This book, in my opinion, is a strong debut with some truly standout worldbuilding. It feels fresh and not just another copy&paste from other popular fantasy stories.
I loved that it brought something new to the table, especially with the dark court vibes and the layered mythology. That said, the writing did feel repetitive at times and the frequent POV shifts made it hard to follow who was speaking, but those feel like issues that the right editor could easily tighten up. Flaws aside, I enjoyed it and will definitely be picking up the next book in the series.

I really liked Kingdom of the Two Moons, mostly because of the characters and the world. Blair was my favorite—she’s bold, sassy, and always stands her ground. Caryan was dark and powerful, and nothing ever seemed to faze him. Riven had that broody vibe but was so soft and protective with Melody, and that made me love him even more.

Ronnin didn’t get much page time, but he still stood out. He’s quiet and observant, and I feel like there’s so much more to him. Kyrith was aggressive and violent, but also had this sassy energy that made things chaotic in a fun way.

I completely ate up the love triangle and those spicy scenes between the three. It was messy, intense, and honestly so addictive. The only part I didn’t like was Melody. She’s supposed to be the chosen one, but she felt so weak—always running, always scared. I kept waiting for her to stand her ground . I really hope her character grows in the next book, because the rest of the characters are amazing and made the story worth it.

The premise of this sounded really good but the writing style let it down for me. The inconsistency with POVs made the story feel disjointed, one was first person and the others were third person.
A lot of the writing was repetitive as well, the same events were told from multiple povs and it got quite irritating.

I can see the potential but unfortunately it didn’t flow for this book.

Thank you for the ARC.

I will be rattling the bars of my enclosure until I have the next installment in my hands-

Just call me Blair the way I’m imprisoned by the Kingdom of Two Moons. The only trouble with an advance copy of a novel is the fact that I have to wait even longer for the next installment. While this book took me a few chapters to acclimate to the world, multiple POVs, and timeline hops, once I did, I was locked in. This novel has fierce witches, elves, fae, angels and other magical creatures all racing to gain control of the young woman at the heart of a prophecy that will change their world forever. Melody is rescued from confinement in the human world only to find herself under lock and key for her protection in the kingdom ruled by the dark lord Caryan- the last of the angels. As Melody’s eyes are opened to her own magical lineage and the new world she now inhabits, she’s drawn inexplicably to both Caryan and high lord Riven. This love triangle teeters precariously on the lines of fate - will Melody be their end? Or will she heal what was broken long ago?

Kingdom of Two Moons really pulled me in — I found myself completely caught up in the tension and slow-burning romance that felt so raw and real. The characters’ struggles hit close to home, making their journey feel personal and unforgettable. The dark magic and political intrigue kept me on edge, but it was the emotional depth that stayed with me long after I finished.

This book reminded me how messy and beautiful growth and love can be, especially when wrapped in a world as dangerous and mysterious as this. Definitely one I’d recommend if you want fantasy that grabs your heart and doesn’t let go.

I was enjoying this book up until around half way when it jist kept dragging out.
I have no idea what's going on. I thought it was a romance but there's no way romance in it. There's not even smut. I don't like any of the characters except for a side character who I don't even undertand how she fits into the story.

The magic system is pretty much none exists t except the main guy has it all but he's a dick. Like a not even a grey villian, just a boring guy with literally no personality, no feelings and no chemistry or anything anywhere.

“Kingdom of the Two Moons” is the first book in Alexandra Thomasoff’s series, “Fallen Angels.” It is a spicy Dark Romantasy, given its dark romance narrative. It is currently the only book released so far. Written in Multiple POVs, we travel from the Human World to the World of the Fae and discover a vast, dark, and deadly continent. There is a Trigger Warning page for your review.

There are several features at the beginning of the story that will help readers understand the book’s world, including a Map of the World, a Glossary, and the Prophecy that is central to the story. I thought the Glossary was extensive and useful; there were things I didn’t think I needed to know when I read (for instance, how things smelled) that I did, in fact, need to know.

The thought that had to go into creating the lore/world-building/character design must have been extensive, and it was well done, in my opinion. I really enjoyed learning the lore about how each being was created “allegedly” and look forward to learning more. I enjoyed that the creatures were designed in a unique way from how they are typically in a lot of books today. Sure, the fae are still described as “beautiful” and “ageless,” but other fae/creatures find them lacking. Witches in this universe have been given a monster's touch; they have silver-tipped claws and fangs and can eat things whole, ingesting and killing the magic/object. Caryan’s Fallen Angel build was also given a “monster-esque” treatment. Still ethereal and “devastatingly beautiful,” but he has a taste for blood and ripping throats, having been given blackout eyes with blood-red irises against “milky white skin,” the contrasting colors adding to his intimidation factor.

This book has a 🌶🌶 spice level. There is longing, craving, and tension, but there is only one major spicy scene, and… you just have to read it to experience it. It was intense. This story is not a “why choose” romance, despite having two possible interested parties for our FMC in the book. This would be as close to a true “love triangle” dynamic as I’d ever seen. You can see it in each character’s dynamics with the FMC. Each one is described differently, and our FMC responds to them differently.

“ACOTAR” lovers will enjoy the romance and charisma of the highlords, as well as the drama and scenes it includes. “The Witcher” fans will enjoy “Kingdom of the Two Moons” because of the dark nature of the fantasy creatures and the fantastical world-building.

By the way, watch out for that cliff!

If you’re looking for spice/smut, not the book for you. The world building is complex and this isn’t a book you can skim through, this is a strong point for this book for sure! However, I really wished there was more depth to the romance, personally the connection fell a little flat to me, a love triangle felt a bit forced.
Some sections felt overly detailed and repetitive.
If there’s one thing that bothers me, it’s when there are multiple POV’s in a book that aren’t all written in either first person or third person. It got a bit confusing and kind of pulled me out of the story’s emersion here and there.
I would for sure read the next book tho!

I absolutely loved the new universe this book has brought into my life! I love that there is two love interests for Melody

While the opening chapter of Kingdom of Two Moons may catch attention with its explicit tone and immediate action, I found the overall narrative and writing style not my style. It lacked the depth and lyrical quality I seek in romantasy, which made it harder for me to immerse myself.

The multi-POV structure (with Melody’s voice in first person, the others in third person) brings a touch of variation, and the mix of urban fantasy elements with fae politics holds potential. However, character depth and emotional connection were lacking. Melody felt passive for much of the story, and her bond with Caryan never felt earned. Riven had potential but didn’t get enough space to develop. Caryan himself lacked the charisma or layered nuance I seek in a male main character — no spark, no real emotional core.

The romantic tension never truly delivered. There’s very little buildup, minimal chemistry, and few scenes that allow the trio’s dynamic to evolve meaningfully. Despite an MMF setup, it felt emotionally disconnected.

Despite that, I was curious about the central premise: a young woman thrust into a cruel world of Fae politics, war, and celestial magic. The idea of a hidden Oracle, a dying realm, and a morally grey High Lord should have been compelling — and while there were glimpses of potential in the worldbuilding, the execution unfortunately fell flat for me. A few ideas stood out: the celestial power struggle, the mystery around the Oracle, and the glimpses of a wider world with distinct peoples and creatures.

Perhaps most frustratingly, the novel ends on a double cliffhanger, which added to the sense of incompletion — especially given how little I felt connected to the characters by then. I don’t plan to continue the series.

Final Thoughts:
There’s no doubt that the author invested effort in building this dark and twisted world, and certain readers might appreciate the grim atmosphere, sensual tone, and quick pacing. However, A Kingdom of Two Moons wasn’t a match for me — not due to the darkness of the story, but because of the lack of emotional substance and stylistic cohesion. It might find a better audience among readers who enjoy fast-paced, morally grey adult fantasy with a modern voice and darker romantic themes.

While this book wasn’t a perfect match for me, I remain grateful for the chance to discover this new world, and I admire the work and imagination that went into crafting it.

🌸 Thank you to NetGalley, the publisher, and author Alexandra Thomashoff for the opportunity to read this ARC. I was delighted to be approved directly by the author Alexandra Thomashoff — such a kind gesture, and one I truly appreciated.

Rating: 2.5 ⭐️⭐️
Spice level: 🌶️🌶️ (MMF tension, frequent allusions)
Genre: Dark (urban) Fantasy, Adult

I'll be honest, maybe this book isn't for me. But it felt like I was reading more than one book at the same time and I couldn't get attached to anyone. It was a lot of information that feels like I should already know what's going on and who is who.

It's just a lot and I find myself struggling with this book in particular. I think it's because we spend too much time on Blair first and not on Melody the entire time. Otherwise, I wouldn't be having such a hard time with it. And even when we get to Melody, I just found my attention wandering. And on a level, I just didn't care about Melody's problems. (To be fair, I kinda wished Blair was the other character we followed only.)

All in all, I think it's just not my style of storytelling.

<b>Rating:</b> ⭐️ 1/5
<b>Spice:</b>🌶️ 4/5
<b>Read in June 2025 🐝</b>

<i>♥ [Melody & Riven] ♥</i>

<i><b>Tropes:</b></i>
📌dark fantasy
📌enemies to lovers
📌tension and banter
📌TWs

<i><b>🇺🇸 My review:</b></i> Maybe it’s just me, but this didn’t work. The writing style felt off, the worldbuilding didn’t hook me, and the dynamics between the characters were confusing more than compelling. It dragged, and even though the ending tried to spark interest, it wasn’t strong enough to make me want to keep going with the series.

Thank you to NetGalley, Alexandra Thomashoff, and Last Unicorn Press for the opportunity to read Kingdom of the Two Moons in exchange for an honest review.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4 stars)

Kingdom of the Two Moons is an immersive, character-driven romantasy that blends magic, romance, and moral complexity in a richly built world. At the center is Melody, a half-elf, half-human caught between duty, desire, and destiny. As ancient forces awaken, she finds herself entangled with two powerful and very different men; Caryan, a fallen angel with dangerous allure, and Riven, a steadfast fae warrior. The result is a tangled, high-stakes love triangle layered with tension, mystery, and betrayal.

Alexandra Thomashoff’s worldbuilding is ambitious and vivid. From the courts of elves to shadowy magical realms, the lore runs deep, and the sense of place is strong. The story leans into its darker tones with morally grey characters, ancient prophecies, and emotionally charged relationships. While the pacing can be slow at times especially in the first half the gradual unraveling of secrets and shifting allegiances keeps the story compelling.

The romance is definitely a highlight: intense, slow-burning, and sometimes messy in the best way. Caryan in particular stands out—he’s magnetic, mysterious, and exactly the kind of morally conflicted character that fantasy readers love to analyze. Riven, by contrast, brings emotional depth and quiet intensity. Melody’s journey is equally engaging, even when she falters, and her growth feels earned by the end.

That said, the book is long, and some readers might find the multiple POVs and occasional melodramatic turns a bit uneven. But overall, the prose is polished, the dialogue often sharp, and the atmosphere deeply immersive.

If you’re a fan of ACOTAR, The Cruel Prince, or romantic fantasy with complex characters and a darker edge, Kingdom of the Two Moons will absolutely pull you in. It’s a bold debut with heart, heat, and a world that feels ready for more. I’ll definitely be keeping an eye out for book two.

Kingdom of Two Moons has a genuinely intriguing story at its core, and I can see the potential for it to grow into something really compelling. The world-building and central plot were very interesting. Fun read for anyone who likes fantasy mixed with modern world and some spice.

That said, I didn’t care much for the book’s length or the multiple points of view. The pacing felt uneven, and the frequent shifts between characters made it harder for me to stay engaged or connect deeply with anyone. I also found the writing somewhat repetitive at times—it felt like certain ideas or phrases were recycled more than necessary, which slowed the momentum.

Despite those issues, I wouldn’t write the book off entirely. There’s a strong foundation here, and with some tightening and refinement, this series could really take off!

I loved this book so much! It reminded me of SJM so much. The details, the characters, everything! I enjoyed this book and can’t wait to get it in person. I’ve been telling everyone to read this once it gets out. Thank you for letting me be an ARC reader!

✨Book Review✨
Kingdom of the Two Moons by Alexandra Thomashoff

⭐️ 3/5 stars

📚 Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the e-ARC in exchange for an honest review!

Spoilers ✨️

This one had big fantasy energy: fae, witches, demons, magic—and a looming war threatening the entire realm. Melody, our main character, has spent her life captive because of her rare magic. When she attempts to escape, she’s captured and brought to the Dark Lord’s kingdom. From there, everything spirals: secrets from her past, a mysterious prophecy, and a slow-burning entanglement with two very dangerous (and very intriguing) men—Riven and Caryan.

🌙 What I Loved:
The fae realm felt vast and immersive, with high-stakes magic and political tension.

I could easily fall for both of the male leads. Riven is your classic bad boy with layers, and Caryan? Dark, powerful, possessive... yeah, I get it. 👀

🌀 What Didn’t Work for Me:
Melody’s motives didn’t always make sense. Her goal was freedom, but her choices didn’t match that energy.

A lot of repetition. Some scenes and chapters felt like déjà vu—run, caught, repeat.

The writing needed tightening. Certain characters felt flat, and I struggled to connect. Some of the conversations were too long and over explained what was happening. I also felt like the character’s became angry a lot, for no particular reason.

⚠️ Note: The story flips between first and third person POVs. That didn’t bother me personally, but I know it can be a dealbreaker for some.

I did struggle on deciding a rating for this book but landed on three stars mostly because of the vibes even though the writing style lacked a bit for me. I am someone who loves magical words and all things fantasy and I think you need to really be into that to really enjoy this book.

📖 Overall: If you liked A Light in the Flame or Crescent City (which I haven’t read yet but saw others comparing the two!), this might be up your alley. It took me a while to get into it, but the ending hooked me enough to want to pick up the sequel when it comes out. I feel like I need to know where this love triangle is headed 👀🔥

I devoured this book in two days and honestly? I’m still reeling.

From the first page, Kingdom of the Two Moons swept me into a brutal, seductive world full of shadows, fae magic, and immortal angels with secrets sharp enough to cut. Melody’s journey hooked me instantly—she’s not your typical heroine. She’s been caged, used, hunted… and watching her fight for even a sliver of freedom had me rooting for her with everything I had.

And then there’s Riven. Fae warrior. Brooding. Dangerous. Of course I was obsessed. But just as I thought I knew where the story was going—bam- enter Caryan, the cold, cruel fallen angel with a power that’s both terrifying and magnetic. The tension between these three? Unreal. There’s this haunting push-and-pull, this constant question of trust, power, and fate that made it impossible to look away.

The worldbuilding was dark and rich, and the pacing kept me hooked the whole time. I loved the slow unraveling of secrets and how Melody slowly discovers the truth about herself - and the prophecy that binds her fate to gods and monsters alike.

If I had one tiny critique, it’s that I wish we had a bit more time to breathe in certain emotional beats - some twists hit fast and I wanted to sit in the aftermath a little longer. But still, that didn’t stop me from tearing through the pages.

If you’re into morally grey characters, slow-burn danger-kissed romance, and heroines who rise from the ashes, you need this book on your TBR. I’m already counting down the days until book two.

✧˖°. ⤷ I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review, and all opinions expressed are entirely my own.

"Kingdom of the Two Moons" by Alexandra Thomashoff plunges readers into a richly imagined world of dark fantasy and forbidden romance, delivering a compelling start to the Fallen Angels series. As a fan of epic fantasy with a strong romantic core, I found myself thoroughly engrossed in Melody's perilous journey.
One of the absolute standouts for me was the brilliant banter between the characters. The sharp, witty, and often tension-filled dialogue brought the relationships to life, especially the dynamic between Melody, Caryan, and Riven. It added a layer of fun and emotional depth that truly elevated the reading experience and kept me hooked on every interaction.
The plot itself is incredibly engaging and well-paced, keeping you on the edge of your seat. Melody, a half-human, half-Fae imprisoned for her rare magic, finds her world turned upside down upon escaping, only to be drawn into the shadowy Court of the Two Moons. Her entanglement with the enigmatic fallen angel Caryan and the fierce fae warrior Riven creates a thrilling love triangle fraught with tension and difficult choices. Thomashoff masterfully weaves together elements of prophecy, dormant powers, and a world teetering on the brink of war, leading to some genuinely surprising twists that I didn't see coming.
The world-building is intricate and immersive, featuring a fascinating blend of fae, angels, and witches. While the morally gray characters, particularly Caryan, might not be for everyone, I found their complexity utterly captivating. The slow-burn romance is palpable, building delicious tension throughout the narrative.
While I absolutely loved "Kingdom of the Two Moons" and eagerly await the next installment, there were a few minor instances where I felt the pacing could have been slightly tighter. However, this didn't detract significantly from my overall enjoyment.
In conclusion, "Kingdom of the Two Moons" is a must-read for fans of dark fantasy romance. If you enjoy intricate plots, morally complex characters, a compelling love triangle, and particularly appreciate sparkling character banter, then dive into Alexandra Thomashoff's captivating world. It's an excellent addition to the romantasy genre and leaves you desperate for more.

I devoured this book! Yes, it has almost 700 pages, but I was hooked from the start. This is a great read for those who love romantasy involving angels, elves, witches, and more! If you loved ACOTAR, Throne of Glass, and Quicksilver, this is for you!! The time put into world building without boring me plus all the details into explaining the magic system! I need to get the physical book for my trophy bookcase now!!

Great concept and has a ton of promise! But the flow was lacking for me. I don’t see the point in Blair’s pov or understand why she was even in there maybe in book 2 it will make more sense. I felt like all this information would hit me at one time then it would turn to something else and I would be confused. Super great buildup for a great story and I loved Riven.