There are not many books that I find the need to say that I struggled reading. This, however, was one of them. I love fantasy, but I could not get into this, and even as D&D player, I still could not find the enthusiasm for the story.

The Crack in the Crystal is listed as a fantasy book, which I do enjoy at times and others I don't really connect with. I have never played any D&D games nor really any video games. Kyber is built around a group of individuals that are brought together to try to uncover the secret. For me I had a hard time connecting with the characters so for me this is just a so so read. Having said that I still would recommend it to others, because I do realize not everyone enjoys the same books.

I received and ARC from NetGalley and Swell Media, and I am leaving my review voluntarily.

The Crack in the Crystal was a great read with a storyline that brought surprises and characters that just kept growing. Well worth reading!

Engel builds his world and characters one thread at a time, weaving theme into a journey where they must join their strengths together to find the way to solving their quest. Along the way, the story line expands to include a fantastical cast determined to break the team. This is not my usual genre, but I enjoyed seeing the community come to life step by step.

Kyber is filled with secrets and it takes a group of individuals, seemingly brought together by chance, to uncover the real secrets of Kyber. It sounded really interesting, fantasy, adventure, secrets, but I found that this book fell flat. I am not a person who plays D&D, but I do enjoy a well-crafted fantasy and while this novel started out strong, it ended in the most convoluted manner.

Fantasy is not my preferred genre so I have high expectations when I am asked to read one. The book got off to a bit of a rough start for me as several characters are introduced in different scenes. About a quarter of the way into the book the story started to come together. There are a variety of creatures, gnomes and werewolves, for example. Each has a special ability and as the novel and their journey progresses, some receive new or enhanced abilities. They encounter various obstacles and work together to overcome them and move on.

World building for fantasy is crucial and I would have liked more detailed descriptions, setting the action firmly in place. The advanced egalley I read did not have a map. One would have been quite helpful in picturing the Stormbridge and other places along the characters' journey. One thing I did not like was the swearing. That, and since this fantasy is related to D&D, I suggest it is for older readers.

Engel's writing style is quite readable and this is a good debut effort. Since many of the characters learn about their origins as they journey, this novel has a sort of a coming of age flavor to it. There was a twist at the end that was really surprising. If I were a serious fantasy reader I would be watching for more from Engel.

I received a complimentary egalley of this book through Swell Media. My comments are an independent and honest review.

Although this reader anticipated liking this book, the opening was not compelling. The character in-utero description is as formless as the description itself. Of course, if that was not what was happening, then the opening missed the mark. The lack of character names to ground the people in whatever world they inhabited and the failure to establish a clear context for that world made it difficult to enter the tale. There is also a lack of balance among the descriptive, narrative, and dialogue sections. One example of a dramatic scene that is relegated to narration is when the protagonist, Sollis, first reveals her powers in the playground. What might have been a dynamic episode is buried in simply telling the reader what happened.

While the writing itself is not bad, the novel lacks a powerful draw and fails to connect with this reader. I will not be posting a review of this novel for general consumption.

I loved the use of the heroes in this universe, it had that overall story that worked in what was happening. The world worked well overall and had that fantasy element that I was looking for, it was everything that I wanted. The characters had that feel and made me want to read more in this world. They were written well and felt like they were supposed to be in this story, I was never bored when reading this. Barak Engel has a great writing style and can't wait for more.

This book reminded me of Dunheons and Dragons. But it hsnt a Dungeons and Dragons book. There were several things that seemed out of place but it all comes together at the end. Thanks to Netgalley for the opportunity to read this book

For all her life, Sollis has been weird: taller than normal and possessed of strange wild magic. After making use of her abilities as best she can for some time, she is recruited into a mission with four other gifted individuals. Aidan can communicate with wood, coaxing it into new shapes; Nyelle has bardic powers that can shape sound itself; Lormek is a beloved of Thor haunted by strange dreams; and the gnome Garrett uses his roguish talents to help the party out of tight spots. But what starts as a normal heist soon turns into a battle for reality itself.

As the five new companions navigate conspiracy, magical history, and mysterious writings from a far-off world, Sollis and Lormek attempt to make sense of a strange connection between them. A power beneath the city calls to Sollis, and it soon becomes clear that there is more to her even than already meets the eye.

As mentioned in the Author's Note, The Crack in the Crystal was inspired by a pandemic-era D&D campaign. This is evident for better or for worse—for better in that there's clearly a great deal of care put into character voices, worldbuilding, and giving everyone a satisfying ending; for worse in that characters will occasionally underreact to major revelations. The latter can sometimes pull the reader out of what is otherwise an enthralling read. That said, The Crack in the Crystal is still fun fantasy with a spirit of escapism and camaraderie that D&D players will enjoy and an admirable twist in the tale at the end.

This book is a captivating debut that seamlessly blends mystery and fantasy. Barak's storytelling draws you into a world filled with magic, danger, and unexpected twists. The dynamics between the five strangers create an engaging journey that's both thrilling and heartfelt. A must-read for adventure lovers! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I stopped reading this book at The Reunion chapter. While there were parts of the book I found engaging and enjoyed, there were other parts (dream sequences, the gnome escaping down the sewer) that I found uncomfortable to read and somewhat akin to horror writing.

D&D-inspired (the characters are based on the party in a game that the author runs), but not simply D&D; there's no question of copyright issues. While the characters' classes are recognizable - sorcerer, rogue, ranger/druid, bard - their abilities aren't from a template common in their world, but are unusual and specific to them.

Because it doesn't simply follow a D&D game, but is a story created from scratch, it has more depth and coherence than you might otherwise expect, and the twist ending adequately accounts for the coincidences that are needed to make it work. The characters grow and change at least a little, their relationships develop, and the plot makes for a satisfying arc.

What it isn't is a heist. It starts out looking as if the characters are being assembled as a heist crew, but... they're not, and the heistlike parts at the beginning are rudimentary, and we're soon on to something else. I like heists, so this was a bit of a disappointment, but it's not like the quest/investigation plot that it turned into wasn't enjoyable.

Much of the prose is well edited; the author avoids several common mistakes, in fact. The main exception is that the past perfect tense is frequently missing. This was a constant irritation to me, because of the temporal whiplash of the narrative in simple past tense continuing to use simple past tense when it referred to events earlier in the past (prior to the narrative moment). I read a pre-publication version via Netgalley, so there is some chance that a good editor will fix this before publication, though honestly I would be a bit surprised if that happens. That's a big part of what kept the story from rising to the Silver tier of my annual recommendation list, though it's solidly in Bronze. This is a promising author, and I hope he learns to use the past perfect more consistently before writing a sequel, because I'd like to read it.