The Crack in the Crystal

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Pub Date Oct 22 2024 | Archive Date Oct 17 2024
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Five unlikely heroes, one buried secret

At the heart of the volcanic city of Kyber lies a secret that has been hidden for centuries. The clues surrounding this mystery begin to unfold when five strangers are recruited by a shadowy organization. As covert missions lead to more questions than answers, the increasingly desperate heroes seek help from unexpected sources. The key to Kyber’s secret and the truth behind each of their pasts can only be found by facing fierce stone storms, unlocking dormant fantastical abilities, and confronting past mistakes. Caught up in intrigues beyond their understanding, the ragtag band of adventurers must learn to trust themselves and each other as they reach for the stunning conclusion. This adventure fantasy—inspired by a D&D campaign—is filled with magic, missing identities, and daring escapes. Be ready for surprises at every turn with a mystery that will keep you guessing until the very end.

The Crack in the Crystal is Barak’s debut novel, inspired both by his love of role-playing and his career in cyber security. He is the author of award-winning books such as Why CISOs Fail and The Security Hippie, which have found a global audience and are recognized as leading texts in the field.

Five unlikely heroes, one buried secret

At the heart of the volcanic city of Kyber lies a secret that has been hidden for centuries. The clues surrounding this mystery begin to unfold when five...


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D&D-inspired (the characters are based on the party in a game that the author runs), but not simply D&D; there's no question of copyright issues. While the characters' classes are recognizable - sorcerer, rogue, ranger/druid, bard - their abilities aren't from a template common in their world, but are unusual and specific to them.

Because it doesn't simply follow a D&D game, but is a story created from scratch, it has more depth and coherence than you might otherwise expect, and the twist ending adequately accounts for the coincidences that are needed to make it work. The characters grow and change at least a little, their relationships develop, and the plot makes for a satisfying arc.

What it isn't is a heist. It starts out looking as if the characters are being assembled as a heist crew, but... they're not, and the heistlike parts at the beginning are rudimentary, and we're soon on to something else. I like heists, so this was a bit of a disappointment, but it's not like the quest/investigation plot that it turned into wasn't enjoyable.

Much of the prose is well edited; the author avoids several common mistakes, in fact. The main exception is that the past perfect tense is frequently missing. This was a constant irritation to me, because of the temporal whiplash of the narrative in simple past tense continuing to use simple past tense when it referred to events earlier in the past (prior to the narrative moment). I read a pre-publication version via Netgalley, so there is some chance that a good editor will fix this before publication, though honestly I would be a bit surprised if that happens. That's a big part of what kept the story from rising to the Silver tier of my annual recommendation list, though it's solidly in Bronze. This is a promising author, and I hope he learns to use the past perfect more consistently before writing a sequel, because I'd like to read it.

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This book is a captivating debut that seamlessly blends mystery and fantasy. Barak's storytelling draws you into a world filled with magic, danger, and unexpected twists. The dynamics between the five strangers create an engaging journey that's both thrilling and heartfelt. A must-read for adventure lovers! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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For all her life, Sollis has been weird: taller than normal and possessed of strange wild magic. After making use of her abilities as best she can for some time, she is recruited into a mission with four other gifted individuals. Aidan can communicate with wood, coaxing it into new shapes; Nyelle has bardic powers that can shape sound itself; Lormek is a beloved of Thor haunted by strange dreams; and the gnome Garrett uses his roguish talents to help the party out of tight spots. But what starts as a normal heist soon turns into a battle for reality itself.

As the five new companions navigate conspiracy, magical history, and mysterious writings from a far-off world, Sollis and Lormek attempt to make sense of a strange connection between them. A power beneath the city calls to Sollis, and it soon becomes clear that there is more to her even than already meets the eye.

As mentioned in the Author's Note, The Crack in the Crystal was inspired by a pandemic-era D&D campaign. This is evident for better or for worse—for better in that there's clearly a great deal of care put into character voices, worldbuilding, and giving everyone a satisfying ending; for worse in that characters will occasionally underreact to major revelations. The latter can sometimes pull the reader out of what is otherwise an enthralling read. That said, The Crack in the Crystal is still fun fantasy with a spirit of escapism and camaraderie that D&D players will enjoy and an admirable twist in the tale at the end.

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This book reminded me of Dunheons and Dragons. But it hsnt a Dungeons and Dragons book. There were several things that seemed out of place but it all comes together at the end. Thanks to Netgalley for the opportunity to read this book

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I loved the use of the heroes in this universe, it had that overall story that worked in what was happening. The world worked well overall and had that fantasy element that I was looking for, it was everything that I wanted. The characters had that feel and made me want to read more in this world. They were written well and felt like they were supposed to be in this story, I was never bored when reading this. Barak Engel has a great writing style and can't wait for more.

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Engel builds his world and characters one thread at a time, weaving theme into a journey where they must join their strengths together to find the way to solving their quest. Along the way, the story line expands to include a fantastical cast determined to break the team. This is not my usual genre, but I enjoyed seeing the community come to life step by step.

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The Crack in the Crystal was a great read with a storyline that brought surprises and characters that just kept growing. Well worth reading!

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