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This is another great summer thriller to add to your list! The plot was so great with lots of twists! Alice was devastated when her husband, Tom, passed away while on a ski trip with friends. Nathan was a big part in her healing process and is now her second husband. He is devoted to their their daughters and to her. But then she begins to suspect he is not being honest with her about everything. Her best friend, Beth, is who she turns to for advice. Then things begin to get weird. Just who can Alice trust? The pace really started to speed up near the middle, and I just could not put it down.

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This book was just OK for me. I enjoyed Sandie Jones first book, The Other Woman, so was looking forward to this one even though the description didn't really grab me. I didn't really enjoy any of the characters and couldn't really empathize with them. The plot was pretty predictable and cliche too. It was a quick read though! I'll give Sandie Jones another chance and hope her next book is more like her first one!

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I enjoyed this one even more than The Other Woman- there were so many twists and turns I had whiplash trying to figure out what was going on! I love when I come across a thriller that keeps me guessing right up until the end! Perfect summer read!

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I loved the authors first book, because of all the unexpected twists and turns, and this one was the same roller coaster ride. Every time I thought I saw something coming, it ended up being something else so I was surprised until the end. Looking forward to Sandie Jones next novel.

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The First Mistake”is a domestic suspense novel and the very first book I’ve read by Sandie Jones. Like many others, I was a little hesitant about reading it because of the intense plot and storyline. That being said, once I started this book I couldn’t put it down. The story pulled me right in, completely held my attention, and even surprised me by some of the twists and turns of the plot! I thoroughly enjoyed the whole experience of reading this book.

“The First Mistake” is divided into three parts. Part 1 is from Alice’s point of view and it takes place in the present. Alice is living a normal domestic live. She’s found happiness once again after her first husband Tom’s accidental death on a skiing trip. She is now married to Nathan who is a very encouraging and supportive husband and father. Nathan helps Alice run the design business that was originally started by Tom’s inheritance. Although Alice still holds onto Tom and his memory, she has managed to move forward and tries to be a good, attentive mother to her two daughters. Her fear of losing someone again holds her emotionally captive and often prevents her from doing normal things like traveling. Nathan works alongside Alice in her business and continually encourages her to broaden out but because of her fears he often travels alone. He has just arranged a new deal that will allow the business to grow and extend into new markets. Just as Alice begins to believe that she can be strong and happy once again and even travel to Japan to close the deal, Nathan starts acting suspiciously. Alice starts to believe that Nathan may not be the man she thinks he is when three strange events make her doubt his loyalty. Alice turns to her best friend Beth looking for advice but Beth isn’t as supportive or as understanding as expected. By the time Part 1 comes to a close, Alice realizes that the people she has relied on and trusted might have been betraying her all along. She is so confused by all the odd behavior and strange occurrences that she even begins to question the circumstances around her first husband’s death and wonders if he too was disloyal. As Part 1 ends, Alice feels completely betrayed and doesn’t know if she should trust anyone.

Part 2 takes place nine to 10 years in the past and it’s from Beth’s point of view. Beth was young and working as a school teacher. She was born to wonderful, supportive parents who gave her everything she could ever want. Her father owned and ran very successful restaurants and Beth had a very close relationship with him. She spent a lot of time with her father on their boat and in the restaurants. When her father suddenly died Beth was lost. Thankfully she and her mother were financially secure. When Beth meets a man named Tom she falls in love. Although he was often away on business, he seemed supportive and protective of Beth. Beth sensed that at times circumstances were off and sometimes even strange but she’s was so happily in love with Tom that she dismissed her suspicions. Just as Beth felt that her life was perfect, she discovered her boyfriend leaving her home with another woman. Then, Tom completely disappeared. Not only did Beth find herself alone and pregnant, she came to the realization that Tom also left her and her mother financially destitute and emotionally broken.

Part 3 is once again in the present and it’s from both Alice’s and Beth’s point of view. I found the use of both points of view very interesting and helpful in understanding what the two women were feeling and why. Alice is determined to pull herself together and discover what is really going on. She must figure out who is lying, whether or not she is being manipulated and most importantly by whom. When Alice and Beth join forces, after Beth admits her past and what she’s done, it was impossible for me to figure out who to trust. Who do you trust more, your husband or your best friend? At this point in the book, I was questioning if this was a story of infidelity, manipulation, money and greed, or revenge or possibly all of the above. In the end who does Alice trust and will she be brave enough to confront all the lies and deceit?

I truly enjoyed “The First Mistake.” I found it to be a quick and easy to read story that held my attention and had me questioning everything and everyone. Although I suspected what was really going on and why at the the start of Part 2, there were quite a few events that I did not anticipate at all. I thought that the premise of the story was believable but sometimes I would get frustrated by Alice’s inaction and her willingness to ignore or justify her discoveries. The only negative about this book and the reason I gave it 4 Stars is that I found the ending to be very vague and it left me with a lot of unanswered questions. I really don’t like it when I finish a book and yet find myself questioning my own conclusions. The short, almost nonexistent epilogue was confusing and therefore frustrating.

The cover of the book is beautiful. The title of the book intrigues me and still has me contemplating what was “The First Mistake” and who made it, perhaps all of them? I found this standalone book excellent and very entertaining as I tried to put together all the pieces of the story. I enjoyed the plot and found it mostly believable, especially when considering Alice’s emotional state of mind. Some events were a little far reaching but still completely entertaining. I definitely recommend this book and I look forward to reading future books by Sandie Jones!

I would like to thank the author and publisher for a free copy through NetGalley in exchange for my honest, unbiased review.

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I got approved for this book on NetGalley awhile back and just recently got to reading it. I had seen this one around bookstagram quite a bit and everyone was loving it, for the most part. I think that’s why I’m bummed to once again deliver the news that I did not enjoy this book and get the same feels others did. This was just too predictable, at least for me. I guessed the majority of “twists” that the author brought into the storyline and that took away any enjoyment I could’ve gotten while reading it.
I’d have to give this one 2 stars because even though I guessed most of the surprises, I still felt like it was a quick and enjoyable read to be my first read by this author.

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Minotaur Books and NetGalley provided me with an electronic copy of The First Mistake. I was under no obligation to review this book and my opinion is freely given.

The First Mistake is a tangled web of lies, deceit, and relationships. After her first husband died unexpectedly, Alice was barely able to manage herself. Now remarried, with a successful business and two children, will the happy life that Alice has carved out for herself come crashing down? Will logic win out over her heart?

I had some issues with The First Mistake, mainly the convoluted web of side plots that seem to exist only as misdirection. The story about Nathan, Alice's husband, would have been enough to propel the plot forward. Instead, the author creates a myriad of conflict and innuendos that take away from the central story. The ending would have been stronger had The First Mistake ended before the last page or two. The author did not allow the reader's mind to fill in the blanks, instead leaving nothing up to the imagination. For these reasons, I would be hesitant to recommend The First Mistake to other readers.

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The First Mistake by Sandie Jones was a thriller! This is the second book I have read by Sandie Jones. (The Other Woman was the first.) How do people think up these twists? How incredible the twists and turns are! Just when I think I have discovered something, another twist shows up. Seriously creepy situation.

Alice was married to Tom. They had one child and worked hard to open a business, a design business around her interior designs. Then he disappeared. Alice was beyond lost. She had a nervous breakdown, but then met Nathan and with his help, she was able to grow and regain herself. Her company continued to grow and opportunities become available in new ways.

Beth is Alice’s best friend. They share so much with each other and are very supportive. Their little girls are best friends, so they have many opportunities to spend time together. Beth is a single mother and struggles at times to make ends meet.

From these three main characters: Alice, Beth and Nathan a twisted story line is born. Who to trust? Who tells the truth? Alice feels she is being taken for a ride by her husband, but what does her best friend have to do with it? The First Mistake by Sandie Jones is an interesting plot line that keeps you guessing. Who do you trust when things get hard? That is the true question? The First Mistake by Sandie Jones is a ride!!

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An excellent example of how a great author can take a story line that has been utilized many, many times and give it new life to become a mystery/ thriller that will keep you up reading! Sandie Jones gives us two women who have been friends for a long time and sets them into a troubled marriage. As one confide in the other, the story sets us up to believe the "friend' may not have the best motives. Yes, the plot sounds familiar, but you really need to read this one for yourself to figure out at what point everyone's story changes.

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Wow! This book was a page turner from beginning to end! I could not put it down. The author weaves such intriguing twists and turns into this story. The characters were very well developed and you never know who to trust. I thought telling the story in 3 parts was a fantastic way to keep the reader engaged throughout the book. Fantastic plot, great characters and a "wow" ending. Highly recommend! Thank you to Netgalley and St. Martin's Press for the opportunity to read an ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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I did enjoy this book. It had a lot of surprises that were more than the normal twists. My main issue with this book is that it was very wordy until he end and then.....it just ended. I thank NetGalley and the publisher for allowing me to read this book in exchange for an honest review.

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I received an ARC of this novel from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

Alice is an interior designer who loses her beloved husband in a bizarre accident. She remarries and continues her life as a successful businesswoman and mother. Events transpire that cause her to question both her deceased husband and her present one.

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Alice had been devastated when her husband Thomas was reported missing and presumed dead while on a skiing trip to Switzerland. After Tom’s death, Alice went through a period of depression, but tried to keep herself together for her young daughter. Several months later, she met Nathan and her fractured life changed for the better.

Nathan swept her off her feet and helped her to regain normalcy in her life. She remarried and had another daughter with Nathan. Their life was idyllic as they maintained their successful business, luxurious home, and their happy family life with the two girls. All was almost too good to be true until Alice began to suspect Nathan may have been hiding something from her. Alice gave in to her suspicions, pulling at a loose thread, and suddenly found her entire life slowly beginning to unravel. As the clues began to escalate, Alice wondered if she could truly trust Nathan or anything that she originally thought was true in her life. She desperately clung to her one safe haven, her best friend Beth, and worked to decipher the truth from the lies before she lost everything that she held dear.

This novel guides the reader through a duplicitous labyrinth of one woman’s search for the truth in her marriage, with enough twists, turns, and surprises to keep it interesting until the very end.

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I'm not sure why I read some negative reviews about The First Mistake because I really liked it. The main character was difficult to connect with because she seemed whiny and weak; HOWEVER, that fit the story being told and made sense to me with the way the story line went, especially as the build-up to her regaining control of her life.. Alice is a widower who has remarried, has a really successful business, two daughters, and everything she could possibly want. When she meets Beth, they become best friends. Beth is jaded about relationships, but especially about Alice's after the man she loved just walked away from her with no explanation. And why is Nathan, Alice's husband, acting so shady? There were some decent twists and turns along the way. One of the bigger ones I had figured out, but that isn't a bad thing--it just made me read the book faster to get to the ending!

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I want to start off by saying this is not your typical domestic thriller. The First Mistake is packed with twists and turns I never saw coming. It did start a little slow, but once it picked up steam, it never slowed down. I thought Alice was a great main character. She was very strong, likable and smart which was a welcome change. It seems lately the women in thrillers can be portrayed as gullible and annoying. After loving both The First Mistake and The Other Woman, I definitely consider myself a fan of Sandie Jones! ⁣

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Sandie Jones has once again given me a suspenseful thriller full of twists and surprises that made me desperate to read this every spare second I had! I loved her debut, The Other Woman, so much I immediately requested this from NetGalley the instant I saw it.

Alice runs a successful company with her second husband, Nathan. After tragically losing her first husband, Nathan seemed like the perfect man, showing up right when Alice needed someone the most.  She also has a best friend named Beth that she can always count on, and two wonderful daughters. Life is pretty good for Alice, until she finds something that makes her start to question everything she thought she knew about those around her.

The twist took me by surprise and I'm glad I didn't see it coming because man, was it insane! This is definitely a quick read but there are quite a few characters to keep up with.

If you're looking for a thriller chock full of twisty revenge and suspicion, make sure to pick this one up!

Thank you to NetGalley for an ARC of this book. 4.5 Stars

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I was lucky enough to receive a digital review copy of The First Mistake by Sandie Jones, but I also won a paperback copy from a bookstagram giveaway. I chose to read this one on my Kindle because I found it easier to read in bed. It was a page turner and kept me reading until my eyes were blurry with sleep. The First Mistake is a domestic thriller set in England. The main character, Alice, owns a design firm where she works along side her husband, Nathan. Alice's first husband and love of her life, Tom, passed away tragically, leaving her and their daughter behind. Shortly after his death, Alice meets her current husband and ends up having another daughter. To say her heart was broken is an understatement and she constantly compares Nathan to Tom.



Alice is a complex character who seems manic at times, but for very good reason. One day her life was ordinarily perfect and the next her husband was missing, presumed dead. Alice suffered a severe mental breakdown which lead her to spend a portion of time in a psychiatric ward, which strangely enough is where she met Nathan (hmmm.... because meeting your next husband shortly after your last husband passed away, and you had a mental breakdown and were forced to be committed to a psych ward is totally normal....I was suspicious of Nathan from the start.) Alice struggles to hold it together while she runs her design firm, but slowly erodes day by day as she starts to suspect that Nathan is having an affair. The inkling initially forms when she finds a random earring in the family vehicle she shares with Nathan. Could this be one of her daughter's friend's? One of her friend's? Alice runs through the scenarios of who could possibly be the owner of the earring, but nothing seems logical. Nathan travels for his position with her design firm and recently returned from a meeting in Japan regarding a potential investment for Alice's company, which also happens to be a huge investment that Nathan seems adamant that Alice should commit to. Suspicion is still rising in the back of Alice's mind, so she rummages through Nathan's suitcase and finds a hotel receipt with two massages, two meals, and several drinks. Alice's mind runs wild with the possibilities. Her world feels like it is caving in as she starts to reason that her first husband left her and her daughter and now her second husband is going to be next.



The First Mistake has a strong female friendship presence with Alice and her closest friend, Beth. Their daughters are best friends and they naturally met during school drop off and pick up. Beth confided that she has not seen the father of her daughter since she found out she was pregnant. One evening, Beth confides more about her ex and they both discover that it could possibly be the same man Alice was madly in love with, who tragically passed away, Tom. Alice's manic worries start to spiral as her world crashes down on her. The First Mistake is split into three parts, the first is Alice's current life with Nathan and her suspicions of an affair, the second is Beth's prior passionate relationship with Tom and how she found herself to be pregnant and single, and the third is back to Alice and Beth's current life and how their paths intersect with their relationships.



Needless to say, I was initially suspicious of Nathan. He swooped into Alice's life months after Tom passes away, meets her while she is committed to a psych ward, works for her company, and is incessant about Alice investing in a costly venture several countries away. Things did not add up for me, but I strangely did not predict the plot twist with Nathan. I thought I had the book pegged half way through, but was still thrown by the twist. I did predict the ending, but that was only a few chapters that wrapped up the book and wasn't enough to influence my overall opinion.



Overall, I thought The First Mistake by Sandie Jones was a fun, fast paced domestic thriller that kept me questioning reality. I really enjoyed the aspect of Alice's two marriages and how her suspicions of Nathan's affair played out. I tend to read thrillers frequently and I was still surprised by the plot twist. It wasn't a "holy sh*t, what just happened?!" twist, but more of a surprising "No way, now this makes sense!" twist. Any twist that I do not predict, is a good twist for me. Sandie's writing is clear and fast paced. I tend to like more character development, but that is something you do not see often in the thriller genre. Alice's character came off manic and unhinged, but towards the end of the book, the reader uncovered more of what was going on and Alice came off as more of a reasonable lover scorn. I liked that her character was redeemed because I think a lot of leading ladies in the thriller genre come off as psychologically distraught or like damsels in distress. Alice's character took a turn for the better in the third part of the book. Not all female characters need to be psychologically unhinged, so thank you Sandie Jones!



The format of the book also made it read very smoothly. I feel that books that are broken up into parts or sections read much quicker and feel less daunting. Overall, I rated The First Mistake by Sandie Jones as a solid ★★★★ thriller. I highly recommend it if you like domestic thrillers with a psychological plot twist. Very fun read and I felt grateful to receive a copy to read and review. Thank you to Net Galley and Minotaur Books for the free advanced copy of The First Mistake by Sandie Jones, in exchange for an honest review.

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After multiple attempts, and never making it past the first 60 pages, I finally gave up. No spark, no connection with the lead character, no idea where this was going since Sandie Jones only glossed over what could have been the moments that caught my attention.

I loved the author’s first book, “The Other Woman”, so I had been looking forward to that sort of plotting. The kind of not knowing, but suspecting, then being thrown off again. Unfortunately, “The First Mistake” did not live up to the hype or show the depth that I had been anticipating.

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This domestic thriller tells the story of Alice, who after losing her husband Tom years earlier, now has a new husband, a daughter, and a best friend named Beth. Life should be good but Alice is plagues by problems, lots of them to be exact. Between all her problems with her marriage, her kids, her kids at school, and her own inner mental health issues it became too much and really a story that if you've read psych thrillers with any frequency then you've read this type of character and storyline before. For all those reasons the plot seemed predictable and although it moved along at a decent pace, the middle completely dragged when the narration changed to past tense. This was too much backstory and I found myself just not caring

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I like domestic suspense thrillers but this one didn’t make much impression on me either way. It did have twists and turns but some of the twists seemed a little convoluted and contrived. If you just want a light read and don’t want to think about it very much, you could enjoy it for that.
Thanks to NetGalley, St. Martin’s Press, and the author Sandie Jones for a digital review copy.

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