
Member Reviews

This book is in severe need of a rewrite! The author jumps all over the place, to no apparent reason. The result is no clear path to follow. And he pads the chapters with completely random information that further obscures any possible hope of understanding what the heck is going on. And furthermore, there’s book is riddled with errors. For example, (location 375, 14% into the book):: “and the shell of a 30.06 with the bolt untethered and, in its place, a cocaine spoon”. A rifle cartridge is different than a rifle’s bolt. And untethered? What?
Another example: ( location 406, 15% into the book): “ Both had grown up exceedingly poor—Roger in the tiny Mississippi Delta town of Ripley, Tennessee; Dubb in Blanco, Oklahoma, a town of fewer than one hundred citizens situated in the foothills and hollows of the Ouachita Mountains, in Arkansas”. So how did Dubb grow up in Blanco, OK,, in Arkansas? Clumsy errors caused by the writer trying to pad the book with extra language.
I will not be posting this review on any other platforms. It’s hard enough to become a new author without getting slammed by reviewers. I hope that in publisher can order a rewrite prior to releasing this book!