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Thank you to Alexandra Thomashoff, NetGalley and Last Unicorn Press for the arc of this book! This was a 3 star read for me. It had it’s good parts, and some rough parts along the way. You could see a lot of elements and characters that are comparative to other fantasy books. It was a good fantasy but not a great one, it took me a while to get into this due to the writing style and it jumping POV’s between characters as well as the time jumps. Sometimes I got confused with certain parts and felt like it wasn’t well explained. I wasn’t really connected to any particular character but I did like Riven a good amount.

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DNF (for now).
I might come back to this once it’s officially released. I know this is an arc but it’s SO hard to ignore the typos and the way the text is formatted. The plot hasn’t been able to keep me interested starting out at least unfortunately.

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an wonderful book experience
from the beginning till the end i got addicted
cant wait to read more by the author

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I’ve reviewed this on Goodreads (copy pasted below)
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show/7348458507

This book definitely delivered on everything it promised. Decisions made by the author felt very intentional, like slowly unraveling the mystery of Caryan through other POVs. This didn’t feel like a debut novel; the author felt practiced and confident in her writing.

I do love the main cast. They’re all messy and complex and interesting in their own ways, and they feel very real and have a lot of depth. One thing that stood out to me was the way platonic love was written between men, which I don’t see often. I also look forward to the blossoming friendship between the two women of the main cast. They definitely aren’t always likeable (coughCaryancough) but I think this is a conscious decision and I definitely look forward to reading through their character arcs and seeing how they grow.

There was definitely inspiration drawn from other romantasy books (…and maybe Critical Role?), but it didn’t turn me off from the book because I felt like it still earned its place and these easter eggs felt more like an homage to something the author maybe loves.

I was a little overwhelmed at the start with the amount of exposition, but this calmed down and I was able explore the world and its history through character dialogue in a more digestible way pretty quickly. I also do appreciate the meticulous world building because it makes me trust the author not to throw weird and inconsistent plot twists at me out of nowhere.

One thing that I don’t really understand is the social politics in the world, but that may be intentional. I also felt a little confused by some of the more emotionally charged scenes, because the flip from neutral to at each other’s throats felt sudden. I also wish the places were described a bit more, because I was always confused about the spaces the characters were in.

All in all, an interesting read. I’m definitely intrigued and look forward to exploring more of this beautifully written world.

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This book stands out. Most romantasy follows the same formula: broody-but-safe MMC, badass FMC, sizzling tension, inevitable victory. Not this one. The world-building? Stunning. The magic system? Unique. Think The Cruel Prince meets Throne of Glass, but fresh.

The suspense had me hooked. It’s slower, but in the best way—no endless fight scenes I end up skimming (sorry, Aelin). It’s character-driven, and I ate it up.

The romance? A real love triangle—the kind that actually hurts. Melody, our FMC, is the only human in this world, and her growth felt real. Riven? Wicked, gorgeous, total book husband. Blair? Female rage personified. And Caryan? Mysterious, powerful, alluring as hell. We never get his POV, which somehow makes him even better.

Oh, and that scene? Yeah. Hot. Without being overly explicit, which made it even better.

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The multiple POV’s was something I struggled with at the beginning of this book but it hooked me from the first chapter. The world building is absolutely incredible and the multiple POV’s actually aids the narrative by giving previous timelines etc. I hope that the effort behind the groundwork of world building was setting us up for a few more books in the series!

The FMC, Melody, showed a realistic journey throughout the storyline and wasn’t an ‘instant badass’ like you see in a lot of books these days.

Caryan the MMC, is someone whose POV we don’t hear from but we might (hopefully) in the sequel.

Riven and Blair, who we do hear from? Love them, couldn’t ask for better characters.

All in all, a book that has incredible world building, strong character development throughout the plot and a smoking hot MMC. What more could you want?

Thank you to the author and publisher for providing me with an ARC copy of Kingdom of Two Moons, I absolutely loved it and can’t wait for number two.

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Thank you to netgalley, and author for sending me this e-arc.

I did enjoy this book, i liked the plot but also there was some holes that did not get filled for me. I am a romantasy girl and this did give me romantasy vibes all the way but i dont know if something was missing.

I dont know if its because it took me longer than usual to get really into a story but i didnt keep picking it up at first and was mostly leaving it chilling, but when i did start getting into it i did enjoy it more.

if there is a second book I would like to read it to dive in some more.

I am very grateful to be sent this and thank you all again for this opportunity <3

Rating 3.5/5

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Thanks to Netgalley for this ARC!

I was intrigued by the premise of the story as I’m a big lover of fantasy and fantasy romance. However I’m not very impressed with the quality of the writing and the plot seems to be an amalgamation of popular tropes in various other romantasy books. Our protagonist is described as tough but comes off as your typical young ingenue who is pretty and not much else. There was a lot of telling instead of showing.

Also this is a small thing but the author hits us with graphic sex immediately upon starting the book. While I’m not put off by open door scenes the timing felt strange and I don’t know what purpose it served.

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While I enjoyed the world building and magic use in this story, I can't honestly give it more than 2 stars.

With absolutely no ill-will meant, I found the similarities between this, ACOTR and TOG too great. I also didn't enjoy the POV changes and found some of the dialogue felt very.. unnatural. It also didn't leave me with an exciting ending that has me wanting a second book.

It has all the right ingredients to be an excellent book but I feel like it needed a bit more time to cook.

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This book comes out very soon and I can not wait to have the actually copy in my hands just so I en read it again and again this book was so good. I am really glad to have gotten an early copy

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Let me start off by saying I really enjoyed this book! The world-building in Kingdom of the Two Moons is nothing short of phenomenal. If you’re not a fan of heavy world-building, this may not be for you—but personally, I loved how immersive and detailed it was. You can tell the author has laid the groundwork for (hopefully!) a book two, and I am so here for it.

Melody’s journey of fearlessness and growth was a delight to read. Watching her discover more about herself as the story progressed added so much depth to the narrative. And Riven? I love him. End of.

Of course, I can’t write this review without mentioning Caryan, our moody MMC. His character is layered with mystery, and I’m eager to get to know him better if a sequel graces our shelves.

Overall, Kingdom of the Two Moons delivered on all fronts, from captivating characters to a rich, well-built world. I’ll be keeping my fingers crossed for a second book!

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Thank you to NetGalley, the publisher and the author for this arc in exchange for an honest opinion.

I'm so so sorry...Normally, I'm a huge fan of romantasy, but this book was not for me. Please be advised that this review will contain spoilers to explain the reason behind my rating. The story was hard to get into and the world-building was confusing. Still, I wanted to give this book a chance and kept reading to see where it was going.
However, I couldn't ignore the similarities it had with ACOTAR, ToG, and Crowns of Nyaxia. Don't get me wrong, I do love a shadow daddy, it's not about that. Some characters had fangs and drank blood, so they were basically vampires like in Crowns of Nyaxia, the fmc loved painting, so she was like Feyre in ACOTAR, there were Illyrians like in ACOTAR and the fmc was half-fae like Aelin in ToG. Don't get me started on the ToG similarities...Blair was pretty much Manon with her wyvern, iron teeth and nails and her coven. In the end, even her red hair turned the colour of Manon's. Also, the mmc was kept as a slave like Amarantha and Maeve did in ACOTAR & ToG.
But that wasn't the only thing that disappointed me. The romantic tension between the characters felt weird. I couldn't figure out if Melody was going to be with Riven or Caryan and I'm not a fan of love triangles (I would've been okay with the situation if this had been why choose, but it wasn't).
50% in, I still had no idea where the story was going but kept reading. I didn't like the way Riven and Blair were treated and think they deserved better. I also kept wondering why Melody was always in need of saving. It's 2025 and there are plenty of romantasy books by female authors who empower women and write strong characters, so why not this one? I really disliked how helpless she was, even though she was half-fae and discovered that she had some magic. Instead of working as a slave "for her protection" she could've been trained.
Before you accuse me of hating this book, let me tell you that there were some parts that I liked. The portal between the realms, the modern urban setting, the prophecy and politics gave a nice touch to the story – I just don't think that it was ready for publishing yet. I know it's extremely hard to write and publish a book and I respect everyone who does that, but this one needed more time and editing.
Now comes the part that made my stomach turn...The MMC actually made me sick. Usually, what I like about romantasy is the slightly morally grey MMC who would burn the world for the fmc. He's this strong warrior everyone fears who's only sweet to the woman he loves, but in this book, the MMC is not likeable at all and treats the fmc like s***. The things Caryan did and the way he treated Melody were not okay. We need to stop romanticising that! The scene where he inflicts his magic into her and marks her with runes against her will is not okay! She repeatedly told him to stop, and he ignored it. Mind you, she already has magic. Another thing is that she only became powerful because of the magic he forced onto her, which gives a wrong message. Women are already strong. They should not be so only because of the power a man gave them.
And then there's the ending that felt like the author simply stopped writing. There wasn't even a major cliffhanger that made me curious about the next book...

Okay, everyone, that's it. You have my sincerest apologies if this review hurt your feelings. That was not my intention. My intention is to always write honest reviews and this is exactly what I did here and what I'll keep doing in the future.

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Thank you so much to NetGalley, the publishers, and author for this ARC, this has been such an amazing journey!

At the beginning of the book I felt sort of lost where I stood in the story but then there was an instant hook. Twists, she's got it, turns, curves, whatever you like she's got it and more.

The story was so good I just couldn't get enough, I needed to know more, I just couldn't stay put when I realized the book was over. Another aspect I really loved was the development of each character, the way all the political/societal systems were explained to detail, it helped so much to recall things.

Kingdom of the Two Moons is definitely a MUST READ for anyone who loves romance, fantasy, and morally grey men!!!

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This book hooked me from the first chapter. This book opens on a chapter in the POV of one of our side characters, which I thought was a rather original way of doing things. This multiple POV book was the slowest of burns in terms of romance, with some reluctant fated mates. I would definitely say book 1 in this series is fantasy with a romance subplot, rather than romantasy and I loved that. The plot was gripping with an overarching prophecy that has you guessing the whole way, all types of characters (e.g. witches, demons, vampires, and elves) and magical talents. Some can see auras, others can tell when people are lying, etc. My favorite characters were the horse demons that can also turn into sports cars and wyverns. Such a unique idea. Oh, and did I mention the MMC is a shadow daddy!? That's right. If you are looking for a morally grey shadow daddy, here you go.

The only downside is that the ending left me needing book 2 right now!

Thank you so much to the publisher and NetGalley for allowing me to read this eARC!!!

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I really liked the premise and characters in this book! I thought it was well thought out and and the worldbuilding was well done. This is not easy with a new series and I enjoyed this aspect as well. It was a little slower in the beginning but picked up as the story went on. Overall a good read!

3.5/5

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I did enjoy this book, I was unsure for the first about 30% of it but then the story really started picking up. I absolutely adored Riven, Caryan I liked, I feel like we are just getting to know the guts of his character so I can not judge too hard yet and I did like Melody. Blair I am very curious about her roll in this since her character development is just starting. The world building was a little tough to follow but was unique in its own way. There were quite a few times where things got repetitive or the bantering (which i do love some good banter) went on a little too long and the same back and fourth within the same scene (example is the banter between Melody and Blair when Blair was in the cell).

Overall, I ended up liking this book, liking it enough that I will be excited when the second one is released because I do want to continue this Journey and where it will lead.

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Thank you to NetGalley for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.

I had some mixed feelings about this book. There were a lot of aspects that I really enjoyed, but then some aspects that kept me from loving it.

The positives:
-Riven and Caryan were both very compelling, and I loved their relationship. They had both experienced trauma, and leaned heavily on each other. They were both strong, flawed, and evolving characters. I wanted more of their POV - preferably from a 1st person perspective! The author did a great job building their characters and backstories, and having their histories still reflected in their current day. And, wings!
-The variety of creatures, the cast system, the magic qualities that differ was really well thought out
-The world building
-The different types of magic
-The overall story itself was very intriguing
-MMC doing bad things for good reasons
-Love morally grey men, and having 2 to root for and get to know was great!
-the FMC building relationships with "lesser fae" creatures was lovely! Really humanizes the side characters
-the FMC lookswise being a bit more relatable/common. Not the usual super curvy, ocean eyed, stunning beauty but doesn't know it. I really appreciated this.
-the lore building was incredibly well done

The areas I had trouble connecting with:
-the constant switching from 1st person to 3rd person
-there were a lot of parallels to Sarah J Maas characters -so similar that it took me out of this story and had my mind wandering. The similarities between Blair and Manon/Bryce were particularly jarring
-also a lot of similarities between worlds, types of creatures, and storylines: the hunt for magical objects, the illyrians/nefarians, wyverns, witches having silver claws and teeth, red headed woman keeping the morally grey MMC as a sex slave, FMC being from the mortal world and painting is her escape, etc
-I did not connect to Blair or Melody at all. I didn't find them to be characters you wanted to root for or see succeed
-There was not much character development
-Caryan being kept as a sex slave, then keeping slaves of his own, did not make sense with the rest of his character, along with how cruel he is to his slaves, or keeping such a cruel and shallow court
-Never quite felt like there was a "big bad"
-Blair's backstory did not make me empathize with her, likely due to her arrogance
-I just did not find myself invested in the romance, as much as I really wanted to be
-the formatting of this was really odd - but it could absolutely be due to it being an e-ARC.

Overall, I did enjoy this book, and look forward to reading the second one. The story and the world have so much potential! And, again, am so incredibly grateful for the opportunity to read this ARC!

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3,5 / 5
Thanks to NetGalley and the author for the ARC opportunity.
I found it a bit difficult to get my attention, the story didn't suck me in as much as I expected, but I was still very curious about the characters, how they would cope with the situations and difficulties they faced. It was a bit dark for my taste, I'm used to lighter romance, but this cover is beautiful, it was the first thing that caught me :)
If there is a sequel, I'm curious to see it. I wish the author continued success and good work. :)

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I got sent this ARC and I am so thankful I did! I would give this book a 3.75-4/5🌟

This book had a lot of themes that we can recognize from other books we all seem to love and gravitate towards like Throne of Glass, ACOTAR, and Fourth Wing. I can see where that might turn some people away, but this story was still interesting.

Three words to describe this book would be twists, turns, and tension. We get to see a lot of “creatures” that we like to see in our fantasy books like fae, angels, witches, elves, demons, oracles, wyvern, and more.

This book follows the FMC, Melody. Melody has been imprisoned most of her life and used as a pawn in a game she doesn’t even know about. Until one day she decides to escape only to be captured again by a fae warrior, Riven. Riven is second in command to the Dark Lord, Caryan, of the Court of the two moons. Caryan is a very dark and broody immortal angel who basically enslaves Melody again. Melody starts to unveil the truths behind her lineage and why she was brought there.

Melody starts to become enthralled with Riven, but she also has a big attraction to Caryan. Melody and Caryan’s lives are more entangled than what it seems. As she is exposed to this new magical world she stars to awaken her own powers. She is half human and half elven, and she could possibly change the prophecy of the upcoming war.

I became very interested in all the characters, but there is another FMC that we are introduced to early on named Blair. We get to kinda see Blair backstory and I am very interested to see where her story goes and how it is entangled with the others. Blair is a witch who gives off if Manon Blackbeak and Bryce Quinlan had a baby. Her comebacks are great.

I am excited to see how this story continues! Kingdom of the two moons is out MARCH 31st!

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Thank you to NetGalley and Alexandra Thomashoff for an ebook in exchange for an honest review!

Rating: 4/5 Stars

Wow, this was a great time! I did find it a bit slow and hard to grip in the beginning, but that is normal with a new series. Super enjoyed the world building and the slow burn!

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