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3.5 Stars

Oriana lives with her family and twin brother, Oriano, in Luceria, an 18th century town in the kingdom of Naples. Oriana believes in the stories of the Nocturnals, the seven immortals who control Moira, which can reshape one's destiny. Oriana soon finds that these whispered stories are true when she accidentally enters the Secret Market of the Dead, where dreamers make desperate trades for a new destiny. When Oriana and her brother reach the age to begin apprenticeship at their father's forge, Oriana challenges him to three trials to determine the true heir. As the challenges unfold, Oriana realizes the odds and everyone in her life are against her, so she must once again look to the Nocturnals and embrace the Night to succeed and take over the family forge.

The Secret Market of the Dead definitely has a unique feel to the story. I really liked the gothic undertones and strangeness that De Feo brought to the story. There is a great folklore feel, and I liked that it was set up as a cautionary tale at the beginning of the book.

I thought the underlying story of women finding equality in the profession they wanted to pursue was done well, and thought De Feo set it up perfectly with the strain on her relationship with her brother and with the townspeople. Oriana's character worked great, in that she persevered in the face of her own struggles and the adversity from those in her family and those who wished to see her fail.

I did find it hard to connect with Oriana's character for most of the book. She is 8 for at least the first half of the book and then 14 for the second half. I wish her character would have been aged up and I think it would have worked better for the story. I also felt like the first half of the book was just a bit bizarre. I felt like I was Alice at the Mad Hatter's tea party, and just couldn't really get a great grasp on the Nocturnals. I did find that the story picked up, for me, around the 50% mark, when the conflict of Oriana and Oriano's challenges for inheriting the forge became the main focus.

I definitely think The Secret Market of the Dead was an imaginative story, and that it would appeal to those that enjoy gothic fiction, strange worlds, mysterious immortals, questionable bargains, and complicated families.

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DNF at 40%.
Thank you to NetGalley and Saga Press for the opportunity to read and review this book which I am unfortunately DNFing at 40%.
This is 1700’s Italian dark fairytale about a young girl who has to challenge her twin brother for the opportunity to succeed their blacksmith father.
I didn’t connect with this book very well and once our FMC made it to the actual Secret Market of the Dead it began to feel like an Alice in Wonderland style descent. This just isn’t one for me.

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DNF at 33%.

I think this could have been absolutely amazing had it been written in the style of Tanith Lee’s Night’s Master, a series of interconnected short stories revolving around the Market. Because when Feo gets to write about the strangeness, about all things Night – those were easily the best parts of the book. There’s a folkloric feel to it all, but also a ton of unique creativity that lets loose with the otherworldly imagery, the borderline horror-fantasy elements. Feo is unafraid to be weird – there’s a moment when a cloak of eyes grows countless eyelashes and uses them to fly its wearer, and it was SUPERB! The passages that were about the Market and its denizens, that were describing the bizarre and magical things Oriana saw and experienced – that was all pretty great.

(Pretty great. Bits of it were underwhelming: I was expecting much more pizzazz from the Parliament of Cats, and I didn’t find the allure of Moira convincing for a moment. Since both of those were pretty big deals, that was disappointing.)

The problem for me was twofold: first, I found the writing rhythm just a little off. Years of trying to explain this has convinced me that most readers have no idea what I’m talking about, so this is very unlikely to bother anyone else. For me, it’s as if a piece of music is slightly out of tune – that becomes most of what I can hear, and I can’t appreciate the music itself because some part of my brain can’t let it go. Here and there the phrasing struck me as out of place, or incorrect, or jarring; the dialogue felt flat and false, and whenever we had a stretch of telling-not-showing I wanted to twitch, because the prose just…didn’t flow naturally.

Can’t explain it any better than that, but if you haven’t experienced a similar thing with other books, don’t worry about it, this is an issue most readers clearly don’t have.

The other problem, the one other readers might actually experience too, is that all of the lovely strangeness is bogged down in the very mundane real world. Oriana’s home life made my blood boil – her parents are awful and her twin is a traitor, they can all take a long walk off a short pier – but it was also incredibly boring. That Oriana is so young – eight, maybe, for the first chunk of the book? I assume there’ll be a timeskip at some point where we get to see her older, but – you can have Adult stories that have a young protagonist. It’s difficult (or maybe just rare?) but it can be done. Oriana’s perspective, unfortunately, left this book with a very Young Adult feel that I did not want or sign up for.

I think this would have worked much better as a series of linked short stories than it does as a novel; if the Day parts had been skimmed over rather than given so much pagetime. The Night is where all the appeal of this story is, and it was kind of a waste of time to show us anything else. Especially when it was so clear that Feo, also, was pretty bored with the Day parts and just felt they had to be in there.

And I just don’t feel any urge to continue. Oriana doesn’t wow or interest me as a character, and I never really engaged with her; I don’t care where her story is going. I wouldn’t mind learning more about the Market, about the Night, but with the prose rhythm making me twitch…I’m not willing to keep twitching all the way through.

Great imagination, and prose that won’t bother most other readers. The Secret Market of the Dead is…fine? But I don’t love it, and I don’t have time for books I feel this meh about.

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Such a beautiful and captivating story! I loved following Oriana through these trials, the Italian inspired setting was STUNNING and immersive! I loved this and strongly recommend it!

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The characters are compelling and well-developed. FMC undergoes significant growth, facing internal struggles and moral dilemmas that add depth to their journey. Supporting characters, such as [notable side character’s name] and [antagonist’s name], bring additional layers of complexity, with motivations and arcs that keep the reader invested.

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Wow. The Secret Market of the Dead was so beautifully written. It was so easy to fall into this story and get lost. It was so easy to read it one sitting.

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This was such a great dark fantasy. I loved all of the Italian folklore elements and it truly felt like a new world I was experiencing through this book. The female MC is strong, brave, and very smart. This is a book that is savored, truly, and I will definitely be on the lookout for whatever this author does next.

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This felt like a cross between a fairy tale, a fable, the movie Labyrinth, and a studio ghibli film. I am always a sucker for a fantasy realm that exists parallel to our own, accessible to those who seek it. With a dash of classic Italian folklore, The Secret Market of the Dead has all of the makings of an enjoyable fantasy novel. The tale follows Oriana, a determined young girl whose destiny is stolen from her for reasons both societal and magical. She treads a years long journey to retrieve it as she dips in and out of the "Night," the nocturnal world filled with beings who may or may not be worthy of her trust.

I was particularly impressed by the author's writing style - it had a dreamlike quality that perfectly encapsulated the otherworldly quality of the Night realm. It was easy to get lost in that world alongside Oriana and to question what was or wasn't real. I also found myself attached to the characters - especially our headstrong and hell bent heroine and her many guides of dubious intentions.

My only qualm is I wanted to know more about the market itself, and to have spent more time in that world. The ending was not what I was expecting or what I felt Oriana deserved- but perhaps that was the point.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing me with the ARC of this book.

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Giovanni De Feo's "The Secret Market of the Dead" is a captivating blend of Italian-inspired gothic fantasy and historical intrigue, offering a rich and atmospheric journey into a world where the lines between reality and myth blur. De Feo crafts a compelling narrative that explores themes of ambition, family, and the power of destiny, all set against the backdrop of a vividly realized 18th-century Lucerìa.

The novel's strength lies in its world-building. The Night, a shadowy realm existing alongside the waking world, is beautifully rendered, filled with enigmatic immortals, whispered tales, and the alluring yet dangerous promise of Moira. The Secret Market of the Dead itself is a haunting and unforgettable location, a place where desires are traded at a terrifying price. De Feo's prose evokes the gothic atmosphere with a lushness that draws the reader deep into the story's heart.

Oriana is a compelling protagonist, a young woman chafing against the limitations imposed by her society. Her desire to break free from traditional expectations and pursue her passion for smithing is both relatable and inspiring. The conflict with her twin brother, and the societal pressures that favor him, adds a layer of tension and complexity to the narrative. Oriana's journey of self-discovery, as she navigates the treacherous paths of both Day and Night, is the heart of the story.

The exploration of Moira, the power to reshape destiny, is another highlight of the novel. De Feo masterfully portrays the allure and the danger of this power, highlighting the steep price that comes with altering one's fate. The ethical dilemmas surrounding Moira add depth and resonance to the story, raising questions about free will and the consequences of our choices.

The historical setting of Lucerìa in the kingdom of Naples is meticulously crafted, adding a layer of authenticity to the fantastical elements. De Feo seamlessly blends historical details with fantastical elements, creating a world that feels both real and magical.

While the pacing is generally well-maintained, some readers might find the initial exposition a bit slow. However, the patient world-building pays off as the story progresses, drawing the reader into the intricate web of relationships and secrets that unfold.

In conclusion, "The Secret Market of the Dead" is a beautifully written and atmospheric fantasy novel that will appeal to fans of gothic fiction and historical fantasy. Giovanni De Feo has created a rich and compelling world, populated by memorable characters and imbued with a sense of mystery and wonder. This book is a dark and enchanting journey into the realms of night, and it will leave you pondering the price of destiny long after you turn the final page.

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I’m not sure I’d call this gothic as much as … folkloric. There’s a sense of storytelling, here, of stories within stories, of the main character having to endure challenges and overcome impossible obstacles in order to gain her prize. It’s haunting, yes, but in the way a good dream is haunting, one you don’t want to wake up from. The world of Luceria, of the Night people and their markets, how they’re bound by the stories told about them, shaped by the dreams of the mortals who find their way there is so enthralling. Honestly, I could devour a series set in this world — and since I’m usually a very character-forward reader, that’s not something I say on a whim.

As for the characters, Oriana is first eight, then thirteen, and has an innocence and a child’s stubborn belief in right and wrong, justice and morality. She trusts people who are kind, despises those who are mean, makes impulsive decisions and is, on the whole, kind. I found her to be a perfect character to tell this story, since she felt more like a fairy tale princess or hero going on adventures, clean and pure with no secret desires or self-important bits of snark and cleverness.

I enjoyed the story, Oriana’s family, and I’m pretty sure I know what happened the rose. The ending may not be the HEA everyone would like, but I think it’s perfect for this story. If you give this a try, I really hope you enjoy it!

Thank you so very much to Net Galley and the publisher for the ARC!

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Gothic historical set in Italy? Yes please! This book was so delightful. The writing and characterization was delightful. This book absolutely had me by the throat. I loved Oriana and followed her journey with baited breath. I only wish there was more of the secret market. That was a bit of an unfulfilled promise for me.

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I wasn’t familiar with Giovanni De Feo’s work before picking up The Secret Market of the Dead, but I’m so glad I did. This novel blends magical realism with historical fantasy in a way that completely captivated me. Set in 18th-century Naples, the story draws you into a world where the boundaries between reality and the fantastical are beautifully blurred.

The plot follows Oriana, a young woman who dreams of becoming a blacksmith like her father, despite the societal and familial expectations that try to hold her back. The themes of ambition, gender roles, and family pressures are explored in a way that feels both personal and universal.

De Feo’s writing creates a dreamlike atmosphere that immerses you in the story from the very first page. The characters are well-developed and relatable, each struggling with their own desires and obstacles.

One of the most intriguing aspects of the novel is its exploration of the “Night,” where dreams become both a source of inspiration and danger. This added an extra layer of depth to the story, making me reflect on the nature of ambition and the sacrifices that come with it.

Overall, The Secret Market of the Dead is a beautifully written and thought-provoking novel that blends elements of folklore, personal ambition, and family drama. It was a fantastic introduction to De Feo’s work, and I’ll definitely be keeping an eye out for more from him in the future.

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The Secret Market of the Dead was a unique read filled with Night creatures and quests. I enjoyed the relationship and also the tension between twins Oriana and Oriano as they battle to become first apprentice at their father's forge. I really enjoyed the Italian gothic setting and folklore and the idea of the Night and how different of a world it was from the Day. This was a beautifully gothic fantasy read and so unique from other fantasies I have read. The pacing was a bit slow at first, but it picks up and although the ending was a bit abrupt, I felt like it fit the story well.

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The Secret Market of the Dead by Giovanni De Feo is a gorgeously eerie and magical tale about fate, family, and defying expectations. Set in 18th-century Italy, it follows Oriana—a bold, headstrong young woman who refuses to accept that her twin brother is automatically destined to inherit their father’s forge. Determined to prove herself, she challenges him to three trials. But to stand a chance, she strikes a dangerous bargain with Emistuchivio, the Duke of the Under-Earth and Darkness, and ventures into the haunting Secret Market of the Dead—a realm ruled by seven immortals and powered by Moira, magic that can reshape destiny… but always comes with a price. Steeped in folklore, mysticism, and gothic charm, this story has it all—family drama, fierce ambition, and just the right touch of the macabre. I absolutely loved it! Thank you Saga Press , Giovanni De Feo, and NetGalley for allowing me and eARC and to read this wonderful book.

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Thank you NetGalley and Saga Press for the Advanced copy.

What a beautiful world. I wanted to read this the minute I saw the gorgeous cover and I'm glad I did.

Note- this is not for the reader looking for an easy read. The world woven in this tale is intricate and full of rich, deep characters. I found myself reading slowly just to soak it in.

I enjoyed following Oriana's journey. She is spirited and determined and a joy to follow along.

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4 stars

This is a charming and imaginative fairy tale, a novel about fate and destiny that kept me invested throughout. The story follows Oriana, a young woman who wishes to join her twin brother as heir to her father’s forge, forced by opposition to her dream to turn to magical means from the Night side of her 18th-century Italian city. The Night is a fey and perilous realm where nothing is quite as it seems and it is all to easy to become lost, but Oriana braves it with incredible courage and the help of magical allies.

I love that the beauty of the Night lies in the unexplainable. This is not a book with a hard magic system that could be easily spreadsheeted and made into the rules of a roleplaying game; this is a book that celebrates mystery, the sacred potential of the dark that contains unknown possibilities.

I would recommend this book to fans of historical urban fantasy and dark (not grimdark, just dangerous) fairy tales.

Content warning: cat death.

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A magical fantasy story filled with rich imagination and beautiful descriptions, reminiscent of "The Night Circus" and "Spirited Away". One of my favorite elements was the Cat Parliament—such a unique and memorable touch. This book takes readers on an unforgettable journey brimming with creativity. While the beginning is a bit slow, it picks up around the 15% mark and only gets better from there.

The story follows a nine-year-old girl who is given a task in the Dead Market. Years later, when she realizes she can’t achieve her dream on her own, she returns to the market—where every deal comes with a price.

Beneath the whimsical worldbuilding, this is ultimately a tale of a young girl chasing her dream and growing up along the way. Oriana is hardworking and clever, yet also stubborn and naive. I appreciate that she is a good girl, but not a perfect one—flaws make characters feel real. And, just like in life, not everyone gets a perfect happy ending. But on the other hand, as a mother, it inspires me to communicate with my daughter more.

*Thank you to NetGalley and (publisher) for the opportunity to read this ARC. All opinions are my own accurate opinions.

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Gorgeous descriptions of another world! Yet I could not follow the jumps, various routes and wild turnabout this book had in store. High hopes, and wasn't for me.

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Wow what a beautiful story! I was completely blown away by the imagery, character development, and overall story. The author did an amazing job at creating such a strong-willed and inspiring MC like Oriana. It was refreshing to read in such an intense book. I had an amazing time reading it from start to finish.

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this was a pretty good book! I like the way the familial dysfunction comes through, and how there are so many layers of secrets that shine through. I like this book, and enjoyed reading it! I liked the flow and the writing style of this book!!

Thank you to NetGalley, to the author, and to the publisher for this complimentary ARC in exchange for my honest review!!!

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