offers some enjoyable moments and has potential, it doesn't fully deliver on its promises. It's a fun read for fans of the genre, but it lacks the depth and complexity needed to make it a standout. A solid three stars—entertaining, but not groundbreaking.

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The Lost Apprentice is a perfect mix of dark academia, mystery, and magic, set against the lush, atmospheric backdrop of Ireland. Fiadh joins a cutthroat legal apprenticeship to uncover the truth behind her cousin’s disappearance after he joined the program the year before. The magic system is unique and plays a key role in the mystery, making it an exciting part of the story.

The characters are rich and complex, each one flawed but deeply interesting. The group Fiadh becomes involved with is dynamic and full of tension, with relationships that keep you guessing. The Irish setting adds to the book's dark, immersive tone, and I really appreciated that Tara O’Toole included a pronunciation guide at the beginning. She also weaves in some Irish (Gaelic?) throughout the story, which I found fascinating and made me want to learn more about the language, especially since it’s part of my roots.

I read this book in one sitting. The pacing is spot-on, and the twists kept me hooked—I fell for every misdirection! It’s rare for me to stay so utterly confused, but this book pulled it off brilliantly, and I loved every minute of it.

If you’re into mystery, magic, and a bit of romance, this is definitely worth the read. It’s fast-paced, twisty, and completely absorbing—highly recommend!

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Wednesday meets Suits in this light fantasy story about a woman who is searching for answers as to what happened to her cousin who went missing for 6 months. I don't really know what to say about this book... I love secret societies as much as the next person but this was so droll that when it picked up in the last 20 odd pages, I was glad it was almost over. For the right person, I am sure this book would be amazing, but it just wasn't for me.

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The Lost Apprentice by Tara O'Toole is so so good. I rated this book 5 stars because I couldn't give it more. I totally recommend everyone to read this book as fast as they can because it's really good and the characters are fantastic.

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I *really* wanted to love this story, or at the very least like it. Unfortunately, that is not the case.

The premise of this was intriguing (missing cousin, infiltration of prestigious legal firm, a little magic), but it was poorly executed.

I wasn't emotionally invested in this story or its various characters even though I really wanted to be. None of them ever became fully fledged individuals to me. They were just concepts. Archetypes, if you would, but nothing fleshed out.

The dialogue was clunky and awkward, and the author has a tendency towards redundancy. Many things are stated over and over again. "Muriel, my cousin" is one of those phrases. Like, yes we know Muriel is the cousin. You've made that distinction 12 times. The main character also refers to another character as "the swan man" multiple times even though he told her his name and the bird moniker wasn't significant in my opinion.

There was also a couple instance of casual racism in the early pages perpetuated by a secondary character but never addressed so I was left confused on why it was included in the first place?

And yes, I did mention there was magic in this story. I just couldn't explain it to you if I tried. It was just...there.

The culmination of the story being something along the lines of "corporate greed and ethics are detrimental to the physical and mental health of their employees" was...true? But nothing we did not already know.

All of this being said, there were several moments where I found myself enjoying some of the descriptive paragraphs. For example: "But when I was offered a place at Oxford, the twin rivers of our lives that had flowed smoothly together throughout our youth diverged into tributaries of our own ambitions."

See? Perfectly lovely. I just wish a larger portion of the book came across this way, and that the overarching point of this story was more complex, concrete, and planned out.

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This book is a perfect wintry read. The concept of mixing dark academia with a modern-day graduate recruitment scheme set in Dublin was super fun and the magic system was incredibly unique.
5 stars.

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