Jacked
by Kirk Dougal
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Pub Date Jun 14 2016 | Archive Date Jun 15 2016
Ragnarok Publications | Per Aspera Press
Description
He can repair technology just by touching it. That's a dangerous thing to be in a world after The Crash, an event that left millions dead or little more than empty, mindless shells. In the aftermath, a new regime hunts down technology and destroys machines with ruthless zeal, even executing fixers like Tar.
And Tar has caught their attention.
Now, he's running for his life, desperately searching for other fixers, avoiding the engineers responsible for The Crash, and hoping to save those whose minds have been lost. In his flight, Tar must grow up and come to realize his ability to manipulate tech is more than just "some neat trick."
Can a teenager, even a gifted one like Tar, hope to survive — much less be victorious — when an entire government is deadset against him?
A Note From the Publisher
Advance Praise
— Samuel Sattin, author of The Silent End
"Dougal resembles a bizarro William Gibson, creating a new language from a ruined Earth whose quest for connectivity led to its destruction."
— Samuel Sattin, author of The Silent End
Marketing Plan
Marketing for this title includes: reviews (that's where you can come in!), blogs, podcasts — these will include teen and adult venues — sharing book graphics on social media, a direct mail newsletter on May 31 with an interview with Kirk Dougal included as our Author of the Month.
Kirk is also doing some in-person signings at bookstores in his area and will be going to World Fantasy Con.
Available Editions
EDITION | Paperback |
ISBN | 9781941987896 |
PRICE | $14.95 (USD) |
Featured Reviews
A fascinating premise explored exceptionally by Dougal, Jacked wormed its way into my mind and simply refused to budge. Highly recommended.
Interesting concept, but the ending is super rushed. Also, I'm not a fan of fake slang used instead of world-building
Great read! Very well written with some interesting ideas - so refreshing to find in a YA novel. The technology was believable, the plot was intriguing, and the characters were well developed. I especially like the language; it effectively conveyed the near-future time but used words that the reader could apply to their current understanding. "Bricks' and 'apps' and '404' - wonderfully done! The only complaint I would have is that the ending was a bit rough. It did stretch credulity that the masses would turn on their leader so easily, but overall I rather enjoyed this novel.
I was torn on how many stars to give this title. In the end, I gave the benefit of the doubt to the writer and for other reasons following, I rated Jacked a 3.5, rounding up to 4-stars.
Pros:
I liked the world building. I think the language fit the story very well with the world that was created. "App, hard boot, etc." fit much better than other dystopias I've read. Other dystopias have random words thrown in for slang. This story’s slang fit and I could imagine the changing of language over time where it would be plausible. Secondly, I liked the idea of a world wide mind. Interesting idea. The premise of fixers and being able to go around problems caused by the dead air piqued my interest.
Cons:
I had trouble finishing the book. Around 1/3 of the way in, I had to force myself to finish. The last 1/4 of the book, I did skip a few pages here and there. Mostly, I felt the pacing was off. Also, if there was more of a "ticking bomb" that might have helped pacing. Instead, it was just a race to stay ahead of the bad guys. My biggest problem was the villain. He was underdeveloped and I almost felt like he was a caricature of all evil villains. He wants to kill everyone who uses tech for "REASONS." His reasoning was mentioned but never fully explored. It was a shallow way to approach his mindset. I felt the villain needed to be more human in order for me to be afraid of him. Instead, he was so resoundingly evil, that I knew he would be defeated no matter what. That one fact took away any driving force for my wanting to finish the story.
General: I think YA is an incorrect age-grouping for this title. It read as an older middle grade. My kids would enjoy the story (older middle-grade readers) and not have the criticisms I would. They would overlook issues I had with the novel and most likely enjoy the story for a quick read. Because of that fact, I gave Jacked 4-stars. YA would have much more romance. Older MG has a hint of a love interest, which is what I felt this story had.
Finally, formatting issues: Paragraph not fully justified starting with “’Okay.’ He swung a backpack off his . . . searching the building again.” Secondly, missing beginning quote marks, "I don't see a tech box."
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to read and review this book.
This is the story of a young boy whose been hidden away from his Uncle because of his seemingly otherworldly power with high technology objects. 15 years before The Crash happened and ended up killing or immobilizing most of the world's population. Now, a group called The Faithful lead the anti-tech revolution and promise to stomp out anyone who wants to revert to the technology ridden days of the past. Tar is one of the people that this faction most abhors: somehow he can bring tech back to life, sometimes with just a touch of his hand.
A fast-paced and fascinating read, it kept quite a lot to your average dystopian tale. What set it apart from the rest to me was this whole concept of killing technology. I wanted to know more at every corner, and almost always desired the background of the how.
This story was lacking a bit in background and fleshing out other characters, but the constant plot fluctuations kept this from distracting too much. There as just enough original aspects to keep the juices flowing. I hope a second book is in the works, if the ending is any inclination.
acked is the story of Taro “Tar” Hutchins, a teenager trying to eke out an existence in a post-technological world. Tar was born shortly after The Crash, as the destruction of the World Wide Mind has come to be known, and which was an event that destroyed the majority of Earthy’s technology, and left the majority of the population either dead or a brain dead husk. Into this power vacuum emerged a new political force, the Black Shirts, a quasi-religious order of luddites convinced that the destruction of all technology, and those that relied upon it, was God’s will. Needless to say Tar’s life is complicated. Making matters worse is the fact that he’s a “fixer,” someone who can fix technology simply by touching it, and someone that the Black Shirts will hunt down at all costs. Tar is forced to go on the run, desperately trying to find other fixers, while simultaneously getting to the bottom of what destroyed the World Wide Mind.
Jacked is an admirable YA attempt to follow in the footsteps of some of cyberpunks all time greats. As a sucker for the genre it’s easy to see how the author was influenced by the Stephenson’s and Gibson’s of the world. Once the plot gets moving it rolls along at a nice clip, with plenty of taut action and heroics as Tar and his friends go on the run from the Black Shirts and try to find a way to put the world back together. Characterization is light, but things move along at such a good pace that it’s easy not to notice.
While the plot of Jacked is quite entertaining, the narrative does occasionally get bogged down with post-crash dialect. Characters don’t die, they go “hard boot.” The Black Shirts aren’t searching for Tar and his friends, they’re “pinging” them. While a little dialect can add some nice spice to the proceedings, when it’s every third word it can be downright distracting.
All in all Jacked isn’t a bad YA introduction to the cyberpunk genre. It has a fun story that zips along at a good clip, that, unfortunately doesn’t quite stick the landing.
Two WiFi bars out of five.
Review by Peter Rowley
Well-written and imaginative! Post-Apocalyptic fiction at its best. Has enough twists in it to make it original and intriguing to any reader, not only YA. Tar's ability to "fix" electronic equipment with only a touch is only the tip of the iceberg! Fast-paced, bet you will read it in one sitting! Recommended.
Interesting premise, plus I really enjoy a good dystopian story. I felt as though the main character was a bit young, but he acted older, at times. World building was done well and this was an overall good read.
In the near future, fifteen-year-old "Tar" Hutchins is a fixer.
He can repair technology just by touching it. That's a dangerous thing to be in a world after The Crash, an event that left millions dead or little more than empty, mindless shells. In the aftermath, a new regime hunts down technology and destroys machines with ruthless zeal, even executing fixers like Tar.
And Tar has caught their attention.
Now, he's running for his life, desperately searching for other fixers, avoiding the engineers responsible for The Crash, and hoping to save those whose minds have been lost. In his flight, Tar must grow up and come to realize his ability to manipulate tech is more than just "some neat trick."
Can a teenager, even a gifted one like Tar, hope to survive — much less be victorious — when an entire government is deadset against him?
A good strong storyline with believable characters that helped take the story line along at a fast pace. Well written and constructed.
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