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Okay. So...okay. This is not a bad story. The actual story itself is kinda interesting - vampires and werewolves and magic and a "normal" human banding together in a sort of college-age elite team thing. Here's the thing, though - it's two separate novellas, loosely connected by secondary characters, and the transition between the two is...well, kinda boring. Now that the world is built, I would try another related story, but I don't think this particular one is one that I would recommend. I'd say go read the Dragon Detective series instead.

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This is more of a feedback than a review, because, I'm afraid I wasn't able to pass the 30% mark.
The story started off interesting; I instantly took a liking to Yani.
After he was captured though, things took a "weird" turn. It was just all too much, so cliché, felt forced somehow....
I didn't really enjoy getting to know the cast and the story didn't hold my attention for long.
Thanks for giving me the chance to read it anyway! Highly appreciated.

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